https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-character-character-and-there-characteristics 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-story-but-where-dose-this-take-place-where-is-she%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-interest-me-the-most-is-that-you-said-hes-a-leader-which-makes-me-wonder-what-he-plays-a-role-is-in-the-story- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-idea 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-find-most-interesting-is-that-your-character-is-described-as-closed-off%2C-and-yet-they-want-to-bring-happiness-to-others.-it-makes-me-wonder-the-backstory-of-your-character-and-what-they-went-through-to-be-so-shy-and-closed-off%2C-and-i'm-also-curious-to-know-what-challenge-or-low-point-your-character-will-experience-and-what-transformation-they-will-go-through-because-of-it.-great-drawings! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-they-know-animals-exist-when-nobody-else-does.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-that-is.-were-they-told-in-a-dream%3F-can-she-see-them%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/odd-character-different-than-most-but-i-like-that-its-unique-good-job. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-art-work-and-they-look-really-kind--i-wonder-what-is-her-favorite-thing-to-do-in-there-free-time-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-it!-very-detailed.-great-character-design!-if-you-improve-on-their-inside-personality-it-would-be-perfect. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/honestly-i-can-relate-i-almost-have-no-time-to-pla-with-my-dogs-besides-the-weekends 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-personality-its-very-lovely.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-good-job 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-plot-very-interesting-and-thought-it-was-cool!! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-is-how-they-always-ask-questions.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-character-faces-society.-%E2%80%8B 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-her-and-her-personality--grate-work!!!!!----%22-------------------------------0------%3A)-%E2%80%8B 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-sketch-but-a-background-about-the-character-would-be-helpful-but-its-an-amazing-drawing. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-is-really-good-great-idea-and-think-it-can-have-a-lot-of-potential. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-sketch-but-a-background-about-the-character-would-be-helpful-but-its-an-amazing-drawing. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-the-picture-at-the-bottom-with-kyro-at-the-bottom!-it-makes-me-wonder-who-raised-him-and-who-mayoko-is-to-him. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-sketch-but-a-background-about-the-character-would-be-helpful-but-its-an-amazing-drawing. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-his-height-and-is-characteristics- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-he-wants-to-leave-his-planet. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-the-fact-that-they-are-half-dog-and-half-human.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-you-will-keep-the-readers-engaged%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-find-most-interesting-is-that-it-tells-us-about-they're-personality. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-character-nice-good-job 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-he-was-stubborn-but-popular-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-if-his-friends-wanted-to--go-do-something-dangerous-and-he-didnt-want-too-go-so-they-whould-hate-him-for-not-going 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-he-was-stubborn-but-popular-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-if-his-friends-wanted-to--go-do-something-dangerous-and-he-didnt-want-too-go-so-they-whould-hate-him-for-not-going 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-i-really-love-you-art-and-thanks-for-telling-me-your-character's-info-keep-up-the-great-work- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this-character-mainly-because-their-name-is-blue-and-they're-a-friendly-looking-dog.-i-am-curious-about-whether-or-not-the-dog-can-talk-though%2C-as-implied-in-the-art.-(i-might-just-be-reading-a-bit-too-much-into-this-though-)-i-am-also-curious-on-how-this-dog-will-adapt-to-their-situation. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-he-was-stubborn-but-popular-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-if-his-friends-wanted-to--go-do-something-dangerous-and-he-didnt-want-too-go-so-they-whould-hate-him-for-not-going 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-thing-i-found-most-interesting-is-you-showed-what-he-looked-like-from-7-to-72-this-makes-me-wonder-how-this-contributes-to-the-story 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-exactly-is-he%3F-and-i-would-name-him-alien-x 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-design-of-the-character-is-very-cool 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it's-interesting-that-she-is-working-on-trains.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-her-peers-think-about-her. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-this-a-lot.--i-loved-how-u-picked-a-snake.-and-also-if-the-snake-is-so-tiny-will-it-grow-and-get-more-powerful%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/like-your-story-but-what-investment-is--she-living-in-a-negative-or-positive%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-when-people-make-a-character-that-is-a-clown-they-either-make-it-sinister-or-a-happy-one-but-people-never-make-it-a-shy-one-and-i-think-that-is-very-cool-to-make-a-clown-who-is-shy- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-how-much-work-you-put-into-the-personality-of-the-character.--with-that-i-do-wish-that-we-heard-more-about-what-their-goal-is%2C-and-what-and-why-that's-important. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-job!-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-he-took-away-the-value-of-money%2C-and-what-other-mistakes-he-made-in-the-past%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/super-good-nice- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-work.-great-vocal-delivery-as-well.-what-i-found-most-interesting-is-her-desire-to-play-softball.-i-hope-in-the-story-you-can-help-us-understand-where-she-got-that-passion.-i-think-we-can-all-relate-to-that-theme-as-well-(good-things-don't-come-easy)%2C-lots-of-potential-to-make-this-something-everyone-can-relate-to.-my-main-note-is-your-image-was-blurry-so-in-the-next-weeks-can-you-try-to-find-a-way-to-take-a-picture-and-then-talk-over-it-in-a-video-app%3F-if-you-need-help-you-can-contact-help%40storyxperiential.com 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-your-character-is-named-after-the-teacher!--maybe-you-can-come-up-with-ideas-to-help-her-overcome-her-insecurities%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-how-they-look.-the-character-design-is-cute.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-character-expresses-their-feelings-%E2%80%8B 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-you-chose-an-animal-instead-of-person-and-made-it-work-really-well. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-about-your-charter-was-his-story--and-his-obstacle- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-liked-is-that-it-was-a-dog.-but-why-is-it-named-blue%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-your-design-for-your-character-they-sound-inserting- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-but-you-need-to-add-spoken-words-to-the-video 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-drawing%2C-but-it's-quite-hard-to-understand-the-lesson-they-must-learn-and-what-keeps-them-from-achieving-their-dreams%2Fgoals.-i-do-think-the-fact-they-they-are-nameless-interesting%2C-since-i-haven't-seen-many-characters-without-names.-i-find-this-character-to-be-mysterious%2C-and-i'm-excited-to-learn-more-about-them.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-but-i-think-you-need-to-talk-a-little-louder- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-character.-a-question-i-have-is-he-going-to-find-friends%3F-if-he-does-what-kind-of-people-does-he-become-friends-with%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-was-hes-love-for-money-but-it-makes-me-wonder-if-he-is-greedy 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-external-features.-where-does-chowder-live%3F-does-he-have-any-family%3F-friends%3F-good-job! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-character-ideas-and-think-it-has-a-lot-of-potential. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it's-interesting-that-he-is-bratty.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-his-dad-is-stubborn 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/main-character-is-an-alien-and-wants-to-be-two-things.-cool-idea! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-the-character-is-designed%2C-i-wonder-what-are-some-challenges-he-is-going-to-face-during-the-story- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-its-a-very-unique-snake-unlike-the-other-snakes. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-concept!-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-ghost-will-play-out. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-your-story-but-what-is-the-back-story-to-this-what-is-happening-%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-his-name-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-why-did-u-choos-that-name 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-artwork%2C-and-how-you-really-tell-us-about-their-personality%2C-i-do-wish-i-got-to-hear-more-about-the-big-story%2C-or-really-what-the-quest-is.-i-just-think-it-got-rushed-in-at-the-end. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-was-that-the-granny-if-really-sweet-and-nice-in-the-inside. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you're-character-is-very-cool.-i-like-that-you-added-that-there-see-throw. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-character!-i-wonder-what-is-his-obstacle-in-the-story%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-unique-story-line! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you're-character-is-very-cool.-i-like-that-you-added-that-there-see-throw. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-liked-is-that-blue-learns-that-he-can-be-a-independent-dog-without-the-owner-home. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ha%2C-i-loved-this-character-at-first-sight.-i-love-all-the-rich-details.-i-can't-wait-to-learn-more-about-the-evil-ai....i-wonder-what-is-corrupted-in-his-program%3F-i-look-forward-to-how-you'll-flesh-this-out.-go-jeff!! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-the-incorporation-of-plants-in-the-character-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-their-everyday-life-is-with-the-breathing-tube-and-the-equipment-that-helps-them-eat 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/try-to-practice-more-on-what-you-are-saying.-you-guys-should-take-turns-talking.-its-good-and-cool-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-makes-me-wonder-that-will-she-ever-become-a-better-person- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-wonder-if-puff-will-meet-like-people-from-the-outside-land-like-humans-or-the-birds- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-how-they-are-kind.-this-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-events-that-occur-can-change-the-character.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-your-story-and-what-she-wants-but-does-she-overcome-the-thing-that-is-holding-her-back%2Fissues- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-your-character-has-a-age-change%2C-but-why%3F-what-part-of-your-story-does-that-tie-into%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-it-interesting-that-he-is-annoyed.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-he-is 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-they're-appearance%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-why-they-dress-like-this%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-story-and-character-profile-but-how-did-jeremy-end-up-in-the-middle-of-apocalypse-and-what-is-the-scenery%3F-zombies%3F-rogue-robots%3F-good-job-keep-on-working.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-videos-was-very-cool-its-sound-very-interesting-because-i-think-your-charter-has-very-nice-features- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-character-has-lots-of-detail. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-is-how-universal-the-theme-or-struggle-your-character-is-going-through-and-how-it-is-outside-of-their-control.-i-wonder-what-your-character-needs-to-learn-and-how-they-grow-because-of-the-obstacle-they-face. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-he-is-very-unique.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-these-external-features-effect-him. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-character-has-lots-of-detail. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-is-that-in-your-picture-puff-has-no-wings-but-you-say-he%2Fshe-can-fly-this-makes-me-wonder-how-he%2Fshe-flys- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was--the-way-she-feals-obout-her-self-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-problems-with-her-family.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-its-cool-that-she-likes-to-design-costumes-and-shes-smart-and-a-trickster.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-he's-an-athlete-on-the-outside-but-not-the-inside.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-it-is-we-see-ourselves-so-differently-than-how-others-see-us. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/its-is-very-good-nice 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-in-love-with-the-design-and-personality-of-this-character!-i-can-even-relate-to-a-certain-degree%2C-with-the-miss-match-thing-and-nothing-being-the-same-really.-i'm-so-curious-to-see-how-they-learn-this-lesson-of-self-control-and-empathy.-lovely-art-by-the-way! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-character's-attitude%2C-because-it-gives-him-a-good-flaw.--what-was-the-what-if-part%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-character-and-the-story-line- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-simple-character-but-has-the-potential-to-be-a-lot.--it-makes-me-wonder-what-you-can-add-to-the-character. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-artwork!-it-has-great-detail%2C-and-defined-features.-however%2C-i-do-wish-that-because-of-all-the-work-in-the-drawings%2C-you-put-a-little-more-work-into-developing-the-character-and-more-details-about-them. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-simple-character-but-has-the-potential-to-be-a-lot.--it-makes-me-wonder-what-you-can-add-to-the-character. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-character-and-the-amount-of-detail-put-in-to-it! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/is-he-the-only-stuffed-animal-that-can-be-a-knight%3F-and-what-stood-out-to-me-was-how-detailed-your-draft-is-i-cant-wait-to-see-the-finished-product. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/like-the-story-and-the-drawing-but-where-did-they-see-their-animals-was-it-inside-outside%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-character-and-the-drawing.-how-did-they-end-up-attached-to-strings-and-who-is-responsible-for-it%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wonderful-job-good-backstory.-as-well-the-goals-of-the-character-are-really-reasonable-and-make-sense.-but-why-does-she-want-to-sing-add-more-details-why-she-wants-to-sing 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-character-has-lots-of-detail. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-story-is-mainly-about-kindness. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wonderful-job-good-backstory.-as-well-the-goals-of-the-character-are-really-reasonable-and-make-sense.-but-why-does-she-want-to-sing-add-more-details-why-she-wants-to-sing 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-your-character-has-elf-doubts%2C-because-it-makes-it-more-believable.--what-i-wondered-was%2C-how-old-is-this-character%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/unfortunately%2C-your-video-is-without-sound.-i-really-like-your-character-design-and-am-curious-to-know-more-about-the-small-mushroom%2C-amara-wearing-a-mushroom-hat%2C-and-a-character-with-only-a-mushroom-as-their-head.-i-want-to-know-more-about-your-character's-wants-and-needs%2C-the-obstacles-they-face-and-what-they-need-to-learn. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-in-your-picture-it-looks-like-she-haves-plants-growing-on-here-this-makes-me-wonder-if-this-is-why-she-isent-considered-normal 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-concept-and-the-character.-a-question-i-have-is-does-she-find-out-humans-can-see-her%3F--if-she-does-find-out-how-does-she-find-out%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-main-character-i-think-that-they-are-really-cute-and-i-like-there-headphones 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-video!-it-makes-me-wonder-how-does-the-ghost-in-the-pic%2C-plays-into-the-short%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-its-cool-that-shes-half-dog-and-half-person-and-that-she-wants-to-become-a-singer. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-video!-it-makes-me-wonder-how-does-the-ghost-in-the-pic%2C-plays-into-the-short%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/its-great!! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-your-drawing%2Fvisuals.-i-also-like-the-work-you-put-into-not-only-the-visuals-but-also-the-story%2Fpersonalities.--even-though-you-probably-could-have-spoken-louder%2C--you-did-have-your-text-on-the-side%2C-so-that-really-helped.-i-do-wish-however-that-you--put-more-work-into-a-type-of-backstory. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-the-character-design!-i-love-the-purple-brown-hair-and-the-glasses.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-her-parents-look-like.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/idk-what-to-say-but-its-great 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cute%2Ffunny-i-love-the-person-very-great-idea- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it's-pretty-good-message-about-kindness.-however%2C-what-message-is-he-trying-to-spread-and-why. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-unique-the-main-character-is. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-it's-a-snake-and-not-a-human.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-world-treats-them-as-snakes. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-they-lived-in-a-abounded-house.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-even-snakes-face-discrimination.--%E2%80%8B 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-it's-a-snake-and-not-a-human.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-world-treats-them-as-snakes. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-way-you-draw-this-character-really-shows-emotion%2C-and-many-aspects-of-their-personality.-i-do-wonder-how-they-will-learn-this-lesson-though.-i-love-this-character-already-and-cant-wait-to-see-further-development! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-good-i-d-k-what-to-say-but-its-good 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-his-name--%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-why-is-he-named-blue%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-unique-the-main-character-is. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/seems-like-a-cool-character%2C-but-the-question-i-want-to-ask-is-what-kind-of-apocolypce-is-it%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/she-is-a-very-pretty-person.-but-does-she-have-experience-with-sound-or-music%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-person-i-dont-really-have-much-to-say-but-its-good 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-he-is-a-little-kid-wanting-to-become-a-knight-but-he-has-a-long-way-to-go-before-becoming-one. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/well-done.-what-i-found-most-interesting-is-his-dyslexia-and-his-insecurities-around-it.-lots-of-people-can-relate-to-this.-i-wonder-how-he'll-get-over-this-in-the-story%2C-maybe-somehow-it-can-turn-into-an-advantage%3F-can't-wait-to-find-out-in-future-weeks! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-idea.-but-is-the-chicken-still-in-its-egg%3F-%3A0 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-idea%2C-and-i-like-that-your-character-has-flaws%2C-because-it-gives-the-character-a-lot-of-dimension-and-depth.--what-is-something-that-your-character-can-learn%3F--could-she-maybe-come-to-an-understanding-that-she-doesn't-need-other-people-to-believe-her%3F--it-makes-me-wonder-if-the-other-characters-in-your-story-can-see-animals-after-they-do-a-task-or-take-a-serum%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really--idk-its-cool 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-story-but-can-you-add-more-backstory-about-them-and-what-is-happening%2C-and-what-is-it-taking-place-at%2C-and-adding-smaller-details-about-them-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-story-it-sounds-very-interesting-and-your-charter-sounds-very-fun-to-learn-(-nice-drawing)- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-character-i-feel-like-they-have-a-very-interesting-story- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-got-cut-off-but-i-think-its-a-cool-idea.-the-one-question-i-have-is-why-is-her-mom-on-earth-and-shes-not.-nice-job! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/his-eyes-are-cool 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/think-about-what-is-going-to-happen-in-the-apocalypse-because-its-not-very-clear-the-character-is-very-good-and-doesnt-need-more-attention 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-character-and-plot-.-great-work! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/think-about-what-is-going-to-happen-in-the-apocalypse-because-its-not-very-clear-the-character-is-very-good-and-doesnt-need-more-attention 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-how-they-look-and-i-think-its-cool-and-unique.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-good-information-and-sounds-like-a-cool-character 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-it-its-beautiful-and-amazing-the-story-is-cool 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-absolutely-love-your-character-and-all-the-outfits!-the-only-thing-is-that-you-can-probably-make-your-plot-a-bit-more-descriptive. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-character.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-long-it-is-going-to-take-her-to-become-human-again.-how-long-has-she-been-a-ghost%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-visionary-type-of-character-you-created.-the-way-that-you-clearly-showed-how-in-film%2C-the-outfit%2Fclothes-that-a-character-wears-can-impact-what-our-view-of-what-we-think-their-personality-is. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-looks-really-good-so-far-but-you-should-develop-the-character-more-like-try-color-or-thinking-about-how-she-will-go-to-earth-again 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-character-already!-the-art-is-beautiful-and-he's-an-overall-well-made-character.-he-has-personality%2C-dreams%2C-and-weaknesses.-although-i-am-very-curious-to-find-out-how-he-learns-patience.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-story-concept%2C-the-drawing-is-also-really-good.a-question-a-have-is-where-did-she-see-the-animals%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-couldn't-really-hear-but-i-like-your-drawing. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-about-about-this-charterer--is-they-are-interesting-even-tho-she-has-anxiety-they-still-try-to-push-themselves-in-the-apoplexy- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-character!--it-makes-me-wonder-how-does-bob-come-out-of-his-little-%22hole%22.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-story-and-idea-of-this-but-the-%22what-if%22-question-is-not-clear.-its-supposed-to-be-based-off-that-and-maybe-put-the-what-if-question-in-the-title-so-we-can-understand-your-story-more 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-story-line-and-the-characters-i-think-that-it-will-be-a-promising-short.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-character-but-why-does-music-make-her-happy-and-why-is-music-not-allowed%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-character-profile-and-what-they-need-to-learn-have-excellent-universal-appeal.-i-also-really-like-the-contrast-you've-set-up-with-your-main-and-other-characters.-it-makes-me-want-to-know-more-about-how-ally-will-evolve-and-what-happens-to-force-their-learning-or-growth.-nice-work! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-you-centered-the-story-about-kindness%2C-but-that-is-what-other-people-need-to-learn.-what-are-something-that-your-character-needs-to-learn-or-understand%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-looks-great-so-far-but-it's-a-little-long.-the-idea-is-so-great-and-it-will-be-good-to-create-ron-going-through-levels 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-values-of-your-character.--it-creates-a-stronger-connection%2C-and-helps-with-upcoming-story-line.-%E1%95%95(-%E1%90%9B-)%E1%95%97 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-all-the-inside-features-but-where-does-the-story-take-place%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-this-character!-the-way-you-drew-them-and-made-their-personality-makes-me-love-them-already!-although-i-do-wonder-about-how-she'd-react-if-she-was-accepted-into-the-protectors.-would-she-teach-others-not-to-underestimate-her%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-clear-and-easy-to-understand-and-it's-a-great-idea-she-wants-to-break-the-rules-but-doesn't-know-how-to-do-it-yet. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/awesome-character-but-where-is-the-story-taking-place-and-how-did-elliot-meet-clemintine%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-looks-great-so-far-but-the-%22what-if%22-part-wasn't-clear-next-time-put-it-in-the-title-and-try-to-talk-louder-it's-kinda-hard-to-hear.-i-love-the-idea-though 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-was-interesting-to-me-was-captain-zork's-features-i-wonder-if-his-personality-will-change 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-find-his-style-is-interesting-i-wonder-if-he'll-make-friends-in-the-end-of-the-story 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-find-the-eyes-of-the-pufferfish-is-very-interesting.-i-wonder--what-they-like-more-being-in-water-or-flying. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-find-the-style-of-ben-kujo-to-be-very-interesting!-i-wonder-what-kind-of-business-he-would-open.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-of-your-character-and-the-way-you-draw-him-is-very-interesting.-i-wonder-if-your-character-will-eventually-become-appreciated.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-did-a-really-good-job-with-the-drawings%2C-and-explaining-the-characters.-this-is-a-great-idea! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/interesting-premise!-there-are-lots-of-different-places-you-could-go-with-this-character.-good-job-describing-them-as-well! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-is-that-his-armor-reflects-that-he's-only-a-little-kid-with-limited-skill-sets-and-tools.-will-his-outfit-change-by-the-end-of-the-story%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-a-cool-idea!-teaching-people-kindness-is-a-good-idea%2C-great-job! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-such-a-fun-idea!-i-wasn't-sure-if-the-character-is-good-or-bad%2C-and-that-makes-it-interesting! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-character-is-interesting!-you-did-a-very-good-job-explaining-the-character-and-the-challenges-she-faces. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-good-job!-i-love-the-twist-on-the-stork-idea! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-idea-is-great!-it-reminds-me-of-a-mash-up-of-casper-and-mouse-hunt.-really-well-thought-out! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-a-really-good-idea!-good-job-describing-charlie! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-description-of-the-character-is-very-well-done.-great-job! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-character-is-both-well-drawn-and-intriguing.-good-job! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-a-really-cool-idea!-great-job! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-art-work-was-really-well-done%2C-and-the-whole-thing-was-well-put-together.-great-job! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-drawing-and-idea%2C-what-i-found-interesting-is-how-krya's-mom-is-not-supporting-her-in-her-dreams-but-to-be-like-her.-what-makes-me-wonder-is-that-if-she-is-going-to-let-her-mom-about-and-change-her-mom's-mind-to-believe-in-her.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-but-danny-is-a-calculator 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-drawing!-the-character-is-very-nice-it-also-has-a-very-unique-name. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-character-is-cool-but-its-hard-to-hear-you%2F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-video-and-the-diagram-you-chose-to-show.-i-like-how-your-team-made-this-video-engaging.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-will-your-video-end-up%3F-just-as-good-as-this-video%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-did-a-very-good-job-describing-your-character-cant-wait-to-see-your-final-product-%3A) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-are-very-descriptive-and-creative-but-speak-louder. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-awesome-job-on-the-drawing!-%3A)-i-found-it-interesting-that-you-were-able-to-have-a-fully-developed-character-already.-that-it-so-awesome.-i-wonder-how-such-an-average-girl-will-make-an-interesting-story. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-about-who-the-character-was.-i-wonder-what-will-happen-in-the-story-with-him-and-what-issues-does-he-face.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-this-idea!-you-have-a-great-story-coming-together.-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-this-idea-of-needing-to-learn-how-to-use-resources%2C-something-we-can-all-relate-to.-i'm-wondering-how-this-seed-superpower-will-work-and-how-she-learns-to-harness-it.-i-think-you-also-have-a-great-theme-here-about-sharing-knowledge-across-generations. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-design-and-how-well-planned-out-you-made-it.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-surprises-you-will-add.-the-story-you-gave-kind-of-took-the-surprise-away-from-what-will-happen-because-you-gave-a-little-too-much-info-and-detail.-so-yeah-the-design-and-your-plan-are-amazing-but-the-video-was-too-long-and-told-basically-the-whole-story-so-my-feedback-is-to-keep-the-suspense-and-wonder-what-will-happen-to-go. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-you-drew-your-character-and-i-think-you-can-go-far-with-it. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-an-amazing-idea.-i-would-love-to-see-it-turn-into-something-more-than-this.-i-am-most-interested-about-how-they-got-kidnapped%2C-whats-the-story-behind-this%3F-it-makes-my-wonder-if-this-is-good-for-our-world-or-bad-because-if-everyone-was-a-genus-at-birth-how-and-what-would-they-look-forward-to-in-life.-i-have-so-many-questions.-great-job. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-there-is-multiple-characters%2C-i-also-like-how-they-all-have-different-views-on-things. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/sybil-is-a-very-good-character-but-it's-sweet-that-she-wanted-more-time-with-her-dad.-i-also-love-the-drawing 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-is-the-difference-between-the-internal-and-external-features.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-transformation-and-what-his-transformation-is-going-to-be. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-idea-i-think-that-you-can-go-really-far-with-this-charactar 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-is--why-he-scared-in-the-inside.-it-makes-me-wounder-dose--he-stay-how-he-is- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-job-%3A)-i-like-how-you-included-both-the-internal-and-external-features-in-a-fast-paced-video.-i-would-have-liked-to-see-more-drawing-to-really-bring-it-to-life%2C-though. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-find-most-interesting-is-how-the-character-have-these-problems-like-what-about-the-apocalypse-caused-them-how-the-apocalypse-started-the-is-quite-promising 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job-on-your-character-you-did-a-good-job-on-animating-and-telling-me-who-they-are-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-start.-but-its-really-hard-to-hear-you-over-the-music%2C-watch-out-for-that-next-time%2C-maybe-do-a-small-test-first 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found--most-interesting-about-thins-character-is-that-he-want's-everything-to-be-different.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-he-will-do-to-change-his-life 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-the-charcter-will-change 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-internal-and-external-descriptions-are-excellent!!-very-developed.-i-like-the-idea-that-although-ruthord-is-a-kind-person-with-good-intentions%2C-he-does-not-want-to-do-anything-about-his-situation.-i-am-excited-to-see-how-ruthord-will-improve-his-situation-and-what-struggles-he-will-indure-to-get-there.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-about-this--character-is-why-is-he-lazy-.-it-makes-wounder-dose-he-go-outside- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/omg-ur-character-is-so-cool. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-character-it-is-very-nice-and-i-love-the-drawing-also-i-love-the-girls-goal. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/amazing-drawing.-i-loved-how-detailed-you-are-with-the-face-parts.-i-would-love-to-see-this-become-a-real-story.-there-are-so-many-twist-and-turns.-just-like-the-doppelganger-and-her-mom.-what-i-found-most-interesting-is-that-she-wants-to-become-a-tennis-player.--tennis-is-an-amazing-sport-and-i-hope-she-can-overcome-her-fear-and-tell-her-mom.-it-makes-my-wonder-about-where-her-doppelganger-came-from-because-you-cant-just-meet-your-doppelganger-out-of-nowhere-right%3F-overall-amazing-job-i-cant-wait-to-see-how-this-becomes-into-greatness. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-most-interesting-part-of-the-character-is-wen-the-bird-has-no-wings.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-she-stays-with-the-group. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-is-the-fact-that-it's-a-dog-that-has-to-learn-something.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-transformation-and-how-he-is-going-to-transform. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-his-goal-that-he-has.-i-wonder-if-he-will-let-those-people-who-bring-him-down-let-them-take-over-him.-or-will-he-overpower-them-through-the-story.-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-will-be-super-cool- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/super-creative-video!-i-love-that-you-spent-a-lot-of-time-creating-your-external-features-but-i-think-you-should-build-a-little-on-internal-features-and-characteristics.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-your-character-development.-%3A) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-is-that-she-is-a-half-human-and-half-dog.-what-makes-me-wonder-more-is-what-if-her-singing-was-half-dog-and-half-human.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this!-you-did-the-video-so-well-done-with-the-different-scenes-and-the-voice-over-as-the-orangutan.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-far-you-will-take-this.-good-job!- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-drawing-but-its-really-long-and-its-hard-to-understand-what-your-saying.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-drawing-it's-very-good!-the-character-is-very-good! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-drawing-but-it's-a-bit-hard-to-understand-what-your-saying.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-how-friendly-he-seems.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-he-is-going-to-learn-what-he-has-to. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-the-discreption-of-them 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-its-a-good-story-but-the-one-thing-is-your-telling-me-the-whole-story-technically-so-it-would-of-been-nice-for-you-not-to-do-it-to-long--so-that-way-you-could-tell-the-rest-of-the-story-when-your-finished-making-your-short-film- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-is-that-he-wants-to-make-friend.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-he-would-make-friend-and-how-do-the-people-look-like-in-the-story. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-absolutely-love-your-drawing-and-the-details-you-decided-to-include!-i-found-it-interesting-that-you-chose-to-write-a-little-about-the-backstory.-this-makes-me-wonder%2C-how-are-you-going-to-add-new-information-in-your-movie-if-you-are-already-sharing-so-much%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-good!-i-like-it-because-the-character-sounds-very-good 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-internal-character-development!-maybe-think-about-what-arlo-wants-and-needs-and-what-obstacles-they-will-have-to-face-in-your-story. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-he-is-a-jerk.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-he-is-going-to-get-along-with-people. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-about-this-character-is-how-he-looks-on-the-inside.-it-makes-wonder-how-he-does-stuff-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-its-absolutely-perfect. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-the-fact-that-she-was-learning-how-to-fly.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-she-wants-to-help-people-after-she-fell. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-is-that-he-want-to-help-the-two-aliens-species. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-good-character-development!-consider-how-your-character's-internal-and-external-traits-will-contribute-to-the-storyline-and-perhaps-think-about-what-your-character-wants-and-needs-and-what-obstacles-they-will-have-to-deal-with.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-this-is-a-decent-idea-because-it-will-appeal-to-a-lot-of-viewers-who-may-have-had-similar-experiences.-i'm-wondering-how-you'll-frame-the-voice-in-his-head-though%3B-is-it-annoying-and-persistent-or-just-a-quiet-whisper%3F-and-is-it-intended-to-be-a-small-part-of-his-mind-or-another-entity-entirely%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-interesting-thing-about-this-is-that-summoning-creatures-from-constellations-would-be-awesome!!- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-she-wants.-i-can-already-tell-that-she-is-very-powerful-and-strong-little-girl.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-will-happen-in-the-story.-will-she-overcome-her-issues%3F-will-she-end-up-doing-what-she-loves%3F--- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-character-and-the-idea-that-he-is-feeling-lonely.-i-wonder-if-he-will-learn-what-he-needs-to. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-there-is-techno-but-i-thought-the-characters-were-supposed-to-be-original.-other-than-that-i-think-its-good.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-she-looked-like-she-is-a-witch-or-a-sorcerer.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-are-her-limitations 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-if-found-most-interesting-is--how-jerry-is-too-shy-and-will-not-show-his-creations-to-the-public.-i-struggle-a-lot-with-doing-so-as-well.-i-would-like-to-see-how-this-story-would-turn-out. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-she-looked-like-she-is-a-witch-or-a-sorcerer.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-are-her-limitations 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-is-their-character-mood.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-the-owner-would-return- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/that-is-me- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-this-idea-has-a-lot-of-potential%2C-and-hopefully-you-manage-to-get-all-these-awesome-core-ideas-into-your-animated-film.-i-really-do-believe-it's-possible%2C-though%2C-because-you-made-a-seemingly-'boring'-story-idea-into-something-that's-interesting-and-creative.--good-job-on-the-artwork%2C-too! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job-with-your-art-work-i-liked-the-detail---you-added- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-hes-a-printer-and-he-comes-to-life.-i-wonder-what-will-happen-next-because-the-video-cut-off. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-that-she-isn't-the-best-person-in-the-world.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-she-will-grow-as-a-person 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-good-character-because-she-has-a-very-good-dream 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-you-simple-your-character-is-but-think-you-should-talk-more- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-this-character-was-the-internal-features-because-he-sounds-like-a-bully.-i-wonder-what-change-he-will-have-if-he-will-still-be-a-bully-or-not.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-contrast-between-a-shy-personality-and-an-interest-in-sharing-something-like-portals-with-the-public.-it-can-allow-for-interesting-character-development-ideas.-perhaps-consider-using-this-as-another-thing-jerry-might-need-(needing-to-learn-how-to-be-brave).-good-ideas! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-character-is-adorable.-great-delivery-as-well.-i-love-the-idea-of-a-2-year-old-genius...i'm-very-interested-to-know-about-what-project-they-are-working-on-in-their-secret-home-page.-also-i-think-the-one-potential-moral-of-the-story-is-a-strong-one-%22asking-for-help%22-and-%22accepting-change%22.-can't-wait-for-more. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-it.-the-concept-is-unique-and-i-wonder-how-she-came-to-learn-animals-were-real-in-the-first-place.-i-wonder-how-she-will-%22prove%22-this-to-others%3F-also-i-see-you-are-using-adobe-spark-but-filming-the-screen%2C-you-should-be-able-to-save-it-out-as-a-video%2C-if-you-need-help-email-help%40storyxperiential.com-and-we'll-help! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-this-story%2C-what-i-was-wondering-is-how-he-was-going-to-share-that-making-mistakes-are-ok. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-was-the-best-i-saw 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool%2C-i-like-it-%3A) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-but-its-similar-to-ours--but-we-will-do-adjustments 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-character%2C-nice-drawing.-how-exactly-do-you-plan-to-make-him-save-the-bees%2C-and-how-aggressive-can-he-be-while-in-an-argument-about-what-he-wants%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-is-her-main-goal-in-the-short-film-and-also-i-really-like-the-features 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/is-your-character-a-dancer%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-he-has-really-great-attributes.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-his-flaws-like-what-makes-him-not-so-perfect%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-character-is-really-creative%3B-the-pose-in-the-drawing-as-well-is-really-cool. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-character-and-he-seems-interesting-but-what-does-he-want-and-what-would-his-obstacle-be.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-good-job. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-i-like-how-many-internal-things-you-have-on-nick.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-feel-they-can-add-more-context-to-there-character.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-kind-of-society-shes-living-in. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-story-i-would-like-to-know-why-they-are-selfish-and-what-happens%3F-keep-up-the-good-work. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-it-interesting-that-he-wants-peace-and-quiet.-i-wonder-if-in-the-plot-he-finally-gets-peace-and-quiet-but-his-journey-to-quiet-was-so-fun-that-he-doesn't-want-it-anymore.-rather-he-changes-his-mindset-and-wants-socialization-because-he-found-out-that-quiet-with-nobody-there-is-really-boring-or-lonely. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/next-time-try-not-to-mix-up-your-words.-and-just-be-calm-and-be-relaxed-but-good-job. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-was-good 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-a-really-good-character-and-people-could-probably-relate.-something-that-i-am-wondering-is-how-will-he-deal-with-the-bullies-to-get-over-that-obstacle. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this-story-i-cant-wait-to-see-the-final-one 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-make-the-eyes-a-little-smaller-but-other-then-that..its-beautiful- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-wonder-are-him-being-happy-and-sad-all-the-time-or-are-those-just-some-moments. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/next-time-speak-up-a-little-more-and-just-relax-and-be-calm-but-good-job. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-this-is-a-very-interesting-character-and-i-love-that-it-is-a-monkey. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-some-people-can-relate-with-his-main-goal-to-have-a-happy-family.--why-does-he-give-attitude-though%3F-has-his-parents-tried-to-help-him-stop-being-rude%3F-has-he-had-a-serious-talk-with-his-parents%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-don't-understand-what-the-store-is-about-so-i-would-like-more-about-the-store-it-self- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/seems-like-a-interesting-story 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-you-introduce-the-character%2C-and-i-like-how-you-explain-the--problem. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-concept-of-your-story-i-would-like-to-learn-a-little-but-more-about-them-on-the-inside-and-also-a-little-more-about-the-story. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-don't-know-if-i-didn't-catch-it-but-do-you-have-a-conflict-and-does-puff-have-any-needs 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-interesting.-choosing-a-ghost-as-your-main-character.-so-why-exactly-did-you-choose-to-make-yours-about-a-ghost%3F-(no-offense)-and-also-why-does-your-character-want-to-die-again%3Fjust-some-thing-to-think-about. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/next-time-try-not-to-mix-up-you-words-because-instead-of-donkey-you-said-doggy-it-sounds-like-and-next-time-you-record-make-sure-you-get-out-everything-you-wanted-to-say-because-you-missed-a-little-bit-it-sounds-like-and-you-still-had-13-secounds-still-but-good-job. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-storyline-is-very-good-and-i-think-that-the-external-and-internal-features-are-good%2C-well-done! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/firstly-this-was-very-good-and-descriptive-but-the-only-thing-that-i-thought-you-could-do-better-was-to-make--drawing-that-had-a-little-bit-more-details-on-it-but-other-then-that-i-thought-that-it-was-awesome.-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/firstly-this-was-very-good-and-descriptive-but-the-only-thing-that-i-thought-you-could-do-better-was-to-make--drawing-that-had-a-little-bit-more-details-on-it-but-other-then-that-i-thought-that-it-was-awesome.-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-an-amazing-character-and-she-is-very-well-thought-out-down-to-every-last-detail.-i-wonder-what-does-she-need-to-change%3F-how-will-she-change%3F-does-she-need-to-change%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/how-does-the-obstacle-tie-to-his-needs%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-is-an-interesting-character-and-i-like-how-you-didn't-make-it-a-human-main-character. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-enjoyed-the-story--i-feel-like-i-can-somewhat-relate-to-twilight%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-happens-if-twilight-went-for-what-she-really-wants-to-be-or-what-happens-when-she-breaks-the-rules%3F 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-character-a-lot-but%2C-i-think-when-making-the-short-you-should-have-a-back-story-to-the-hat-to-make-it-more-meaningful.-like-his-father-giving-it-to-him-or-something.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/vary-good-i-would-like-to-see-more-excitement-but-other-then-that-good-i-want-to-know-more-about-why-she-wants-that.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/needs-a-little-more-story-line-and-more-detail-for-the-character-a-little-more-effort-on-the-drawing 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-you-have-some-good-internal-features-but-you-should-add-more-external-features-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/if-your-story-is-short-next-time-try-not-to-mix-up-your-words-next-time.-but-other-then-that-it-was-good. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-only-thing-that-i-thought-that-you-could-do-better-was-to-speak-a-little-louder--but-other-then-that-it-was-good-and-creative 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-it's-cool-how-you-tell-us-that-he's-made-mistakes-in-his-past%2C-and-i-wonder-how-danny-will-accomplish-his-goal.-good-job. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-was-how-much-depth-you-put-into-your-character.-i-wonder-what-the-obstacle-would-be. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-story-one-thing-i-have-advice-or-like-is-a-question-is-why-does-she-feel-that-way-or-who-is-making-her-feel-that-way%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/looks-great-and-has-potential 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-character-and-the-message-is-good.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-many-internal-things-you-have-but-maybe-you-should-add-more-external-things-to-make-your-character-more-descriptive. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-character-is-really-well-made-and-definitely-pretty-thought-out.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-exploring-space-caught-his-attention%3F-what-drove-him-to-want-to-explore-space-and-not-the-ocean-or-jungles%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-all-great-just-stratin-the-face-a-bit 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawing-is-very-good-but-there-needs-to-be-a-little-more-character-development 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-i-would-like-to-know-more-about-what-she-likes-to-make-like-dresses-or-pants. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/please-talk-a-little-louder-next-time-you-submit 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/every-thing-is-great-i-would-just-improve-in-animating-the-dog-a-bit-but-overall-its-great 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-you-decided-to-go-with-a-non-human-main-charcter.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-you-could-add-more-depth-to-teddy-and-his-personality. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-main-storyline-but-i-also-wonder-what-other-internal-features-there-are-in-him 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-him-wanting-everday-to-be-different-i-would-love-to-know-how-he-makes-it-different-.-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-character-but-i-think-you-could-add-some-more-internal-characteristics-like-he's-kind%2C-funny%2C-ambitious-things-like-that.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-story-already-one-thing-i-would-say-to-add-is-maybe-some-of-her-friends-or-family-into-the-story%2C-what-type-of-music-is-she-into-and-why-does-music-make-her-happy%3F 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-work-on-this.-what-i-found-most-interesting-is-his-interest-in-portals-while-at-the-same-time-being-shy....it's-a-cool-combination.--i-wonder-how-he-will-get-over-his-shyness%3F--can't-wait-for-more! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-feel-that-the-character-could-use-more-detail-on-the-outside 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-this-character-and-i-like-how-you-added-what-kind-of-environment-they-live-in.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-made-this-world-ruined-and-was-it-ruined-before-she-was-even-alive%3F-were-they-always-anxious-and-suspicious%3F-if-not-what-caused-them-to-act-this-way%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-a-dog-having-all-these-problems-. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-you-could-add-more-internal-information. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-much-detail-you-put-into--the-drawing-and-how-much-detail-you-made-the-character- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/can-mark-change-his-age-or-does-he-just-develop-through-out-the-short%3F-also-i-think-you-have-some-good-internal-characteristics-but-i-would-add-more-external-characteristics 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/fantastic-ideas%2C-love-the-drawings---your-character-already-has-lots-of-personality-which-is-impressive....what-i-found-most-interesting-was-his-desire-for-money%2C-i-wonder-how-he-will-learn-to-interact-with-other-people%3F-why-will-he-learn-this%3F-(feedback-for-next-time%2C-try-to-record-in-a-quiet-room-if-you-can-find-it) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this-characters-name!-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-his-interest-in-this-glasses%2C-why-does-he-care-so-much-about-them%3F-do-these-glasses-give-him-powers%3F-i-wonder-why-he's-not-responsible-and-how-he-will-learn-to-change%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-most-interesting-thing-about-this-character-was-her-looks-because-she's-like-a-normal-girl-until-you-explain-what-she-is-on-the-inside.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-others-are-on-the-inside. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-you-included-the-timeline%2C-it-really-adds-to-the-story.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-he-will-learn-that-he-is-not-the-center-of-attention. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-a-monster-that-loves-to-eat-pizza-but-one-thing-you-should-of-said-was-instead-of-you-saying-it-stop-her-from-getting-what-ever-she-wants-it-should-be-what-ever-she-needs. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawing-was-very-cool%2C-i-liked-the-jacket-and-the-gun-in-his-hand.-good-job 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/super-cute!-i-found-the-heart-on-the-nose-a-great-addition%2C-and-i-look-forward-to-seeing-what-kind-of-world-you-build-around-them. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-he-is-relatively-unassuming-on-the-outside-but-very-charismatic-on-the-inside. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job-guys 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-her-outfit%2C-i-thought-she-looked-sincere-from-the-waste-up%2C-but-you-showed-her-waist-down%2C-she-looks-playful.-i-think-if-you-want-to-make-the-character-more-joyful-and-bright%2C-i-think-she-shouldn't-look-as-elegant-as-she-is-now-(although-you-don't-have-to-take-my-advice) 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-thing-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-chicken-having-depression-it-is-a-very-original-idea 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-adore-this-illustration.-i'm-excited-to-see-how-the-story-unfolds. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-concept%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-if-he-will-get-better. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/that's-a-cool-idea!-i-really-liked-how-you-carefully-thought-of-a-name-for-the-character%2C-and-that-it-has-so-much-deeper-meaning.-i-wonder-if-he'll-be-able-to-overcome-his-difficulties-with-imagination.-looking-forward-to-seeing-where-you-go-with-this! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/he-sounds-like-an-interesting-character-but-will-we-hear-about-his-backstory%3F-it-seems-to-be-a-rather-important-part-of-who-he-is.-also-why-does-he-still-act-tough%3F-is-he-worried-that-he-is-going-to-have-to-fight-someone-or-something%3F-this-seems-like-a-good-start-to-a-revenge-film. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-is-the-idea-of-aliens-coming-to-earth-and-i-am-looking-forward-to-their-own-creative-spin-on-it. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-design-and-coloring-is-great.-i-love-the-main-character.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-i-really-like-the-first-one!-it-makes-me-connect-with-her-and-it-makes-me-want-to-help-her 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-way-you-drew-your-character%2C-the-pose-reflects-their-fears-because-she-looks-tense-and-nervous.-i-wonder-how-they-will-come-over-their-fears-and-make-new-friends- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-style-in-which-the-character-is-drawn-is-original%2C-and-it's-done-really-well.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-interesting-character-idea!-i'm-curious-on-the-kind-of-world-you'll-build-around-this-character%2C-and-what-role-they-will-play.-will-they-be-the-villain-of-the-story%3F-will-they-be-the-hero%3F-or-will-they-be-neutral%3F-it'll-be-cool-to-see-what-happens! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-her-good-hearted-nature-in-wanting-to-help-her-mom.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-is-taking-up-so-much-of-her-time. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-time-in-which-the-story-takes-place. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-her-good-hearted-nature-in-wanting-to-help-her-mom.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-is-taking-up-so-much-of-her-time. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-just-a-great-character-i-love-it-could-he-have-a-brother-named-jim-i-think-that-would-be-great 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-nice-drawing-%5E%5E- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-i-really-like-how-the-picture-was-drawn%2C-its-a--very-nice-style%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-if-she-will-get-a-friend-in-the-story. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/how-does-he-want-to-help-the-world%3F-how-will-he-learn-to-care-more-about-others-than-just-himself%3F-did-something-make-him-self-centered%3F-what's-his-backstory%3F-other-than-these-things-he-sounds-like-an-interesting-character-with-a-good-problem-to-solve%2C-that-being-his-self-centered-mindset. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-noice 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-was-your-character-design-i-think-that-you-could-speak-a-little-clearer 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-character- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-i-really-like-your-character-love-the-idea-of-her-chasing-the-raiders-away-keep-up-the-good-work 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-concept-it-makes-me-wonder-if-him-being-childish-interferes-with-his-job 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-advocate-for-self-love-and-how-she-is-caring.-i-like-the-style-and-the-cat-is-very-cute. 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-what's-stops-her%2C-that-was-deep-it-makes-me-wonder-what-would-she-do-in-her-story-to-be-so-strong. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-illustration-you-made-for-this-story-concept%2C-i-wonder-how-the-story-will-play-out 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-things-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-you-described-him-%22easy-to-blend-in%22. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-great-character-just-wondering-how-would-he-find-people-like-himself-in-his-community- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-outgoing-personality-and-blue-hair. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/as-soon-as-i-looked-at-this-sketch%2C-my-eyes-immediately-went-to-the-hair!-it's-really-cool!-i-really-liked-that-you-didn't-refer-to-alexander-as-female-or-male.-i-wonder-how-alexander-got-their-hair-blue%3F--i-also-want-more-information-about-alexander-and-their-parents.-what-causes-the-most-problems-between-them%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-have-made-a-very-good-character-profile-that-can-be-further-developed-into-a-great-story-line. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-the-drawing-really-shows-your-character%2C-and-how-well-you-were-able-to-describe-it. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-character%E2%80%99s-aspiration-to-sing.-it-makes-me-wounded-more-about-whether-they-make-this-known-to-their-friends-and-family%2C-or-do-they-keep-it-a-secret%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-art-style-and-how-you-captivated-the-character-looking-a-bit-tired- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawing-is-so-good.-you-are-a-very-talented-artist-btw-%3B) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/its-nice-and-simple 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-personification-of-wifi.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-whether-people-would-know-about-them-as-a-living-being%2C-and-if-they-did%2C-would-they-respect-them-more%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/not-bad. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-obsessed-with-your-art-style%2C-i-am-really-drawn-to-the-cat-one-in-particular.-i-would-love-to-see-it-turned-into-an-actual-story! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loveee-the-drawing-especially-the-cat%2C-it's-really-cute- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it%E2%80%99s-really-interesting-how-the-name-of-your-character-has-such-a-deep-meaning.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-character-will-evolve-and-develop.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-latte-decided-that-she-wanted-to-help-people-after-falling-off-of-a-cliff.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-this-would-happen.-did-they-realize-they-wanted-to-help-people-after-they-saw-they-needed-help-after-the-experience%2C-or-something-else%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-you-did-a-really-great-job-on-the-video.-i-like-the-character-development.-i-wonder-how-he-will-defeat-the-dragon. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this!!-we-don't-see-enough-characters-like-the-one-you-made-and-i-wanna-learn-more-%3Ad--it'd-be-really-interesting-to-see-how-their-personality-changes-throughout-the-story. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-idea-of-placing-him-in-another-time-period-that-also-has-a-pandemic-going-on.-it-kinda-puts-things-in-perspective.-i-wonder-why-you-said-saucy.-but-i-really-like-this-video! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-simple-the-character-is%2C-it-seems-like-you-could-have-a-lot-of-secretive-character-personality-that-could-be-shown-throughout-a-story.-but-keeping-the-simplicity-the-whole-story-would-make-a-very-difficult-story-to-make-entertaining.-i-like-the-art-style-too. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool.-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-attention-to-detail-that-you-guys-had-with-the-coat-and-the-hair.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-this-character-is-a-person-from-real-life. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-marble-run.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-whether-the-marble-run-is-a-character%2C-or-whether-it-is-the-character%E2%80%99s-favorite-activity%2C-or-something-else. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-his-only-reason-why-he-will-get-a-job-is-because-he-wants-to-be-warm.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-he-will-get-that-job-because-he-is-pessimistic%2C-like-he-sees-the-worst-outcomes.-like-will-there-be-someone-who-helps-him-get-the-job.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-art-looks-very-good%2C-it-looks-like-some-anime-studio-sketch.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-style-and-detailed-the-drawing-is%2C-i--want-to-know-more-about-the-cat%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-liked-most-was-the-drawing 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-idea-of-the-double-headed-snake-is-a-creative-idea-and-has-potential. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-art-style-so-much-and-i-think-this-has-great-potential 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-this-character-looks-and-it-seems-like-a-great-idea.-i'm-just-wondering-what-he-will-do-about-the-bullies. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-thing-about-helping-her-mom.-how-will-she-accomplish-that%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-drawing-and-the-story-behind-them%2C-i-think-it's-really-nice 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-look-of-the-character-from-their-facial-expressions-and-body-language-is-so-well-done-and-fits-well-with-their-personality.-overall-it's-really-simple-but-really-well-done. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-arms-and-the-effect-it-has-on-the-whole-drawing.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-the-drawing-would-look-like-if-the-end-of-the-arts-had-fingers. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-exotic-features...-(him-being-a-spy-as-a-potato).-i-also-love-how-you-bring-emotions-into-it%2C-how-he-hides-his-pain-over-a-smile. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this-video.-great-character-development.-i-wonder-whether-she-will-choose-to-live-among-the-stars-or-not. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-design-of-the-character- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-plot-of-story-is-very-nice-and-you-could-add-lots-of-details-about-how-your-character-overcomes-her-issues.-i-can-see-how-much-empathy-and-reality-you-have-poured-into-your-character.-i-would-love-more-details-about-her-personal-life-and-backstory-with-her-mom. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-creativity-in-this-and-how-well-it's-drawn 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-(and-your-accent)!-more-people-nowadays-need-to-get-a-job.-i-wonder-what-kind-of-job-he'll-get. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-the-personality-and-overall-look-of-your-character-fits-the-the-meaning-of-their-name.-the-colors-used-are-really-nice-and-just-looks-really-neat.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-drawing-and-how-you-talked-about-how-he-feels-inside. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-chicken-with-the-shell-and-the-design-overall. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-the-character-looks 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-they-really-want-friendship.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-they-will-ever-make-friends%2C 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/first-of-all%2C-the-overlapping-audio-makes-it-kinda-hard-to-understand.-but%2C-i-do-like-the-concept-of-the-character.-i-wonder-how-she-will-learn-to-fit-in. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-have-a-very-creative-idea-with-the-alien-character-and-you-could-do-a-lot-with-the-idea 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-john%E2%80%99s-unwillingness-to-take-joy-from-life.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-he-could-overcome-that-attitude.-would-jon-be-involved-in-this%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-good-idea-and-has-potential-to-be-good 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-their-appearance.-it-made-me-wonder-if-other-characters-would-look-like-them-or-would-they-be-unique%2C 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-could-be-improved- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-fred%E2%80%99s-pessimistic-perspective-of-the-world.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-impact-this-would-have-on-the-story%3F-is-their-pessimistic-attitude-the-reason-why-they-don%E2%80%99t-have-a-job%3F-how-will-it-impact-their-interactions-with-other-characters%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-character%E2%80%99s-personality-is-communicated-so-well%2C-it-makes-nuri-feel-like-a-very-real-person.-the-way-they-explained-their-story-from-their-perspective-gives-it-a-lot-of-depth.-i-wonder-what-the-backstory-of-nuri%E2%80%99s-family-and-community-is%2C-and-i-hope-i-get-to-find-out! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it%E2%80%99s-interesting-that-she-consistently-looks-tired%2C-i-wonder-what%E2%80%99s-causing-that 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-wasn%E2%80%99t-expecting-historical-fiction-to-be-submitted%2C-but-i%E2%80%99m-so-glad-it-was-because-this-is-amazing.-i-need-to-see-more-of-the-saucy-young-englishman%E2%84%A2%EF%B8%8F.-i-wonder-how-his-ego-and-personality-will-develop%2C-because-there-must-be-a-pretty-remarkable-event-to-trigger-character-growth-from-someone-so-self-centered-(for-better-or-for-worse). 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-this-concept%2C-it-has-a-lot-of-interesting-aspects-that-i%E2%80%99m-curious-about.-why-is-the-alien-on-earth%3F-is-she-in-disguise-or-do-these-aliens-just-look-like-humans%3F-who-finds-her-out%2C-and-do-they-become-friends%3F-i-hope-i-get-to-see-more-of-this-story! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it%E2%80%99s-interesting-that-the-character-is-an-assassin-when-he-is-apparently-%E2%80%9Cchildish%E2%80%9D%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-how-he-entered-that-type-of-work.-i-think-you-set-up-a-very-interesting-story. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/since-alexander-is-genderqueer%2C-i%E2%80%99m-curious-to-know-how-they-came-to-be-this-way 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-detailed-the-drawing-is%2C-it-really-conveys-her-personality.-i-wonder-about-how-she%E2%80%99s-going-to-help-her-mother%2C-if-she-does. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-fact-that-chris-was-drawn-in-their-egg%2C-it-seems-like-a-good-way-to-show-their-personality.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-their-shell-will-eventually-fall-off. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/unique-concept...a-grandmother-who-needs-to-control-her-anger.-i-wonder-what-her-redeeming-qualities-will-be%3F-why-will-we-root-for-her%3F-i'd-love-to-know-more-about-the-backstory-of-her-own-grandmother-when-you-develop-this-in-future-weeks.-also-makes-me-wonder-what-kind-of-farm%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/awww-your-snake-is-adorable.-great-drawing%2C-delivery-and-use-of-music.-i-like-the-friend's-name-'ocean'.-i-wonder-what-the-main-conflict-in-your-story-will-be%3F-will-they-make-it-back-to-the-forest%3F-or-continue-to-defend-their-home%3F-will-their-super-power-somehow-make-them-loved-by-normal-snakes%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-concept-of-an-apocalypse-definitely-caught-my-attention.-are-there-zombies%3F-cyborgs%3F-drones%3F-which-specific-moments-during-the-apocalypse-gave-alex-ptsd%3F-do-they-have-a-family%3F-friends%3F-do-they-overcome-their-anxiety-(and-if-so%2C-how%3F)-or-do-they-remain-anxious-through-to-the-end%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-them!-what-an-accurate%2C--fleshed-out-depiction-of-someone-living-in-a-broken-society.-you-particularly-piqued-my-interest-by-mentioning-this-character's-dystopian-world.-what-is-their-environment-like%3F-is-their-government-strict-and-oppressive-or-wild-and-chaotic%3F-why-are-they-afraid-of-the-dark%3F-will-they-find-friends-and-happiness-eventually%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-concept-is-excellent!-i-thought-it-was-incredibly-interesting-that-people-were-happiest-when-bees-were-alive.--it-makes-me-wonder-what-happened-to-the-bees-in-mark's-world.-is-this-a-depiction-of-our-current-situation%2C-set-a-few-years-in-the-future%2C-or-is-it-a-dystopian%2Futopian-society-where-bees-have-a-completely-different-significance%3F-how-many-years-does-mark-spend-trying-to-save-the-bees%2C-and-to-what-avail%3F-does-he-succeed-in-the-end%3F-who-does-he-encounter-that-disagrees-with-his-views-(family-members%2C-friends%2C-etc.)%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-bella-already!-i-really-like-that-her-external-appearance-contrasts-with-her-personality%2C-and-it-makes-me-wonder-how-easily-she-gets-away-with-mischief.-the-introduction-makes-me-wonder-how%2C-exactly%2C-she-will-learn-her-lesson. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-most-interesting-part-was-that-he-only-wanted-to-live-a-peaceful-life-but-had-that-job-that-contradicted-what-his-values-were.-it-made-me-think-about-what-might-have-gotten-him-into-that-job-in-the-first-place. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-how-everyone-knew-how-to-sing-and-dance-and-how-that-was-expected-of-everyone-and-if-you-couldn't-you-didn't-fit-in.--it-made-me-think-about-what-might-have-stopped-her-from-learning-those-things-in-the-first-place 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-how-all-of-what-he-wants-to-do-was-save-the-bees-but-then-you-said-how-they-eventually-went-away%3B-it-made-me-think-more-about-how-the-people-interacted-with-him-because-his-passion-was-to-save-the-bees-and-that-was-how-he-spent-his-time. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-thing-that-i-found-the-most-interesting-about-your-character-was-how-they-needed-to-interact-with-others-but-he-had-trouble-because-they-saw-him-as-annoying-and-nothing-more-than-that.-that-made-me-think-about-how-the-other-people-that-he-is-trying-to-talk-to-might-be-living-and-why-no-one-wants-to-be-friends-with-him 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-saw-as-the-most-interesting-part-of-your-character-was-how-they-still-might-need-their-mom-even-if-they-don't-want-to-be-bossed-around-by-her.-it-made-me-think-about-what-they-might-do-to-get-their-relationship-to-be-at-a-point-where-they-can-both-be-happy-with-it 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-liked-about-your-idea-was-how-they-to-do-what-they-wanted-to-do-they-appeared-to-be-sweet-and-innocent-but-she-knew-what-she-was-doing-and-was-more-intelligent-with-it.-it-made-me-think-more-about-what-might-make-her-learn-that-she-should-not-be-doing-things-like-that-or-what-she-might-be-like-if-she-is-always-able-to-be-accomplishing-her-trickery-without-consequences 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-about-luna-was-her-dreams-in-build-a-train-underwater!-the-idea-and-physical-depiction-of-you-character-is-awesome%2C-and-makes-me-curious-to-learn-more-about-her-story-and-how-she-will-set-out-on-her-mission!--one-thing-i-am-wondering-about-within-you-potential-story-as-it-relates-to-your-character-is-the-connection-between-the-real-world-and-the-dream-world-of-being-a-narwhale.-i-think-there-is-great-potential-in-connecting-a-young-girl's-dreams-to-a-imaginary-character-like-a-narwhale%2C-but-i-think-that-you'll-just-have-to-be-really-clear-in-emphasizing-who-your-ultimate-main-character-is%2C-the-girl-in-the-real-world-or-your-narwhale!-(that-way-you-avoid-any-possible-confusion!)-your-story-and-ideas-are-so-awesome-and-i'm-excited-to-see-how-this-story-will-develop! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-you-constructed-the-inside-of-the-character-and-their-fear-since-everyone-has-fear-somewhere.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-they're-going-to-find-out-that-there-are-people-they-can-relate-to.-also%2C-you-can-also-show-how-other-people-treat-them.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-is-interesting-that-your-character-is-colourful-and-i-wonder-if-this-represents-both-his-internal-and-external-characteristics.-the-tiktok-idea-is-very-linkable-to-many-people-nowadays-and-showing-his-struggle-and-effort-would-inspire-us%2C-too.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-the-girl-has-a-different-personality-on-the-inside-because-i-think-a-lot-of-us-can-relate-to-this-hiding-of-our-emotions.-i'm-really-interested-in-how-you-will-express-her-inner-feelings-to-the-audience.-also%2C-will-she-find-herself-help%2C-or-would-she-help-herself-to-be-happier%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-being-a-space-knight!-how-would-it-be-different-from-knight-on-land%3F-what-are-some-special-challenges%3F-is-your-character-someone-strong-to-face-them-or-fragile-inside%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-that-this-character-can-reflect-some-real-problems-in-our-world.-you-could-develop-his-personality-inside-more%2C-for-example%2C-is-he-sensitive-and-also-kind-to-others%2C-or-is-he-looking-for-revenge-on-something%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-really-like-the-contrast-you-made-between-the-outside-and-the-inside-of-the-character%2C-especially-the-trickster-part.-it-would-be-fun-if-you-could-develop-a-lot-of-costumes-for-her-since-she-likes-to-design-them! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawing-is-so-good.-like%2C-so-good.-(also-there's-a-cat-so-you're-probably-epic) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-on-the-outside-they-look-like-a-cute-character-from-a--pixelated-version-of-my-little-pony-but-on-the-inside-they-are-untrusting-and-calculating.-nice-contrast%2C-bro. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-concept-of-your-character-is-really-cool%2C-what-i-found-most-interesting-is-the-idea-of-a-childish-assassin.-how-is-he-childish-while-doing-such-a-harrowing-and-adult-job%3F-this-is-good-stuff%2C-man. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-character-is-really-interesting--i-like-how-you-chose-to-focus-on-a-ghost-who-is-a-pirate%2C-because-that-is-really-unique-and-has-a-lot-of-potential.--i-wonder-about-what-the-mora-of-your-story-is%2Fhow-an-audience-can-relate-to-your-character's-emotions%2C-actions%2C-thoughts%2C-etc. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-it-is-interesting-that-you-created-a-character-who-doesn't-really-seem-to-have-any-positive-attributes%2C-because-that-leaves-a-lot-of-room-for-growth-throughout-your-story.--i-think-it-would-be-really-interesting-how-this-book-will-transform-your-character-and-his-outlook-on-what's-most-important-in-life. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-it's-great-that-you-focused-on-multiple-different-characters%2C-rather-than-one%2C-and-that-they-all-build-on-one-another.--i'd-like-to-hear-more-about-the-adventure-that-the-team-will-embark-on--it-sounds-really-interesting! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/an-apothecary-in-the-black-death%2C-you'll-be-able-to-do-tons-with-that!-excellent-description-of-an-arrogant-young-man.-question%3A-since-being-an-apothecary-is-a-bit-of-a-service-profession%2C-and-he-thinks-so-little-of-other-people%2C-does-that-raise-conflict-with-his-job%3F-how-does-he-do-with-customers%3F-small-historical-note%3A-you've-drawn-isen-wearing-a-lace-cravat%2C-but-those-don't-appear-until-the-1600's.-geoffrey-chaucer-would-have-been-only-a-few-years-younger-than-your-isen%2C-illustrations-of-chaucer-might-help-with-wardrobe.-but-also%2C-if-i'm-making-pedantic-notes-about-neckties%2C-it's-because-you've-done-a-fantastic-job.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-character-is-amazing!!--i-love-the-idea-that-luna-has-a-dream-that-she-is-a-narwhal-who-can't-swim%2C-and-that-it-relates-to-her-life-in-the-real-world.--your-story-makes-me-what-to-know-if-there-was-a-reason-that-luna-imagined-a-narwhal%2C-or-if-there-is-a-mentor-in-her-life-that-appears-in-the-dream-that-guides-her-to-be-more-confident-in-herself. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-your-character-design-and-the-traits-that-the-sisters-have.--i-think-it-would-be-interesting-to-see-how-they-handle-relationships-while-they-are-stuck-together.---this-also-makes-me-want-to-know-more-about-their-origins%2C-or-why-shone-has-a-black-head-and-why-shang-has-a-white-head. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-character-design!--what-i-love-most-is-that-she-is-8-years-old-and-already-seems-to-have-a-huge-personality.--it-would-be-interesting-to-see-if-at-what-point-in-her-life-did-she-switch-from-adorable-to-mischievous%2C-or-what-moment-pushed-her-to-seek-success-through-evil-means. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-scary-hairy-monster%2C-and-those-wide-set-eyes.-and-you've-given-her-a-great-personality%2C-i-think-those-anger-issues-are-going-to-be-a-lot-of-fun-to-animate%2Fillustrate.-i'm-a-little-confused-because-i-don't-see-a-connection-between-the-conflict-you've-set-up-(parents-won't-let-her-have-all-the-pizza)-and-what-they-need-to-learn-(to-be-themselves).-in-what-ways-is-te-inauthentic%3F-in-what-ways-does-she-hide-and-not-act-like-herself%3F-what-problems-does-that-create%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you've-set-up-some-really-nice-internal-conflict-for-this-character%2C-and-are-well-on-your-way-towards-some-sort-of-action-movie-blockbuster.-but-i-am-confused-by-one-aspect%2C-if-your-character-wants-a-more-peaceful-life%2C-how-did-they-get-into-the-assassin-business-in-the-first-place%3F-and-why-can't-they-just-quit-and-go-buy-a-cabin-in-montana-or-something%3F-and-are-we-talking-black-hat-or-white-hat-assassinations%3F-or-something-more-mercenary%3F-well%2C-i-guess-if-you've-left-me-with-this-many-questions%2C-you've-done-a-good-job-of-capturing-my-attention.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-*-dawn-seems-like-a-well-developed-character.-i-like-that-she-wants-something-simple%2C-like-joining-the-marching-band.-what-instrument-does-she-play%3F-flute-%26-clarinet-are-typical-%22girl%22-instruments%2C-but-require-a-lot-of-finger-dexterity.-is-that-a-problem%3F-any-of-the-brass-instruments-wouldn't-be-a-problem-at-all%2C-especially-trombone.-i-guess-it's-that-choice-of-instrument-could-be-an-additional-source-of-conflict%2C-or-no-problem-at-all-depending-on-which-direction-you-want-to-go.--*-i'm-very-curious-about-the-world-alister-lives-in.-what-other-forest-creatures-is-he-controlling%3F-why%3F-he-reads-as-some-sort-of-dark-wizard%2C-and-i-like-that-angle%2C-but-i'm-curious-if-that's-what-you-intend.-- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-style-you-drew-melody-in.-and-the-cat%2C-i-want-to-know-more-about-the-cat%2C-ash%3F-i-like-the-conflict-you-set-up-for-her%2C-it's-a-problem-we-all-face.-i'd-like-to-hear-more-about-why-her-mom-needs-help.-not-enough-money%3F-needing-help-with-younger-siblings%3F-i-feel-like-elaborating-on-that-issue-will-really-help-drive-the-story.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/chris-sounds-very-relatable-to-a-lot-of-kids.-i'm-curious-why-you-drew-him-still-in-his-egg.-is-he-hiding-in-there-because-he-lacks-the-confidence-to-come-out%3F-or-did-you-just-draw-him-at-a-particular-moment-in-time-before-he's-fully-hatched.-is-he-bullied-because-he-won't-come-out-of-his-shell%3F-is-his-school-only-other-chickens-or-other-barnyard-animals%3F-is-he-bullied-by-the-fox%2C-because-the-fox-thinks-he's-food%3F- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-this-character's-appearance-very-engaging.-i'm-a-bit-confused-by-the-fact-that-you-describe-alexander-as-a-%22social-butterfly%22-but-also-say-that-they-need-to-be-more-confident-and-learn-to-talk-more.-but-a-social-butterfly-is-generally-very-gregarious-and-outgoing%2C-i-think-maybe-that-term-means-something-different-to-you%3F-i'd-like-to-hear-more-about-the-obstacles-that-alexander-is-facing.-%22parents%22-could-mean-lots-of-things.-are-they-over-protective%3F-confused-by-alexander's-gender-expression%3F-outright-antagonistic-to-his-gender-expression%3F-tell-us-more.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-idea-is-amazing!-i-found-it-super-interesting-that-you-were-able-to-fit-so-many-unique-and-compelling-traits-into-this-character.-it-makes-me-wonder-who-some-of-the-other-orangutans-are-who-are-the-antagonists%3F-the-story-you-have-already-developed-is-fantastic-and-i-cannot-wait-to-see-where-this-goes! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-fact-that-you-guys-made-a-really-grounded-human-story-really-great.-we-see-a-lot-of-crazy-and-out-there-ideas-in-pixar-and-other-types-of-media%2C-but-you-guys-made-a-relatable-story-about-just-a-regular-human.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-kind-of-obstacles-alex-will-face-throughout-the-story-so-that-they-can-get-their-goal%2C-and-i-am-really-interested-to-see-where-this-idea-goes! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-having-a-potato-spy-(great-design-by-the-way)-and-have-him-contain-all-of-these-real-human-emotions.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-great-stories-you-can-tell-of-him-trying-to-get-friends-while-also-doing-very-dangerous-spy-missions. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-it-to-be-very-interesting-that-he-had-yellow-eyes.-i-think-it-is-a-very-good-visual-indicator-that-steve-is-sor-tof-an-outcast.--i-wonder-more-about-the-powers-shown-in-some-of-your-images-because-they-seem-very-interesting. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-unique-character-style.-as-a-lover-of-the-80s-myself%2C-i-thought-that-danny-could-be-a-very-relatable-and-interesting-character.-it-also-seems-like-danny's-struggles-with-his-parents-are-very-down-to-earth-and-a-great-obstacle-for-him-to-overcome.-i-wonder-more-about-his-power-and-the-theme-of-abusing-it-comes-into-play%2C-but-it-sounds-very-interesting! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-liked-the-story-idea!-teddy-also-has-a-nice-design%2C-both-in-passive-and-hero-form.-although-he-is-a-hero%2C-he-might-become-bland-if-his-only-desire-is-to-protect-his-owner-and-is-always-successful-in-doing-so.-hero's-are-often-interesting-because-they-go-through-a-hero's-journey-or-have-some-flaws.-these-imperfect-qualities-will-make-teddy-a-more-human-or-relatable-character.-overall%2C-the-story-looks-great-just-remember-when-developing-the-story-that-teddy-needs-some-emotional-conflict-in-addition-to-the-mom-preventing-him-from-protecting-his-owner.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-to-be-most-interesting-was-her-diverse-set-of-traits.-it-seems-like-a-really-unique-and-deep-character-that-has-a-lot-of-interesting-story-opportunities.-your-character-makes-me-wonder-more-about--what-kind-of-evil-things-bella-will-do-to-try-and-get-the-recognition-she-deserves%3F-its-a-great-idea-and-has-me-wanting-more! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/liked-the-design!-the-wild-red-hair-and-gold-tooth-help-to-sell-that-he-is-reckless.-his-sunglasses-make-me-wonder-what-his-eyes-look-like-and-if-he-will-be-really-handsome-in-addition-to-being-a-wild-card.-would-love-to-see-how-the-character-interacts-with-the-story's-world.-but-would-also-like-to-know-what-other-characters-he-will-interact-with-(potential-love-interest%2C-interesting-villain%2C-a-comedic-team-of-adventures%3F) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yes.-just-yes.-he-sounds-really-interesting-and-y'know...chicken-thing-is-awesome%2C-and-pretty-relatable-as-well! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-liked-the-character%E2%80%99s-outfit-seems-to-have-a-nice-earthy-aesthetic!-a-little-confused-about-how-the-character's-personality-will-fit-into-the-story.-but-overall%2C-the-design-seems-to-be-in-a-good-place.-if-you-want-it-might-help-to-look-at-how-body-shape-or-clothing-can-change-the-silhouette-as-it-will-help-rachel-stand-out-when-placed-next-to-other-characters.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ahhhhhhhhhh!-i-love-this-so-much!-the-voice-over-is-amazing-and-it-goes-so-well-with-the-silhouette.-it-would-be-cool-if-you-could-have-another-character-that-knows-what-she's-actually-like-and-thinks-it's-time-people-know.-what-if-people-get-mad-at-her-and-make-her-goals-even-more-unachievable%2C-so-she-shuts-herself-off%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-this-whole-idea%2C-maybe-dial-it-down-on-the-volume-of-the-hair%2C-i-don't-really-have-much-else-to-say-besides-i-really-like-it%2C-and-i'm-tempted-to-search-your-team-name-next-week-to-see-what-you-do-with-them. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-this-whole-idea%2C-maybe-dial-it-down-on-the-volume-of-the-hair%2C-i-don't-really-have-much-else-to-say-besides-i-really-like-it%2C-and-i'm-tempted-to-search-your-team-name-next-week-to-see-what-you-do-with-them. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/liked-the-voice-acting!-i-found-seeing-everyone-as-bananas-a-bit-pretty-funny.-the-story-sounds-like-it%E2%80%99s-going-in-a-good-direction%2C-but-i-feel-the-character-designs-can-become-even-better-with-some-varied-shape-language.-your-side-character-buff-orangutan-would-look-a-bit-more-appealing-with-a-more-confident-stance-and-prominent-chest.-i-feel-like-looking-at-some-of-the-character-designs-in-tarzan-would-be-a-good-reference-to-see-how-to-mess-with-volume%2C-hair%2C-and-other-monkey-features-(even-though-the-monkeys-in-the-movie-are-gorillas%2C-not-orangutans).-overall%2C-looking-great-just-make-sure-to-improve-character-designs-with-a-more-prevalent-shape-language.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-loved-the-story-idea!-sounds-like-it'll-be-fun-researching-all-sorts-of-different-constellations.-since-his-goal-is-to-become-the-first-sorcerer-to-summon-the-hydra%2C-i-think-it-would-really-improve-the-character-design-to-add-more-hydra-like-elements.-for-example%2C-his-hair-could-be-really-wild-like-tentacles-or-entangling-hydra-heads.-also-since-the-story-seems-to-slightly-revolve-around-greek-mythology-with-mentions-of-the-hydra-and-constellations-it-could-really-help-the-world-building-and-character-designs-to-research-greek-culture-and-fashion.-if-this-is-taking-place-in-a-more-modern-setting-researching-old-greek-ruins-could-still-be-interesting.-overall%2C-a-great-story-can't-wait-to-see-the-final-project-but-try-to-experiment-with-greek-elements-and-potentially-making-characters-look-like-their-spirit-constellation.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-liked-the-voice-acting-on-the-character!-since-your-character-has-no-gender-will-the-love-interest-also-have-no-gender-because-they-both-represent-humans-in-element-form%3F-how-do-you-plan-to-design-the-water-and-fire-tribes.-adding-cultural-influences-from-different-areas-of-the-world-could-really-improve-the-world-building-and-designs-for-these-people.-since-it-sounds-like-the-two-nations-are-nomadic-i-believe-it-could-help-to-look-at-mongolian-fashion-and-architecture-(more-specifically-things-like-yurts)-as-taking-inspiration-from-real-world-elements-can-drastically-improve-a-story.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-her-greatest-enemy-is-a-lack-of-time%3B-so-many-people-seem-to-rush-from-activity-to-activity-and-bite-off-more-than-they-can-chew%2C-and-a-lot-of-times-their-mental-health-suffers-because-of-this.-i-really-like-the-message-that-you-are-conveying-with-this-character%2C-and-i-can't-wait-to-see-where-you-go-from-here! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-art-style%2C-but-i-am-curious-to-know-what-traits-they-have-that-could-be-seen-as-'negative'-or-could-lead-to-conflict.-if-they-are-kind-and-funny-all-the-time-and-have-no-flaws%2C-it-will-be-hard-for-them-to-have-an-arc-during-the-story.-i-am-also-curious-as-to-what-your-character's-goal-is-and-what-they-will-learn-throughout-the-story.-also%2C-is-it-intentional-that-they-do-not-have-a-name%3F-if-so%2C-that-could-be-really-interesting-and-i-would-love-to-find-out-why-they-don't-share-their-name-or-why-they-simply-do-not-have-one.-their-design-is-cute%2C-and-its-a-good-start%2C-but-it-might-be-good-to-write-down-a-negative-trait-or-two-so-that-we-can-see-them-struggle-and-learn-in-the-process. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-that-the-bird-has-abs!-i-really-like-the-character's-motivation%2C-and-its-really-cool-that-you-gave-him-the-ability-to-turn-back-time%2C-but-(it-seems-like)-he-won't-be-able-to-save-his-family-and-will-have-to-face-the-consequences-of-his-actions.-it-will-be-interesting-to-see-where-his-journey-takes-him-and-the-internal-conflict-he-will-have-to-face.-i-can't-wait-to-see-where-you-take-this! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-her-design%2C-it-definitely-conveys-a-shy-and-timid-girl%2C-but-i-am-curious-as-to-why-people-think-she-is-crazy.-is-she-spacey%3F-does-she-believe-in-a-lot-of-things-commonly-accepted-to-be-fake%3F-or-is-it-just-because-she-believes-animals-are-real%3F-i-would-be-careful-to-flesh-her-hobbies-and-interests-out-more%2C-as-well-as-other-aspects-of-her-personality-besides-shyness-and-introversion%2C-to-make-sure-that-she-doesn't-become-a-stereotype%2C-but-other-than-that-i-think-she-definitely-has-the-potential-to-be-a-great-character%2C-especially-considering-what-(from-what-i-gathered-from-this-video)-your-plot-is-going-to-be-based-around! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/bob-stump-is-a-really-good-name-for-this-character.-he-seems-like-he-is-going-to-be-really-passive-in-the-story%2C-so-it-will-be-interesting-to-see-how-you-pull-him-into-the-events-of-your-story.-will-he-be-a-reluctant-hero%2C-or-a-passive-witness-to-events%3F-it-will-be-interesting-to-see-how-far-out-of-his-comfort-zone-the-events-of-the-story-take-him%2C-and-how-they-transform-him. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-her-silhouette%2C-i-am-not-sure-if-she-is-actually-a-witch-or-if-that-is-just-a-costume%2C-but-either-way-its-cute-and-seems-to-suit-her.-if-she-is-actually-a-witch%2C-i-think-it-will-be-really-interesting-to-find-out-why-or-how-she-became-a-witch-and-how-she-interacts-with-the-world-around-her.-i-think-its-a-really-great-that-she-has-a-mean-side-and-i-can't-wait-to-see-what-you-do-with-her%2C-and-also-to-see-what-she-looks-like-when-she's-finished!! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool.-i-like-your-character.-why-do-they-attack-people%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-character-(i-would-use-her-name-but-i-do-not-want-to-spell-it-wrong)-and-how-she-looks-and-dresses-and-the-fact-that-she-is-half-human-and-half-dog-which-is-cool!-her-want-and-what's-stopping-her-from-getting-what-she-wants-is-very-understandable-and-great%2C-and-the-end-of-your-story-that-i-am-thinking-of-will-turn-out-to-be-full-of-happiness-and-equality-(or-not%3F)-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-backstory-of-your-character-aside-from-just-being-bullied-to-turn-her-into-who-she-is%2C-and-who-your-character's-friends-and-family-are. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice.-i-like-the-story-idea.-what-will-her-own-style-of-dancing-be-like%3F 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-you-created-a-whole-new-creature.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-he-will-achieve-his-goals. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-external-features-of-your-character%2C-it-is-very-unique.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-he-interacts-with-other-people. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-that-he-could-print-any-object.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-he-will-use-this-tool-to-his-advantage. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-yellow-rose-is-a-happy-girl-on-the-outside-but-is-depressed-on-the-inside%2C-and-also-that-she-is-not-fully-developed-and-wants-to-belong-somewhere.-she-doesn't-have-a-%22home%22-is-what-is-stopping-her-from-belonging-as-well-as-not-being-fully-developed%2C-and-it-makes-me-wonder-if-she-actually-doesn't-have-a-home-to-live-in-or-a-home-where-she-is-accepted%2C-a-community-where-she-belongs-to.-i-would-also-like-to-see-what-makes-her-not-fully-developed-if-i-may-ask%2C-apart-from-everybody-else-who-i-assume%2C-is-fully-developed.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-you-developed-your-character's-personality-very-well-and-the-drawing-is-good.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-she-will-change-society-and-the-world. 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-john-and-that-he-is-a-monster!-how-you-made-john-look-is-very-detailed-and-rugged-and-i-love-it%2C-but-how-john-just-wants-friends-explains-the-sort-of-friendly-smile-on-his-face-and-it-is-great%2C-although-scary-when-he-attacks-people.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-john-will-tackle-his-hunger-and-get-human-friends-(or-not-human-friends%3F) 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-ajax-wants-to-explore-space-and-the-universe-but-has-anxiety-and-needs-to-learn-how-to-socialize%2C-and-it-makes-me-wonder-why-he-has-anxiety-if-he-really-wants-to-explore-space-and-the-universe-and-what-socializing-will-get-him-to-where-he-wants-to-be-doing.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-fact-that-amethyst-ash-has-heterochromia-and-what-that-might-have-to-do-with-anything-or-not%2C-as-well-as-she-was-kicked-out-of-her-guild-but-still-wants-to-help-them-out.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-amethyst-ash-got-kicked-out-in-the-first-place-and-also-who-she-comes-across-that-she-can-actually-trust.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cute-character-design!-i'd-love-to-learn-more-about-her-story! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-connie's-outfit-and-the-fact-that-she-is-a-pirate-ghost.-i-love-that-idea!-with-her-personality%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-how-she-can-overcome-her-personal-beliefs-and-values-to-succeed-in-her-dream-of-becoming-a-pirate-through-living-again.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-they-don't-like-their-boss.-he-must-be-an-interesting-character-to-explore-also.-this-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-other-challenges-the-character-will-face.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-fact-that-the-character's-goal-is-to-discover-alien-life.-this-is-a-unique-goal-and-i-am-excited-to-see-a-story-around-this.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-their-goal-of-discovering-alien-life-and-the-lesson-they-need-to-learn-of-asking-others-for-help-will-connect.- 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-were-the-distinctions-you-made-in-your-character's-physical-appearance-for-them-to-be-easily-identifiable%2C-such-as-the-eye-color-or-the-sword.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-a-story-he-would-be-in-and-what-role-he-would-play.-would-he-be-the-underdog-or-the-expected-hero%3F-i'm-excited-to-see-how-this-story-turns-out! 2021-10-18 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-was-the-background-and-context-of-the-character.-i-like-his-character-type-and-personality-traits.-it's-interesting-to-see-a-main-character-or-just-a-character-that-isn't-the-fun%2C-bubbly-type. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-was-the-fact-that-they're-pretty-relatable-as-a-character.-i-like-that-this-character-has-blue-hair-and-i-also-appreciate-the-gender-queer-representation.- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-fact-that-they-grew-from-a-seed-but-has-human-qualities.-i-like-how-aesthetic-the-character-is-and-how-relatable-it-is.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-this-characters-journey-and-where-the-story-would-be-heading-with-this-character.. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-fact-that-they-grew-from-a-seed-but-has-human-qualities.-i-like-how-aesthetic-the-character-is-and-how-relatable-it-is.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-this-characters-journey-and-where-the-story-would-be-heading-with-this-character.. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-the-plants-want-to-strive-for-equality-for-humans-and-i-wonder-how-jeff-will-overcome-his-obstacles-to-get-there. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-personally-think-the--last-two--ideas-were-pretty-good.-they-seem-like-they-would-make-for-good-short-films.-the-magic-ice-box-one-just-seems-kind-of-out-there-and-doesn't-have-enough-context.. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-part-that-i-most-enjoyed-in-this-story-had-to-be-the-part-where-the-cats-makes-drinks.-i-mean%2C-that's-such-a-good-concept-and-i-wish-i-had-thought-of-it-first.-i-wonder-if-she-could-cater-to-a-different-audience%2C-perhaps-other-felines-or-similar-animals.-i-wonder-how-she-got-her-name-and-why-she-was-named-that.-i-believe-this-story-could-be-very-cute-and-funny. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-his-outside-look.-i-think-that-a-brave-samurai-is-very-cool.-i-think-that-the-idea-of-him-having-to-face-his-fears-to-save-something-he-cares-a-lot-about-could-be-developed-further-and-could-turn-out-to-be-a-really-great-story! 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-idea-of-how-she-was-anxious-and-cautious-about-visiting-the-moon-before-going%2C-i-was-wondering-about-how-she-overcame-her-fears-and-accomplished-her-goals. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-his-appearance-fits-his-personality.-he-seems-like-a-character-that-would-be-practical-and-want-to-know-more-about-the-world-around-him-but-the-difference-in-his-eyes'-shapes-makes-him-seem-like-a-character-who-would-doubt-himself-sometimes.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-about-himself-he-doubts-and-where-he-gets-his-confidence-from.- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-name-of-your-character.-it-is-a-really-unique-name-and-i-would-love-to-know-the-reason-behind-you-choosing-this-name.-i-like-the-idea-behind-this-character-and-would-like-to-see-more-development-of-the-challenges-the-character-faces.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-other-people-may-be-able-to-relate-to-this-character-because-she-seems-very-relatable.- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-it-really-interesting-how-you-had-lots-of-reasons-for-the-name-of-your-character.-i-think-the-name-fits-the-description-of-your-character-well.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-relationships-of-the-character-with-other-children-would-be-affected-by-his-wisdom-and-perception-of-reality.- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-character-really-seems-to-be-realistic.-very-interesting-characteristic-traits.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-his-story-would-end!--do-leave-a-feedback-on-my-page-ayush-%7C-team%3A-jarvis 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-a-very-interesting-character-you-have-introduced.-i-really-liked-the-illustration%2C-and-all-the-characteristic-traits-he-has.-a-very-original-and-interesting-character-arc.-im-really-looking-forward-for-this-story-to-unfold.--do-leave-your-feedback-on-my-page-ayush-%7C-team%3A-jarvis 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-depiction-on-this-art-is-completely-clear%2C-and-easy-to-understand.-the-character's-internal-and-external-features-are-very-well-presented.-however-i-do-feel%2C-instead-of-focusing-so-much-time-just-on-the-features%2C-there-could-have-been-the-character-arc-included-and-what-kind-of-obstacle-she-needs-to-cross-due-to-her-possession-over-her-imaginary-friends%2C-for-instance-bullying-from-her-classmates-and-more.--do-leave-a-feedback-on-my-page-as-well.-ayush-%7C-team%3A-jarvis 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-how-you-have-created-the-external-features-of-your-character%2C-while-i-do-feel-there-could-be-much-more-to-the-internal-feature.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-the-character-could--transform-itself-into-humans-to-fit-in-with-the-setting%2C-or-would-it-have-the-ability-to-communicate-with-other-humans-etc.--moreover%2C-i-felt-that-instead-of-stereotype-being-an-obstacle-between-the-character-and-its-wants-and-needs%2C-the-obstacle-could-have-been-the-difficulty-in-living-a-life-with-humans-or-something-like-that.-you-can-ponder-over-it-for-sometime-for-a-better-outcome.--a-feedback-from-you-would-be-great.-ayush-%7C-team%3A-jarvis 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-how-you-have-worked-on-this-character-of-yours.-i-do-appreciate-how-well-you-have-illustrated-this-character%2C-but-i-feel-that-this-video-was-dragging-a-bit-to-much.-what-i-found-interesting-was-how-the-illustration-speaks-for-itself.--do-leave-yoyr-feedback-on-my-page%2C-ayush-%7C-team%3A-jarvis 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-well-illustrated...i-really-liked-how-you-voiced-over-your-creation!!--do-leave-a-feedback-on-our-page%3A-ayush-%7C-team%3A-jarvis 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-you-did-multiple-characters.-i-love-their-%22wants%22-and-this-idea-of-getting-out-of-the-simulation.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-they-will-all-interact-in-the-story-and-what-their-%22journey%22-will-be-like.-can't-wait-for-more 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hilarious.-a-very-unique-character-and-story-we-can-all-relate-to.-i-also-loved-your-animation-style-it-made-me-laugh-twice.-it-makes-me-wonder-who-his-parents-are-and-what-kind-of-music-he-likes-to-play.-this-is-going-to-be-good%2C-you-have-a-great-theme-developing. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-really-well-done.-this-character-is-definitely-unique-and-adorable.--it-makes-me-wonder-how-he's-going-to-get-out-of-that-drawer!-i-also-wonder-why-the-mother-doesn't-want-her-playing-with-bears%2C-i-think-that-could-be-an-interesting-part-of-your-story-when-you-flesh-it-out.-bravo! 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/beautiful-drawings.-i-found-this-character-to-be-very-believable-and-relatable.-i'd-love-to-see-her-drawings.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-drawings-will-be-used-in-the-story-and-where-they-might-take-her.-i-look-forward-to-see-how-this-develops. 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-most-interesting-is-this-that-this-character-is-an-alien%2C-and-i've-never-seen-an-alien-like-this!-it-makes-me-wonder-why-they-want-be-a-space-knight....where-did-they-get-that-idea%3F-where-is-their-home%3F-can't-wait-for-more 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-i-found-interesting-was-how-that-person-could-be-an-actual-person-and-then-how-he-would-be-able-to-cope-with-and-use-his-alter-ego.-it-made-me-think-about-what-he-might-do-with-his-alter-ego 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job!-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-drawing-of-the-character.-i-like-the-eyes-and-and-the-big-sword.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-this-character-would-be-like-if-it-came-to-life%3F 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job.-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-story-you-came-up-with.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-would-of-happen-it-your-character-had-the-self-esteem-that-was-needed%3F- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job.-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-drawing-of-your-character-when-she-was-dreaming-(the-narwhal-drawing).-it-is-a-very-nice-drawing-with-lots-of-color!-it-makes-me-wonder-what-if-luna's-dream-came-to-life%3F- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job.-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-lesson-you-had-behind-the-story.-%22he-needs-to-learn-how-to-put-his-needs-over-his-wants.%22-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-happen-if-he-did-put-his-needs-over-his-wants%3F- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job.-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-character-named-don.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-she-had-the-self-confidence-that-she-needed-if-she-would-have-join-band%3F- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job.-what-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-character-you-did.-it-is-cool-looking.-your-story-makes-me-wonder-more-about-why-chris-feels-that-way.- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/a-bodybuilder-fighting-aliens-isn't-something-you-see-every-day!-unique-personality-too.-that-said%2C-though%2C-the-aliens-seem-like-an-outside-threat-rather-than-an-internal-flaw-he-needs-to-fix.- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/definitely-some-good-potential-here%2C-but-i-wish-you-all-went-into-greater-detail-about-him.-why-does-he-want-to-explore%3F- 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/an-interesting-way-to-handle-a-naive-character.-they're-realistic-and-have-the-potential-for-good-character-interactions.-why-are-they-so-naive-in-the-first-place%3F 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/glad-to-see-the-mushroom-story-again!-interesting-to-see-how-this-guy-is-trying-to-prove-how-the-mushrooms-aren't-dangerous.-why-is-he-doing-this%3F 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/one-character-would've-been-enough%2C-but-this-is-extremely-detailed!-although-the-video-drags-on-a-bit%2C-it-gives-a-good-summary-of-what-kind-of-person-she-is-and-how-her-reflection-contributes-to-her-identity.-how-did-she-get-the-reflection-anyway%3F 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/a-great-balance-between-absolute-absurdity-and-an-interesting-character-with-realistic-motives-and-goals.-didn't-expect-it-from-a-milk-carton.-how-will-this-be-connected-to-your-story%3F 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-guy-is-awesome.-he-has-realistic-struggles-and-an-extremely-cool-design-to-boot.-i-can't-help-but-wonder-what-got-his-family-killed.-love-it! 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-fact-that-she's-tired-brings-up-a-lot-of-implications.-certainly-has-good-character-arc-potential.-great-artstyle%2C-by-the-way! 2021-10-17 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/interesting-and-unique-sorry-and-character-based-conflict 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-ideas-just-one-small-thing-for-the-ice-box-can-you-elaborate-a-bit-more%3F-like-what-kind-of-ice-box%3F-the-size%3F-- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-ideas-just-one-small-thing-for-the-ice-box-can-you-elaborate-a-bit-more%3F-like-what-kind-of-ice-box%3F-the-size%3F-- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-alex%E2%80%99s-identity-is-super-cool!-there-is-so-much-potential-for-expansive-world-building-here%2C-which-makes-me-more-intrigued-about-the-storyline.-where-are-all-the-girls%3F-do-they-live-in-a-separate-community%2C-in-another-world%3F-did-they-all-die%3F-was-alex-born-into-this-world-of-all-boys%2C-and-if-so%2C-how%3F-wouldn%E2%80%99t-the-doctors-at-her-birth-know-about-her-identity%3F-how-will-the-all-male-society-react-if%2Fwhen-she-is-discovered%3F-alex-as-a-character-opens-the-door-to-many-discussions-about-gender-roles-and-stigma-in-society%2C-which-is-a-super-interesting-and-relevant-theme-to-explore-in-a-short. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow!-the-doppelg%C3%A4nger-really-threw-me-for-a-loop.-where-does-the-lookalike-come-from%3F-is-she-a-version-of-kyra-from-another-dimension%2C-a-shapeshifter%2C-or-just-another-normal-human-girl%3F-why-is-kyra-afraid-of-her-mother%E2%80%99s-reaction%3F-why-does-she-hold-herself-to-such-a-high-standard%3F-is-it-just-because-she-doesn%E2%80%99t-want-to-disappoint-her-mom%2C-or-is-there-another-underlying-reason-(for-example%2C-her-mom-might-be-abusive-or-narcissistic)%3F-this-has-the-potential-to-be-a-very-engaging-short.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-her-mom-will-react-if%2Fwhen-the-truth-is-discovered.-i%E2%80%99m-really-excited-to-see-how-you-develop-kyra%E2%80%99s-story! 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/its-good 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/interesting-way-to-bring-one-character-together-with-extremely-different-personalities.-i-am-curious-what-makes-each-personality-come-to-life%2C-how-and-if-the-pirate-persona-will-be-portrayed%2C-and-if-he-will-overcome-his-struggles%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-sketch-of-the-tired-farmer.-i-would-like-to-know-more-about-your-character.-there-wasn't-any-audio. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/interesting-idea.-i-like-the-concept-and-it-sort-of-reminds-me-of-our-character-blue.-i-wonder-why-he-came-to-earth-to-be-a-post-man%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea!-i-also-love-my-top-hat!-i-wonder-why-his-hat-was-stolen-though%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-character-design!-i-like-the-ideas-of-your-character%2C-but-i-wonder-if-the-story-could-be-more-developed-to-help-stop-my-confusion-on-it. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-nice-idea!-i-wonder-if-she-ever-gets-the-pizza%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-depth-and-complexity-of-this-character%2C-and-the-emotions-captured-in-the-art.-i%E2%80%99m-curious-about-how-the-character-is-able-to-change-or-interfere-with-the-past.- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-this-character-is-really-relatable.-the-art-style-is-really-cool.-i-wonder-whether-harper-will-find-something-that-gives-inner-strength-or-that-makes-it-worth-risking-rejection.- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-well-thought-out-this-character-is.-he-seems-very-complex.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-he-will-find-that-motivates-him-enough-to-be-courageous.- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-art-style.-it%E2%80%99s-also-nice-to-see-a-character-that-is-positive-overall.- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-this-idea!-it%E2%80%99s-an-interesting-twist-on-taking-a-new-perspective-on-a-frustrating-situation-and-bringing-awareness-of-how-our-words-can-unintentionally-affect-those-around-us.- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/recommendations-for-name%3A-wefe-instead-of-wifi.-idk-sounds-funny. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-this-idea!-i-think-everyone-struggles-with-this-when-they-are-younger%2C-(-i-know-i-do%2C-i-was-like-this-when-i-was-little)-so-theming-this-short-about-growing-up-and-being-aware-is-really-nice-and-can-be-great-to-show-to-kids.-nales-design-is-adorable!-i-love-the-pose%2C-it's-super-energetic-and-full-of-life!-this-makes-me-wonder%2C-is-there-a-specific-reason-that-nale-dresses-so-colorfully%3F-is-there-a-reason-they-are-a-little-bit-of-a-brat%2C-or-is-it-just-because-they-are-young%3F-what-happened-when-they-realized-their-mistakes%3F-what-were-those-mistakes%3F-do-they-have-any-friends%3F-i-can't-wait-to-see-more-of-this!- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-a-lot-of-people-can-feel-for-this-character%2C-especially-because-their-design-is-so-likeable!-arlo-looks-like-a-little-bean-%3A0!-i-love-the-way-you-drew-the-hair%2C-eyes%2C-and-clothes.-clothes-are-so-hard!.this-makes-me-wonder%2C-if-he-has-just-a-few-friends%2C-are-they-big-people-in-his-life%3F-do-they-encourage-him-to-get-motivated%3F-do-they-help-arlo-through-hard-times%3F-or-are-they-not-super-nice-%22friends%22%3F-does-something-crazy-happen-to-arlo%3F-or-is-it-a-more-realistic-story%3F- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-story-line-a-lot!-i-wonder-if-the-other-owner-is-a-cat%3F%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-nice!-the-details-on-the-story-are-very-good!-i-wonder-if-you-could-give-more-detail-on-the-other-elves%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-nice-idea!-i-like-the-story.-but-i-wonder-where-this-tank-is%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/omg-techno-is-that-you!!-yooooo! 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-if-you-could-reach-through-a-tv-screen.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-world-would-change-and-how-easy-it-would-be-to-transport-valuables-or-weapons. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-very-great-ideas.-the-one-i-found-most-interesting-was-if-everyone-looked-the-same.-i-wonder-how-anything-would-be-done-if-nobody-could-talk.-maybe-we-wouldn't-even-be-alive.-how-would-we-differentiate-each-other-if-we-all-looked-the-same%3F 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-ideas-are-really-amazing!-i-wonder-what-would-happen-if-someone's-mood-was-very-extreme-and-what-music-it-would-produce. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/glows%3A-i-really-like-the-ideas-for-your-video%2C-as-it-has-a-lot-of-potential.--grows%3A-next-time%2C-you-shouldn%E2%80%99t-cut-your-recording-so-soon%2C-as-some-audio-was-slightly-cut-off. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/glows%3A-the-idea-of-an-imaginary-friend-being-a-past-life-is-ingenious!-grows%3A-next-time%2C-you-should-film-the-camera-horizontally%2C-so-there-aren%E2%80%99t-two-big-black-sides-on-the-screen. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/glows%3A-i-really-like-the-visual-style-of-your-drawings.-grows%3A-next-time%2C-you-should-try-to-cut-out-extra-background-noise%2C-as-it-is-kinda-distracting. 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/glows%3A-the-idea-of-dreamworks-taking-over-pixar-is-a-brilliant-scenario!-grows%3A-next-time%2C-you-should-film-your-voiceovers-in-another-location%2C-because-there-is-a-lot-of-background-noise. 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/glows%3A-i-like-the-different-creative-ideas-for-your-video.-grows%3A-next-time%2C-you-could-move-closer-to-the-mic-or-make-the-volume-of-all-the-recordings-the-same%2C-as-the-second-line-was-more-quiet-than-the-others. 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-art-is-super-expressive%2C-i-can-instantly-tell-what-his-mood--his-all-the-time-(anxious).-the-character-seems-fully-developed-from-the-looks-of-it.-i-wonder-how-this-character-would-fit-with-your-what-if...-idea.-anyways%2C-the-submissions-was-overall-really-good-and-creative.-great-work. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-complex-but-very-interesting-to-say-the-least.-first-of-all-the-art-style-looks-very-nice-and-polished.--anyways-the-idea-of-her-mirror-self-coming-out-to-help-the-real-shella.-anyways-i-wonder-how-this-idea-would-fit-with-your-what-if...-you-chosen.-this-submission-was-really-good%2C-great-job. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-character-art-is-super-good%2C-solid-colors-on-a-complex-posture%2C-its-really-good.-i-wonder-how-people-viewing-almond-different-could-change-his-mental-state-if-he-does.-the-idea-of-being-looked-different-because-of-his-race-is-very-familiar-(racism).-anyways-the-art-is-good-and-the-idea-of-being-a-alien-postman-is-super-creative.-really-good-job. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/first-of-all%2C-the-character-looks-absolutely-stunning-with-so-much-personality.-this-story-really-reminds-me-of-omori's-story.-where-sunny's-sister-died-at-a-young-age-and-he-suffered-depression%2C-grief-and-anxiety-all-at-once-(or-persona-3-for-how-to-talk-about-death)-i-am-curious-to-know-how-do-you-plan-to-expand-on-depression.-this-submissions-was-really-good-overall. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/apollo-character-seems-very-interesting-to-say-the-least%2C-i'm-really-interested-what-his-character-traits-(internal-and-external-could-be).-anyways-i-wonder-how-this-story-would-connect-with-your-what-if-idea-and-how-this-character-would-work-for-a-younger-audience.-anyways-this-submission-was-really-good%2C-great-job%2C 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/archie-sounds-like-he's-going-to-be-a-complex-character.-his-character-reminds-me-of-aladdin's-character-arc-if-you-want-to-really-develop-is-character-in-a-professional-way.--i-wonder-the-what-if-you-chose-to-go-along-with-this-character-and-what-type-of-antics-he-will-get-up-to.-anyways-the-character-design-is-really-good. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-constellations-being-a-superpower%2C-that-is-concept-that-has-never-been-done-before.-i'm-really-interested-in-how-his-story-will-unfold-and-how-it-will-relate-to-the-what-if-you-chose.-overall-this-character-is-simplistic-but-interesting. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-thought-it-is-interesting-that-ghost-wants-to-be-a-demon-king.-it-makes-me-wonder-although-the-other-demon-kings-are-stopping-him-from-getting-what-he-wants-are-their-angel-kings-also-trying-to-get-him-to-join-the-forces-of-good%3F- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-fact-that-jeff-wants-nothing-more-than-equality.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-jeff-will-react-when-they-find-out-plants-are-used-for-construction-material%2C-fire-wood%2C-food%2C-and-more.- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-for-the-names-on-this-character-interest-me-because-i-have-not-heard-them-before-but-seem-fitting.-it-makes-me-wondering-what-those-names-mean. 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-depiction-of-luna-in-her-dream%2C-i-am-curious-about-her-portrayal-in-the-real-world.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-she-is-the-only-one-living-in-this-dream-world.-the-idea-also-makes-me-question-if-the-narwhal-character-still-lives-and-continues-on-while-luna-is-awake-in-the-real-world.--for-example-does-luna-come-back-into-the-dream-world-to-find-that-the-narwhal-character-has-been-promoted%2C-or-fired%3F-also-are-these-lucid-dreams-and-does-luna-control-the-narwhal-in-the-dreams%3F- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-illustration-gives-a-good-visual-for-how-your-character-will-look-in-one-of-their-forms.-i-wonder-more-about-the-stranger-that-they-interact-with-and-it-makes-me-curious-if-this-stranger-is-another-being-similar-to-what-she-is.- 2021-10-16 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-i-love-this-idea%2C-i-think-at-the-end-it-was-going-to-say-%22think-they-are-food%3F%22%2C-can't-wait-to-see-where-this-story-goes 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nuri-looks-so-cute!-their-personality-seems-really-great.-this-makes-me-wonder-if-nuri-and-ren-will-fall-in-love%3F-if-they-do%2C-how-would-they-interact%3F-if-not%2C-how-would-their-interactions-be-anyways%3F-what-would-happen-if-they-touched%3F-does-nuri-burn-stuff-they-touch%3F-do-people-see-them-as-an-outcast-and-dangerous%3F- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-this-idea-is-creative-and-this-will-be-a-really-interesting-story!-what-happens-when-the-constellations-are-summoned%3F-does-something-else-happen%3F-why-does-he-want-to-summon-the-most-complicated-constellation%3F-does-he-seek-fame-or-will-he-be-considered-talented-if-he-can-summon-the-hydra%3F-how-will-he-figure-out-how-to-summon-it%3F-once-he-overcomes-his-problems%2C-will-he-then-be-able-to-summon-it%3F 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-art-is-amazing!-they-are-really-pretty.-her-want-makes-me-wonder-if-she-is-wanting-to-be-a-doctor%3F-or-is-she-some-sort-of-witch-that-heals-people%3F-or...-does-she-just-want-to-help-people-in-general%3F 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-character-design-is-so-cool-and-i-love-that-it-tells-part-of-his-story-and-his-personality-a-bit.-i-wonder-how-his-character-will-evolve-and-change. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/amazing!!!!-at-first-i-was-thinking-teddy-was-so-adorable-and-cute-and-then-the-music-changed-and-he-became-so-much-more-awesome!-i-love-the-music-in-this-video-and-the-art-style-is-so-nice-and-pretty-as-well!-the-story-is-fantastic-and-i-love-that-teddy-just-wants-to-protect-his-owner.-i-really-want-to-see-more!! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/tay-is-absolutely-adorable!!-pizza-is-amazing-and-i-really-hope-she-gets-all-the-pizza-she-wants.-i'd-love-to-see-more-of-her-character-and-see-how-she-evolves! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-love-love-this-so-much!!-nuri-seems-awesome-and-i-hope-things-do-go-well-with-the-ren!!-i-love-the-story-behind-this-character-and-how-much-personality-they-have-too.-it-leaves-me-wanting-to-see-more-and-i'm-very-curious-about-ren-now-too.-amazing!!!! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-a-really-interesting-idea-and-it-is-definitely-making-me-interested!-great-job-on-this! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawing-is-really-good-and-teh-description-wa-very-thorough.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-name-and-the-idea-behind-this-character.-the-description-was-very-good-as-well.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-description-is-very-detailed-and-really-helps-to-visualize-the-character-more.-great-job.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-amazing!-the-picture-is-so-good-and-the-description-definitely-matched-it.-sounds-like-a-great-movie! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this-idea-and-character.-the-drawing-is-really-good-too-and-does-a-good-job-of-picturing-him-from-what-you-said.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea-is-super-cute!-would-definitely-make-for-a-great-pixar-movie.-it-makes-me-think-of-how-that-child-would-grow-up-and-teh-differences.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-i-liked-that-she-looks-like-an-alien-but-wants-to-be-human-2.-why-does-she-most-want-to-be-human-not-alien 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-a-really-good-idea!-makes-me-think-of-what-we-as-humans-would-be-like-if-dinosaurs-did-exist-now-and-how-we-would-have-adapted-to-that-change!- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-i-found-the-name-to-be-very-interesting-2.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-he-wants-to-save-his-daughter-from-and-it-sounds-like-there-is-time-travel-involved-(the-drawing-is-so-cool) 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-second-idea.-it-makes-me-think-of-what-we-as-humans-would-do-and-if-we-would-be-afraid-or-in-wonder-of-it.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-plant-human-hybrid-idea!!-the-drawing-was-so-good-and-it-would-make-a-really-cute-movie-idea!-definitely-makes-me-think-of-what-they-would-look-like-and-live.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-after-her-fall-latte-realizes-she-wants-to-help-people-2.-this-made-me-wonder-more-about-the-connection-of-falling-to-then-wanting-to-help-others 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-last-idea-about-the-internet-stopping.-that-would-be-interesting-to-see-what-people-would-do-with-the-free-time-they-would-have-then.-great-job!! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-that-joe's-paranoia-stops-him-from-getting-what-he-wants-2.-this-makes-me-wonder-about-what-he-wants 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-last-idea-i-think-that-would-be-really-cool-to-see-in-a-movie-and-i-would-definitely-be-interested!- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-detail-they-look-tired-2.-the-detail-of-the-feer-of-rejection-made-me-wonder-more-about-what-caused-it 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-intering-was-that-archie-wants-to-help-humanity-but-fails-because-of-his-self-centered-mindset-2.-this-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-he-acts-because-these-ideas%2Ftraits-seem-as-though-they-contradict 2021-10-20 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-conecpt-and-what-would-happen-if-humans-were-superhumans-with-really-strong-powers- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-drawings-i-really-like-the-concept-and-the-most-i-found-intresting-is-the-moon-getting-close-to-the-earth-i-wonder-what-would-happen-if-that-actually-happend- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-concept-and-what-would-the-world-be-if-humans-did-not-have-bones-it-was-a-little-hard-to-hear-but-the-concept-is-great- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-concept-and-what-would-the-world-be-if-humans-did-not-have-bones-it-was-a-little-hard-to-hear-but-the-concept-is-great- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-nice-drawing-i-really-like-the-concept-and-how-humans-would-be-treated-in-a-diffrent-planet- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-concept-about-what-would-happen-if-the-goverment-shutdown-because-what-would-be-the-reaction-of-people- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-were-all-really-good-ideas!-i-honestly-wouldntknow-which-one-i-would-like-to-see-in-a-full-story-board-animation-because-they-all-seem-amazing!-but-if-i-had-to-choose-one-i--would-probably-like-to-see-the-magical-friend!-good-job! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-concept-of-the-government-shutting-down-because-we-really-wouldn't-know-what-would-happen!-people-could-go-crazy%2C-become-scared-or-even-go-through-a-second-great-depression-only-worse.-good-ideas! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-rally-like-the-ideas-and-creativity-behind-them%2C-i-especially-like-the-3rd-idea.-good-job! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-a-sucker-for-portals-to-other-worlds%2C-so-this-was-really-interesting!-also-for-the-second-what-if%2C-is-there-a-reason-why-they-turn-into-monsters%3F-is-there-some-kind-of-curse-placed-on-them%3F 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow.-love-that-last-idea-about-the-feelings.-it-would-be-so-much-easier-to-be-happy-when-you-want-to-be!-love-the-concept. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/my-favorite-idea%2C-as-someone-who-loves-to-talk-a-lot%2C-was-the-one-about-words-being-currency.-it-does-seem-like-it-could-be-pretty-confusing-tho-if-it-isn't-explained-well.-great-job. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-his-personality.-it-seems-like-society-today-does-try-to-silence-those-with-questions.-it-make-some-wonder-more-about-how-our-society-would-be-if-people-could-ask-more-questions. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-all-three-of-the-ideas-and-the-drawing-where-on-point-but-if-think-that-if-you-where-to-have-a-little-more-emphasis-and-exactment-in-your-voice's-it-would-lead-to-a-better-video-and-i-also-would-like-to-say-you-are-all-very-particular-with-all-the-detail-which-is-a-good-thing 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-i-really-like-the-first-one%2C-it-think-that-could-be-an-awesome-love-story%2C-i-wonder-all-the-adventures-they-could-have-and-the-character-development-because-he's-technically-not-supposed-to-love-her-and-he's-supposed-to-catch%2Fhunt-her.-thats-would-be-an-awesome-concept-to-work-on. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-last-one-is-kind-of-captain-america!-i-like-the-second-idea%2C-i-think-that-would-be-a-cool-concept-to-work-one%2C-i-could-see-a-lot-of-character-development-in-that-idea. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/fingers-for-hari%3F-thats-kind-of-like-medusa-but-with-the-stone-part!-are-they-alive-fingers%2C-do-they-move%3F-i-think-that-is-a-cool-one-to-look-into%2C-what-if-the-way-people-communicated-was-with-sign-language-on-their-head%2C-because-their-hair-are-fingers%3F-i-also-think-learning-is-illegal-really-cool%2C-is-everyone-dumb%2C-how-would-that-work.-i-think-these-are-very-cool-and-fresh-ideas-that-are-out-of-the-ordinary-and-that's-what-you-want! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-is-words-were-currency%3F-i-think-that-is-a-crazy-idea-and-i-love-it%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-how-that-would-work%2C-because-almost-everyone-can-say-every-word.-so-is-everyone-rich%3F-what-words-represent-the-currency%3F-i-think-that-is-a-cool-idea-to-think-about-and-put-more-stuff-into-it. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow!-these-ideas-are-really-fresh%2C-ive-never-heard-them-before-and-i-think-that's-great.-i-really-like-the-second-one-because-of-the-different-between-people%2C-the-last-one-is-super-cool-too.-you-can-do-a-lot-of-things-with-this-idea.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-first-one%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-it-could-lead-too-if-i-had-these-items.-i-also-think-the-second-one-could-lead-to-an-amazing-story%2C-everyone-minds-is-different-and-when-sleeping-they-could-go-to-a-dimension-they-are-subconsciously-making! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-first-one%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-it-could-lead-too-if-i-had-these-items.-i-also-think-the-second-one-could-lead-to-an-amazing-story%2C-everyone-minds-is-different-and-when-sleeping-they-could-go-to-a-dimension-they-are-subconsciously-making! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-first-idea%2C-i-loved-the-idea-it-was-super-creative-and-super-interesting-to-think-about.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about%2C-does-some-higher-being-drawn-the-world%3F-does-the-world-look-the-same-to-everyone%3F-maybe-children-see-the-drawing-differently-than-adults%3F--%E2%80%8B 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-ideas-and-your-drawings!!!-they-are-all-so-creative-and-fun-to-think-about!-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-is-your-second-idea.-i-think-having-the-qr-code-is-so-cool!-i-wonder%2C-are-they-prerecorded-videos-of-the-dead-person%3F-are-they-able-to-almost-face-time-the-dead%3F-are-there-risks-to-this%3F-is-this-almost-making-when-people-die-not-that-bad%3F-is-this-always-possible%3F-anyway-love-it!! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-3rd-idea!-it's-so-cute-and-creative%2C-i-would-100%25-go-to-a-dog-appela-concert!-it-made-me-wonder%2C-do-the-dogs-bark-acapella-or-human-languages%3F-can-the-dogs-talk-too%3F-can-every-dog-sing%3F-are-certain-breeds-better-at-singing-than-others%3F 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-second-idea!-it-100%25-seems-like-something-you-would-see-in-a-short-film-could-have-a-lot-of-potential-and-metaphorical-ideas.-it-makes-me-wonder-is-there-a-limit-to-how-small-you-get%3F-can-you-tell-if-you-are-getting-smaller%3F-does-this-happen-to-everyone%3F-how-do-they-reverse-this%3F- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-each-of-you-ideas-so-much!-for-the-wave-one-i-think-of-the-wave-in-moana-(super-curious-and-sassy).-i-think-that-would-be-super-fun-to-explore.-it-can-interact-with-its-fellow-inanimate-objects-or-something.-there-is-a-lot-you-can-do.-i-also-quite-love-the-music-ability-to-change-the-color-around-you.-for-that-one-i-think-of-the-classic-pixar-shorts.-the-flower-one-i-think-of-plants-vs-zombies-for-some-reason.-i-love-them-all-so-much-and-they-each-seem-like-a-great-real.-not-to-mention-your-drawings-(bow-bow).-amazing. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-drawing!-they-are-so-cute!-your-first-idea-was-really-cool%2C-it-actually-was-quite-scary-to-think-about-and-makes-me-wonder%2C-how-old-is-this-kid%3F-what-are-they-gonna-do%3F-are-they-happy-there-is-no-one-else%3F-your-second-idea-is-really-cool!-it-also-seems-like-a-very-aesthetic-idea-as-well%2C-i-love-the-introduction-of-mystical-magical-creatures-like-faireis.-i-wonder%2C-where-do-the-fairies-come-from%3F-how-are-they-born%3F-lastly%2C-your-last-idea-is-my-favorite%2C-it-is-such-a-creative-and-interesting-idea%2C-i-love-your-drawing-as-well.-i-wondered%2C-what-is-the-dream-about%3F-is-it-a-good-dream-or-a-bad-one%3F-is-she-the-only-one-who-has-these-dreams%3F-anyhow!-great-job! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-moon-getting-closer-to-the-earth.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about%2C-is-the-earth-our-earth%2C-or-a-different-world-completely.-the-idea-about-the-underground-classroom-is-a-bit-repetitive-in-the-video-is-this-on-purpose.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-underwater-train-one-the-most.-i-wonder-how-people-would-breath%2C-though%3F- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-one-about-the-plants-and-elves.-i-wonder-how-people%2Fanimals-would-breath%3F 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-plant-human-hybrids-existed.-i-wonder-what-would-happen-if-the-hybrids-had-no-sun. 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-your-drawing-would-come-to-life.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-would-happen-if-you-drew-yourself%3F 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-2nd-what-if%2C-the-concept-of-dreams-being-the-doorway-to-a-different-world-is-such-a-cool-concept-and-can-be-used-in-so-many-ways-%3Ad.-is-this-dimension-shared-by-everyone-or-do-we-all-have-personal-dimensions%3F-if-so-could-there-be-a-way-to-visit-a-friends-dimension%3F-undiscovered-species-of-dream-animals%3F%3F%3F- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-if-four-people-controlled-the-four-elements%3F-i-personally-enjoy-the-thought-of-that-idea.-do-they-rule-the-world-with-an-iron-fist-or-do-they-stay-behind-the-curtain-or-in-the-shadows%3F-have-they-been-around-since-the-creation-of-the-world%3F-what-do-they-do-for-entertainment%3F-are-the-massive-fires%2C-earthquakes%2C-monsoons-and-tornados-controlled-by-them-or-are-they-just-results-of-one-of-them-having-a-temper-tantrum%3F--overall-i-like-this-idea-because-i-can-see-conflict-happening-between-them-struggling-to-see-who-the-most-powerful-out-of-the-four-of-them-is.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-of-sunflowers-facing-the-things-they-love-is-a-great-concept.-i-would-love-to-see-more-elaboration-on-it.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/pretty-good%2C-i-like-all-the-ideas-that-you-had-here-especially-reaching-through-the-computer-screens.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-find-the-idea-about-learning-being-illegal-very-interesting.-i-believe-this-could-put-an-interesting-spin-on-the-reality-we-live-in.-what-if-learning-was-illegal%3F-what-would-happen-to-society-as-a-whole%3F-would-a-select-few-educated-people-make-the-decisions-for-everyone%3F-how-would-the-human-race-grow-and-evolve-without-the-education-necessary-to-problem-solve-and-come-up-with-solutions%3F-what-would-people-consume-their-time-doing%3F-intriguing-idea-and-interesting-topic.- 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-both-your-first-and-second-ideas%2C-but-especially-the-second!-it-seems-like-a-really-cool-magic-system-and-i-can't-wait-to-see-where-this-goes! 2021-10-15 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-super-fun~!-word-currency%E2%80%94as-someone-who-likes-words-a-lot%E2%80%94word-currency-really-does-it-for-me.-how-does-it-work%3F-is-value-dictated-based-on-meaningfulness%3F-popularity%3F-length%3F-syllable-count%3F-or%2C-are-all-words-weighted-the-same%3F-how-do-you-%22spend%22-this-currency%3F-do-the-words-you-spend-get-erased-from-your-mind%3F-do-you-become-unable-to-ever-use-them-again%3F-can-you-have-multiples-of-a-word%3F-like%2C-how-you-can-have-multiple-one-dollar-bills%3F-can-you-take-out-loans%3F-then%E2%80%94the-tv-screen-one%E2%80%94also-super-cool%E2%80%94anything-involving-entering-monitors%E2%80%94they-just-really-get-your-imagination-going.-i-mean%2C-ever-since-computers-with-monitors-became-commercially-available%2C-people-have-wondered-about-being-sucked-inside.-but%2C-in-your-drawing%2C-a-hand-is-depicted-coming-out-of-a-computer-monitor%E2%80%94does-that-mean-that-monitors-serve-as-sorts-of-portals%3F-like%2C-if-you-reach-through-a-tv-monitor-your-hand-might-come-out-of-a-computer-monitor-or-a-phone-monitor%3F-can-you-control-where-the-monitor-leads%3F-can-your-whole-body-pass-through%3F-what-if-a-monitor-is-turned-off-while-you're-reaching-through%3F-or%2C-does-it-even-need-to-be-on%3F-finally%2C-i-kinda-skipped-it-at-the-beginning-because-it-got-a-bit-cut-off%E2%80%94but-living-food%2C-right%3F-sounds-like-a-nightmare%2C-and-i-would-never-want-that-in-real-life%2C-but-from-a-conceptual-standpoint%2C-i'm-all-for-it%E2%80%94very-disturbing.-how-does-it-work%3F-does-all-food-come-alive%3F-what-about-food-that-used-to-be-alive-(oh-wait-that's-pretty-much-everything)%3F-like%2C-chicken%3F-do-they-fight-back%3F-does-the-food-try-to-eat-you%3F-is-this-a-recent-development%3F-how-do-people-deal-with-it%3F-i-get-hints-of-bao-and-cloudy-with-a-chance-of-meatballs%2C-both-the-first-and-second. 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/honestly-this-is-the-best-idea-i-have-ever-heard-in-my-entire-life.-the-one-about-the-clouds-sound-like-it-could-develop-into-such-a-great-story.-please-make-this-a-movie!! 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-of-your-words-being-used-as-currency.-this-concept-opens-up-so-many-possibilities-for-story-ideas. 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-agree-with-the-other-comments-that-all-of-these-ideas-offer-great-potential-for-storytelling.-to-choose-among-them-you-might-try-to-find-experiences-in-your-own-lives-that-have-been-meaningful-to-you%2C-then-see-which-of-the-what-ifs-best-fits-that-experience.-one-thing-that-makes-a-story-great-is-when-it's-personal%2C-containing-a-lot-about-who-you-are-as-a-person-and-what's-important-to-you.-can't-wait-to-see-what-you-come-up-with! 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/one-difficult-thing-about-a-story-about-telling-the-future-is-finding-a-way-to-make-it-different-from-the-large-number-of-other-similar-stories.-how-will-you-put-your-own-personal-spin-on-the-story%3F-one-idea-is-to-take-something-important-or-unexpected-that-has-happened-in-your-life-and-build-on-that.-if-that-something-is-unusual%2C-that's-a-great-start-at-something-new. 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hard-to-pick-a-favorite-here%2C-but-the-idea-that-food-might-come-alive-seems-like-it-has-as-much-potential-as-toy-story-where-toys-come-to-life.-lots-of-good-comedy-material-could-be-had%2C%2C-but-also-possibilities-to-explore-some-important-themes-like-food-sustainability%2C-vegetarians-vs-meat-eaters%2C-and-the-like. 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-all-three-of-the-ideas-and-the-drawing-where-on-point-but-if-think-that-if-you-where-to-have-a-little-more-emphasis-and-exactment-in-your-voice's-it-would-lead-to-a-better-video-and-i-also-would-like-to-say-you-are-all-very-particular-with-all-the-detail-which-is-a-good-thing 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-variety-of-concepts.-first-idea-was-a-cutoff%2C-but-it-makes-me-wonder-what-comes-alive-and-whether-it-has-good-intentions-or-bad%3F-what-happens-next%3F-words-having-currency-is-a-fascinating-idea%3A-is-it-a-secret-language-that-you-need-to-learn-to-understand-to-navigate-this-world%3F-is-it-based-on-how-expansive-your-vocabulary-is-or-types-of-words-that-you-use%3F-what-access-or-power-do-you-get-with-word-currency%3F-reaching-through-the-tv-screen.-is-this-one-way-or-two%3F-do-you-get-pulled-in-or-do-you-pull-someone%2Fthing-in%3F-is-your-story-the-makings-of-a-sci-fi%2C-horror%2C-comedy-or-range-of-genres%3F 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/*vibrates*-wwwwoooooooooooooo!-oh-i-love-them.-they're-pretty-specific.-but%2C-that's-a-good-thing.-the-office-worker-fulfilling-their-dreams-as-a-ghost-is-just-so-wholesome-and-touching%E2%80%94and-the-programmer-one-as-well%E2%80%94the-qr-code-gave-me-a-bit-of-a-giggle-tho.-what-made-you-choose-to-make-her-a-girlfriend-instead-of-a-wife%3F-is-he-actually-talking-to-his-girlfriend%3F-or%2C-is-it-a-computer-reproduction-of-his-girlfriend-based-on-past-biometric-readings-and-other-data%3F-is-there-a-time-limit-on-how-long-he-can-talk-with-her%3F-go-watch-simulated-dead-people-and-transcendence.-then%E2%80%94the-self-conscious-teenager-one%E2%80%94love-it%E2%80%94super-good-message%E2%80%94but%2C-i-see-that-you-seem-to-depict-them-with-varying-height-and-body-type%E2%80%94is-this-a-representation-of-how-they-view-themselves-as-opposed-to-how-they-appear%3F-how-is-the-reflection-able-to-break-out%3F-what-world-exists-on-the-other-end-of-the-mirror%3F-does-the-reflection-return-to-their-world-afterwards%3F-oh!-forgot-to-ask-questions-about-the-first-idea!-where-does-the-ghost-travel%3F-was-there-any-reason-in-particular-that-they-dreamt-of-traveling-when-they-were-alive%3F-do-they-run-into-anyone-they-know%3F-can-people-see-or-talk-to-them-as-a-ghost%3F-does-she-run-into-any-fellow-ghosts%3F 2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/bug-battle-royale.-hilarious.-i-love-it.-tons-of-comedic-potential.-jus'-these-li'l-dinky-bugs-dukin'-it-out.-backpack-portal%3F-awwww-ye.-do-it.-i-have-the-overwhelming-desire-to-fall-into-a-backpack-now%E2%80%94check-out-calebcity's-%22its-at-the-bottom-of-the-bag.%22%E2%80%94no-but-yes%E2%80%94anything-to-do-with-weird-pocket-dimensions-or-portals-or-what-have-you%E2%80%94my-favorite.-and-then%E2%80%94wow-those're-very-cute-animals.-animals-attending-school%3F-gotta-love-it.-are-they-anthropomorphized-in-any-way%3F-or%2C-are-they-just-regular-animals%3F-'cuz%2C-i-do-love-the-chaotic-energy-of-the-second%2C-but-they're-both-great.-anyway%2C-what-do-they-learn-at-school%3F-are-there-humans-in-this-world%3F-do-humans-attend-the-same-schools-as-them%3F-or%2C-is-there-segregation-between-them%3F-disgoostin'.-then%E2%80%94back-to-the-backpack.-haha-%22back-to-the-backpack%22-eheh-heehee%E2%80%94wh%E2%80%94sorry%E2%80%94i-got-distracted%E2%80%94um%E2%80%94what-kind-of-other-worlds-does-the-backpack-lead-to%3F-do-all-backpacks-lead-to-other-worlds%3F-or%2C-just-this-one%3F-are-the-other-worlds-within-the-bag%2C-or-does-the-bag-act-as-a-portal%3F-is-there-a-way-to-leave-after-entering%3F-ending-where-we-started%E2%80%94are-the-bugs-fighting-to-the-death%3F-or%2C-is-it-more-nerf-kine%3F-why're-they-battling%3F-what's-the-prize%3F-or%2C-is-there-a-prize%3F- 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh!-sorry%E2%80%94gosh%E2%80%94i'm-back%E2%80%94for-the-video-game-idea%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94there-aren't-a-ton-of-similarities-apart-from-the-whole-video-game-thing%E2%80%94but-go-watch-video-game-high-school-and-awesome-video-games-on-youtube%E2%80%94please%E2%80%94just-do-it-for-me%E2%80%94if-not-both%E2%80%94just-watch-awesome-video-games.-okay-love-you-muchlies-*slinks-back-into-the-depths*-wait-*pops-back-out-in-a-panic*-i'm-not-sure-if-it-was-the-moderation-team-or-what%E2%80%94but-they-cut-some-stuff-out-of-my-last-comment%E2%80%94so-i-will-reattach-it-here-in-hopes-that-it-goes-through.-speaking-directly-to-the-feedback-team%E2%80%94i-was-joking-about-the-product-placement%E2%80%94it's-not-at-all-product-placement%E2%80%94just%E2%80%94just-let-it-go-through-please-c'mon.-okay%2C-sorry%2C-here's-the-rest-of-that-comment%3A-- 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-snap.-the-frequency-one-sounds-like-it-could-be-very-intense%E2%80%94in-like%E2%80%94the-apocalyptic%E2%80%94kinda-sort-cool-and-aesthetic-way.-y'know.-that-one.-super-sick.-in-what-way-does-it-control-you%3F-does-it-actually-manipulate-decisions%3F-or%2C-does-it-just-cause-you-to-act-sporadically-or-something%3F-like%2C-is-there-intent-behind-the-frequency%3F-is-it-caused-by-someone%3F-or%2C-do-people-just-occasionally-act-up-when-a-frequency-resounds-through-the-air%3F-are-people-aware-of-it%3F-has-society-made-preventative-measures-against-it%3F-the-remote-one%E2%80%94also-very-good%E2%80%94for-some-reason-it-gives-me-awesome-video-games-energy-(go-watch-it-on-youtube%E2%80%94maybe-the-next-season-will-come-out-by-the-time-you-finish)%E2%80%94anyways%2C-going-into-a-tv-show%E2%80%94or-just-the-tv-in-general%E2%80%94it's%E2%80%94it's-just-a-goodie.-do-you-get-to-choose-when-you-want-to-enter-a-tv-show%3F-or%2C-does-it-happen-a-random%3F-is-this-remote-on-the-market%3F-or%2C-is-it-one-of-a-kind%3F-how-do-you-leave-once-you're-inside%3F-or%2C-can-you%3F-m'-space-travel-man-got-cut-off-a-bit%E2%80%94so%E2%80%94i-really-don't-know-what-he-was-gonna-say.-cheap%3F-commercially-available%3F-possible%E2%80%94on-like%E2%80%94the-universal-scale%3F-i'm-not-sure-what-it-was-going-to-be.-but%2C-it-had-to-do-with-space%2C-so-that's-a-pretty-good-sign-it's-a-great-idea.- 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-my-gosh%E2%80%94that-painting-monster-is-absolute-nightmare-fuel%E2%80%94congratulations.-and%2C-that's-a-super-fun-idea%E2%80%94it-reminds-me-of-an-episode-of-infinity-train...-i-could-tell-you-which...-but%E2%80%94just-go-watch-it-all.-then%E2%80%94i-love-the-idea-of-everyone-speaking-a-different-language%E2%80%94it's-just-so-fun%E2%80%94and%2C-there're-very-obvious-tie-ins-to-individuality.-and%2C-the-first-idea%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94ccccccommeee-onnnnnn%E2%80%94we-all-want-to-know-the-meaning-of-life%E2%80%94we've-all-thought-about-it-before%E2%80%94your-demographic-is-huge.-and%2C-your-demographic-is-also-very-curious.-what's-the-meaning-of-life%3F-does-the-audience-know%3F-or%2C-does-the-story-not-explain-that%3F-does-the-story-only-focus-on-how-people-would-act-if-they-did-know-the-meaning-of-life%3F-how-different-society-would-be%3F-back-to-the-language-one%E2%80%94do-they-have-any-other-way-to-communicate%3F-sign-language%3F-body-language%3F-has-this-influenced-the-speed-of-human-advancement%3F-finally%2C-painting-monsters%E2%80%94are-there-a-great-deal-of-them%3F-are-they-well-known%3F-is-there-a-way-to-defeat-them%3F-or%2C-do-they-need-defeating%3F-perhaps-they're-kind-monsters%3F%3F%3F-*crossing-fingers-intensifies*-(%EF%BF%A3%E2%96%BD%EF%BF%A3%3B%3B%3B) 2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/mm%E2%80%94yes!-i-love-when-stories-play-with-the-concept-of-identical-copies.-that's-probably-the-same-reason-why-doppelg%C3%A4ngers-are-so-interesting-to-people.-is-it-an-exact-copy%3F-like%2C-are-the-people-exactly-the-same%3F-is-the-history-the-same%3F-does-someone-from-our-planet-end-up-discovering-this-copy%3F-what-happens-when-or-if-they-do%3F-next%E2%80%94it's-cut-off%E2%80%94but-i'm-gonna-guess-your-idea-was-%22what-if-there-was-a-planet-where-humans-went-extinct%3F%22-in-which-case%2C-i'm-all-about-it.-the-concept-of-extinction-is-so-enjoyable%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94it's-not%E2%80%94but-as-an-idea-it's-kinda-fun.-so%2C-i'm-assuming-this-is-planet-is-different-from-earth%3F-and%2C-do-people-from-earth-ever-discover-it-and-the-remnants-of-the-society%3F-how-did-the-humans-who-used-to-be-there-get-there%3F-which-came-first%2C-the-humans-that-came-there-are-the-humans-on-earth%3F-what-drove-them-extinct%3F-how-advanced-was-the-society-before-extinction%3F 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yeeaaaaah%E2%80%94yeaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!-let'ss-gooooooo%E2%80%94bro-i-love-the-red-string-of-fate-so-much-i've-always-wanted-to-do-something-with-it%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94you-might-have-just-been-doing-that-for-the-drawing-and-that-might-not-actually-be-the-way-people-know-who-their-soulmate-is-in-the-story-idea%E2%80%94but-i-love-it-either-way.-also%2C-yes-please%2C-let-me-talk-with-my-stuffed-animal.-i'm-sure-everyone-would-get-a-kick-out-of-it.-and%2C-animals-talking-to-fruits%3F-what-a-novel-concept.-extremely-original%E2%80%94and%2C-maybe-that'd-explain-how-they're-so-good-and-foraging.-*deep-breath*-sorry-that-was-a-bit-speedy-let-me-slow-down-to-ask-questions.-for-the-first-one%2C-are-humans-included-in-the-list-of-animals%3F-'cuz%2C-i-mean%2C-we-are-animals%2C-it's-just-that-we-typically-don't-include-ourselves-in-that-count-because-we're-prideful-and-have-the-need-to-feel-better-than-everything-else-(as-a-general-statement).-oh%2C-to-be-like-those-that-deem-animals-as-their-family.-*sobs*-happy-belated-indigenous-peoples'-day.-anyways%E2%80%94if-animals-can-talk-with-fruit...-wha%E2%80%94what-happen-when-they-go-to-eat-the-fruit.-well%2C-i-guess-that's-never-stopped-animals-from-eating-something-before.-do-the-fruit-and-animals-talk-in-english%3F-do-the-fruit-have-faces%3F-then%2C-the-stuffed-animals%E2%80%94do-their-mouths-actually-open%3F-can-they-eat-things%3F-can-they-move%3F-what-do-they-do-when-we're-away%3F-is-their-ability-to-talk-common-knowledge%3F-or%2C-are-only-children-able-to-talk-to-their-stuffed-animals%3F-and%2C-they-lose-their-ability-to-communicate-as-they-age%3F-all-kiki's-delivery-service-like%3F-last-one%E2%80%94and%2C-i-kinda-alluded-to-this-question%E2%80%94do-people-see-red-strings-of-fate%3F-or%2C-how-do-people-know-who-their-soulmate-is%3F-do-people-ever-get-married-to-those-who-aren't-their-soulmate%3F-is-divorce-still-a-big-problem%3F- 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ahahahahah%E2%80%94very-imaginative.-i-find-it-hilarious-how-you've-assumed-that-i-have-a-creepy-house-on-my-block-most-probably-filled-with-dead-bodies.-because%2C-i-mean%E2%80%94i-do.-good-assessment.-then%2C-i-love-anything-that-messes-with-portals%E2%80%94of-course%2C-they're-most-effectively-used-in-portal-1-and-2.-and%2C-gosh%2C-whenever-i'm-running-5ks-and-10ks-for-school%2C-i-always-wish-that-last-idea-was-a-reality.-m'k-anyhow%E2%80%94idea-numero-uno%E2%80%94what's-caused-the-dead-bodies-to-come-to-life%3F-does-anyone-know-that-there-were-dead-bodies-there%3F-if-so%2C-why-wasn't-there-a-police-investigation%2C-and-why-weren't-the-bodies-taken-away%3F-then%2C-are-portals-a-common-commodity%3F-are-they-easy-to-come-across%3F-are-they-as-accessible-as-bus-stops%3F-how-do-you-navigate-to-which-location-you'd-like-to-go%3F-do-people-never-run-late-now%3F-or%2C-do-people-still-manage-to-find-a-way%3F-then%E2%80%94are-people-just%E2%80%94like%E2%80%94really-big%3F-or%2C-do-they-teleport-a-kilometer-every-step-they-take%3F-is-there-any-control-over-this%3F-like%2C-if-i-took-a-step%2C-do-i-have-to-go-the-full-kilometer%3F-what-if-i-want-to-go-someplace-nearby%3F-what-happens-if-i'm-trying-to-enter-a-building%3F-or%2C-when-i'm-going-to-use-the-restroom%3F-take-a-shower%3F-step-out-of-bed%3F-how-much-force-is-put-behind-each-step%3F-has-walking-become-a-hazard%3F-is-everyone-able-to-walk-like-this%3F 2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/iiiiiinteresting.-turning-something-human-is-always-fun%E2%80%94we-tend-to-use-personification-without-even-thinking-about-it.-we-seem-to-have-a-natural-tendency-to-imbue-humanity-into-things%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94we-all-tend-to-experience-pareidolia.-so%2C-in-this-imagined-world%2C-are-all-dogs-able-to-transform-into-humans%3F-what-about-other-animals%3F-what-about-humans%3F-can-they-become-dogs%3F-is-their-some-condition-to-be-able-to-transform%3F-or%2C-is-the-ability-limited-to-only-one-dog%3F-if-so%2C-what-caused-it-to-be-able-to-transform%3F-why-would-it-want-to-become-human%3F-wouldn't-their-owner-freak-out%3F-try-to-brainstorm-three-different-ways-you-could-take-this-idea. 2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-first-and-third-idea.-i-need-more-clarity-on-your-second-idea.-love-the-idea-of-inanimate-objects-becoming-magical.-would-this-magic-distract-the-people-from-fighting-and-be-in-awe-of-this-magic%3F-would-these-objects-lose-their-power-over-time-or-if-someone-crossed-the-line-in-their-fighting%3F-i-am-really-drawn-to-the-concept-of-friends-getting-sucked-into-a-game.-what-would-happen-in-this-other-reality%2C-would-it-turn-into-hunger-games-or-would-they-go-on-an-adventure-trying-to-find-their-way-out%3F-cool-idea 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-concept-and-your-drawings.-what-drawing-would-you-choose-to-come-to-life%3F-and-what-story-would-you-choose-to-tell-with-it%3F-did-all-lives-in-your-story-start-as-a-drawing%3F-and-what-are-the-rules-of-this-world%3F-such-potential-for-a-visually-rich-story.- 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/humans-going-extinct---how-would-the-earth-be-different-because-of-it%3F-would-there-be-kingdoms-of-animals-setting-the-rules%3F-germs-communicating-is-ripe-for-potential%2C-such-a-unique-idea.-what-would-they-say-to-one-another%3F-what-would-their-day-to-day-look-like%3F-and-what-aspect-of-their-story-would-you-tell%3F-- 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-to-see-a-world-where-humans-could-fly.-how-unique-would-that-world-be-from-our-current-one-and-how-different-would-humans-be-since-presumably-they-would-come-into-contact-with-humans-from-all-over%3F-and-planets-talking.-thats-a-unique-idea.-what-would-they-tell-each-other%3F-room-for-humor-in-this-idea.-would-they-speak-a-universal-language-or-have-to-learn-how-to-communicate%3F 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-really-interested-in-your-underwater-world.-what-are-the-rules-of-this-world-and-which-characters-live-there%3F-is-above-water-not-habitable-or-how-did-the-characters-come-to-live-there%3F--i-like-the-robots-in-charge-of-last-human-being-storyline-too.-what-happened-to-the-humans-and-are-the-robots-nice-or-malicious%3F-what-is-life-like-on-this-planet-and-how-are-these-robots-motivated%3F-unique-ideas 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/unique-ideas.---love-the-ideas-coming-to-life.-would-you-be-able-to-control-which-ones-and-would-the-world-be-total-chaos-with-everyone's-ideas-bursting-into-existence%3F---face-turning-color-of-your-feelings-would-be-interesting.-how-would-anyone-hide-their-feelings%3F-how-do-humans-learn-which-colors-go-with-which-emotion%3F-how-would-that-change-society-and-effect-how-we-form-relationships-if-any%3F 2021-10-14 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https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/unique-ideas.----what-if-humans-didn't-evolve%3F-do-you-mean-the-earth-without-humans%3F-i'd-love-to-see-what-that-planet-looked-like-after-the-dinosaurs-die-and-if-humans-never-came-along%2C-what-species%2C-if-any%2C-would-dominate-the-earth%3F-and-how-plush-and-healthy-would-it-be%3F-what-would-the-rules-of-the-world-be%3F---what-would-a-city-just-for-kids-be-like%2C-would-there-be-any-rules%3F-would-it-be-chaos-or-order-or-go-between-the-two%3F-would-there-be-more-extreme-emotions-and-creativity%2C-curiosity-and-spontaneity%3F- 2021-10-14 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2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-these.-i'm-curious-what-living-in-an-ice-age-would-look-like.-how-would-humans-survive-or-would-there-even-be-living-things%3F-how-would-they-cultivate-sustenance%3F-or-the-two-planet-idea%3A-would-they-be-exactly-the-same%3F-who-would-want-to-be-on-the-%22work%22-planet%3F-would-there-be-different-rules-for-each%3F-would-it-look-like-our-current-earth-or-a-past-or-future-one%3F 2021-10-14 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-where-your-soul-goes-into-the-camera-every-time-you-take-a-picture.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-happens-to-the-souls-after-they-go-into-the-camera%3F--would-it-eventually-kill-you-if-you-took-too-many-selfies%3F-i-also-like-the-idea-when-you-fall-asleep-and-wake-up-somewhere-else.-that-could-be-really-scary-or-really-fun! 2021-10-14 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https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-a-grocery-store-that-sells-bugs.-this-may-be-our-future-food-source-%3B-).-i-wonder-if-this-is-a-futuristic%2C-sci-fi-or-humorous-film.-who-are-the-characters-eating-bugs-and-what-does-your-world-look-like%3F-what-are-the-rules-of-this-world%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-story-idea-about-the-magic-grocery-store-aisle-is-cool.-it's-a-place-so-many-people-are-comfortable-and-familiar-with.-if-i-found-out-about-that-aisle-i-might-become-obsessed-over-it-and-try-to-buy-or-acquire-something-new-from-that-aisle-all-the-time.-and-who-would-run-that-aisle%3F-will-i-have-to-still-take-the-magical-item-to-the-front-and-have-the-person-check-that-item-out-for-me%3F--would-the-magical-items-be-really-expensive%3F- 2021-10-13 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https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-most-interested-in-the-first-idea!-it-makes-me-wonder%2C-how-would-the-plant-humans-be-treated%3F-like-social-outcasts%3F-like-heros-who-helped-clean-the-earth%3F-like-creatures-to-be-pitied%2C-because-of-the-cutting-down-of-trees%3F-it-is-very-interesting%2C-since-you-could-do-this-on-many-scales.-for-example%2C-do-something-with-maybe-a-new-student-not-fitting-in-because-they-are-a-plant--person%2C-or-something-happening-world-wide%2C-like-stopping-the-cutting-down-of-trees-and-distruction-of-nature%3F- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-similar-themes-that-you-could-combine-into-one-or-pursue-one-individually.-i-wonder-if-you-make-this-a-dystopian%2C-horror%2C-action-or-dramedy%3F-how-would-everyone-adapt-going-cold-turkey-from-technology%3F-if-a-system-came-to-a-crash%2C-the-world-would-enter-into-chaos%2C-so-how-would-law-and-order-be-established-without-systems-in-place%3F-so-many-wonderful-directions-you-could-go-with-these-ideas.-nice! 2021-10-13 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2021-10-13 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2021-10-13 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2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/we-like-the-race-one-maybe-add-something-really-emotional-to-it-to-make-it-better-and-more-interesting 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-ideas-are-great.-all-of-these-can-invoke-an-emotion. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-ideas-and-the-artwork!-the-ocean-waves-having-a-conscience%3F--amazing!-it-honestly-reminds-me-of-moana-a-little-bit.-the-music-changing-colors-would-be-an-amazing-film-i-would-totally-watch-over-and-over-and-over!-also%2C-not-many-artists-like-sunflowers-because-of-the-way-they-act%2C-but-i'm-so-glad-to-see-and-entry-with-sunflowers-in-it.-the-concepts-excite-me-and-i-know-that-whichever-one-you-choose-will-be-amazing!-%3A) 2021-10-13 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https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/heya!-me-again%E2%80%94empath-idea-%232-person%E2%80%94you-should-go-watch-lilou-for-inspo.-alright-bye-bye!-%5C(%2F%2F%E2%88%87%2F%2F)%5C 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh!-for-your-first-idea%E2%80%94go-watch-lilou-for-inspiration%E2%80%94not-exactly-the-same-thing-but-there're-similarities. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh!-very-interesting.-since-bees-help-with-a-whole-bunch-of-stuff-(e.g.-pollination%2C-honey-production%2C-etc)%2C-the-idea-of-them-never-existing-in-the-first-place-immediately-sparks-the-imagination%E2%80%94exactly-the-thing-a-good-what-if-should-do.-like%2C-without-pollination-and-cross-pollination-through-bees%2C-how-have-plants-evolved-and-reproduced%3F-have-other-pollinators-taken-bees'-place%3F-have-humans-had-to-pollinate-things-by-hand%2C-like-in-hanyuan%2C-china%2C-where-the-bee-population-has-been-destroyed%3F-do-the-plants-of-the-present-look-different%3F-have-they-evolved-to-be-more-mobile-now-that-bees-aren't-doing-a-bunch-of-the-work-for-them%3F-or%2C-are-the-other-bugs-and-the-wind-good-enough%3F-next%E2%80%94one-task-life.-super-good-commentary-on-industrialism-and-corporations.-go-watch-%22beat%22-by-bar-el-on-youtube.-so%2C-what's-the-one-thing-that-people-are-allowed-to-do%3F-or%2C-is-every-person-allowed-to-do-a-different-thing%3F-how-do-they-get-their-food%3F-are-they-being-monitored%3F-what-happens-if-they-stop-or-try-to-do-something-else%3F-third%E2%80%94i-recommend-you-consult-a-history-textbook.-has-every-race-been-gathered-onto-certain-parts-of-continents%3F-or%2C-are-cities-broken-into-districts-by-race%3F-are-they-being-separated-by-humans%3F-or%2C-is-this-the-work-of-some-outer-force%3F-are-they-separated-due-to-hate-and-contention%3F-or%2C-is-there-another-reason%3F-have-the-races-never-intermingled%3F-if-they-have%2C-what-about-people-of-mixed-heritage%3F-how-is-race-determined%3F-by-appearance%3F-or%2C-do-they-take-the-blood-quantum-(au%C4%93!)%3F-finishing-up%E2%80%94eternal-drought%E2%80%94hoo-boy.-sounds-like-a-biblical-thing.-it's-the-exact-opposite-of-pbs-eons'-%22that-time-it-rained-for-two-million-years%22-on-youtube.-but-yes%E2%80%94super-fun-and-dystopian.-what-causes-it-to-stop-raining%3F-are-there-no-clouds%3F-what-about-the-oceans%3F-have-they-dried-up%3F-or%2C-have-they-never-existed-from-the-beginning%3F-how-are-humans-surviving%3F-what-about-plant-life%3F-is-there-any-ecosystem-on-this-barren-planet%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/(*'%E2%96%BD'*)-oo~!-nice!-love-the-different-creatures-one%E2%80%94lots-of-opportunity-to-weave-in-ideas-of-individuality-and-uniqueness%E2%80%94and%2C-i-mean%2C-let's-not-fool-ourselves.-it's-also-just-a-really-fun-idea.-like%2C-with-each-creature-completely-different-from-the-other%2C-there's-just-so-much-room-for-creative-variety-and-expression%E2%80%94super-whimsical.-so%2C-these-different-creatures%2C-are-they-able-to-communicate-with-one-another%3F-do-they-all-share-a-common-language%3F-how-much-does-the-size-color%3F-are-some-monsters-gigantic%3F-are-others-tiny%3F-how-do-the-creatures-get-along%3F-do-they-still-live-in-cities-and-such%3F-does-every-home-accommodate-for-the-shape-and-size-of-its-owner%3F-then%2C-puttin'-our-car-into-reverse-and-drivin'-on-back-down-the-drive-thru-to-the-menu-sign%E2%80%94the-new-universe!-intriguing.-given-how-unknown-our-own-universe-it%2C-the-idea-of-another-one-is-immediately-interesting%2C-and-we-have-curiosities-right-off-the-bat.-like%2C-how-different-are-the-fundamental-laws%3F-the-building-blocks%3F-how-do-things-move%3F-how-do-things-look%3F-is-there-life%3F%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94apart-from-us%3F-actually%2C-are-we-still-human%3F-how-did-we-get-here%3F-have-we-always-been-here%3F-m'k-let-me-drive-up-to-the-next-window-now%E2%80%94dinosaurs!-i-remember-as-a-kid%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94i-guess-i'm-still-very-much-a-child%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94it-still-applies-'cuz-it's-still-true%E2%80%94i-was-and-am-fascinated-by-dinosaurs.-i-mean%2C-prehistoric-life-just-captures-the-imagination-with-ease.-so%2C-the-idea-that-there-are-still-dinosaurs%3F-lovely.-do-people-know-they're-still-around%3F-or%2C-are-they-on-some-remote-island%3F-hiding-beneath-the-surface-in-a-cave%3F-who-discovers-them%3F-or%2C-if-everyone-knows-about-them%2C-are-they-considered-a-threat%3F-or%2C-are-they-treated-as-ordinary-creatures%3F-finally%E2%80%94backwards-aging%3F-love-it.-it-makes-me-think-of-purah-from-the-legend-of-zelda%3A-breath-of-the-wild.-whenever-you-take-something-ordinary-and-reverse-the-process%2C-it's-bound-to-be-interesting.-and%2C-sure-enough%2C-this-one-is.-given-that-people-age-backwards%2C-what-does-that-mean-about-life-expectancy%3F-like%2C-do-people-start-at-different-levels-of-physical-maturity-(i.e.-would-some-people-start-as-physically-100-while-others-start-as-physically-105-or-76-or-32-or-something)%3F-since%2C-in-this-world%2C-death-would-really-just-be-unbirth%E2%80%94when-you-turn-back-into-a-fetus-and-down-into-a-cell-until-you're-nothing-at-all.-or%2C-would-you-stop-de-aging-at-some-point%3F-gotta-love-it.-good-job-y'all. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/lovely-idea%E2%80%94as-demonstrated-by%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94me%E2%80%94it's-the-kind-of-idea-that-immediately-gets-your-head-racing-with-what-kind-of-switcheroos-you'd-want.-question%3A-is-this-a-new-development%2C-or-something-that's-always-been-the-case-within-this-world%3F-i-mean%2C-could-pigs-always-fly-in-this-universe%2C-or-did-they-suddenly-start-doing-it-all-of-a-sudden-(i-can-already-feel-the-palpable-smugness-in-the-air-of-all-the-people-who've-ever-heard-the-saying-%22when-pigs-fly%22).-how-are-people-reacting%3F-or%2C-if-it's-always-been-the-case%2C-how-has-culture-changed%2C-given-how-much-of-our-society-has-been-shaped-by-the-food-available-to-us-and-the-type-of-animals-we've-seen%3F-as-for-the-next-one%E2%80%94fairies-and-mermaids%3F-yeah.-i-enjoy-the-idea-particularly-'cuz%2C-like%2C-we've-got-humans-on-the-land%2C-right%3F-but%2C-we-don't-got-any-that're-really-living-in-the-ocean-or-the-sky.-so%2C-the-idea-of-additional-civilizations-filling-those-empty-spots%3F-love-it.-how-do-the-different-species-interact%3F-are-public-relations-friendly%3F-is-there-a-good-trade-network%3F-are-there-any-resources-that-the-fairies-or-mermaids-specialize-in%3F.-has-a-lot-of-potential-for-commentary-on-control-and-slavery-and-utilitarianism-and-such.-gives-off-the-whole-puppet-master-vibe%2C-which-is-creepy-but-in-the-best-kind-of-mysterious-way.-so%2C-are-the-people-aware-of-the-strings%3F-are-they-able-to-exert-any-free-will-at-all%3F-where-do-the-strings-lead%3F-who-or-what-is-controlling-them%3F-i'm-being-reminded-of-the-boss-fights-from-kirby's-epic-yarn-(love-that-game).-m'k%E2%80%94finally%E2%80%94no-nature-earth.-lydian%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94lit.-as-much-as-i-love-nature-and-how-pretty-it-is%2C-there's-something-so-captivating-about-a-dystopian-wasteland-of-a-world%E2%80%94as-much-as-i-dread-and-dislike-that-sort-of-future.-and%2C-as-with-all-apocalyptic-landscapes%2C-it-always-leaves-you-with-the-questions-%22why%22-and-%22how%22-on-your-tongue%E2%80%94you're-naturally-inclined-to-search-for-an-explanation.-what-happened-to-all-of-the-plants%3F-how-is-life-holding-up-without-it%3F-is-there-any-hope-of-bringing-the-plants-back%3F-or%2C-did-the-plants-never-exist-to-begin-with-in-this-scenario%3F-keep-up-the-good-work!-i-look-forward-to-seeing-what-you-guys-have-in-store. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/elephant-astronaut%3F%3F%3F-absolutely.-yes.-you've-got-my-vote.-elephant-astronaut%E2%80%94yeaaah.-i-mean%E2%80%94you-could-not-have-chosen-a-heavier%2C-more-difficult-animal-to-send-to-space-(er%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94apart-from-a-whale)%2C-but-like%E2%80%94pff%E2%80%94physics%E2%80%94who-likes-physics-anyways-(no-disrespect-to-all-physicists-and-also-myself-since-i-like-physics).-but-awww-yee-the-idea-of-bringing-animals-to-space-has-always-been-an-enjoyable-one.-and%2C-i-mean%2C-we've-done-it-a-number-of-times%E2%80%94with-monkeys-and-dogs-and-cats-and-frogs-and-ants-and-jellyfish%E2%80%94hold-up%E2%80%94did-you-know-a-grand-total-of-32-monkeys-have-been-sent-to-space%3F-am-i-making-that-up%3F-i-don't-know-go-look-it-up-and-learn-something-new.--so%2C-what-do-they-plan-to-do-with-the-elephant-in-space%3F-why-did-they-want-to-send-an-elephant-up%3F-or%2C-did-the-elephant-itself-want-to-go%3F-oh-my-gosh%E2%80%94so%2C-you-know-how-elephants-can-paint%2C-right%3F-if-not%2C-look-up-suda%2C-the-painting-elephant-and-our-absolute-star%E2%80%94hck%E2%80%94love-them%E2%80%94anyways%2C-is-our-elephant-gonna-paint-a-picture-of-the-moon-and-space%3F-aghchkgh-*sobs*-okay%E2%80%94sorry%E2%80%94i've-spent-enough-time-on-that-for-now-(i-haven't%2C-but-i-want-to-get-to-the-others)%E2%80%94dogs%3F-manning-food-stands%3F-selling-food%3F-let's-gooo%E2%80%94love-it.-it-gives-me-lemonade-stand-or-car-wash-competitions-(watch-the-car-wash-episode-of-ned's-declassified%3A-school-survival-guide-season-2%E2%80%94actually%2C-watch-all-of-the-episodes-because-that-series-is-the-greatest%E2%80%94also%2C-watch-100-things-to-do-before-high-school%E2%80%94make-sure-you-watch-the-pilot-episode%E2%80%94the-first-episode-is-skippable%E2%80%94all-the-rest-are-just-as-amazing-as-ned's-declassified).-basically%2C-what-i'm-trying-to-say-is-it's-very-good%E2%80%94equal-parts-relatable-yet-fantastical%E2%80%94unique-enough-to-warrant-animation-over-live-action.-it's-also-funny-that-they're-selling-mochi-and-peanut-butter-in-the-drawing-since-dogs-can't-eat-either.-but%E2%80%94why-are-they-selling-food%3F-is-it-their-occupation%3F-or%2C-do-they-need-money%3F-do-they-learn-to-get-along-later%3F-or%2C-do-they-unite-against-a-third%2C-more-popular-vendor%3F-okay%2C-my-last-dude%E2%80%94alien-tony-hawk('s-pro-skater-2)%3F%3F%3F-amazing.-comedy-gold.-it-just-seems-fun-to-watch.-aliens-are-inherently-interesting-and-mysterious%2C-so-pairing-that-with-skating-is-just-hilarious.-so%2C-did-the-alien-come-here-to-skate%3F-do-other-aliens-arrive-as-well%3F-how-good-are-they%3F-do-they-run-into-any-humans%3F-maybe-they-run-into-some-miscreants-at-night%3F-i'm-all-for-it. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/michael-b.-santa%3F-awwww-yeeehaahheeehh.-hilarious.-the-comedy's-clear-as-day-(also-i-love-how-he's-spinning-two-basketballs-at-once-what-a-showoff.-but%E2%80%94i'm-havin'-some-difficulty-hearin'-y'-at-the-end%E2%80%94magic-cap%3F-magic-hat%3F-magic-cat-(like-your-team-name)%3F-oh%2C-well%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94how-much-more-do-you-really-need-apart-from-b-ball-santa.-nada.-zilch.-%3Ad...-that-being-said%2C-i'll-still-ask-questions-about-it-like-the-good-and-industrious-man-and-woman-of-pauahi-i-am%E2%80%94the-sun-is-out-in-the-drawing%E2%80%94and%E2%80%94again%E2%80%94he's-shirtless%E2%80%94so%2C-does-that-mean-he's-not-in-the-north-pole%3F-where-is-he%3F-how-good-is-he-at-basketball%3F-is-he-absolutely-chiseled-or-is-he-kinda-washed-out%3F-how-much-of-a-chad-is-he%3F-does-he-even-lift-bro%3F-is-he-playing-basketball-to-fulfill-a-kid's-birthday-present%3F-did-a-kid-wish-to-play-basketball-with-him%3F-or%2C-is-this-what-santa-does-on-vacation%3F-whoops%E2%80%94spent-a-bit-too-much-time-dwelling-on-santa%E2%80%94okay%E2%80%94shapeshifting%2C-all-purpose-hat.-please-give-it-to-me.-i'll-pre-order-now%E2%80%94how-much-do-you-want%E2%80%94no-really-i'll-pa%E2%80%94i-have-my-wallet-right-he%E2%80%94just-take-my-money%E2%80%94*cough*-sorry-about-that.-but%2C-yes!-it-feels-like-a-very-dr.-seuss-sort-of-concept.-super-fun%E2%80%94and%2C-i-feel-like%2C-in-motion%2C-it-would-be-really-visually-mind-boggling-and-impressive-to-see-how-the-hat-transforms.-admittedly%2C-if-i-had-it%2C-i-would-probably-just-transform-the-hat-into-other-hats-or-other-types-of-clothing%E2%80%94maybe-a-bag-on-occasion-(it'd-be-really-fun-to-turn-the-corner-and-suddenly-be-dressed-differently).-anyhoo%E2%80%94how-quick-is-the-transformation-process%3F-is-it-immediate%3F-or%2C-does-it-take-a-few-minutes%3F-hours%3F-can-the-hat-turn-into-a-living-thing-as-well%3F-can-it-turn-into-two-hats%3F-can-i-turn-it-into-something-of-infinite-size%3F-where-does-the-kid-get-the-hat%3F-did-someone-give-it-to-him%3F-okie-dokie%E2%80%94last-one.-grass-colored-sky-and-sky-colored-grass-(i-assume%E2%80%94the-end-of-the-video-got-a-bit-of-a-haircut).-dope.-i-love-me-some-reverse-color-schemes.-very-small-yet-very-visual-changes-can-be-super-effective-in-conveying-a-sense-of-otherworldliness.-is-the-color-the-only-difference%3F-or%2C-maybe-the-sky-grows-flowers-and-plants-whilst-the-grass-turns-yellow-and-orange-and-purple-in-the-fall%E2%80%94like-a-sunset%E2%80%94-and-a-deep-black-in-the-winter%3F-maybe-tiny-stars-sprout-from-the-grass%3F-how-has-this-influenced-culture%3F-constellations%3F-the-history-of-navigation%3F-fun!-keep-it-up. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yesss%E2%80%94yes%E2%80%94i-love-it-so-much%E2%80%94too-much-even.-i-probably-shouldn't-love-it-as-much-as-i-do.-but-like%E2%80%94i-dunno-superpowers-are-just-fun%E2%80%94and-i've-always-found-the-idea-of%2C-like%2C-mundane-superpowers-and-etc-super-hilarious.-so%2C-dollar-store-superpowers%3F-yes.-superpowers-for-everyone%3F-yes-(also%2C-i-commented-to-that-one-earlier-when-it-was-uploaded-independently%2C-so-if-you-don't-feel-like-scrolling-then-i've-written-it-again-and-attached-it-to-the-end-of-this-comment).-powers-without-crime%3F-yeeee.-robot-spiders%3F-it's-the-odd-one-out-since-it's-not-about-superpowers-but-hey%2C-that-just-makes-it-unique%2C-and-i'm-all-over-that.-turning-things-into-robots-is-fun%E2%80%94particularly-with-bugs.-i-think-bugs-works-best-since-they're-so-small-and-hard-to-examine-up-close-that-it-isn't-that-hard-to-believe-that-there-might-be-some-spy-robots-amongst-them.-so%2C-super-solid.-though%2C-your-idea-is-a-bit-cut-off%E2%80%94excuse-me-for-guessing%2C-but-were-you-gonna-say-that-they-have-a-hive-mind%3F-what-were-the-robot-spiders-made-for%3F-are-they-for-covert-operations%3F-reconnaissance%3F-were-they-created-by-the-government%3F-the-c.i.a.%3F-another-nation%3F-scootin'-on-back-to-the-first-idea%E2%80%94yeeaaaaaa.-so%2C-by-dollar-store%E2%80%94like%E2%80%94are-they-literally-purchasable-at-a-dollar-store%3F-or%2C-are-they-dollar-store-superpower-in-that-they're-low-quality%3F-(although%2C-to-be-honest%3F-dollar-stores-are-pretty-great%E2%80%94they've-got-some-good-stuff-not-gonna-lie)-whatever-the-case%2C-it's-hilarious.-how-do-people-obtain-the-superpowers%3F-does-anyone-have-good-superpowers%3F-how-are-authorities-regulating-people-with-superpowers%3F-or%2C-are-they-really-not-much-of-a-threat%3F-hoppin'-to-idea-3%2C-everyone's-a-superhero%E2%80%94hurray!-but%E2%80%94hrck%E2%80%94the-curse-of-an-all-superhero-society%E2%80%94no-crime!-darn.-absolute-comedy-genius.-it-just-sounds-like-the-punchline-to-a-joke.-but%2C-so%2C-what-do-they-do%3F-do-they-just-use-their-abilities-in-their-ordinary-tasks-and-for-boring-tasks%3F-do-some-superheroes-defect-and-create-their-own-crimes-to-make-things-more-interesting%3F-do-the-superheroes-have%E2%80%94like%E2%80%94the-superhero-equivalent-to-those-murder-mystery-parties-where-they-fake-a-murder-mystery%3F-(gosh-i-would-love-to-do-one-of-those%E2%80%94i'd-die-to-be-any-of-the-roles%E2%80%94which-probably-means-i'd-act-as-the-victim)-do-they-entertain-themselves-with-escape-rooms-and-puzzles%3F-or%2C-your-comic-drawing-appears-to-depict-a-crime-at-the-end%E2%80%94but-it-also-seems-so-blatantly-obvious%E2%80%94is-someone-leaving-clues-about-some-fake-crime-to-entertain-the-heroes-with-a-massive-scavenger-hunt-type-situation%3F-hccng-love-it.--in-response-to-idea-%232-when-it-was-an-independent-video%3A--%22what-if%22%2C-indeed.-this-is-probably-the-classic-of-all-classics-in-terms-of-what-ifs.-it's-the-kind-of-question-heard-on-the-playground%2C-in-classrooms%2C-and-during-small-talk-hypotheticals%3A-%22if-you-had-a-super-power%2C-what-would-it-be%3F%22-super-powers-are-interesting-because-of-how-unlimited-they-are%3B-the-idea-is-universally-attractive.-so%2C-my-question-would-be-what-framework-or-set-of-constraints-might-you-offer-to-rein-it-in%3F-perhaps%2C-you-could-think-up-three-variations-to-iterate-on. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/heyyyy%E2%80%94sorry%E2%80%94it's-me-again%E2%80%94for-the-fairy-else-idea%E2%80%94if-you-want-to-see-some-lit-nature-stuff-check-out-origin%3A-spirits-of-the-past.-then%2C-for-the-dreams%E2%80%94check-out-napping-princess-and-birthday-wonderland.-as-for-the-first-idea%E2%80%94uh%E2%80%94not-super-similar-but-it-could-still-have-cool-inspiration%E2%80%94watch-passengers.-okay-meeting-adjourned. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ope%E2%80%94i-know-it's-been-a-hot-sec-since-i-commented-but-i-just-remembered-another-thing-to-watch%E2%80%94for-the-dream-person%E2%80%94check-out-napping-princess. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-really-vibing-with-the-last-idea%2C-the-blubbering-assassin.-it's-making-me-think-about-like%2C-them-trying-to-pick-a-job%2C-and-the-jobs-just-get-comically-sympathetic%2C-where-the-last-one-is-literally-just-like%2C-steal-candy-from-a-baby%2C-and-he-just-breaks-down.-idk%2C-i'm-into-it.-good-luck! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/(disclaimer%3A-i-am-a-useless-lesbian)-i-love-the-first-story%2C-i'm-such-a-sucker-for-love-stories...it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-these-characters-met%2C-how-they-come-to-love-each-other%2C-how-their-elements-interact%3B-just-things-that-could-be-explored-through-the-story.-super-excited-anyway%2C-good-luck! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-third-idea-is-really-giving-me-intro-to-101-dalmatians-energy%2C-where-they're-comparing-the-dogs-to-the-humans%3F-i-love-that-kind-of-stuff.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-whether-this-lookalike-situation-is-just-a-thing-that-happens-on-accident%2C-saying-more-about-who-people-are-than-the-society-they-live-in%2C-or-if-it's-like%2C-this-is-a-society-where-we-dress-like-our-favorite-things%2C-get-with-it.-i-don't-know-yet%2C-but-i'm-super-excited-to-find-out! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-all-of-the-sketches%2C-but-i-cannot-deny-my-ghibli-roots%3A-i-love-that-nature-cat%2C-nature-cat-for-the-win.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-the-protecting-situation-is%3B-does-the-forest-have-a-healthy-relationship-with-its-human-inhabitants%2C-or-is-it-going-through-an-ongoing-industrialization-war%3F-is-the-cat-maybe-unexperienced-with-protecting%2C-because-it's-been-so-good-for-so-long%3F-or-is-it-this-jaded%2C-apathetic-spirit-with-a-vendetta-against-humans%3F-all-in-all%2C-just-super-excited-for-this-idea! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/major-%22imagine-your-otp%22-vibes%2C-i-love-it!-i-found-the-ghost-ghosthunter-love-story-the-most-interesting-(mostly-because-i'm-a-hopeless-romantic).-there's-tons-of-potential-for-all-kinds-of-things%2C-from-wacky-hijinks-with-ghost-abilities%2C-to-meet-cute-moments-involving-spooky-vacuums--it's-all-just-very-exciting%2C-i'm-super-hyped-to-see-how-it-grows. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-constellation-idea-the-most-interesting%2C-it-is-so-cool!!-just-imagining-the-visual-possibilities-is-getting-me-super-exciting%2C-good-on-ya.-i'm-wondering-about-whether-what-the-story-behind-the-magic-is%2C-like-what-is-the-context%3A-is-this-a-lost-art-of-magic%3F-is-it-like-a-societal%2C-cultural-thing%3F-idk%2C-just-a-lot-of-possibility%2C-and-so-excited-to-see-what'll-come-of-it. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-really-interested-in-the-flesh-eating-monster-tree-idea!-i-wonder%2C-would-they-be-like-venus-fly-traps-where-they-lure-their-prey-to-them%2C-or-would-they-be-able-to-walk-around-to-hunt-down-their-prey%3F-there's-so-many-different-ways-you-could-go-with-this%2C-i'd-love-to-see-where-you-take-it! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-really-intrigued-by-the-aging-backwards-story!-i'm-wondering%2C-would-it-be-like-our-lives-as-they-are-now-go-backwards%2C-or-would-we-live-our-lives-how-we-do-now-but-we-just-look-younger-as-we-grow-older%3F-really-interesting%2C-and-there's-many-ways-you-could-run-with-this-idea! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow%2C-all-of-them-were-such-different-but-interesting-ideas!-i-think-my-favorite-was-the-one-about-the-ghost-traveling-the-world.-there's-so-many-ways-you-could-go-from-there.-it-made-me-wonder-what-kind-of-story-it-would-be%2C-would-it-be-comedic%2C-more-of-a-sad-story%2C-or-would-it-be-like-a-mystery-to-solve-story%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow%2C-all-of-them-were-such-different-but-interesting-ideas!-i-think-my-favorite-was-the-one-about-the-ghost-traveling-the-world.-there's-so-many-ways-you-could-go-from-there.-it-made-me-wonder-what-kind-of-story-it-would-be%2C-would-it-be-comedic%2C-more-of-a-sad-story%2C-or-would-it-be-like-a-mystery-to-solve-story%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-was-really-intrigued-by-the-dog-with-x-ray-vision-idea.-usually-the-stories-with-x-ray-vision-are-about-people-with-x-ray-vision%2C-but-it-would-be-interesting-to-see-the-twists-that-would-happen-if-it-was-a-dog-instead!-i-wonder%2C-would-the-dog-be-very-intelligent%2C-or-would-it-just-act-like-a-dog-that-has-x-ray-vision-(maybe-stealing-treats-that-it-can-see-hidden). 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i've-already-done-this-on-someone-else's-video%E2%80%94but%E2%80%94to-the-first-person%E2%80%94the-shrinking-idea%E2%80%94please-watch-puchimas!!-petit-petit-idolmaster-episode-62%E2%80%94i%E2%80%94it's-kinda-the-exact-opposite-of-your-idea%2C-but-i-don't-care.-but%E2%80%94very-original-idea.-i-would-not-in-a-billion-years-ever-think-of-a-lack-of-water-causing-us-to-shrink.-it's-a-super-fun-way-to-commentate-on-global-warming.-so%2C-does-the-shrinkage-occur-rapidly%3F-or%2C-is-this-how-humans-have-evolved-over-many-years%3F%E2%80%94favoring-smaller-sizes-to-require-less-water-and-energy.-how-has-society-changed%3F-is-there-anyway-to-bring-back-the-water%3F-next%E2%80%94yes%E2%80%94underwater-humans-are-delightful.-i-suggest-you-watch-weathering-with-you%2C-ponyo%2C-ride-your-wave-and-tomorrow's-leaves-for-inspiration.-maybe-lu-over-the-wall-and-origin%3A-spirits-of-the-past%2C-too.-also%2C-big-fish-%26-begonia-and-children-of-the-sea%E2%80%94both-of-these-ones-are-unbelievably-boring-and-what-i-term-%22fake-deep%22%E2%80%94really-just-another-way-to-say-bad%E2%80%94but-they're-really-pretty.-so%2C-they-do-have-that-going-for-them.-none-of-these-exactly-cover-the-idea-of-humans-living-underwater%2C-but-there's-a-lot-of-cool-water-stuff%2C-so%E2%80%94yeah.-anyways%2C-have-humans-always-lived-underwater-in-this-world%3F-have-they-evolved-to-breathe-underwater%3F-or%2C-do-they-all-wear-diving-equipment-and-such%3F-what-drove-them-underwater%3F-is-the-land-still-habitable%3F-or%2C-is-there-a-danger-above%3F-moving-on%E2%80%94chip-implants.-very-unsettling%E2%80%94very-awesome%E2%80%94gives-off-a-nice-cyberpunk-dystopian-feel.-are-the-chips-administered-by-the-government%3F-do-all-people-have-to-get-these-implants%3F-how-are-these-chips-implanted%3F-what-happens-if-you-resist%3F-what-is-the-%22information%22-that-you-refer-to%3F-what's-being-installed%3F-try-watching-the-world-of-tomorrow-film-series%E2%80%94it's-very-high-concept-and-weirdly-deep-and-undeniably-cool.-last-one%E2%80%94humans-without-individuality%3F-hive-mind%3F-hot-diggity.-very-cool.-i'm-reminded-somewhat-of-the-borg-collective-from-star-trek%E2%80%94specifically%2C-star%3A-trek-voyager%E2%80%94go-watch-it.-it's-the-best-one-and-i-will-fight-anyone-who-disagrees-with-me.-anyways%2C-super-interesting%E2%80%94are-people-aware-that-their-thoughts-are-the-same%3F-or%2C-are-they-all-curious-about-what-the-other-is-thinking%2C-even-though-the-thoughts-are-identical%3F-how-good-is-their-teamwork%3F-are-their-thoughts-themselves-exactly-the-same%3F-or%2C-is-it-their-way-of-thinking-that-is-identical%3F- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-dream-dimension-idea!-dreams-are-so-diverse%2C-and-often-don't-make-any-sense-at-all.-im-curious-about-how-you-would-explore-that-idea.-would-you-use-real-dreams-as-inspiration%2C-or-come-up-with-your-own-world-ideas%3F-what-would-nightmares-be-like%3F-would-two-people-be-able-to-go-to-the-same-%22dream-dimension%22-at-the-same-time%3F-i'd-love-to-see-more! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/also%E2%80%94oh-my-gosh%E2%80%94that-team-name-is-golden%E2%80%94gotta-love-it.-'k-kiss-kiss-love-y'-bye. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/heeeeeeeeeeccccggggyeaaaaaaaaa%E2%80%94*airhorns*-space-whaaaalessss%E2%80%94it's-time-mah-man%E2%80%94one-of-my-most-favorite-aesthetics%E2%80%94ocean-life-in-space%E2%80%94it's-right-up-there-with-ocean-life-in-the-sky-and-space-stuff-in-the-ocean.-right-on.-love-it.-so%2C-about-this-ecosystem%2C-what-kind-of-creatures-live-there%3F-what-do-they-feed-off-of%3F-how-do-they-live-in-the-cold-dark-of-space%3F-or%2C-perhaps-their-ecosystem-has-caused-space-to-be-less-cold-and-dark%3F-maybe-they've-created-some-atmosphere%3F-has-this-ecosystem-existed-forever%3F-was-it-only-recently-discovered%3F-how-are-scientists-and-astronauts-reacting%3F-go-watch-lost-in-space-on-netflix-please%E2%80%94the-2018-version.-watch-all-of-it%E2%80%94there's-really-only-one-scene-in-season-2-that's-particularly-related-to-the-ecosystem-in-space-dealio%2C-but-watch-all-of-it%E2%80%94it's-amazing.-m'k-sorry%E2%80%94i-should-be-givin'-love-to-all-of-y'.-first-guy%E2%80%94no-electricity%3F-heck-yea.-we-love-first-world-problems.-would-this-shift-the-power-dynamic-of-nations-from-those-dependent-on-electricity-to-those-who-survived-without-it%3F-by-no-electricity%2C-do-you-mean-that-the-grid-has-shut-down%3F-or%2C-do-you-mean-electricity-in-general-cannot-be-generated%3F-i'm-assuming-it's-that-last-one-judging-by-the-fact-that-thunder-clouds-are-included%3F-what-about-other-forms-of-energy%3F-can-things-still-be-powered-mechanically%3F-by-coal%3F-fossil-fuel%3F-nuclear-energy%3F-er%E2%80%94i-guess-nuclear-energy-kinda-needs-electricity-to-help-maintain-it-and-power-the-cooling-systems.-then%E2%80%94the-brainwashed-clones-idea.-super-neat%E2%80%94super-original.-clones-are-just-generally-really-interesting-to-talk-about-(check-out-the-6th-day-so-you-can-forever-be-paranoid).-anywho-what-where-when-and-why%2C-what-does-the-brainwashing-entail%3F-are-they-brainwashed-to-think-they're-unique%3F-are-they-brainwashed-to-think-they-aren't-cloned%3F-also%2C-does-that-mean-everyone-is-a-clone-of-one-person%3F-or%2C-are-there-a-few-base-models-for-the-cloning%3F-is-the-one-who-isn't-brainwashed-the-original-person%3F-or%2C-are-they-also-a-clone%3F-what-do-they-realize-that-no-one-else-does%3F-what-are-they-gonna-do-with-this%3F-were-they-always-free-of-brainwashing%3F-or%2C-have-they-only-recently-been-freed%3F-what-caused-it%3F-alright%2C-final-one...-uh%E2%80%94hm.-not-sure-exactly-what-the-last-girl-was-trying-to-say%E2%80%94the-video-doesn't-go-further-than-%22what-if-the-world%22.- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-locker-to-another-world-what-if-to-be-the-most-interesting.-there's-so-much-room-for-creativity-with-that-one%2C-the-possibilities-are-endless%2C-which-is-why-it-makes-for-such-a-good-prompt.-i-wonder-if-it's-just-this-locker-with-these-properties-or-if-there's-many-lockers-scattered-throughout-that-do-this. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/'ay-litty.-the-drawing-for-that-first-idea-is-hilarious%E2%80%94love-the-whole-%22first-hand-written-issue%22-thing%E2%80%94and-yeah%E2%80%94i've-already-mentioned-it-so-someone-who-had-a-similar-idea%2C-but-because-we've-become-so-reliant-on-technology%2C-technology-being-rendered-dysfunctional-is-now-considered-up-there-with-all-of-the-other-apocalyptic-scenarios%2C-so-it's-definitely-an-idea-people-would-find-interesting.-but%2C-so%2C-you've-sort-of-already-explained-the-media's-response-(though%2C-i'm-curious%E2%80%94are-their-newspapers-actually-written-by-hand%2C-or-are-they-printed-with-a-printing-press%3F)%2C-but-what-about-the-government%3F-and%2C-moreover%2C-what-of-the-people%3F-have-they-been-able-to-adapt%3F-since-it-isn't-a-total-ground-zero%E2%80%94since-only-electronics-have-been-destroyed%2C-how-are-we-handling-things%3F-are-the-effects-of-the-e.m.p.-permanent-(i.e.-have-they-established-some-sort-of-continual-electric-interference)%2C-or-are-they-temporary%3F-second%2C-nice-idea!-messing-with-game-mechanics-is-always-welcome.-do-you-respawn-as-a-baby%3F-like-with-reincarnation%3F-or%2C-return-as-a-certain-age%3F-the-same-age-as-when-you-died%3F-does-it-vary%3F-do-you-just-poof-out-of-midair-when-you-respawn%3F-or%2C-is-it-that-you-spirit-has-possessed-someone-else's-body%3F-then%E2%80%94limited-lifespan-scenarios-are-always-cool%E2%80%94why-do-we-have-10-days-to-live%3F-is-there-some-sort-of-doomsday-event%3F-is-some-group-working-to-put-everyone-to-death%3F-i-see-that-you've-written-the-date-12%2F21%2F2030-in-roman-numerals%E2%80%94is-there-some-significance-to-this-date%3F-is-this-the-day-of-reckoning%3F-is-it-the-current-day%3F-last%2C-but-most-certainly-not-least%E2%80%94the-time-traveler-frozen-in-time.-sick.-the-whole-idea-that-things-can-be-frozen-and-brought-back-to-life-later-is-in-and-of-itself-a-form-of-time-travel%2C-so-the-fact-that-you're-combining-it-with-literal-time-travel-is-awesome.-does-the-man-get-brought-back-to-life%3F-how-did-he-time-travel-(gosh%2C-i-do-not-like-the-weird-hyphenation-rules-for-the-word-time-travel)%3F-is-the-device-he-used-to-do-so-still-with-him%3F-is-his-discovery-disclosed-to-the-public%3F-since-he's-apparently-from-the-modern-day%2C-is-his-present-day-counterpart-located%3F- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oo%E2%80%94i-absolutely-adore-the-drawing-of-the-moon%E2%80%94great-composition-and-weighting-of-elements.-and%2C-as-for-the-idea-itself%2C-wonderful.-i-feel-like-it's-become-a-trope-in-all-apocalyptic-scenarios-and-such-to-do-something-with-the-moon%E2%80%94either-break-it-into-pieces-or-bring-it-closer%E2%80%94not-for-the-apocalyptic-scenario-itself%2C-but-just-for-the-aesthetics.-i-suggest-you-watch-over-the-moon%2C-patema-inverted%2C-and-origin%3A-spirits-of-the-past-for-inspiration%E2%80%94also%2C-play-the-legend-of-zelda%3A-majora's-mask.-anyhow%E2%80%94is-the-moon-eventually-going-to-collide-with-the-earth%3F-is-this-a-natural-disaster%2C-or-is-this-encouraged-by-manmade%3F-like%2C-will-the-orbit-of-the-moon-eventually-send-it-into-the-earth%3F-or%2C-has-a-meteor-crashed-into-the-moon%3F-or-have-humans-drawn-it-closer-with-some-device%3F-maybe%2C-none-of-these-are-correct%2C-and-it-was-caused-by-some-divine-being%3F-how-are-tides-being-influenced%3F-what's-been-the-response-of-governments%3F-is-there-widespread-panic%3F-taking-a-step-back-to-the-first-idea%E2%80%94love-it-by-the-way%E2%80%94the-world-having-an-artificial-origin-is-super-neat%E2%80%94but%2C-do-you-mean-to-say-that-the-world-is-actually-incredibly-small-and-what-we-think-is-outer-space-is-actually-just-the-vacuum-within-the-box-the-project-is-kept-in-(at-least%2C-i-assume-it's-in-the-box-given-the-picture)%3F-does-anyone-ever-learn-the-truth-of-their-reality%3F-do-people-ever-escape-the-project%3F-what-of-the-people-who-created-the-project%3F-did-they-know-that-it-would-be-filled-with-life%3F-then%E2%80%94the-third-idea-is-very-similar%2C-so-i-like-it-for-the-same-reasons%2C-but-i'm-having-trouble-distinguishing-between-the-two.-based-on-the-drawing-within-the-third-one%2C-has-the-earth-been-created-atop-the-remains-of-an-old-planet%3F-was-the-earth-created-in-a-last-ditch-effort-to-preserve-whatever-past-civilization-existed%3F-or%2C-was-earth-purely-experimental%2C-and-the-people-that-created-it-are-just-fine-and-residing-beneath-the-surface%3F-are-they-still-collecting-data-and-conducting-studies-to-this-day%3F-what's-the-end-goal%3F-finally%E2%80%94wow-there's-a-really-strong-planet-theme-y'all-have-going-on%E2%80%94but%2C-love-the-planet-eater.-messing-with-creatures-on-such-mind-boggling-galactic-scales-always-creates-a-lovely-sense-of-grandeur-and-adventure.-why-does-the-creature-choose-to-eat-planets%3F-are-there-other-creatures-like-it%3F-where-did-it-come-from%3F-was-it-only-just-detected%3F-how-fast-is-it-traveling%3F-can-this-fate-be-subverted%3F-what's-the-reaction-of-the-people%3F-how're-governments-responding%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-idea-about-the-moon-coming-closer-and-closer-to-the-earth.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-the-reason-why!-maybe-instead-of-the-moon-getting-closer%2C-the-moon-was-actually-growing%3F-maybe-we-are-actually-shrinking%3F-is-this-phenomenon-a-threat-to-humanity%3F-is-the-moon-the-central-character%3F-there-is-so-much-to-explore-%3A) 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/omg-the-first-one-is-so-cute.-i-think-that-the-topic-is-relevant-today%2C-especially-for-young-people-who-might-not-necessarily-know-how-wifi-actually-works-%3A)-it-makes-me-wonder-about-the-%22little-wifi-dude's%22-emotions.-does-he-feel-exhausted-carrying-so-much-data-around-all-day%3F-how-does-he-feel-about-the-impacts-of-his-work%3F-does-he-like-how-society-has-turned-so-digital%3F-theres-so-much-to-explore-here-which-excites-me!- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hahahah-i-loved-the-last-idea-where-people-would-look-like-their-favorite-items!-the-appearance-of-a-character-would-have-the-ability-to-describe-so-much%2C-yet-their-actions-could-tell-otherwise.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-people-will-(or-will-not-be-able)-to-hide-their-true-feelings-from-others.-maybe-some-people-will-be-embarrassed-by-their-favorite-item%2C-others-will-feel-proud%2C-and-some-will-have-unexpected-choices.-the-item-that-they-love-could-also-affect-how-they-are-able-to-live-their-lives.-so-much-to-choose-from%2C-i-love-it.- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-of-%22what-if-a-smile-could-light-up-a-room%22.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-the-different-emotions-that-come-with-it.-some-may-feel-embarrassed-by-the-light-and-try-to-conceal-their-emotions%2C-some-might-embrace-that-light.-maybe-the-light-could-peek-in-at-wrong-times-and-cause-harm-even%3F-theres-so-much-to-play-with-which-i-love! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/pfbrhch%E2%80%94gosh%E2%80%94i-start-so-many-of-my-comments-with-just-me-cracking-up-but-its-totally-warranted%E2%80%94%22what-if-dreamworks-took-pixar%3F%22-legendary.-i-kind-of-love-it%E2%80%94especially-if-you're-intending-on-actually-using-the-moon-boy-and-the-lamp-in-an-animated-short-together%E2%80%94'cuz-i-love-both-of-those-characters%E2%80%94and-i've-always-thought-that-the-moon-boy-should-be-used-somewhere.-where-does-the-dreamworks-guy-take-the-lamp%3F-why%3F-for-what-reason%3F-what-world-does-this-take-place%3F-then%E2%80%94looking-into-the-mind-of-another%E2%80%94love-it%E2%80%94anything-remotely-mindreader-y-is-wonderful.-it's-the-whole-inside-out-%22do-you-ever-look-at-someone-and-wonder%2C-'what-is-going-on-inside-their-head%3F'%22-idea%E2%80%94only-slightly-modified.-so%2C-how-exactly-do-you-look-into-someone's-mind%3F-can-you-exclusively-only-look-into-the-mind-of-someone-who-has-a-lot-going-on-(well%2C-that's-still-most-people%2C-but-a-valid-clarification)%3F-do-their-thoughts-and-concerns-appear-as-thought-bubbles%3F-also%2C-is-this-exclusively-for-the-audience%2C-or-is-there-a-person-with-the-ability-to-look-into-people's-minds%3F--going-to-the-first-idea%E2%80%94monsters-are-always-fun%E2%80%94it's-the-type-of-thing-children-are-concerned-about-from-day-one.-but%E2%80%94what-do-you-mean-by-%22humans-were-almost-unlikeable%3F%22-do-you-mean-to-say-that-the-monsters-are-in-the-right-for-attacking-humans%3F-what-do-you-mean-%22almost%22%3F-are-there-some-among-them-who-are-different-and-kind%3F-isn't-that-just-reality%3F%E2%80%94putting-aside-the-monsters%2C-i-mean.-not-to-be-pessimistic%E2%80%94i-love-people%E2%80%94but-if-you-were-to-consider-humans-at-face-value-they-really-haven't-been-great-to-the-world%E2%80%94and-there've-been-plenty-of-times-we-haven't-been-great-to-each-other-either.-also%2C-are-the-monsters-attacking-them-for-food%3F-out-of-survival%3F-or%2C-are-they-just-brutally-genocide-ing-them%3F-have-the-people-developed-defenses-against-them%2C-given-how-frequent-the-occurrence-is%3F-finally%E2%80%94it's-cut-short%E2%80%94but-i-assume-the-what-if-is-%22what-if-aliens-colonized-earth%3F%22-pff%E2%80%94who-do-they-think-they-are%2C-america%3F-sick-burns-aside%2C-it's-a-good-idea%E2%80%94alien-invasions-are-a-classic%2C-so-foregoing-that-and-looking-into-a-future-where-the-invasion-is-successful-and-earth-has-already-been-colonized%3F-lovely.-where-are-the-humans%3F-have-they-been-eradicated%3F-are-they-forced-to-labor%3F-are-they-livestock-for-food%3F-are-they-kept-in-a-zoo%3F-are-they-kept-in-a-lab%3F-are-they-treated-cordially-as-neighbors%3F-what-about-other-animals%3F-what-of-the-cities%3F-have-aliens-recycled-or-preserved-our-structures%3F-or%2C-have-they-flattened-them%3F-what-about-the-environment%3F-are-they-as-toxic-to-the-environment-as-we-are%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/a-little-trouble-hearing%E2%80%94and-it-was-cut-off-at-the-end%E2%80%94but-your-drawings-were-clear-enough%E2%80%94so%2C-no-earth%2C-and-no-bones%2C-right%3F-funnily-enough%2C-i-think-the-two-kinda-go-together.-'cuz%2C-let's-face-it%2C-if-you-don't-got-no-earth%2C-you-don't-have-gravity%2C-you-don't-have-bones.-sads.-but-in-all-seriousness%2C-i-really-like-the-ideas%E2%80%94both-very-interesting-thought-experiments.-the-latter-'cuz%E2%80%94%E2%80%94i-mean%2C-it's-jus'-kinda-funny%E2%80%94and-hey%2C-if-jellyfish-can-do-it%2C-why-not-us%3F-and%2C-hey%2C-no-earth-has-immediate-consequences-for-all-of-us%2C-so-you-better-bet-we'd-be-interested.-so%2C-in-the-no-earth-drawing%E2%80%94it-appears-that-you've-depicted-them-within-a-sphere-of-sorts%3F-is-this-the-atmosphere-of-earth%3F-is-there-perhaps-still-some-sort-of-gravity-device-pulling-things-together%3F-is-there-oxygen%3F-can-people-breathe%3F-how-do-they-get-food%3F-are-they-fragmented-remains-of-land%3F-what-caused-earth-to-vanish%3F-or%2C-had-it-never-existed-from-the-start%3F-then%2C-ms.-no-bones%E2%80%94do-other-animals-not-have-bones-either%3F-what-happened-to-them%3F-or%2C-had-nothing-ever-evolved-to-have-bones-in-the-first-place%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-second-and-third-ideas-are-really-interesting-to-me-because-they-could-make-a-large-impact-on-humanity-as-we-know-it.-in-the-second-there-are-many-questions-i-could-ask.-to-what-extent-could-we-make-these-animals%3F-would-different-people-have-different-aptitude-to-different-species%3F-what-are-the-limits-to-these-constellations%3F-as-for-the-third%2C-how-would-the-tree-affect-us%3F-would-it-be-a-treasure-bearing-limited-fruits%3F-would-it-be-owned-by-a-secret-society%3F-what-is-the-history-behind-it%3F-all-of-these-ideas-seem-very-interesting-and-especially-interesting-with-the-great-visuals. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yea%E2%80%94yeah.-mhm.-plant-human-hybrids-are-cool.-very-aesthetic.-eye-candy.-yum.-sorry%E2%80%94that-was-wei%E2%80%94no-i-make-no-apologies-i-meant-what-i-said.-i-suggest-you-watch-origin%3A-spirits-of-the-past-for-some-good-kine-tree-people.-flesh-eating-trees%3F-spoopy-(go-watch-minespatch's-%22spoopy(pokemon)%22-please-gosh-i-hope-it-doesn't-get-taken-down).-and-then%E2%80%94the-last-one-got-interrupted%2C-so-i'm-not-sure-if-you-finished-your-thought%E2%80%94but-yeah%2C-sounds-pretty-dope%E2%80%94everyone's-wanted-to-be-in-some-show-at-least-once-probably.-okay%2C-backtracking-a-bit.-plant-human-hybrid-lady%E2%80%94do-they-grow-from-a-seed%3F-how-are-the-plant-human-human-plant-hybrid-human-plants-created%3F-no%2C-i-didn't-have-a-stroke%E2%80%94that-was-all-intentional.-but%2C-like%2C-did-the-plant-human-hybrid-literally-arise-from-a-plant-mating-with-a-human%3F-or%2C-was-it-some-kind-of-magical-process%3F-was-it-a-curse-of-some-kind%3F-how-many-plant-humans-are-there%3F-are-they-accepted-amongst-humans%3F-can-they-converse-with-plants%3F-can-they-converse-with-humans%3F-can-they-walk%3F-or%2C-are-they-bound-to-the-ground-by-roots%3F-do-they-have-a-fully-functional-brain%3F-then%E2%80%94man-eating-tree-man%E2%80%94do-the-trees-have-eyes%2C-as-depicted%3F-can-they-move%3F-do-they-function-at-all-like-venus-flytraps%3F-how-has-society-adapted-to-them%3F-are-there-precautions-in-place-to-protect-people%3F-which-is-more-common%3F-death-by-car-crash-or-death-by-man-eating-tree%3F-finally%2C-for-the-show-one%E2%80%94'cuz-like%E2%80%94people-can-already-be-in-shows-and-movies-if-they-become-actors%2C-so-i-assume-that's-not-what-you-meant%3F-do-you-mean-that-we're-able-to-jump-into-a-show-or-something-and-become-part-of-the-world%3F-how-does-it-work%3F-is-it-dangerous%3F-what-happens-if-the-show-concludes-before-you-exit%3F-can-you-get-stuck%3F-is-this-well-known%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-your-ideas-are-very-original%2C-and-your-illustrations-are-great!-i-like-the-constellations-one-because-there-is-a-lot-of-possibility-and-millions-of-stars-so-you-could-have-anything-you-wanted.-not-many-people-know-the-constellations-so-people-could-learn-them-through-your-movie.-cool-ideas%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-of-ghost-being-able-to-talk-to-people-and-dogs-living-in-mars-is-such-a-fun-and-cool-idea-i-got-a-little-confuse-with-people-looking-like-there-favourite-object-but-it-sounds-like-a-cool-idea 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh%2C-dna-dude%E2%80%94go-watch-veritasium's-%22catching-criminals-using-their-relative's-dna%22-(formerly-%22your-dna-is-already-in-a-database%22).-'k%E2%80%94toodles~! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-and-second-ideas-really-caught-my-attention-and-made-me-wonder-about-what-the-world-would-be-like-in-those-conditions.-what-if-we-grew-from-certain-seeds%3F-what-if-we-grew-due-to-a-solution-and-could-retain-traits-from-the-plant-we-grew-from%3F-how-would-a-half-ghost%2C-half-human-roam-the-world%3F-they-seem-very-interesting-to-develop-and-think-about. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-backpack-portal-most.-is-it-a-two-way-portal%3F-are-there-people%2Fcreatures-on-the-other-side%3F-what-if-they-came-into-this-world%3F-good-ideas! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hmmmmm%E2%80%94i'm-not-gonna-lie-that's-ppretty-sus.-not-sure-if-we've-got-the-rights-to-among-us.-lit.-spooky-mc.-spookerston's-got-a-diet-of-children.-okay.-cool.-mhm.-very-dark%E2%80%94i-can-vibe-with-it.-as-terrible-as-i-am-with-horror-and-jumpscares%E2%80%94i-love-thinking-and-reading-about-it.-there's-something-so-visceral-about-it.-anyway%2C-why-does-it-need-to-feed-on-children-to-stay-alive%3F-would-adults-not-work%3F-or%2C-maybe-they-would-but-would-be-less-life-lengthening%3F-does-the-gained-life-come-from-the-fact-that-children-have-spent-very-little-of-theirs%3F-why-does-the-being-want-to-stay-alive-so-much%3F-does-it-have-a-hobby%3F-does-it-have-a-desire%3F-does-it-have-friends%3F-people-will-find-that-immortality-often-makes-for-very-rotten-company.-can-the-being-be-defeated%3F-repelled%3F-does-it-only-come-out-at-night%3F-you-said-that-it's-immortal%2C-but-is-it-able-to-be-slain%3F-do-people-know-about-it%3F-what-do-they-do-to-prepare-against-it%3F-then%2C-next%E2%80%94animal-wings%3F-love-it.-very-aesthetic.-very-cute.-very-pretty.-i'm-all-for-it.-from-your-drawing-i-assume-you-count-bugs-as-animals%2C-too%3F-what-about-flying-fish%3F-do-you-count-their-wings%3F-and%2C-flying-squirrels%3F-what-do-they-do-with-their-wings%3F-i-imagine-their-wings-are-much-larger-than-their-animal-counterparts%3F-do-their-wings-ignore-physics-to-allow-them-to-fly-(y'know%2C-so-they-don't-have-to-have-hollow-bones-and-defecate-constantly)%3F-or%2C-are-their-wings-purely-ornamental%3F-are-they-goin'-for-the-whole-peacock-dazzle-dazzle-mating-dance-purpose%3F-what-about-the-wings-of-flightless-birds%3F-like-penguin-wings-and-ostrich-wings-and-chicken-wings-(sike%E2%80%94psych%3F-psyche%3F-psyche%E2%80%94i-ain't-no-fool%E2%80%94chickens-aren't-flightless-birds%E2%80%94hah%E2%80%94no-sir-y%E2%80%94they-just-can't-fly-far-gott'em)%3F-oh%2C-are-the-wings-allocated-based-on-biological-gender%3F-like%2C-do-men-get-the-decorative-peacock-wings-and-women-the-more-plain-ones%3F-how-are-clothes-designed-to-compensate-for-the-additional-appendage-(i'm-assuming-the-bird-wings-aren't-merged-with-the-arms-based-on-the-drawings)%3F-do-the-ones-capable-of-long-distance-flight%2C-like-albatrosses%2C-still-use-airplanes%3F-oh-gosh-what-about-the-hummingbird-humans%3F-do-they-suffer-the-same-plight%3F-do-they-have-to-always-fly%3F-are-they-suffering-from-the-constant-need-to-find-food%3F-amogus%E2%80%94gosh-no%E2%80%94um%E2%80%94what-kind-of-tasks-are-we-talking%3F-are-the-tasks-just-the-jobs-that-we-already-do%3F-are-imposters-hunted-for-all-witch-trial-style%3F-are-the-imposters-aliens%3F-would-it-be-accurate-to-say-this-is-more-or-less-just-earth-but-with-aliens-among-us%3F%E2%80%94gosh-i-didn't-even-mean-to-say-the-game-title-again-and-there-it-is.-m'k-final-one%E2%80%94got-a-bit-cut-off%E2%80%94but-robots-collecting-human-dna%2C-right%3F-super-cool.-anything-that-messes-with-dna-is-great.-but%2C-um%2C-do-they-really-need-robots-to-do-so%3F-or%2C-like-are-they-humanoid-robots%3F-because-there's-dna-literally-everywhere%E2%80%94so-specialized%2C-non-humanoid-robots-would-be-far-better.-humans-are-sort-of-designed-to-be-all-round%E2%80%94we're-not-particularly-good-at-a-lot-of-stuff%2C-but-we-can-still-do-them.-but%2C-like%2C-sorry-this-is-just-the-curse-of-knowledge%E2%80%94i'm-totally-with-you-if-you-want-to-use-humanoid-robots-'cuz-that's-just-sick-and-aesthetic.-not-everything-has-to-have-a-reason.-okay%2C-and-then%2C-what-are-they-searching-for-dna-for%3F-is-there-really-a-need-for-this-to-be-so-secretive%3F-who's-funding-this%3F-the-government%3F- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-sunflower-idea-because-i-can-imagine-more-to-to-the-story.-what-do-sunflowers-love%3F-one-idea-to-expand-that-story-is-all-the-other-sunflowers-have-something-to-love-but-one-lonely-sunflower-doesn't%2C-then-he-goes-on-an-adventure-to-find-something-to-love.-good-job! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-what-if-dream-works-took-pixar.-i-think-a-cross-over-film-would-be-very-interesting. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-each-of-these-because-it's-based-off-of-quotes%2C-or-bringing-real-life-into-unreal-scenarios-like-the-socks-or-dreams.-the-first-one-gives-me-a-bunch-of-different-ideas.-what-if-we-could-bring-back-what-we-imagined%3F-what-if-it-was-a-secret-owned-by-the-government%3F-is-the-power-being-used-by-one-person-at-a-time%3F-could-multiple-people-traverse-the-same-world%3F-these-ideas-hold-a-lot-of-potential-to-make-interesting-stories. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-enjoyed-the-idea-of-two-planets-colliding-but-somehow-survived-and-coexisted-together.-aliens-interest-me-and-i-was-curious-if-you-would-incorporate-beings-from-another-planet-into-the-story.- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-appreciate-the-first-idea-in-that-list-and-personally-believe-the-story-of-a-%22little-wifi-dude%22-is-relevant-to-todays-society.- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/there-so-many-different-ideas-that-could-sprout-out-of-each-of-these-what-ifs.-they-are-all-relatively-simple-yet-hold-so-much-to-be-described-by-imagination.-i-really-like-the-last-one-because-it-could-simulate-a-variety-of-messages.-could-it-define-a-social-structure%3F-could-there-be-new-colors%3F-how-would-it-define-us-as-people%3F-overall%2C-really-cool-story-ideas-that-are-unique-yet-simple. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-absolutely-love-the-idea.-robot-police-are%2C-from-the-get-go%2C-very-cyberpunk-and-cool-and-aesthetic.-mm.-delectable.-but-then%E2%80%94whuh-oh%E2%80%94the-popo-get-shutdown%3F-oh-no~!-what-caused-it%3F-was-it-a-system-malfunction%3F-was-it-a-decision-by-the-head-leaders%3F-was-it-caused-by-criminals%3F-some-sort-of-break-in%3F-how-are-people-responding-to-it%3F-is-there-mass-panic%3F-does-the-news-even-get-out-that-the-robots-have-been-shutdown%3F-maybe-people-don't-realize-at-first-because-of-the-fear-instilled-in-them%3F-is-this-an-oppressive-society%3F-is-there-a-revolution%3F-how-advanced-is-this-nation%3F-do-ordinary-citizens-have-no-choice-but-to-rise-up-against-evil-themselves%3F-m'k-next%E2%80%94cut-off%E2%80%94but-thankfully%2C-your-idea's-written-in-the-description%2C-so-there's-at-least-that.-i'm-always-a-fan-of-cartoons-colliding-with-reality.-i-get-some-of-the-vibe%E2%80%94it-gives-me-let's-all-go-to-the-lobby-energy.-anyways%2C-why-milk%3F-what-made-you-choose-it%3F-what-about-empty-milk-cartons%3F-do-they-come-to-life%3F-what-do-they-do%3F-what-do-they-desire%3F-are-they-'boutta-start-a-revolution%3F- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-super-good-idea%2C-but-it's-also-very-broad%E2%80%94which-is-good%2C-you've-got-a-lot-of-room-to-play.-but%2C-there-are-a-ton-of-time-travel-films-and-books-and-etc.-so%2C-what-makes-this-form-of-time-travel-unique%3F-how-does-it-work%3F-can-it-create-paradoxes%3F-is-it-commercially-available%3F-who-gets-to-use-it%3F-who-has-access-to-it%3F-m'k-last-one%E2%80%94your-book-idea-got-cut-off-(please-please-please%E2%80%94you-guys-need-to-watch-your-videos-before-you-post-them%E2%80%94i'm-crying)%E2%80%94but%2C-i-can-more-or-less-guess-what-it-was-because-of-your-drawing.-so%2C-what-if-the-books-you-were-reading-became-real%3F-we-love-representing-the-feeling-of-books-coming-to-life%E2%80%94imagination-and-all-that-stuff%E2%80%94lovely.-cool%2C-cool%E2%80%94is-it-literal%3F-or%2C-is-it-imagined%3F-what-do-you-mean-by-%22real%22%3F-do-the-events-within-the-book-literally-occur%3F-does-this-only-apply-to-published-books%3F-what-about-books-in-progress%3F-yo-it'd-be-pretty-shookening-if-you-read-a-history-book-and-then-something-changed-'cuz-then-you'd-be-all-%22oh-snaaaaap-they-lied-in-the-history-books-oh-my-gorsh%22%E2%80%94sorry%2C-that-was-an-aside.-anyways%E2%80%94yeah%E2%80%94tell-me%E2%80%94i'm-super-curious. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-art.-i-thought-you-could-expand-more-on-cat-idea.-why-does-the-cat-watch-over-a-flower-field%3F-is-there-something-in-it%3F-though-overall%2C-i-thought-all-of-your-ideas-were-really-interesting! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-thought-your-ideas-were-very-interesting.-i-think-you-could-expand-on-some-of-the-ideas-more.-what-does-the-kid-do-with-the-key%3F-does-using-the-key-on-someone's-mind-show-you-their-thoughts%3F-why-doesn't-the-piano-want-to-play-classical-music-any-more%3F-i-think-you-did-a-good-job-overall. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-art-was-really-well-done.-i-think-you-could-expand-more-on-your-ideas.-what-do-conscious-waves-do%3F-how-does-music-changing-the-colors-around-you-affect-how-the-world-is%3F-what-do-sunflowers-love%3F-other-flowers%3F-their-gardeners%3F-the-sun%3F-something-else%3F-overall%2C-i-think-you-came-up-with-really-interesting-ideas-though! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ope%E2%80%94one-more-thing%E2%80%94read-the-martian-chronicles-by-ray-bradbury.-m'k-love-y'-bye. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oo!-yea!-go-and-merge-'em-planets!-anything-associated-with-space-has-my-attention.-and%2C-fusing-the-only-habitable-planet-in-the-solar-system-with-the-most-likely-runner-up%3F-genius.-check-out-2001.-anyways%2C-at-what-point-do-they-merge%3F-did-they-collide-sometime-during-the-formation-of-the-solar-system%3F-is-this-a-recent-thing%3F-if-so%2C-what's-happened-to-all-of-the-people%3F-are-there-new-lifeforms%3F-what's-the-gravity-situation-like%3F-have-any-additional-moons-formed-from-the-collision%3F-have-rings-of-asteroids-formed%3F-what's-the-revolutionary-period%3F-the-orbit%3F-how's-the-atmosphere%3F-land-to-ocean-ratio%3F-then%E2%80%94the-word-one%E2%80%94gosh%E2%80%94very-meta%E2%80%94love-it.-are-the-words-shaped-into-things%3F-like%2C-maybe-people-still-have-the-silhouette-of-a-person-but-they're-comprised-of-words.-or%2C-maybe-people-and-named-things-are-unique-and-are-comprised-of-their-names%3F-next%E2%80%94yo.-you-can't-tell-me-you-haven't-always-wanted-a-pocket-dimension.-i-mean%E2%80%94you-can%E2%80%94you'd-just-be-lying%2C-and-i'd-be-feeling-betrayed.-but-like%2C-out-of-all-of-the-things-in-video-games%2C-infinite-or-expanded-inventory-space-has-always-been-the-thing-i've-wanted-the-most.-like%2C-to-be-fair%2C-guy-pockets-are-insane-and-can-fit-entire-ipads-in-some-cases%E2%80%94as-opposed-to-girl-pockets%2C-which-literally-just-either-do-not-exist-or-can't-fit-more-than-a-single-quarter.-but%2C-still%2C-i-would-very-much-like-to-shove-a-taco-in-my-paco%E2%80%94my-pocket%E2%80%94sorry%2C-i-had-the-overwhelming-desire-to-rhyme.-oh%2C-actually%2C-that's-a-good-question%E2%80%94is-the-pocket-space-infinite%3F-or%2C-like%2C-how-big-is-it%3F-and%2C-how-do-you-retrieve-things-if-it's-so-incredibly-large%3F-like%2C-can-you-recall-things-out-of-it-just-by-conjuring-it-in-your-mind-when-you-reach-into-your-pocket%3F-or%2C-like%2C-do-you-need-some-tools.-can-you-fit-living-things-in-your-pocket%3F-like%2C-is-there-enough-oxygen-inside-or-whatever%3F-okay%E2%80%94last-one%E2%80%94nuke-party.-please-no.-i-mean%2C-conceptually%3F-go-for-it.-but-no-gosh-ugh.-don't-get-me-wrong-i-still-love-it-from-a-narrative-standpoint.-i-recommend-you-watch-%22what-if-we-detonated-all-nuclear-bombs-at-once%3F%22-by-kurzgesagt-on-youtube.-anyways%2C-like%2C-at-what-point-in-time-does-this-happen%3F-because%2C-the-answer-to-this-what-if-hinges-wildly-on-what-time-in-history-it-happens.-next%2C-how-are-they-set-off%3F-are-they-all-launched%3F-or%2C-do-they-detonate-in-their-respective-storage-locations%3F-because%2C-i-think-they're-for-the-most-part-kept-in-safe-locations%3F-i-mean%E2%80%94obviously-not-set-off-a-nuke-from-inside-safe%2C-but-i-think-they're-further-from-cities-in-the-worst-case-scenario.-i-hope.-- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-all-of-your-ideas-are-really-interesting.-i-think-it-would-help-me-understand-what-you-meant-if-you-expanded-on-third-idea-more.-overall%2C-you-did-a-great-job! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cute!-i-love-a-good-li'l-wi-fi-dude.-alternative-explanations-for-technological-processes-always-capture-my-attention%E2%80%94i-feel-like-people-tend-to-be-drawn-to-simpler-and-more-imaginative-explanations-of-complicated-things.-and%2C-injured-raccoon%3F-bein'-uwu-helpful-for-their-owner%3F-y're-really-tryna-mess-with-our-pathos-ain'cha%E2%80%94what-a-guy%E2%80%94you'd-fit-in-just-fine-at-pixar.-and%E2%80%94i-mean%2C-i-dunno-dancing-headphone-just-sounds-fun-and-ridiculous%2C-so-i'm-all-for-it%E2%80%94it's-just-the-right-proportion-of-random.-so%2C-how-does-the-wi-fi-dude-travel-to-cellphone-towers%3F-how-do-they-get-the-messages-to-deliver%3F-are-there-other-wi-fi-dudes%3F-are-there-workers-stationed-in-the-towers%3F-can-they-be-seen-by-humans%3F-and%E2%80%94the-raccoon-one%E2%80%94why's-it-injured%3F-or%2C-how-did-it-get-injured%3F-is-their-owner-a-permanent-owner-or-just-some-guy-that-took-the-raccoon-in-because-it-was-injured%3F-how-did-the-man's-watch-get-stolen%3F-how-does-the-raccoon-find-the-watch-and-get-it-back%3F-then%E2%80%94what-causes-the-headphones-to-come-to-life%3F-does-it-get-eyes%2C-as-depicted%3F-what-is-the-reaction-of-the-headphone's-owner%3F-are-there-other-things-coming-to-life%3F-why-headphones%3F-why-does-it-want-to-dance%3F- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wish-i-could-hear-your-second-idea%2C-but-it-was-cutoff.-i'm-intrigued-by-the-copy-of-the-planet-and-wonder-who-was-allowed-to-live-on-it-or-would-it-stay-pristine-and-only-for-non-humans%3F-could-humans-observe-how-much-better-it-was-without-us%3F--how-was-this-copy-born%3F-how-does-it-differ-from-our-planet%3F--so-cool! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/such-rich-ideas.-i-am-drawn-to-the-idea-of-peace-on-earth-for-a-day-and-wonder-if-that-would-change-anything-about-our-society%3F-what-would-we-take-away-from-that-day-and-would-that-influence-us-to-become-better-people%3F-i-also-like-the-contrasting-world-you-setup-with-a-farmer-moving-to-a-city-and-wonder-about-all-the-humor%2C-drama%2C-transformation-etc-he-would-go-through.- 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-ideas.-i-wonder-if-we-knew-the-meaning-of-life%2C-if-we-would-change-the-way-we-live%3F-or-how-would-it-benefit-or-hinder-us%3F-your-last-idea-of-us-being-born-from-famous-paintings-is-really-unique-and-makes-me-want-to-know-more%3A-who-originally-painted-us%3F-do-we-still-have-families%3F-do-we-frozen-at-that-age-or-do-we-get-to-age-out-the-remaining-years%3F-does-everything-else-in-the-world-need-to-be-painted-in-order-to-exist%3F-so-cool! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-ideas.-i-am-really-intrigued-by-your-last-idea-of-everyone-speaking-their-own-language-and-wonder-so-many-things-about-that-world.-how-do-people-communicate%3F-do-people-get-along-better-or-worse%3F-how-does-that-change-the-world-and-how-we-bond-with-others-and-form-communities%3F-so-much-opportunity-for-humor%2C-drama%2C-emotion-and-creating-a-unique-world. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-could-be-intrigued-by-any-of-these-stories.-i-wonder-about-the-cat-who-could-fly-and-are-they-the-only-one-or-are-they-a-superhero-cat-of-some-sort-fighting-crime%3F-a-talking-dog-or-dog-with-xray-vision-makes-me-want-to-know-why-the-dog-has-this-special-ability-and-what-do-they-do-with-this-power%3F-what-are-the-rules-of-your-world%2C-why-and-how-do-you-plan-on-communicating-or-establishing-those-rules-throughout-your-story%3F 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/pfhs%E2%80%94i-know-that-having-3-what-ifs-wasn't-a-hard-and-fast-rule%2C-but-i-cracked-up-when-the-4th-idea-was-%22what-if-there-were-no-laws%22%E2%80%94it's-just-so-perfect.-very-fun.-anyways%2C-i've-said-the-same-to-other-groups-with-similar-ideas%E2%80%94but-ghosts-and-spirited-away-scenarios-are-always-fun%E2%80%94there's-something-so-satisfying-and-mysterious-about-finding-the-world-suddenly-void-of-humans%E2%80%94and-ghosts-just-have-this-classic-supernatural-feel.-as-for-the-gravity-one%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94weightlessness-is-an-experience-that-many-of-us-seek-after.-i-mean%2C-it's-the-whole-reason-why-there-are-now-zero-g-flights-available%2C-so-it's-a-subject-that-draws-people-in-with-ease.-and-hey%2C-who-doesn't-like-a-bit-of-anarchy.-i-mean%E2%80%94in-a-perfect-world%2C-anarchy-would-work-just-fine%E2%80%94anarchy-is-to-self-govern%2C-so-good-people-would-get-along-just-fine.-in-the-first-place%2C-many-laws-in-place-just-enforce-things-that-should-be-without-saying.-don't-steal.-don't-kill.-generally%2C-just-don't-be-a-pain-in-the-rear-end.-that-those-things-have-to-be-made-into-a-law-at-all-is-a-bit-saddening.-but%2C-we-don't-live-in-a-perfect-world%2C-so-laws-are-important%2C-even-if-they-can-be-their-own-pain-and-cause-tons-of-silly-shenanigans-and-are-in-and-of-themselves-imperfect.-sorry-got-distracted-promoting-my-anarchist-agenda-whoopi-doop-calm-down-c.i.a.-agent-i'm-a-pacifist-don't-%40-me.-but%2C-so%2C-in-this-world-where-ghosts-can-be-seen%2C-are-they-very-common%3F-are-they-treated-with-respect%3F-are-they-regarded-with-fear%3F-or%2C-are-they-just-normal-everyday-encounters%3F-or%2C-perhaps-they're-treated-like-common-pests%3F-can-you-talk-to-them%3F-do-they-speak-in-english%3F-or%2C-do-they-communicate-through-other-things%3F-are-they-translucent%3F-can-they-pass-through-walls%3F-do-they-haunt-places%3F-can-they-possess-people%3F-i-suggest-you-check-out-city-of-ghosts.-m'k%E2%80%94so%E2%80%94gravity-right%3F-gravity...-doesn't-exist.-is-that-a-local-phenomenon%3F-or%2C-has-gravity-just-completely-been-removed-from-physics%3F-in-that-case%2C-how-will-earth-hold-up%2C-hurdling-through-space-untethered-to-the-sun%3F-how's-it-like-without-a-moon%3F-what's-it-like-without-tides%3F-actually%E2%80%94what's-it-like-without-water%2C-seeing-as-that-will-be-drifting-off%3F-and%2C-the-atmosphere%3F-now-that-that's-no-longer-being-drawn-to-the-earth%3F-and%2C-well%2C-how-did-the-earth-ever-form-without-gravity-pulling-it-into-a-spherical-shape%3F-did-it-ever-form%3F-how're-our-%23bones-holding-up%3F-if-they're-holding-up-at-all%E2%80%94er%2C-if-we-exist-at-all%3F-or%2C-is-this-gravity-thing-a-recent-event%3F-okay%2C-then%2C-what-causes-everyone-to-disappear%3F-are-there-no-people-at-all%3F-what-about-animals%3F-what's-happened-to-them%3F-how're-nuclear-power-plants-and-other-facilities-holding-up-without-human-supervision%3F-what-about-all-of-the-planes-and-boats-and-cars-and-other-vehicles-that-were-in-motion-at-the-time-everyone-vanished%3F-finally%2C-in-this-lawless-world%2C-what's-stopping-people-from-forming-laws%3F-after-all%2C-there're-no-laws-to-govern-not-forming-laws%3F-the-lawless-world-was-more-or-less-the-world-before-we-came%E2%80%94lawlessness-tends-to-begat-laws.-is-this-more-of-an-isolated-area-of-lawlessness%3F-say%2C-maybe-this-is-restricted-to-a-city-or-a-nation%3F-is-this-world-post-apocalyptic%3F-are-there-any-dangers%3F-stuff-to-consider. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-are-amazing-but-add-color. 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-these-unique-ideas-and-nice-to-see-the-illustrations-you-paired-them-with.-i-wonder-about-the-curious-relationship-of-an-injured-raccoon-and-its-owner-and-how-that-relationship-came-about%3F--i-like-the-idea-of-the-headphones-learning-to-dance-and-wonder-what-its-world-looks-like%2C-how-it-experiences-music%2C-ie.-only-through-sound-or-other-senses-too%3F-the-idea-i-gravitate-most-to-is-the-wifi-dude---it-makes-me-wonder-what-he-looks-like%2C-how-he-travels-from-tower-to-tower%2C-does-he-enjoy-his-role%2C-and-what-are-the-rules-of-his-world%3F--these-are-great! 2021-10-13 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-ideas-are-super-cool-but-add-color-so-it-will-make-the-drawings-even-cooler. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/my-favorite-idea-is-the-good-luck-cat.--you-should-add-color-so-it-mill-make-your-artwork-even-more-great!! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-the-ideas-were-very-good-but-put-color-on-the-drawings. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-are-very-good-but-add-more-detail-to-your-ideas. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/greetings%2C-i-love-the-people-plant-one%2C-it-would-be-great-if-you-expanded-on-the-idea-a-little-more%2C-i-wonder-how-people-and-plants-came-together%3F-keep-up-the-great-work! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/why-hello-there-team-----%2C-these-ideas-are-very-dandy.-in-the-future-it-would-be-lovely-for-you-to-expand-on-the-ideas-a-little-bit-more-cause-they-are-a-little-vague.-but-overall-these-ideas-are-outstanding%2C-keep-up-the-acceptable-work! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hey%2C-these-ideas-are-so-creative-and-cool.-i-feel-that-even-though-your-what-if-where-a-bit-vouge%2C-the-drawings-really-brought-them-all-to-life!-keep-up-the-adequate-work- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow%2C-all-5-of-your-ideas-are-stories-i-want-to-know-more-about.-the-demon-story-could-be-quite-the-horror-story-and-aliens-and-humans-coexisting-has-so-much-room-for-hilarious-moments-and-also-deep-learning.-i-am-especially-drawn-to-the-last-concept-of-a-secret-society-with-magic-potions.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-these-would-be-use-for-good-or-evil%3F-who-are-the-characters-crafting-these-potions%3F-and-what-are-their-obstacles%2C-lessons%2C-consequences-from-using-these-potions%3F-can't-wait-to-see-which-one-you-choose-and-where-you-take-it-next---nice-work! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-illustrations-and-the-room-for-lots-of-humor-behind-all-3-of-your-ideas.-aliens-botching-an-earth-takeover-makes-me-wonder-what-series-of-hilarious-concepts-you-would-use-to-tell-your-story%3F-so-much-potential-for-funny-vignettes-there.-and-would-humans-be-aware-of-this-failed-interplanetary-attempt%3F-dragons-being-pets---i'm-curious-to-enter-this-world-and-see-the-process-of-humans-domesticating-dragons-and-how-dragons-obey-being-pets.-too-funny 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-of-one-man-ruling-the-earth-is-very-interesting.-is-he-evil-or-good%3F-is-the-earth-better-off-because-of-this%3F-really-cool-ideas! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-loving-the-idea-of-clown-being-invented-in-a-lab!-are-they-like-frankenstein's-monster%2C-or-are-they-made-out-of-metal%3F-you-could-go-so-many-different-directions-with-this!-really-well-done! 2021-10-12 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2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/having-a-copy-of-earth-is-a-really-cool-idea!-would-it-be-like-a-parallel-universe%3F-what-would-live-on-it%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-all-of-the-ideas-they-seemed-very-interesting- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-of-a-backpack-leading-to-a-different-world.-you-could-take-the-idea-in-so-many-different-directions.-it-really-sparks-the-imagination! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-ginsengs-having-magic-limbs.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-all-species-in-this-world-are-roots-or-if-there-are-other-beings%3F-do-all-ginsengs-have-magic-abilities-or-only-certain-species%3F-what-magic-do-they-possess-and-is-it-used-for-good-or-evil%3F-what-character-will-you-use-to-tell-your-story-and-what-are-all-the-rules-of-your-world%3F 2021-10-12 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https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-tree-was-really-cool.-if-you-can-expand-on-it-i-think-it-can-create--more-ideas 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/next-time-don't-try-to-be-so-dark-with-your-what-if 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-what-if-trees-sunk-into-the-ground-most-inserting-s 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-guys-did-great-keep-up-the-good-work 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/reallyy-like-the-drawing-that-you-did-looks-good-keep--it-up- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-there-were-still-dinosares.-2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-would-we-live. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-plant-human-hybrids-existed. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-there-were-still-dinosares.-2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-would-we-live. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/reallyy-like-the-drawing-that-you-did-looks-good-keep--it-up- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-one-that-was-most-interesting-to-me-was-what-if-a-ghost-and-a-ghost-hunter-fell-in-love-make-me-wonder-if-the-ghost-hunter-catches-the-ghost 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/reallyy-like-the-drawing-that-you-did-looks-good-keep--it-up- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-one-that-i-felt-was-most-interesting-was-the-traveling-back-in-time-i-wonder-if-there-is-a-limit-of-how-many-times-you-csn-do-it. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-super-cool-and-it-will-get-super-far 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-can't-hear-yall-sorry 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-first-idea.-i-would-love-to-see-how-that-would-turn-out.-i-do-wish-the-last-speaker-talked-a-little-louder-because-i-wanted-to-hear-the-rest-of-it.-overall-very-nice-job-i-enjoyed-watching-and-lisening 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/loving-the-drawing.-making-me-think-about-what-if-dinosaurs-living-right-with-us!-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/can-you-guys-please-speak-louder 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/think-that-they-are-all-great-but-with-the-last-one-would-we-have-to-fend-for-ourselves-and-the-photo-doesn't-really-interpret-the-what-if. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-good-ideas!-they-would-be-perfect-movies.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-humans-living-under-ground.-why-are-they-down-there%2C-and-why-are-dogs-with-them%3F-love-the-drawing-of-the-person! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/loving-the-drawing.-making-me-think-about-what-if-dinosaurs-living-right-with-us!-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-%22what-if-you're-the-only-person-in-the-world%3F%22-2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-did-there-used-to-be-people%3F-if-so%2C-what-happened-to-them%3F-if-there's-only-one-person-in-the-world-and-there-never-were-any-more%2C-how-would-the-earth-be-different%3F-less-polluted%3F-would-the-human-talk-if-it-had-no-one-to-talk-to-or-to-teach-it-how-to-talk%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/can-you-guys-please-speak-louder-next-time-please%2C-great-work 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-and-stories-have-a-lot-potential.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-all-these-ideas%2C-i-really-am-excited-to-see-how-these-turn-out.--the-drawings-are-also-very-good-and-have-details.-one-thing-is-just-to-add-more-background-deails.-other-than-that-i-loved-all-of-these.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-plant-human-hybrids-existed. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/loving-the-drawing.-making-me-think-about-what-if-dinosaurs-living-right-with-us!-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-fourth-idea-is-truly-disturbing%3B-i-can't-imagine-a-world-without-coffee-lattes.-hopefully-this-dreadful-future-never-comes-to-pass...- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-what-if-flowers-took-over-the-world.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-would-happen-when-they-took-over-a-city 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hi-i-loved-all-of-theses-ideas-hey-were-all-good.-one-thing-that-i-found-interesting-was-%22what-if-everyone-in-the-world-was-brain-washed-but-one%22.-what-makes-me-wonder-was-the-one-person-who-was-brain-washed-get-to-have-what-ever-she-wanted-and-became-rich-but-then-a-problem-happens-like-other-person-got-there-memory-back-and-then-more-and-then-the-world-got-crazy-scared.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/life-would-be-eaiser-with-that-book 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-intresting-was-what-if-there-was-no-laws-it-makes-me-wonder-more-abour-society 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-what-if-flowers-took-over-the-world.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-would-happen-when-they-took-over-a-city 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-intresting-was-what-if-there-was-no-laws-it-makes-me-wonder-more-abour-society 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-could-see-ghosts.-2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-living-with-ghousts-would-look-like. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-intresting-was-what-if-there-was-no-laws-it-makes-me-wonder-more-abour-society 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-could-see-ghosts.-2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-living-with-ghousts-would-look-like. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-could-see-ghosts.-2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-living-with-ghousts-would-look-like. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-if-school-never-exsistid-is-a-good-idea- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-like-the-wave-that-you-did-looks-cool-great-job-and-the-other-stuff-you-made- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-could-see-ghosts.-2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-living-with-ghousts-would-look-like. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/no-bees-no-honey-and-bee-allergy 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-underwater-idea-one-is-very-interesting-because-would-humans-still-exist%3F-would-there-still-be-stars%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-this-is-very-interesting.-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-ideas-were-intresting-and-creative 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-appreciate-that-you-added-so-much-detail-on-the-first-one-and-made-an-elaborate-idea.-i-think-the-second-one-was-so-create-but-i-would-i-have-liked-to-hear-a-little-more-about-the-end-result-on-all-of-these. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-humans-learned-and-thought-the-same-way%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-humans-are-so-different-and-have-so-much-individuality%2C-and-how-that-is-possible. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-were-all-born-with-a-superpower.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-we-would-get-a-certain-power-based-on-who-we-are%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-ideas-were-intresting-and-creative 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-make-the-video-longer-and-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-is-what-if-learning-was-illegal-it-makes-me-wonder-how-people-get-jobs-that-require-degree-is-just-everyone-able-to-be-doctors%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-ideas-were-intresting-and-creative 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1-%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was.-%22what-if-money-disappeared%3F%22--2-%22it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-we-use-instead%3F-would-we-trade-items%3F-or-would-everything-be-free%3F-if-everything-were-free%2C-what-would-that-mean-for-poverty%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-could-see-ghosts-i-would-love-that-i-mean-it-would-be-so-fun-being-able-to-see-ghosts 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loooooove-what-if-gravity-was-never-discovered!-it-would-make-me-wonder-about-the-theories-people-would-make-about-gravity! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/its-hard-to-hear-you-guys-and-most-of-your-sentences-were-cut-off-try-using-photos-next-time-instead-of-a-live-video! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-is-vary-cool-and-it-will-all-be-cool 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ghost-idea-is-really-cool.-maybe-you-can-expand-on-it 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-there-was-no-airplanes 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-all-of-your-guys-ideas-but-i-think-there-is-always-room-for-improvement-keep-up-the-good-work- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-meant-unlimited-energy. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool-ideas! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-that-said-the-man-made-his-own-world-i-wonder-what-is-world-would-look-like 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-idea! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-are-neat-ideas%3B-i'm-slightly-confused-about-the-'what-if-someone-couldn't-see'-because-that's-already-a-thing%2C-though-i'm-probably-overthinking-your-meaning-a-little.--i-thought-the-idea-of-being-the-only-person-left-would-be-interesting%2C-but-it-might-be-a-little-hard-to-show-in-animation-that-there's-for-sure-no-one-else. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-time-travel-was-real--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about--time-travel 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-cool-ideas-and-nice-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-drawing-was-absolutely-stunning.-i-love-that-your-idea-is-super-broad%2C-and-i-would-love-to-hear-more.-i-do-wish-i-got-a-little-more-information-on-what-these-dinosaurs-will-be-doing-but-other-than-tat-awesome-job-team-delta-%3A) 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-these-ideas-are-great.--it-would-be-better-if-you-all-made-seperate-ideas-rather-than-just-one-idea. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-ideas-but-i-couldn't-hear-all-of-you- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-phone-question-makes-me-wonder-about-how-would-society-react-to-no-phone%3F-maybe-be-more-specific-and-more-questions-would-appear 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/is-just-this-particular-shark-a-vegetarian-or-is-the-entire-shark-species-vegetarian%3F-does-being-vegetarian-make-them-an-outcast%3F-is-there-a-different-species-that-is-vegetarian-in-our-world-that-is-a-carnivore-in-the-story%3F-cool-idea%2C-and-i-love-the-drawings! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-phone-question-makes-me-wonder-about-how-would-society-react-to-no-phone%3F-maybe-be-more-specific-and-more-questions-would-appear 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-most-interesting-idea-is-%22what-teleportation-existed%3F%22--because-how-would-people-use-teleportation%3F-how-different-would-the-world-be-with-teleportation%3F-would-still-use-cars-and-walk%3F-what-would-be-the-benefits-and-cons%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-drawing-speak-louder-next-time-please 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-trees-falling-into-the-ground-at-night. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-if-we-could-see-ghosts-because-then-i-could-know-if-there-are-ghosts-in-my-house.-i-also-wonder-how-would-we-go-anywhere-without-gravity 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hi-i-like-you-creative-and-drawings--and-one-thing-that-was-so-interesting-was-what-if-we-had-10-days-to-live.-what-makes-me-wonder-about-is-if-all-the-people-in-the-world-and-then-new-people-come-the-the-earth-and-still-have-10-days-to-live-.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-phone-question-makes-me-wonder-about-how-would-society-react-to-no-phone%3F-maybe-be-more-specific-and-more-questions-would-appear 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hi-i-like-you-creative-and-drawings--and-one-thing-that-was-so-interesting-was-what-if-we-had-10-days-to-live.-what-makes-me-wonder-about-is-if-all-the-people-in-the-world-and-then-new-people-come-the-the-earth-and-still-have-10-days-to-live-.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-phone-question-makes-me-wonder-about-how-would-society-react-to-no-phone%3F-maybe-be-more-specific-and-more-questions-would-appear 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-photos-a-lot-but-its-really-hard-to-hear-you-guys%2C-maybe-try-to-speak-more-clearly%3F-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-turn-down-the-music-so-i-could-hear-what-your-saying-and-the--one-i-found-most-interesting-is-what-if-you-had-pocket-dimensions-in-our-pockets-it-makes-me-wonder-what-its-like-in-the-pocket-dimension 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-every-topic-has-a-similar-story-line.-i-would-very-much--enjoy-watching-these-clips-turn-into-a-movie.-i-think-the-first-drawing-could-be-a-bit-more-clear-but-overall-i-think-this-could-be-great-with-work. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-questions.--it-makes-me-picture-what-might-happen. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was---------------------------------------------------it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-world-would-look-like-and-would-people-servive.-%E2%80%8B-what-if-the-world-had-no-nature.---------------------------------------------------- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-'what-if-you-were-never-alone'--i-would-not-mind-never-being-alone-but-it-depends-if-someone-was-hiding-in-my-house-i-still-wouldn't-mind-%3A) 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-turn-down-the-music-so-i-could-hear-what-your-saying-and-the--one-i-found-most-interesting-is-what-if-you-had-pocket-dimensions-in-our-pockets-it-makes-me-wonder-what-its-like-in-the-pocket-dimension 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-like-the-drawing-and-it-looks-great-keep-the-great-work-i-like--the-little-houses-you-made-like-the-green-and-the-red-looks-really-good- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-the-drawings-and-the-details-on-the-first.-one-thing-for-next-time-is-to-work-together-more-with-your-group-for-more-details.-other-than-that-i-can't-wait-to-hear-more-about-your-work.-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was---------------------------------------------------it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-world-would-look-like-and-would-people-servive.-%E2%80%8B-what-if-the-world-had-no-nature.---------------------------------------------------- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was---------------------------------------------------it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-world-would-look-like-and-would-people-servive.-%E2%80%8B-what-if-the-world-had-no-nature.---------------------------------------------------- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-second-and-last-were-the-most-interesting-but-will-the-homes-be-bulldozed-if-they-were-in-the-middle-of-the-building. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-questions.--it-makes-me-picture-what-might-happen. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was---------------------------------------------------it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-world-would-look-like-and-would-people-servive.-%E2%80%8B-what-if-the-world-had-no-nature.---------------------------------------------------- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-questions.--it-makes-me-picture-what-might-happen. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was---------------------------------------------------it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-world-would-look-like-and-would-people-servive.-%E2%80%8B-what-if-the-world-had-no-nature.---------------------------------------------------- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-like-the-drawing-and-it-looks-great-keep-the-great-work-i-like--the-little-houses-you-made-like-the-green-and-the-red-looks-really-good- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/no-money-means-no-currency-and-no-currency-means-no-work-and-no-work-means-happy-so-we-would-all-be-happy-%3Ad 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-photos-a-lot-but-its-really-hard-to-hear-you-guys%2C-maybe-try-to-speak-more-clearly%3F-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/super-creative-guys!-i-would-love-to-see-a-bit-more-detail-in-some-of-these-drawings%2C-but-i-enjoyed-seeing-color. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-ideas-because-they-are-interesting%2C-you-could-add-more-details-or-ideas-because-you-only-have-3-not-4%2C-all-in--all-its-good 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-its-cool! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-plank-human-hybrids-existed%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-we-take-plant-life-for-granted-and-why-that-is.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it's-great-that-you-already-have-your-idea-figured-out%2C-though-it-would-be-nice-to-see-what-the-other-prototypes-were.-just-a-small-suggestion%3B-it-could-be-an-owl-chick%2C-since-some-owls-really-do-nest-on-cliffs. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-plank-human-hybrids-existed%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-we-take-plant-life-for-granted.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-ideas-are-great.--all-of-these-can-invoke-an-emotion. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-space-and-time-one-is-good-it-will-go-far 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-that-idea-because-its-cool! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-second-idea-i'm-sure-a-lot-of-people-would-want-to-do-that- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-there-were-no-seasons-because-that-idea-is-interesting-and-i've-never-thought-about-that-before. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/being-the-only-person-who-can-see-objects-is-a-neat-idea!-you-could-go-so-many-different-places-with-this!-are-people-aware-of-your-abilities%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-second-idea-i'm-sure-a-lot-of-people-would-want-to-do-that- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-spacr-and-time-one.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-you-can-do-it-any-time. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-climate-change-was-happening-a-lot-faster--it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-world-would-be-like-because-the-world-is-already-in-a-pretty-bad-state-so-if-climate-change--was-happening-alot-faster-the-world-would-be-in-a-horrible-state 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-cool-but-can't-hear-it- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-climate-change-was-happening-a-lot-faster--it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-world-would-be-like-because-the-world-is-already-in-a-pretty-bad-state-so-if-climate-change--was-happening-alot-faster-the-world-would-be-in-a-horrible-state 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-climate-change-was-happening-a-lot-faster--it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-world-would-be-like-because-the-world-is-already-in-a-pretty-bad-state-so-if-climate-change--was-happening-alot-faster-the-world-would-be-in-a-horrible-state 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-spacr-and-time-one.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-you-can-do-it-any-time. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-climate-change-was-happening-a-lot-faster--it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-world-would-be-like-because-the-world-is-already-in-a-pretty-bad-state-so-if-climate-change--was-happening-alot-faster-the-world-would-be-in-a-horrible-state 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-what-if-no-one-had-school. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-climate-change-was-happening-a-lot-faster--it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-world-would-be-like-because-the-world-is-already-in-a-pretty-bad-state-so-if-climate-change--was-happening-alot-faster-the-world-would-be-in-a-horrible-state 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-drawn-to-the-super-hero-ideas.-everyone-having-a-special-power-could-be-interesting-as-it-would-be-normalized-if-everyone-had-one%2C-but-would-that-introduce-challenges-or-hierarchies-or-infighting%3F-i-also-really-like-the-superheros-with-no-crime-to-fight.-how-would-they-find-meaning-if-they-couldn't-utilize-their-gifts%3F-what-character-would-you-choose-to-follow%2C-why-%26-what-lesson-would-they-eventually-learn%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-are-all-interesting-ideas 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-all-of-these-interesting%2C-though-if-i-had-to-pick-a-'least-favorite'%2C-it-would-probably-be-the-kid-who-never-grew-up.-it's-just-a-little-too-close-to-peter-pan. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-mars-and-earth-idea-because-its-interesting.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-plaint-eaten-is-a-good-idea-it-can-go-a-long-way- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-it-a-lot-and-i-think-that-you-guys-can-maybe-add-some-words-to-the-pictures-or-draw-expressions-if-you-didn't-already.-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ii-think-all-of-your-ides-are-good--but-i-think-you-should--only-do-one-nuke-because-wouldn't-all-people-die- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-there-being-unlimited-money. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-that-you-all-included-all-of-your-thoughts-on-the-page.-i-think-you-guys-did-great%2C-just-think-of-adding-some-backround.-great-job-guys! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-drawing-and-it-looks-great-good-job-on-this. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-add-more-details-into-your-what-if. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-drawing-and-it-looks-great-good-job-on-this. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-with-the-tribes-of-people-based-on-elements-sounds-way-to-much-like-avatar%3A-the-last-air-bender.--if-you-choose-to-do-that-it-can-still-be-interesting. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-much-detail-there-is.-i-think-you-could-add-background-detail.-i-love-how-you-make-it-so-clear-to-see-the-story-in-my-mind. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-that-you-all-included-all-of-your-thoughts-on-the-page.-i-think-you-guys-did-great%2C-just-think-of-adding-some-backround.-great-job-guys! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/if-humans-never-died.-the-human-population-would-be-like-10-trillion- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-time-travel-was-real-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-there-would-there-be-such-thing-as-history.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-time-travel.-what-would-happen-if-time-travel-did-exist%3F-maybe-next-time-you-can-speak-more-clearly 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-reilly--like-the-mars-and-earth-idea-i-think-you-can-go-a-far--- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-simulation-idea!-is-it-the-same-simulation-for-everyone-or-different-for-each-person%3F-can-you-get-stuck-in-a-simulation%3F-lots-of-cool-places-you-could-go-with-this! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-is-if-the-bully-and-the-nerd-switched-bodys.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-there-friends-reacted. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-is-if-the-bully-and-the-nerd-switched-bodys.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-there-friends-reacted. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-we-would-do-if-time-travel-existed 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/could-be-really-expanded-apon. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-idea-of-animals-that-could-fly-being-grounded-and-flightless-animals-gaining-that-ability.-i-personally-found-it-interesting-to-think-about-what-would-happen-to-chickens%2C-or-penguins%2C-or-just-'flightless'-birds-in-general.-would-they-now-be-able-to-use-their-wings-for-flying%2C-or-would-their-tiny-bit-of-flying-potential-be-taken-away%3F-also%2C-if-it-happened-suddenly%2C-would-all-the-birds-just-fall-out-of-the-sky%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-very-drawn-to-the-one-person-who-remains-in-a-sea-of-brainwashed-people.-sounds-like-the-making-of-a-horror-film.-how-do-they-connect-with-others%3F-what-helps-them-get-by-in-their-day-to-day%3F-how-will-you-illustrate-this-idea%3F-what-lesson-does-this-person-learn-during-the-story%3F-cool-team-name-too. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-idea-of-animals-that-could-fly-being-grounded-and-flightless-animals-gaining-that-ability.-i-personally-found-it-interesting-to-think-about-what-would-happen-to-chickens%2C-or-penguins%2C-or-just-'flightless'-birds-in-general.-would-they-now-be-able-to-use-their-wings-for-flying%2C-or-would-their-tiny-bit-of-flying-potential-be-taken-away%3F-also%2C-if-it-happened-suddenly%2C-would-all-the-birds-just-fall-out-of-the-sky%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-of-people-fighting-each-other-with-everyday-items-is-cool!-does-the-magic-change-based-on-the-person%2C-or-object%3F-how-are-humans-affected-by-all-that-magic.-really-cool-idea! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-really-great-ideas 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-how-detailed-you-are!-i-think-you-could-improve-on-adding-color.-otherwise-you-did-amazing! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-ideas.--these-can-all-be-expanded-apon 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/so-many-rich-ideas-to-develop-further.-i'm-curious-about-the-time-traveler-and-whose-perspective-you-would-tell-your-story-from%3F-where-is-this-frozen-person-from-and-why-did-they-end-up-in-this-time-period%3F-what-set-of-consequences-does-that-put-into-action%3F-and-the-10-days-left-to-live-really-sets-up-the-stakes-in-your-world.-what-does-this-mean-for-society%3F-do-some-people-know-and-others-don't%3F-how-does-that-change-how-people-behave%2C-do-all-rules-go-out-the-window%3F-so-curious-where-you-could-take-any-of-these-ideas. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was.-%22what-if-people-weren't-needed%22%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-we-would-do-with-our-time-if-we-weren't-needed-for-anything.-would-we-get-sad%3F-would-we-get-really-creative%3F-what-would-make-our-lives-meaningful%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-aliens-colonizing-earth.-i'm-curious-what-character-perspective-you-take-to-tell-this-story%2C-humans-or-aliens%3F-what-are-the-rules-of-this-new-world%3F--i-also-gravitate-towards-reading-people's-minds.-is-that-just-one-character-with-that-power-or-all-humans%3F-how-would-this-change-how-people-relate-to-one-another-if-they-can't-privately-hold-thoughts%3F-what-chaos-or-benefit-would-it-provide%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-concepts-that-completely-change-the-rules-of-our-world.-what-are-these-new-rules-and-why-do-they-exist%3F-what-are-the-consequences-or-benefits-for-humans%3F-and-what-character-would-you-develop-to-tell-this-story-and-what-would-their-journey-be-about%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-concept-of-human-and-plant-hybrids-and-want-to-know-more.-does-that-make-humans-stake-in-climate-change-even-higher%3F-will-their-plants-parts-being-affected-more-visibly%3F-how-did-they-evolve-to-this-hybrid-and-what-are-the-rules-of-this-world%3F-and-for-idea-%232%2C-what-are-humans-doing-to-stop-trees-from-falling%2Fdying%2C-and-do-they-take-faster-action-to-improve-the-health-of-trees%3F-i-also-want-to-hear-more-about-idea-%233-(got-cutoff)%2C-so-are-you-proposing-being-in-two-places-at-once%2C-an-additional-reality%3F-what-consequences-or-benefits-does-that-create-and-why%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-ant-eater-idea!-do-all-the-other-ant-eaters-still-eat-ants%3F-why-does-this-particular-ant-eater-not-eat-ants%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-most-interesting-idea-to-me-is-the-idea-of-aliens-attacking-humans%2C-but-we-are-on-the-aliens-side%2C-that's-funny.-makes-me-wonder-what-the-aliens-would-do-with-all-the-humans-and-if-they-could-change-them%3F-i'm-torn-as-i-also-like-this-idea-of-aliens-colonizing-earth-has-potential---can't-wait-to-see-what-you-go-with 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-drawn-to-your-two-creepy-ideas.-robots-collecting-human-dna%2C-for-a-sinister-or-good-purpose%3F-what-is-it-used-for%3F-who-is-behind-this-operation-and-what-are-they-hoping-to-achieve%3F--or-the-supernatural-being-eating-children-is-darn-scary.-why-do-they-need-to-eat-children%3F-do-those-victims-go-on-to-become-supernatural-beings-themselves-or-do-they-parish-is-this-horrified-way%3F-how-will-people-stop-this-from-happening%3F-is-there-another-food-source-they-introduce-and-where-do-these-scary-creatures-come-from%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-idea-of-kingdoms-still-being-around!-are-there-still-modern-cities%2C-or-are-they-replaced-by-kingdoms-and-castles-instead%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-the-time-traveler-in-ice-who-looks-like-they-are-from-modern-day.-wow-that-was-hard-to-pick-as-all-your-ideas-could-be-in-a-story%2C-maybe-you-can-try-and-blend-2-of-them%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-how-that-time-traveler-got-there-and-if-their-machine-would-still-work-when-the-ice-melted 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-chicken-idea-is-intriguing.--does-the-shell-ever-come-off%3F-how-is-the-chicken-affected-because-it-is-still-stuck-in-its-shell%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-this-idea-where-we-get-to-do-one-thing-for-our-whole-life...i-wonder-what-that-would-be%2C-and-how-would-people-deal-with-it%3F-can't-wait-to-see-what-you-do-next 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/we-like-the-race-one-maybe-add-something-really-emotional-to-it-to-make-it-better-and-more-interesting- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/haha-i-like-this-idea-of-a-world-of-super-heros-with-no-crime.-that-could-be-hilarious!-i-wonder-what-they-would-do-with-their-time%2C-and-powers%3F-would-they-turn-on-each-other%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-what-if's-need-a-little-work-but-there-good 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-if-we-were-all-different-creatures-was-very-interesting-to-me-because-every-creature-would-have-a-lot-of-variety.----maya---i-thought-the-all-different-creatures-one-was-pretty-cool!-its-a-pretty-creative.-imagine-there-were-different-breeds-of-humans-too!-that-would-be-so-cool--lilly-my-favorite-was-the-aged-backwards-but-something-you--can-change-next-time-just-add-little-bit-more-of-detail-izzy-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-don't-be-so-deep-next-time. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/interesting 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-don't-be-so-deep-next-time. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/maybe-don't-be-so-deep-next-time. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-work%2C-i'm-most-interested-in-this-story-of-a-chicken-that-never-came-out-of-his-egg.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-that-would-prevent-all-of-life-from-happening%3F-or-would-the-chicken-live-on-with-a-shell-body%3F-could-be-a-very-cute-character. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-soccer-team 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-ideas-are-creative!--the-idea-that-we-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-trees-sunk-into-the-ground-at-night.-it-makes-us-wonder-how-that-would-be-possible%2C-what-would-happen-to-make-that-need-to-be-done%2C-and-if-we-would-have-enough-oxygen.-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-are-all-interesting-for-different-reasons.-the-what-ifs-about-chickens-and-cards-are-maybe-the-most-novel.-it-might-be-difficult-to-make-a-compelling-story-out-of-cards-though.-i-can-imagine-lots-of-interesting-stories-from-the-other-three-what-ifs%2C-but-it-might-be-fun-to-first-explore-the-chicken-idea.-good-comedy-potential-there! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/trees-sinking-into-the-ground-at-night-is-a-cool-idea!-why-do-they-do-that%3F-how-does-this-effect-the-plants-and-animals-around-them%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/we-really-liked-your-what-if's!-we-do-wish-that-the-last-two-people-had-spoken-as-loud-as-the-first-two.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oooo-i'm-most-interested-in-the-mushroom-idea%2C-super-interesting-to-think-of-a-world-where-they-are-top-of-the-food-chain.-makes-me-wonder-how-society-would-be-organized-in-a-world-like-that-and-what-role-would-humans-play%3F%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-detailed. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/how-is-time-travel-real-and-what-did-they-invent-to-make-it-real.-i-like-the-idea-of-learning-being--illegal-but-what-is-the-punishment-if-you-do-learn. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-what-if-ideas.-it-definitely-has-potential. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/darn-it-got-cut-off!-cool-ideas%2C-i-think-the-brainwashed-world-except-for-one-person-is-most-interesting.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-life-would-be-like-for-that-person-and-what-they-might-do-to-%22rescue%22-the-other-minds%3F%3F%3F-super-cool 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-idea!-does-the-baby-bird-have-a-family%2C-or-is-the-bird-by-themselves%3F-do-they-ever-learn-to-fly%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-that-we-found-most-interesting-was-the-last-one 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/we-like-javier's-the-best-maybe-you-could-add-something-like-a-villain-who-is-making-climate-change-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ideas-that-you-came-up-with-were-creative-and-interesting.-the-idea-the-we-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-what-if-we-never-died.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/we-really-loved-your-video!-we-do-wish-that-you-could-have-spoken-louder%2C-and-darkened-the-pencil-outlines. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-last-person-that-spoke-needs-to-speak-louder.-%3B) 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/fantastic-submissions%2C-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-is-both-the-water-one-and-the-chip-in-brain....the-chip-in-brain-one-makes-me-wonder-what-they-learn-each-year-and-what-if....someone-got-the-wrong-chip-by-accident%3F%3F%3F%3F-could-be-a-fun-story 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-%22what-if-there-was-no-seasons%22-it-makes-us-wonder-what-would-happen-do-the-world-if-it-was-the-same-weather-year-round. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-moon-idea-was-interesting%2C-i-saw-a-movie-like-that. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-%22what-if-dreamworks-took-pixar%3F%22.-it-make-me-wonder-more-about-what-kind-of-films-they-would-make-and-what-would-happen-to-toy-story%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-said-the-same-idea-twice 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-idea-of-coffee-lattes-not-existing!-does-everyone-drink-coffee-black%3F-how-are-lattes-discovered%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/we-love-your-ideas!-the-idea-that-we-found-most-interesting-was-the-ghost-idea.-the-drawings-were-amazing! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-last-one-seems-most-interesting-because-its-most-funny-and-it-grabs-the-most-attention.-i-think-you-should-continue-with-that.-although-its-more-simple-than-others-its-still-great. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-these-ideas-have-potential-but-i-thought-the-idea-about-getting-a-chip-with-knowledge-had-me-asking-the-most-questions-about-what-would-happen.-would-people-lose-their-motivation-to-learn%2C-or-would-they-have-plenty-of-time-for-learning-just-the-stuff-they-were-really-interested-in%3F-would-your-brain-start-to-decay-because-it-isn't-being-used.-lots-of-directions-that-could-go. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/we-really-like-the-creativity-in-all-your-ideas.-the-ghost-drawing-is-amazing.-all-of-your-what-if's-would-make-great-ideas-to-base-your-project-of-of.-we-both-like-the-ghost-and-the-gravity-ones.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-------sheeeeeeeeeeeesh 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-most-interesting-one-was-what-if-there-was-no-education-because-what-would-even-happen%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/airplanes-not-existing-is-a-cool-idea!-how-does-the-human-race-get-around%3F-is-there-a-different-form-of-travel-that-allows-people-to-go-long-distances-quickly%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-these-ideas!-the-movie-idea-is-super-cool.-are-some-movies-used-as-punishment%2C-and-some-as-rewards%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-cool-ideas!-what-happened-in-order-for-the-human-race-to-not-have-standards%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/humans-not-evolving-is-interesting.-at-what-point-did-they-stop-evolving%3F-are-they-neanderthals%3F-can-they-use-tools-or-speak%3F-so-many-places-you-could-go-with-this-idea! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-are-all-super-interesting!-i-like-the-under-water-world-idea!-would-it-be-in-our-ocean%2C-or-would-there-be-an-entire-planet-covered-in-water%3F-really-cool-idea! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-the-earth-not-having-pollution-is-an-interesting-idea!-how-would-that-world-be-different-then-our-world%3F-what-would-nature-look-like%3F-would-humans-exist-in-that-world%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-where-you-explore-what-if-creatures-couldn't-do-their-job-too.-it-could-turn-into-an-entire-science-series-where-we-learn-more-about-each-creature-and-why-its-important-that-they-can-do-their-job. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/unfortunately%2C-your-second-idea-got-cutoff-so-i'd-be-curious-to-hear-more-about-that.-the-first-idea-is-close-to-a-potential-future-reality-and-that-makes-it-daunting-and-yet-relatable.-i'd-love-to-hear-more-about-this-world%2C-what-chaos-occurs-when-they-shut-down-and-what-lessons-are-learned-from-this-event.-cool!- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/time-travel-is-always-a-rich-idea%2C-and-the-challenge-there-would-be-how-to-create-an-original-take-on-that-idea-since-there-are-a-number-of-stories-in-that-arena.-learning-being-illegal-is-a-scary-concept-and-i'd-be-very-curious-to-learn-the-rules-of-that-world-and-the-whys-behind-it.-unfortunately%2C-your-fourth-idea-cutoff%2C-but-i'm-very-interested-in-hearing-about-the-books-and-what-happens-next%3A-what-power-do-books-have-and-why%3F-what-do-the-books-introduce-to-your-world-or-what-affect-do-they-have-on-your-character%3F-cool-ideas!- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-music-idea!-do-we-get-to-see-someone-discovering-music%3F-how-would-people-react-to-hearing-it-for-the-first-time%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/there-are-so-many-different-directions-you-could-go-with-these-ideas.-i-loved-the-fairies-idea! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-first-one...-i-wonder-if-these-hybrids-have-to-hide-their-true-identities%3F-could-they-choose-the-plant-they-become%3F-if-so%2C-is-this-a-choice-they-make-or-a-fate-they-are-destined-to-meet%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-what-if-humans-had-animal-wings.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-would-it-be-just-a-select-portion-of-the-population-to-receive-them%3F-what-is-the-process-to-receive-your-animal-wings%3F-would-they-be-chosen-by-the-receiver-or-handed-down-to-them-through-the-family%3F-what-would-these-people-do-with-the-gift-of-flight%3F-what-connection-would-they-have-with-the-original-animal-they-received-their-wings-from%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-is-the-third-one...-if-learning-was-illegal.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-structure-of-society-in-this-world-and-how-the-society-would-control-its-citizens.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-first-what-if...-it-opens-a-lot-of-possibility-for-a-story-line.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-negative-impacts-of-robots-and-what-it-would-take-to-solve-this-problem. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/for-the-last-what-if...-in-what-manner-would-we-receive-the-knowledge-of-our-soul-mate%3F-would-it-require-a-task-to-complete-or-a-journey-to-endure%3F-what-would-happen-if-you-choose-not-to-know-who-your-soul-mate-is%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-art-and-the-style-of-it.-is-there-a-ways-that-the-dog-and-cat-can-actually-switch-lives..-by-adding-color-it-could-add-a-lot.-love-how-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-these-ideas-seem-very-unique-and-the-visuals-are-great.-there's-also-clear-conflict-and-a-strong-base-for-each-story.-it-makes-me-wonder%2C-would-the-human-who-lived-through-history-go-insane%3F-would-he-be-able-to-preserve-past-events%3F-i-also-love-the-sheer-scale-of-what-these-ideas-could-come-up-with%2C-like-could-the-aliens-impact-solar-systems%3F-galaxies%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-style-of-the-art.-how-would-the-over-all-world-be-if-all-art-came-to-life.-if-every-could-control-time-it-would-it-be-the-same-or-different-for-everyone.-super-creative-art-and-ideas. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-the-ideas-were-very-creative.-what-would-happen-if-the-tiger-got-fake-teeth.-it-makes-me-think-if-smiles-can-really-that-intense.-love-the-way-you-created-your-art. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-ghost-one-so-much-but-is-there-supposed-to-be-romance-like-is-the-ghost-buster-in-love-with-the-ghost-too%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-these-ideas-are-very-creative.-the-last-idea-was-the-most-interesting-to-me-and-i-feel-like-it-will-impact-people-emotionally-because-it-is-kind-of-realistic-in-a-way.--it-makes-me-wonder-how-this-story-will-play-out. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-of-elephants-swaping-with-the-astronauts%2C-i-would-love-to-here-more-about-these-ideas-and-the-conspets.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-art-for-all-three.-i-hope-to-see-you-elaborate-more-on-the-third-concept-through-your-image-because-its-hard-to-understand-the-concept.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawing-for-the-second-one-is-very-clear-and-good.-i-didn't-really-get-the-last-one-because-i-couldn't-hear-the-person-well.-also%2C-you-could-have-maybe-made-the-first-drawing-a-little-more-clear.-overall%2C-i-think-all-the-ideas-are-really-creative-and-cool. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-far-out-some-of-the-ideas-are.-for-the-second-one%2C-i-don't-quite-understand-exactly-what-the-story-is%2C-so-you-could-make-your-description-more-detailed.-i-like-the-different-art-styles. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-art-%26-the-creativity-for-your-what-ifs.-you-took-a-lot-of-time-drawing-%26-coming-up-with-really-great-story-ideas.-i-would-say-some-character-development-like%2C-would-the-ghost-hunter-want-to-be-in-love-with-a-ghost-or-how-would-the-body-swapping-affect-the-perspectives-of-the-nerd-%26-jock-of-each-other.-overall-i-really-like-your-art-%26-ideas.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-art-for-all-three.-i-hope-to-see-you-elaborate-more-on-the-third-concept-through-your-image-because-its-hard-to-understand-the-concept.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-these-ideas.-the-art-was-a-little-abstract.-but-otherwise-i-really-like-the-presentation. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-portal-ideas-for-the-first-2-what-ifs%2C-but-i-especially-like-the-drawing-for-the-portal-of-the-2nd-one.-i-think-the-3rd-drawing-could-have-something-added-to-it-like-a-picture-of-a-clock-tower-or-a-bank.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-art-is-amazing%2C-i-think-the-ideas-are-great-but-the-audio-is-hard-to-hear-and-the-videos-cut-out-while-the-person-is-still-talking%2C-its-mainly-just-production-issues-but-the-what-if's-are-amazing. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-missing-socks-one-because-they-always-disappear%2C-if-time-was-money-you-couldent-afford-anything-when-you-were-little%2C--also-how-much-money-do-you-get-per-ammount-of-time.-i-think-the-first-idea-has-a-lot-of-potential. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-second-one-are-dogs-the-only-animals-that-sell-stuff-maybe-you-could-add-a-cat-character-who-is-a-villain-who-opens-a-bigger-shop-and-tries-to-take-all-their-costumers-so-the-dogs-team-up-to-beat-cat- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-thought-your-art-was-really-well-drawn.-i-feel-like-you-could-have-added-color%2C-but-it-still-looked-great!-i-think-you-could-go-more-into-detail-about-your-what-ifs-by-adding-more-about-how-or-why-your-what-ifs-happened.-i-really-like-the-idea-of-a-black-cat-that-gave-good-luck.-it-made-me-wonder-if-anyone-would-find-out-the-cat-gave-good-luck.-great-job! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-second-one-are-dogs-the-only-animals-that-sell-stuff-maybe-you-could-add-a-cat-character-who-is-a-villain-who-opens-a-bigger-shop-and-tries-to-take-all-their-costumers-so-the-dogs-team-up-to-beat-cat- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-what-if-a-dog-wanted-to-be-a-cat-one%2C-and-how-it-sort-of-reflects-real-life-transgender-stuff-and-our-society-right-now.-you-could-have-added-a-little-blip-about-why-the-dog-wants-to-be-the-cat-and-some-reasoning.-also-could-have-said-whether-it-was-the-same-for-the-cat.-and-finally-i-love-the-art-in-this. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it's-really-intresting-maybe-add-more-detail-annunciate-more-its-taking-up-alot-of-space- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-all-the-drawings-and-the-plots-of-them.-maybe-expand-a-bit-more-on-the-second-story%2C--i-really-love-your-whole-what-ifs. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-drawings-here%2C-lovely-use-of-color!-however%2C-the-questions-did-feel-a-bit-unclear.-why-is-it-specifically-santa-playing-basketball%3F-why-is-the-object-that-can-turn-into-anything-specifically-a-magic-hat%3F-and-the-last-question-got-cut-off%2C-so-it-was-a-bit-hard-to-tell-what-it-was-saying.-so-maybe-go-back-and-refine-these-questions%2C-see-a-way-to-go-deeper-with-them%3F-besides-that%2C-very-creative! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-all-the-drawings-and-the-plots-of-them.-maybe-expand-a-bit-more-on-the-second-story%2C--i-really-love-your-whole-what-ifs. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ideas-were-very-interesting.-the-ideas-i-thought-could've-been-expanded-on-more-and-showed-more-of-the-world.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-enjoyed-that-last-one-about-a-smile-lighting-up-a-room-and-i-thought-it-was-a-very-cool-idea.-maybe-you-could-add-more-detail-to-the-drawings.-also%2C-you-could-add-more-color.-over-all-i-really-liked-all-of-your-ideas-and-thought-they-were-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/having-no-bones-sound-weird-yet-cool.-how-would-we-be-able-to-move-and-such.-but-my-only-problem-is-how-the-idea-seems-like-it-could-be-boring-if-were-not-able-to-do-anything.-but-it-makes-me-think-about-what-would-happen-in-our-world%2C-would-we-be-prey%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-idea.-you-could.-i-still-loved-your-idea.-i-like-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-interested-in-the-idea-%22what-if-a-smile-could-really-light-up-a-room%22.-would-the-light-be-coming-from-the-person-smiling%3F-how-would-that-effect-our-world%3F-the-bigger-the-smile-the-more-light%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-colors.-i-think-the-story-have-more-context.-i-like-the-themes. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-drawings%2C--i-think-if-everybody-could-control-time-and-space-there-would-be-no-order%2C-i-like-the-latter-idea-more%2C-but-they're-both-great. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-good-drawing-i-really-liked-the-concept-at-the-beggining-why-was-there-a-piano-what-does-it-do-and-why-is-it-involved-in-your-drawing-and-what-does-it-do 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-is-cool-and-i-like-the-art.-i-think-it-would-look-a-little-better-if-you-colored-it-and-maybe-if-you-can-read-it-out-loud-next-time-that-would-be-great.-but-i-really-like-the-idea-of-dinosaurs-in-2021.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-these-ideas!-they-are-very-creative-and-original.-how-would-anything-get-done-in-the-last-world%3F-can-everyone-hear-the-music%3F-i-want-to-see-more-of-this-idea. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hello-magic-cat-team%2C-these-ideas-look-great%2C-very-creative!-for-the-last-what-if-question-(if-the-sky-was-green-and-the-grass-was-blue)-the-drawing-wasn't-very-clear-to-your-idea.-for-the-santa-what-if%2C-i-would-like-more-information-about-the-story.-but-overall-all-of-the-what-ifs-have-great-potential!-%3A) 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-guys-is-creativity-ideas-and-the-effort-you-put-in-the-work.-i-am-interested-to-find-out-the-story-in-your-guys-is-ideas.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-art-of-the-ideas%2C-i-think-it-would-be-great-if-you-could-be-more-clear-about-the-ideas-because-it-is-hard-to-understand-how-they-are-presented.-also-the-paper-seems-very-cluttered-with-ideas-so-maybe-try-to-use-either-a-bigger-paper-or-3-separate-papers.-i-liked-how-creative-it-was-and-the-ideas-looked-well-thought-out. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-all-of-your-drawing-and-they-were-really-clear.-i-think-you-could-speak-up-a-little-and-maybe-add-on-a-little-to-you-what-if-questions.-i-could-not-quite-here--the-end-of-the-second-question.-other-than-that-i-really-loved-all-of-your-pictures-and-ideas. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-slideshow-and-ideas.-i-recommend-that-you-show-what-is-happening-because-i-got-confused-on-some.--i-recommend-that-you-add-more-images-to-each-what-if.-i-like-your-drawing-and-am-excited-to-see-what-what-if-you-pick.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-this-idea-in-general-(maybe-because-i'm-biased-and-really-like-dinosaurs).-one-thing-you-could-mention-is-if-either-dinosaurs-suddenly-came-back-from-extinction%2C-or-if-they-never-dies-and-just-stuck-around-until-now.-you-could-also-maybe-show-a-little-bit-how-humans-deal-with-them.-and-finally-i-love-the-drawing-and-how-detailed-everything-is. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-drawings-are-really-good%2C-have-you-thought-about-the-problem-in-the-story%3F-i-also-think-the-ideas-are-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-thought-that-your-ideas-were-very-interesting.-i-think-that-your-drawings-had-a-bit-too-much-going-on.-the-drawings-could've-been-more-in-depth.-overall-i-thought-that-the-ideas-could-be-made-into-great-stories. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-drawings-are-really-good%2C-have-you-thought-about-the-problem-in-the-story%3F-i-also-think-the-ideas-are-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-of-everything-in-the-world-having-shutdown-would-be-cool.-though-it-how-would-everything-shutoff%2Fpower-down%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-of-how-the-world-would-function-and-work-without-power. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-drawings%2C-i-think-that-with-everyone-being-able-to-control-time-there-would-be-alot-of-time-loops-and-very-odd-things%2C-i-think-your-idea-about-drawings-coming-to-life-has-alot-of-potential. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-art-is-amazing-and-has-great-detail.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-if-the-dinosaurs-are-would-be-good-or-bad.-how-would-they-survive.--super-great-idea. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-all-of-your-ideas%2C-the-audio-quality-for-the-last-one-was-hard-to-understand%2C-but-the-art-was-really-great-for-all-of-the-what-ifs. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-audio-is-kinda-quiet-and-hard-to-hear.-the-art-would-be-a-lot-better-in-my-opinion-if-it-was-just-cleaned-up-a-bit.-i-like-the-ideas-though. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-drawings-are-really-good%2C-have-you-thought-about-the-problem-in-the-story%3F-i-also-think-the-ideas-are-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-of-an-elephant-as-an-astronaut.-i-feel-like-the-story-about-the-dogs-could-more-i-descriptive-in-the-aspect-of-the-plot.-i-really-love-the-characteristics-and-the-drawings-in-the-in-all-of-them. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-but-i-think-an-audio-would-really-help.-i-think-it-would-be-nice-to-put-in-an-audio-so-you-can-elaborate-more. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-but-i-think-an-audio-would-really-help.-i-think-it-would-be-nice-to-put-in-an-audio-so-you-can-elaborate-more. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-idea-but-it-makes-me-wonder....-would-our-world-still-look-the-same%3F-will-there-be-riots-or-out-breaks-between-dinosaurs-and-humans%3F-what-protection-would-be-given%3F-would-humans-co-exist-with-dinosaurs%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-perspective-drawing-is-nice%2C-how-do-the-dinosaurs-live-among-humans%3F-it's-an-interesting-idea. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-idea-of-the-magical-hat-that-turn-things-into-things-is-really-creative%2C-but-you-should-probably-put-more-effort-into-your-drawings.--also%2C-i'm-pretty-sure-the-last-one-was-upside-down%2C--which-i-think-made-it-a-little-confusing.--the-first-drawing-was-a-good-image-to-show-the-what-if. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-your-concept.-how-did-this-happen%3F-how-are-man-made-things-there-if-they-weren't-killed%3F-i-do-like-your-theme-and-how-you-de-modernized-the-earth-with-dinosaurs 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-animation-put-into-your-drawings%2C-and-i-think-the-second-what-if-is-probably-real%2C-but-i-also-love-the-drawings%2C-the-themes-could-be-a-little-more-specific. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-animation-of-them.-i-think-maybe-you-could-add-more-color-to-the-first-one.-also%2C-you-should-make-the-little-people-bigger.--over-all-i-think-it-was-very-well-done.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-first-idea-the-most-interesting-and-the-art-matches-it-very-well.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-story-and-how-the-pros-and-cons-of-everyone-controlling-space-and-time-will-effect-that-world.-this-is-a-good-idea-however-i-think-if-only-one-person-had-that-power-it-would-have-more-potential-for-expanding-ideas-and-it-would-be-less-complicated.-this-is-great-work! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/that-first-one-sounds-amazing%2Creal-emmy-worthy-stuff%2Cthe-others-are-meh 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-santa-playing-basketball-and-that-he-had-abs.--i-think-the-2nd-drawing-could-have-some-things-added-on-to-it.--i-think-the-2nd-idea-was-very-good-and-creative.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-the-last-one-but-i-also-think-that-you-should've-not-put-upside-and-make-the-drawings-a-bit-more-clear.-overall-its-a-good-drawing.-the-drawing-of-the-first-picture-is-very-clear-about-what-is-going-on-but-im-confused-on-why-santa-doesnt-have-a-shirt-on-and-why-he-doesnt-have-anyone-to-play-with-and-why-hes-holding-two-basketballs. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-are-awesome-ideas.-i-really-like-the-first-one.-the-art-with-the-second-one-was-really-good.-i-like-the-idea-of-time-equaling-money.-i-think-the-first-and-second-ones-could-be-a-little-louder.-other-wise-it-looks-great. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-the-last-one-but-i-also-think-that-you-should've-not-put-upside-and-make-the-drawings-a-bit-more-clear.-overall-its-a-good-drawing.-the-drawing-of-the-first-picture-is-very-clear-about-what-is-going-on-but-im-confused-on-why-santa-doesnt-have-a-shirt-on-and-why-he-doesnt-have-anyone-to-play-with-and-why-hes-holding-two-basketballs. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-first-idea-but-i-think-that-you-could-come-up-with-a-better-concept.-i-liked-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-first-idea-%26-i-liked-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-ideas-and-drawings.-i-recommend-that-you-add-more-to-your-drawings-showing-what-is-happening.-i-recommend-that-you-put-a-paper-with-your-drawing-to-show-that-your-drawing-come-to-life.-i-like-your-what-ifs-and-are-excited-to-see-what-you-continue-making.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-all-of-your-drawings-and-thought-they-were-well-executed.-i-think-there-is-some-room-to-grow-your-what-if-questions.--for-me-some-of-the-pictures-lacked-color--maybe-you-can-add-a-couple-more-details-to-your-drawings.-i-really-liked-your-ideas-and-how-creative-they-are.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-other-ideas-the-last-one-made-me-cringe-so-hard-still-love-it-tho 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-second-one-sounds-good%2Cwhat-if-other-stuff-were-there-like-guitar-picks%2Cchapstick%2Cpens%2Cand-anything-youve-lost.-the-last-one-sounds-a-lot-like-the-movie-in-time 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-if-real-life-worked-more-like-video-games-one.-i-really-like-how-much-you-expanded-on-everything-you-can-do-like-have-more-inventory-or-maybe-the-physics-in-the-world-are-changed.-one-thing-i-think-you-could-do-is-maybe-set-your-mind-one-one-video-game-to-replace-the-world-because-in-general-is-pretty-confusing.-you-could-also-talk-about-the-limits-of-how-much-videogames-could-change-the-real-world-and-the-maximum-difference.-and-finally-i-love-how-you-mentioned-a-life-system-at-the-end. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-art-and-i-can-tell-it-took-a-lot-of-effort%2C-maybe-it-could-be-better-if-you-went-more-into-depth-about-how-the-nerd-and-bully-swapped-bodies.-or-if-the-ghost-and-ghost-hunter-falling-in-love-was-more-clear-about-how-they-fell-in-love%2C-these-ideas-are-great-and-will-most-likely-lead-to-a-amazing-story. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-first-two-ideas 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-first-idea-but-i-think-that-you-could-come-up-with-a-better-concept.-i-liked-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-art-and-i-can-tell-it-took-a-lot-of-effort%2C-maybe-it-could-be-better-if-you-went-more-into-depth-about-how-the-nerd-and-bully-swapped-bodies.-or-if-the-ghost-and-ghost-hunter-falling-in-love-was-more-clear-about-how-they-fell-in-love%2C-these-ideas-are-great-and-will-most-likely-lead-to-a-amazing-story. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-first-idea-the-most.-i-liked-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-art-and-i-can-tell-it-took-a-lot-of-effort%2C-maybe-it-could-be-better-if-you-went-more-into-depth-about-how-the-nerd-and-bully-swapped-bodies.-or-if-the-ghost-and-ghost-hunter-falling-in-love-was-more-clear-about-how-they-fell-in-love%2C-these-ideas-are-great-and-will-most-likely-lead-to-a-amazing-story. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-interested-in-the-monster-idea-where-teddy-bears-protect-us.-do-humans-end-up-finding-out-that-the-monsters-exist-and-that-teddy-bears-are-the-key-to-protection%3F-do-the-teddy-bears-end-up-losing-the-fight-against-a-monster%3F-are-there-different-monsters-with-different-powers%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-quite-like-the-drawings%2C-the-art-style-you-have-here-is-jammed-with-creativity!-however%2C-you-do-speak-a-bit-softly-and-quietly%2C-making-it-a-bit-hard-to-make-out-what-you-say%2C-necessitating-multiple-listens-to-it.-additionally%2C-the-second-what-if-gets-cut-off%2C-so-we-don't-hear-the-most-important-part-of-the-question.-these-questions-do-see-interesting%2C-so-you-just-need-to-fix-some-light-problems-and-inconveniences-with-presentation%2C-and-you'll-be-good! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-your-ideas-are-passionate.-i-don't-understand-the-theme.-i-like-the-drawings. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ideas-are-unique-and-distinct%2C-and-each-make-you-wonder-what-kind-of-events-can-unfold-from-them.the-one-about-grass-being-blue-has-potential-as-an-idea-but-could-certainly-be-developed-more-as-i-feel-as-though-it-may-not-have-as-much-potential-for-an-interesting-development-or-conflict.-i-think-it-would-be-more-interesting-if-it-was-more-fleshed-out%2C-like-perhaps-there's-a-reason-the-grass-and-sky-is-like-this%3F-or-maybe-it-was-just-like-that-one-day-and-left-everyone-confused%3F-is-there-anything-this-worldwide-confusion-could-lead-to%3F-maybe-this-concept-might-actually-be-explored-from-a-different-direction%3F-i-find-it-to-be-a-fun-idea-to-entertain.-overall%2C-all-of-the-ideas-here-are-interesting-to-think-about. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-all-of-your-ideas-are-great-and-abstract.--for-the-second-one%3B-i-think-you-could-make-the-drawing-more-detailed-so-the-story-is-more-easily-conveyed-and-easier-to-understand.-i-really-like-your-art-and-art-style 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-where-a-train-keeps-on-going-for-forever-and-never-stops.-it's-a-very-interesting-concept%2C-as-there's-a-lot-you-could-do-with-it%2C-in-order-to-flesh-it-out.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-people-would-get-on-and-off-of-the-train.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-style-of-art-you-chose.--what-would-happen-if-the-ghost-tricks-the-guy.-it-makes-me-think-what-if-the-nerd-stays-in-the-other-body-forever.-i-found-most-interesting-the-ghost-what-if. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-art-is-to-be-as-expected%2C-however-the-ideas-presented-are-very-vague-and-open%2C-which-can-leave-things-more-unclear%2C-but-this-is-not-necessarily-a-bad-thing%2C-as-so-long-as-there-is-enough-context-to-back-it. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-hat-idea-a-lot%2C-it-could-be-shown-how-the-hat-works-and-if-its-magic-or-a-representation-of-imagination.-and-if-it-was-real-how-would-the-main-character-use-it%3F-what-obstacles-may-arise-from-the-hats-existence%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-idea-and-your-art-work.-it-makes-me-think-of-the-future-and-how-we-would-live-till-this-day.-what-i-wonder-about-this-idea-is-who-is-it-based-on-humans-or-the-dinosaurs%3F-other-then-that-i-really-love-the-concept-of-dinosaurs-in-the-the-years-2021-.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-idea-and-your-art-work.-it-makes-me-think-of-the-future-and-how-we-would-live-till-this-day.-what-i-wonder-about-this-idea-is-who-is-it-based-on-humans-or-the-dinosaurs%3F-other-then-that-i-really-love-the-concept-of-dinosaurs-in-the-the-years-2021-.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-what-if-ideas-and-drawing.-i-recommend-that-you-either-speak-faster-or-put-the-words-slower.-i-recommend-that-for-the-last-one-you-maybe-put-a-light-or-bright-color-coming-out-of-the-girls-smile.-i-love-everything-else%2C-i-am-excited-to-see-what-what-if-you-come-up-with.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-drawings--speak-louder--add-color-spend-more-time-on-drawings--nice 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-of-the-earth-as-a-school-project-sounds-amazing.-the-idea-of-students-working-on-building-something-is-interesting.-i-just-wonder-why-they-would-get-rid-of-their-project.-it-makes-me-wonder-though%2C-would-we-ever-figure-out-that-we-were-an-throw-away-project%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-smile-concept%2C-how-a-smile-could-be-truly-radiant.-but-i-question-how-could-the-tiger-concept-be-framed-into-a-story%3F-how-could-the-bug-be%3F-i-did-like-however-the-firefly-scenario-and-the-fact-his-radiance-is-gone. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ideas-were-very-different-from-what-is-normally-made-adding-lots-of-variation.-i-thought-that-the-ideas-could-have-been-expanded-so-that-you-would-understand-more-of-what-the-story-is-about.-i-think-that-the-drawing-could've-been-expanded-on-more.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-thought-the-idea-of-a-hat-that-can-turn-into-anything-you-want-was-really-interesting.-it-made-me-wonder-what-people-would-make-it-turn-into.-i-thought-you-could-have-made-a-the-art-a-little-more-detailed-on-some-of-the-what-ifs%2C-but-other-than-that%2C-you-did-a-great-job!- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it's-a-little-hard-to-hear%2C-but-the-third-idea-is-great%2C--i-also-love-the-drawings%2C-but-the-second-ones-audio-got-cut-short. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-smile-concept%2C-how-a-smile-could-be-truly-radiant.-but-i-question-how-could-the-tiger-concept-be-framed-into-a-story%3F-i-did-like-however-the-firefly-scenario-and-the-fact-his-radiance-is-gone. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-where-a-cowboy-found-a-time-traveling-wristwatch.-time-travel-is-always-a-very-interesting-concept%2C-so-putting-it-into-the-hands-of-a-cowboy-is-pretty-unique.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-the-story-is-going-to-have-the-same-tropes-as-other-time-traveling-stories-(e.x.-time-travelling-ends-up-ruining-the-timeline). 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/th-third-one-sounds-really-good-from-an-artistic-standpoint%2Cand-what-if-someone-could-see-in-definite-shapes-with-color%3F-or-in-colorless-blobs%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-drawings-are-really-good%2C-have-you-thought-about-the-problem-in-the-story%3F-i-also-think-the-ideas-are-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-what-ifs-i-like-the-hat-one-im-kinda-confused-about-the-santa-one-maybe-you-can-make-it-more-clear-i-couldnt-hear-you-that-well 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-what-ifs-i-like-the-hat-one-im-kinda-confused-about-the-santa-one-maybe-you-can-make-it-more-clear-i-couldnt-hear-you-that-well 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-ideas%2C-especially-the-hat-turning-into-anything.-i-think-you-could-improve-on-the-scenario-aspect%2C-like-when-would-santa-play-basketball-or-is-there-a-limit-to-how-many-times-the-hat-can-turn-into-anything.-also-would-anyone-try-to-take-advantage-of-the-hat-or-what-if-santa-got-hurt-playing-basketball%2C-%26-he-couldn't-deliver-the-presents.--i-am-excited-to-see-what-your-final-product-will-look-like-because-i-haven't-heard-of-these-ideas-from-anyone.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-2nd-what-if%3F-could-be-more-creative-and-have-more-description.-i-think-the-person-in-the-%22what-if-you're-the-only-one-in-the-world%22-could-have-a-little-more-detail-on-him.---i-like-the-drawing-of-the-meteor-in-the-first-drawing-and-the-concept-of-the-house-in-the-middle-of-the-sun-and-earth. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-they-story-about-the-dogs.-one-detail-i-would-fix-is-is-that-the-rocket-doesn't-really-look-like-rocket.-also%2C-in-the-last-what-if-i-couldn't-hear-the-person.-over-all-i-like-the-creativity-in-this-what-if-video. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-first-idea-of-the-clown%2C-it-leaves-a-lot-of-imagination-for-the-message-it-could-portray%2C-or-the-story-it-could-follow.-i-wonder-how-the-second-idea-would-be-constructed.-could-there-be-human-interaction-with-the-guardians%3F-what-is-the-reasoning-behind-it%3F-could-they-affect-the-real-world%3F-as-for-the-last-one%2C-i-also-really-like-the-idea-of-manipulating-plants-and-want-to-know-the-boundaries-of-using-the-power.-overall%2C-very-original-and-would-be-an-enjoyable-experience-to-see-them-come-to-life. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-the-ideas-are-great-and-very-creative%2C-and-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-last-idea%2C--i-thought-its-a-great-idea-and-wonder-if-there-personality-changes-over-time-as-they-get-used-to-their-new-body.-i-also-love-the-drawings. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-these-questions%2C-the-presentation-was-rather-nice!-however%2C-this-video-does-seem-to-be-done-in-the-dark%2C-so-the-visuals-are-a-bit-lacking-due-to-low-lighting-conditions.-additionally%2C-as-a-consequence%2C-you-kind-of-had-to-explain-your-drawings-rather-than-being-able-to-let-your-visuals-speak-for-themselves%2C-so-the-darkness-kind-of-drags-down-the-quality%2C-and-makes-this-run-a-bit-long.-so-overall%2C-it's-just-presentation-issues%2C-nothing-wrong-with-your-questions-or-drawings.-you-guys-have-really-creative-ideas! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-this-idea-really-interesting%2Cjust-imagining-all-the-dumb-and-quasi-useless-superpowers-like-%22what-if-you-can-teleport-to-anything-you-can-see%22-or-%22you-can-fly-but-every-time-to-go-above-3-stories-you-get-a-tumor-somewhere-on-your-body%22- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-detailed-drawing-how-ever-you-should-add-some-color-so-it-could-stand-out--and-something-is-to-talk-a-little-louder-you-did-great-but-it-was-hard-to-hear-nice-job 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-this-idea-really-interesting%2Cjust-imagining-all-the-dumb-and-quasi-useless-superpowers-like-%22what-if-you-can-teleport-to-anything-you-can-see%22-or-%22you-can-fly-but-every-time-to-go-above-3-stories-you-get-a-tumor-somewhere-on-your-body%22- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-drawing--speak-and-explain-what-it--is--make-the-video-longer--nice-setting- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/first-of-all-the-art-is-amazing-i-love-it.-wish-i-could-draw-that-well.-i-think-it-would-be-cool-if-it-was-colored-but-its-fine-without-color.--i-wonder-with-the-cat-one-how-people-would-find-out-it-had-good-luck.-this-is-so-cool.-i-like-your-team-name.-%3Ad 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-all-the-ideas-especially-the-last-one.-each-of-the-story-are-unique-and-can-be-great.-for-the-last-one-some-questions-could-be-are-they-all-humans%3F-why-dont-they-like-each-other%3F-im-would-be-interested-to-see-how-each-society-works-differently-from-each-other-and-if-they-ever-come-together-to-be-greater-together. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/amazing-drawings- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-intresting-was-the-second-what-if.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-animals-and-how-they-get-along-with-difrent-specieas. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-all-of-these-are-great%2C-but-the-one-i-found-most-intriguing-was-the-ghost-falling-in-love-with-the-ghost-hunter-one.-i-think-its-a-really-creative-idea-and-i-like-how-the-characters-were-designed.-i-think-that-you-could-maybe-add-a-little-bit-more-depth-to-the-idea%2C-like-if-ghosts-were-supposed-to-despise-hunters.-or-vice-versa.-and-finally-i-like-how-original-the-idea-is 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-all-of-these-are-great%2C-but-the-one-i-found-most-intriguing-was-the-ghost-falling-in-love-with-the-ghost-hunter-one.-i-think-its-a-really-creative-idea-and-i-like-how-the-characters-were-designed.-i-think-that-you-could-maybe-add-a-little-bit-more-depth-to-the-idea%2C-like-if-ghosts-were-supposed-to-despise-hunters.-or-vice-versa.-and-finally-i-like-how-original-the-idea-is 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-drawing-love-the-details-something-to-work-on-is-to-add-color-so-it-could-stand-u-more-something-else-is-to-say-it-because-the-video-was-to-short 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-all-the-ideas-and-drawings-for-the-what-ifs.-i-recommend-that-you-make-the-coloring-of-the-drawings-darker.-i-recommend-that-you-add-more-pictures-that-would-show-that-they-switched-body.-i-am-interested-on-any-what-if-that-you-pick.-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-creativity-for-the-elephant-swapping-with-the-astronaut%2C-it-make-me-wonder-if-you-could-go-into-depth-about-how-they-swapped%2C-also-i-couldn't-hear-the-last-one-so-maybe-make-it-more-clear.-i-also-liked-the-art-for-the-alien-one%2C 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-art-style%2C-it's-clear-and-visually-appealing.-all-of-the-ideas-were-unique-and-interesting-but-i-found-the-first-idea-the-most-interesting%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-story-will-start-and-develop-throughout. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-drawings-are-really-good%2C-have-you-thought-about-the-problem-in-the-story%3F-i-also-think-the-ideas-are-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-simple-and-crisp-the-art-style-is.-but%2C-i-think-you-should-make-it-more-detailed.-but-overall%2C-i-think-the-story-is-pretty-intriguing. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-do-you-mean-by-every-movement-w%5Dmakes-music-does-it-make-a-tone-or-a-popular-song-%3F-you-should-work-on-your-definitions--i-like-it-a-lot- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-this-idea-intersting%2C-it-sounds-like-a-sequel-to--the-good-dinosaur%2C-a-movie-tied-as-most-forgettable-pixar-movie-next-to-a-bugs-life 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/its-really-cool--add-more-color--go-somewhere-lighter--nice-drawings- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it's-an-interesting-idea.-however%2C-this-idea-has-already-been-explored-multiple-times.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-you-will-be-able-to-make-the-story-more-unique%2C-compared-to-existing-ones. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/for-the-second-one-i-like-the-idea-but-i-think-it-could-be-alittle-different-from-the-first-one.-but-i-like-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-the-color-you-added-into-your-art.-that%E2%80%99s-a-super-great-idea-what-if-you-added-more-animals-to-go-to-space.-i-can-tell-you-took-time-in-to-your-art.-love-how-creative-they-are%2C--what-would-happen-if-the-dog-and-cat-always-are-tied.-the-earth-looks-great. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/-i-like-the-idea-of-the-monster-and-the-drawing-is-on-point-i-love-it!-maybe-next-time-check-your-videos-and-make-sure-they-aren't-getting-cut-off%2C-because-the-video-talking-about-the-vampire-got-cut-off 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/for-the-second-one-i-like-the-idea-but-i-think-it-could-be-alittle-different-from-the-first-one.-but-i-like-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-all-of-the-ideas%2C-i-think-that-you-could-add-more-ideas-to-the-black-cat-one%2C-like-having-the-film-from-its-pov-or-having-only-one-person-know-and-people-think-they-are-crazy%2C-your-drawing-style-is-amazing. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-idea-about-the-superheroes-and-how-kids-would-be-borned-with-superpowers%2C-where-i-would-seek-for-improvment-is-the-drawing-you-could-of-made-it-a-lot-better- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-are-all-very-cool-ideas.-how-would-the-bodies-get-switched%3F-and-how-do-they-know-the-cat-is-lucky%3F-i-enjoy-the-artwork-as-well. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/for-the-second-one-i-like-the-idea-but-i-think-it-could-be-alittle-different-from-the-first-one.-but-i-like-your-drawing 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-drawings--you-should-just-work-on-coloring-it-more-it-looked-really-good-but-i-cant-really-see-the-drawing-something-else-to-is-to-try-not-to-stop-to-much--but-really-good-job 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-drawings--you-should-just-work-on-coloring-it-more-it-looked-really-good-but-i-cant-really-see-the-drawing-something-else-to-is-to-try-not-to-stop-to-much--but-really-good-job 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-idea-about-the-superheroes-and-how-kids-would-be-borned-with-superpowers%2C-where-i-would-seek-for-improvment-is-the-drawing-you-could-of-made-it-a-lot-better- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-are-all-very-cool-ideas.-how-would-the-bodies-get-switched%3F-and-how-do-they-know-the-cat-is-lucky%3F-i-enjoy-the-artwork-as-well. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-idea-about-the-superheroes-and-how-kids-would-be-borned-with-superpowers%2C-where-i-would-seek-for-improvment-is-the-drawing-you-could-of-made-it-a-lot-better- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-art-was-really-colorful%2C-which-i-liked.-i-think-you-could-all-work-on-speaking-louder-(i-couldn't-hear-the-least-one)%2C-and-if-you-can-dont-use-lined-paper-to-draw-on-it-makes-it-hard-to-look-at-the-drawing.-over-all-it-was-really-cool. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-third-one-was-the-only-one-i-found-interesting%2Cthe-second-could've-been-good-if-it-wasnt-cut-short 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-idea-is-indeed-very-interesting%2C-however-it-has-already-been-widely-explored.-but-i-think-if-you-get-a-unique-take-on-it%2C-it-will-be-a-lot-better.-such-as-how-society-is-formed-or-not-formed-around-super-powers-and-how-much-would-the-world-change-if-superpowers-existed.-such-as-there-were-no-wars-and-everyone-was-at-peace-or-that-everyone-was-at-war%2C-or-how-would-people-restrict-and-govern-people-with-superpowers-that-are-too-powerful. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ideas-are-clearly-demonstrated-with-your-drawings.-i-think-that-the-ideas-are-very-similar-to-each-other.-i-think-that-you-should-add-more-to-the-stories-so-that-it-isn't-very-similar-to-the-real-world.-the-drawings-were-very-emotion-filled-and-clear. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-idea-about-the-hunter-concept-and-all-of-the-concepts.--i-don't-know-how-the-bodys-could-have-switched-places%3F-how-did-they-react%3F-also%2C-how-does-the-cat-spread-luck%3F-i-do-like-the-concept-of-like%2C-betraying-the-normal-and-doing-something-unusual-for-instance-changing-the-scenario-of-common-stories. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawings-were-really-amazing-and-clean-and-i-loved-your-creativity.---i-think-you-can-add-a-little-bit-more-detail-into-some-of-the-drawing.-i-loved-your-questions-they-were-soo-creative-and-fun-and-if-they-were-a-movie-i-would-go-and-see-in-a-theater-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-presentation-here-is-immaculate!-lovely-drawings%2C-lovely-handwriting%2C-the-questions-are-unique!-your-voice-was-very-clear!-however%2C-it-does-seem-like-somebody-did-all-the-work-of-making-these-look-good%2C-rather-than-everybody-putting-in-the-effort-for-their-own-question's-visual-aid.-besides-that%2C-these-all-feel-like-they-have-potential! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawings-were-really-amazing-and-clean-and-i-loved-your-creativity.---i-think-you-can-add-a-little-bit-more-detail-into-some-of-the-drawing.-i-loved-your-questions-they-were-soo-creative-and-fun-and-if-they-were-a-movie-i-would-go-and-see-in-a-theater-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-art-and-the-idea%2C-but-i-think-it-can-be-more-specific%2C-and-did-dinosaurs-evolve-in-any-way-since-the-prehistoric-times%3F-are-the-dinosaurs-in-the-wild%3F-or-kept-in-labs%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-all-the-topics-and-the-art-represented-it-really-well.-i-wonder-if-you'll-explore-stereotypical-world-problems-with-your-ideas-(because-that-seems-to-be-the-direction-you're-going).-have-you-thought-of-addressing-or-referencing-relevant-events-or-are-you-making-your-own-problems%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-can-hear-everything--make-the-drawings-more-neat-add-color--its-really-organized---- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-what-ifs.-i-found-what-if-the-bully-and-the-neard-switched-boddies-the-most-intresting. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-2nd-what-if-about-the-dogs-selling-food.-i-would-recommend-that-you-should-speak-louder-in-the-first-and-last-what-if-because-i-could-not-hear-it.--i-would-put-more-lighting-on-the-video-because-they-are-dark-so-it-makes-it-hard-to-see.-i-liked-all-the-ideas-for-the-what-ifs.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-what-ifs.-i-found-what-if-the-bully-and-the-neard-switched-boddies-the-most-intresting. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-what-ifs.-i-found-what-if-the-bully-and-the-neard-switched-boddies-the-most-intresting. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-guys-had-amazing-drawings-something-to-improve-on-is-to-it-looked-like-only-one-person-was-talking-and-you-should-add-some-color-so-it-could-look-better-awesome-job- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-your-what-ifs.-i-found-what-if-the-bully-and-the-neard-switched-boddies-the-most-intresting. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1)-i-really-like-the-drawing-for-the-last-one%2C-i-wish-i-could-have-heard-the-ending-though.-maybe-next-time-you-should-spread-the-times-apart-evenly-so-we-can-here-more-of-the-story%2C-or-the-second-what-if--i-think-you-could-be-a-little-more-clear-with-what-your-are-saying-it-would-very-helpful.-i-really--like-the-colors-you-use-in-all-of-them-and-also-how-you-lay-everything-out. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1)-i-really-like-the-drawing-for-the-last-one%2C-i-wish-i-could-have-heard-the-ending-though.-maybe-next-time-you-should-spread-the-times-apart-evenly-so-we-can-here-more-of-the-story%2C-or-the-second-what-if--i-think-you-could-be-a-little-more-clear-with-what-your-are-saying-it-would-very-helpful.-i-really--like-the-colors-you-use-in-all-of-them-and-also-how-you-lay-everything-out. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawings-were-really-amazing-and-clean-and-i-loved-your-creativity.---i-think-you-can-add-a-little-bit-more-detail-into-some-of-the-drawing.-i-loved-your-questions-they-were-soo-creative-and-fun-and-if-they-were-a-movie-i-would-go-and-see-it- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-first-one%3B-it-is-probably-my-favorite-so-far!-maybe-work-on-adding-more-context-later-in-the-story%3F-i-love-your-art-style-it's-really-clear-what-you're-conveying. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawings-and-the-animation-is-really-great.-maybe-go-into-more-detail-for-your-stories.-how-did-the-tiger-lose-its-teeth%3F-why-can%E2%80%99t-the-firefly-light-up%3F-etc.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-your-dinosaur-drawings!-i-am-a-bit-confused-about-the-background.-i-think-your-idea-is-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-second-idea-sounds-really-cool-from-an-artistic-standpoint%2Cjust-imagining-a-city-of-buildings-covered-in-onomatopoeia---the-first-idea-sounds-fun-with-us-adapting-to-our-new-environment- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-drawings-are-really-good%2C-have-you-thought-about-the-problem-in-the-story%3F-i-also-think-the-ideas-are-very-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-last-what-if.-it-makes-me-wonder-the-different-ways-the-story-could-go. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-second-idea-sounds-really-cool-from-an-artistic-standpoint%2Cjust-imagining-a-city-of-buildings-covered-in-onomatopoeia---the-first-idea-sounds-fun-with-us-adapting-to-our-new-environment- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-is-a-very-interesting-concept%2C-but-what-would-it-focus-on%2C-a-dinosaur%2C-a-human%2C-society-and-how-its-changed%3F-would-people-coexist-with-the-dinos%2C-would-dinos-be-the-dominant-species%3F-whatever-it-is-it-seems-interesting. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-creative-idea-for-the-first-one.-but-i-think-that-you-could-improve-by-explaining-what-the-hat-means.-but-i-also-like-your-drawing- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-dog-vs-dog-idea-is-very-cool-and-i-like-how-they-are-in-business.-you-could-expand-more-on-what-they-are-competing-in-specifically.-you-could-also-give-them-a-backstory-or-history-of-ancestors-battling-over-money-%3A).-and-finally%2C-i-like-how-you-made-people-buying-the-food-from-dogs. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-where-an-elephant-takes-the-place-of-an-astronaut-and-blasts-off-in-a-rocket-ship%2Fspaceship.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-why-an-elephant-would-even-go-onto-a-spaceship-and-what-would-it-do-while-in-space%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-of-the-dog-wanting-to-be-a-cat%2C-i-think-it's-very-creative-and-i-really-love-the-drawing%2C-it-looks-like-you-put-so-much-effort-into-it.-i-noticed-that-the-cat-is-looking-meanly-at-the-dog-so-was-the-cats-wished-fulfilled%3F-did-they-already-swap-and-maybe-the-cat-didn't-like-it%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-were-great!-maybe-add-more-detail-for-the-photos.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-world's-salvation-brought-upon-by-demons%2C-because-so-many-religions-and-people's-beliefs-on-angels%2C-gods%2C-etc...-bringing-happiness-and-salvation-one-day-would-be-untrue.-so-it-makes-you-think-would-people-panic-at-the-sight-of-demons%3F-would-they-trust-them%3F-would-they-accept-their-fate-rather-than-going-with-the-demons%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-were-really-nice--you-guys-should-just-speak-up-a-little-more.-it-was-great-but-it-was-hard-to-hear-really-good-job 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ideas-were-great%2C-i-found-the-santa-one-the-most-interesting-because-it-was-funny%2C-maybe-try-to-be-more-clear-on-the-last-one-because-i-couldn't-make-out-what-was-being-said.-i-liked-how-there-was-a-bit-of-humor-in-the-what-ifs%2C-like-the-santa-six-pack. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-was-a-good-concept-by-far-good-art-work-your-really-good-but-one-thing-its-already-been-done-but-you-had-a-good-concept. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-drawings--practice-more-on-your-speaking--make-audio-more-clear- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-that-it-was-creative.--maybe-add-more-color-to-the-background-of-the-pictures.--also%2C-you-should-add-more-detail-to-the-faces.-but-over-all-i-really-like-the-ideas-you-had. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-that-it-was-creative.--maybe-add-more-color-to-the-background-of-the-pictures.--also%2C-you-should-add-more-detail-to-the-faces.-but-over-all-i-really-like-the-ideas-you-had. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-this.-very-good-idea!! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-video-was-a-bit-short%2C-maybe-add-to-it.-the-drawing-was-amazing%2C-i-really-like-the-dinosaur.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-drawings-are-fantastic!-however%2C-it-feels-like-these-don't-exactly-have-the-most-potential-present-right-now.-ask-yourself%2C-what-would-dogs-selling-food-at-stalls-be-different-from-humans-selling-stuff-at-food-stalls%3F-what-kinds-of-stories-could-you-tell-with-an-elephant-in-space%3F-and-lastly%2C-this-is-the-only-thing-i-think-was-a-bit-lacking-in-presentation%2C-was-that-i-couldn't-make-out-the-last-what-if-question.-besides-these-issues%2C-i-feel-these-can-be-made-into-something-greater. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-believe-if-you-added-to-the-bully-and-nerd-story-%22-what-if-the-stereotypical-bully-and-nerd-switched-bodies-and-had-live-live-a-day-in-there-life--i-think-you-should-add-some-more-detail--your-are-super-good-at-art-keep-going- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea%2C-i-think-it-could-explain-the-relationship-between-dinos-and-the-humans-and-how-much-different-nature-is-with-them-in-it-and-would-humans-think-of-them-as-just-animals-or-dangerous-creatures-to-stay-away-from%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-all-of-your-ides-they-all-had-a-very-clear-theme-and-it-came-across-really-well-.-i-had-a-hard-time-at-first-understanding-who-the-girl-in-the-picture-was-with-the-reptile-and-what-role-she-was-playing-so-maybe-make-the-magic-in-her-had-stand-out-more-so-your-eye-can-come-right-to-it-%2C--the-drawings-were-clear-and-it-really-showed-and-gave-me--a-really-good-representation-of-your-what-if-. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-hat-that-can-turn-into-anything-you-want.-it's-a-very-interesting-concept%2C-as-you-could-do-so-much-with.-so-much-could-be-explored.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-the-hat-is-magical%2C-or-just-works-that-way.-i-also-wonder-more-about-whether-there-are-consequences-for-using-the-hat.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-comedy-aspect%2C-but-it-might-make-it-better-if-the-what-if's-didn't-all-involve-hats-and-used-different-themes%2C-i-also-like-the-creativity-in-the-themes%2C-but-i-like-the-drawings-and-colors. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-2nd-one.-i-think-you-should-turn-the-music-off-because-i-could't-hear-what-they-were-saying.-i-think-you-should-add-more-to-the-last-one-because-i-was-confused-one-what-the-what-if-was.--i-liked-the-first-what-if-too.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-comedy-aspect%2C-but-it-might-make-it-better-if-the-what-if's-didn't-all-involve-hats-and-used-different-themes%2C-i-also-like-the-creativity-in-the-themes%2C-but-i-like-the-drawings-and-colors. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-2nd-one.-i-think-you-should-turn-the-music-off-because-i-could't-hear-what-they-were-saying.-i-think-you-should-add-more-to-the-last-one-because-i-was-confused-one-what-the-what-if-was.--i-liked-the-first-what-if-too.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawings-and-concepts-were-really-well-thought-out.-i-think-maybe-you-could-elaborate-on-the-ghost-concept-if-that%E2%80%99s-what-you-were-to-choose.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool-and-creative.-i-would-try-to-anunciate-more.-i-like-how-you-made-the-video.--i-wuld-change-how-you-made-the-video-. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-drawings-and-concepts-were-really-well-thought-out.-i-think-maybe-you-could-elaborate-on-the-ghost-concept-if-that%E2%80%99s-what-you-were-to-choose.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-found-the-elephant-one-interesting-because-what-if-it-lands-on-an-alien-planet-or-gets-sucked-into-a-wormhole-i-didnt-find-the-dog-one-as-intersting-as-this-you-could-replace-the-dogs-with-any-animal%2Cthis-isnt-a-dog-exclusive-story-i-couldnt-understand-the-last-one 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-firefly-idea-was-very-good.--it-was-original-and-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-all-the-art-its-really-nice.-maybe-speak-a-little-clearer-when-you-present.-over-all-i-think-there-were-a-lot-of-interesting-ideas. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-magic-hat-idea-is-really-interesting%2C-i-think-you-should-make-it-have-a-limit-or-a-downside.-i-like-the-design-of-the-hat-and-world. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-firefly-idea-was-very-good.--it-was-original-and-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-firefly-idea-was-very-good.--it-was-original-and-creative. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-art-for-the-first-one!-would-santa-be-playing-against-reindeers-or-people%3F-the-second-ones-concept-is-also-very-nice.-i-am-confused-if-its-just-one-hat-or-all-the-population-has-one%3F-i-like-how-original-they-are! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-first-one!-i-think-there-should-be-some-reason-behind-why-it-cant-light-up-however. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-find-it-interesting-about-the-idea-if-everyone-had-a-super-power.-would-they-be-used-for-good%2C-evil%2C-jobs%2C-etc.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-the-idea-of-how-super-powers-can-contribute-to-our-civilization.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-can-hear-it-really-good--spend-more-time-on-your-drawings---be-more-specific-about-your-what-ifs-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-find-the-most-interesting-was-the-black-cat-having-good-luck.-would-someone-end-up-befriending-the-cat-and-benefiting-from-it%3F-what-ends-up-happening-to-the-cat%3F-does-the-cat-exchange-good-luck-by-putting-bad-luck-on-itself%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-elephant-in-space.-how-does-it-survive%3F-i-liked-the-drawings.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-can-hear-it-really-good--spend-more-time-on-your-drawings---be-more-specific-about-your-what-ifs-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-were-really-good-great-job-the-only-thing-that-sounded-weird-is-the-cars-on-the-background-so-it-was-really-good. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-one-with-the-monster-because-it-was-original 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-abstract-your-ideas-are.-i-do-think-that-you-should-lower-the-volume-of-the-music-so-what-you're-saying-is-more-clear.-your-drawings-are-really-cool-looking 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-were-really-good-great-job-the-only-thing-that-sounded-weird-is-the-cars-on-the-background-so-it-was-really-good. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-depictions-of-your-ideas-were-good%2C-but-i-could-not-hear-your-what-ifs.-i-could%2C-however-i-could-understand-what-they-were-from-your-drawings 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-coloring%2C-i-think-that-the-drawings-could-have-had-batter-sight-to-them%2C-and-i-like-how-you-showed-the-whole-page. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-were-really-good-great-job-the-only-thing-that-sounded-weird-is-the-cars-on-the-background-so-it-was-really-good. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-coloring%2C-i-think-that-the-drawings-could-have-had-batter-sight-to-them%2C-and-i-like-how-you-showed-the-whole-page. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-one-with-the-monster-because-it-was-original 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-drawings-came-to-life.-it-made-me-wonder-about-how-the-characters-would-act-and-would-they-know-if-they-came-from-paper. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-were-really-good-great-job-the-only-thing-that-sounded-weird-is-the-cars-on-the-background-so-it-was-really-good. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-drawings-came-to-life.-it-made-me-wonder-about-how-the-characters-would-act-and-would-they-know-if-they-came-from-paper. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-one-with-the-monster-because-it-was-original 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-last-one%2C-time%3Dmoney%2C- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-about-the-earth-being-in-the-shape-of-a-football-was-very-interesting.-what-ifs-about-the-earth-having-a-different-shape-aren't-so-common%2C-so-it's-a-pretty-interesting-idea-to-me.-what-i'm-wondering-about-is-the-what-if-for-bugs-running-a-grocery-store.-are-the-bugs-sentient%2C-complex-creatures-like-us-human-beings%2C-or-are-they-being-controlled%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-dog-idea-and-wonder-what-they-would-sell.-i-think-the-elephant-going-to-space-has-a-lot-of-potential-and-is-a-very-good-idea-that-could-be-expanded-upon-such-as%3A-what-will-the-elephant-think%3F-does-he-have-his-own-huge-space-suit%3F-and-what-would-he-find%3F-the-alien-was-also-a-fun-idea 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-thought-the-art-and-the-concept-for-the-first-one-was-done-really-well.-the-concept-was-there-for-the-second-one-but-the-art-didn't-really-reflect-it-well.-what-if-you-try-to-emphasize-your-characters-coming-out-of-the-paper-to-represent-them-really-coming-to-life. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-concept%2C-the-drawing's-really-well-done%2C-this-is-just-lacking-in-a-few-critical-areas.-first-of-all%2C-your-what-if-is-not-spoken-aloud.-secondly%2C-i-know-each-group-is-supposed-to-have-more-than-one-what-if-statement.-besides-that%2C-i-am-however-glad-you-guys-could-come-to-a-conclusion-on-a-what-if-you-all-really-liked. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-santa%2C-i-think-it-could-be-better-if-the-hat-idea-went-more-into-detail-about-the-hat.-very-creative! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-ideas%2Fconcepts-a-lot.-maybe-fix-the-cutoff-at-the-end.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-idea-about-santa-hoopin!-we-all-know-that-santa-has-massive-muscles-so-he-would-probably-dominate-any-basketball-league%2C-i-wonder-how-you-could-further-progress-this-story%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-we-would-live-in-fear-of-insects-.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-would-we-live-and-where. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-about-socks%2C-i-think-this-idea-has-a-lot-of-potential.-i-wonder-how-the-different-types%2C-brands%2C-and-colors-of-socks-would-differently-interact-with-each-other.-i-personally-am-a-big-fan-of-socks-i-kinda-think-they-are-cute%2C-good-idea! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-idea-about-when-the-socks-went-in-the-washing-machine-they-would-go-through-a-portal.-it-made-me-wonder-if-anyone-would-find-out-about-the-portal-and-what-happened-in-the-other-world. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-monster-one.-it-was-really-original-and-i-think-it-would-make-a-great-plot. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-variety-of-your-ideas.-the-dogs-who-have-to-one-up-each-other-leaves-a-lot-of-room-for-humor-and-vignettes-(or-little-scenes)-that-you-could-insert-throughout-the-story-to-add-character-development%2C-humor%2C-emotional-moments%2C-etc.-how-did-the-dogs-become-business-rivals%3F-are-they-in-it-for-the-competition-or-do-they-dislike-each-other%3F-or-do-they-find-out-that-they-are-actually-long-lost-littermates-or-have-a-past-history-together%3F-for-your-other-ideas%2C-what-would-happen-if-an-elephant-went-into-space%3F-or-if-an-alien-was-dropped-to-earth%3F-lots-of-room-in-those-unique-ideas-for-how-that-would-disrupt-what-we-consider-to-be-normal.-nice! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-about-space-and-time%2C-how-would-it-would-though%3F-would-different-people-enter-other-people%E2%80%99s-realities%3F-could-their-be-multiple-different-personalities-of-the-same-person%3F-could-the-different-personalities-meet-each-other.%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-about-space-and-time%2C-how-would-it-would-though%3F-would-different-people-enter-other-people%E2%80%99s-realities%3F-could-their-be-multiple-different-personalities-of-the-same-person%3F-could-the-different-personalities-meet-each-other.%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-about-space-and-time%2C-how-would-it-would-though%3F-would-different-people-enter-other-people%E2%80%99s-realities%3F-could-their-be-multiple-different-personalities-of-the-same-person%3F-could-the-different-personalities-meet-each-other.%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-two-dogs-selling-things.-i-makes-me-wonder-about-where-and-what-they-would-sell-and-would-they-be-competitors. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-if-a-smile-could-really-light-up-a-room.-it-made-me-wonder-about-if-only-one-person-had-this-ability-or-did-everyone. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow%2C-totally-blown-away-by-these-ideas!-waking-up-having-a-different-life-would-be-a-challenging-story-to-tell%2C-i.e.-would-you-know-about-your-past-'selves'%3F-would-you-be-able-to-have-any-relationships%2Fconnections-in-the-world%3F-how-would-that-change-the-meaning-of-your-life%3F-and-your-third-idea-brings-a-whole-new-meaning-to-searching-for-oneself!-that-idea-has-incredible-potential-for-mystery%2C-twists-and-overall-richness-to-every-aspect-of-your-story.-how-did-you-become-a-missing-person%3F-who-is-the-villain-this-story%3F-and-how-did-you-get-interested-in-looking-for-this-missing-child-in-the-first-place%3F-love-it!! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-moon-idea-interesting-because-i-saw-a-movie-trailer-just-like-that 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-when-the-world-had-suddenly-gone-dark-%26-only-had-the-light-of-others-to-guide-you.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-the-world-will-some-day%2C-also-i-love-this%2C-the-art-was-just-perfect!- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/so-many-possibilities-of-where-you-could-take-the-clever-idea-of-a-hat-that-turns-into-anything.-who-has-the-hat-and-can-they-control-it-or-does-it-operate-on-its-own%3F-what-are-the-rules-of-the-hat's-world%3F-i-also-like-your-third-idea-of-colors-of-the-world-being-different.-are-they-different-based-on-the-point-of-view-of-each-person-or-just-the-rules-of-that-world-are-different%3F-and-what-would-be-the-consequences-or-benefits-of-colors-being-different%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-magic-hat-it-makes-me-wonder-about-who-made-the-hat- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-last.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-people-would-always-want-to-do-those-activities-if-they-can-go-to-the-past 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea--i-found-interesting-was--what-if--there-was-secret-diaper-under-your-house.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-it-if-that-would-be-under-my-house. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-there-was-a-santa-that-could-pay-basketball-with-a-magic-hat---ir-makes-me-wonder-more-about-santa-playing-basketball 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-was-good 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-when-the-world-had-suddenly-gone-dark-%26-only-had-the-light-of-others-to-guide-you.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-the-world-will-some-day%2C-also-i-love-this%2C-the-art-was-just-perfect!- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i--found-the-first-one-the-most-interesting-it-makes-me-wonder-if-that-firefly-feels-sad-or-any-other-feelings. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-all-3-ideas-interesting-but-if-i-were-to-pick-one-it-would-probably-be-the-one-of-the-dreams-actually-being-a-portal-to-another-dimension. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-if-you-could-see-dead-bodies.-it-made-me-wonder-more-about-what-it-would-be-like-to-see-my-poppa-again.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-what-if-humans-and-their-pets-switched-minds. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/(1).the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-is...what-if-our-ideas-happened-in-real-life-because-many-people-don't-have-enough-money-to-buy-things-to-survive.-(2)-it-makes-me-wonder-if-it-would-be-a-good-thing-for-the-world-to-help-poor%2C-homeless-people%2Cetc. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-girl-after-she-has-died-turns-into-a-shadow.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-she-died-and-why-she-turned-into-a-shadow-and-i-wonder-what-happens-while-she-is-a-shadow!-%3A) 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-three-kingdoms.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-there-parents-would-react-to-them-being-friends. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-crazy-zoo--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-the-animals-are-crazy-enough-to-hurt-people-or-are-they-just-silly 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-money-disappeared.--it-makes-me-wonder-where-the-money-is-going.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-loved-most-was-the-last-one-and-the-first-one-keep-up-the-good-work- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-one-about-the-shrinking-when-your-anxious-the-most-interesting-and-it-makes-me-wonder-how-many-people-could-relate-to-how-that-feels- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-you-could-teleport-to-different-places.-i-wonder-if-this-could-happen-in-real-life.-that-would-be-cool.-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-that-i-found-most-interesting-was-%22what-if-birds-turned-into-dinosaurs%22-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-there-food-diet 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-magic-hat-that-makes-anything-you-want.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-many-times-can-you--make-stuf 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-you-could-teleport-to-different-places.-i-wonder-if-this-could-happen-in-real-life.-that-would-be-cool.-- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-talking-to-stuffed-animals.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-you-would-make-a-story-about-it 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-what-if-history-could-be-visited-is-my-favorite-idea 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-i-love-this-idea-would-it-be-posible-to-tame-them 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-visiting-history-the-most-interesting-it-makes-me-wonder-where-people-would-like-to-visit-first. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-crazy-zoo-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-many-animals-their-are.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this-idea-i-would-love-to-have-more-information-about-it-good-job 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-that-dream-crusher-one-because-it-teaches-you-not-judge-someone-by-their-looks-and-if-this-turned-into-a-movie-it-could-have-big-potential-just-from-the-story-you-told-about-him.-its-very-unique! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-dreams.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-happen-if-you-never-woke-up 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-creepy-house-idea 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-love-is-the-colorless-one.--it-makes-me-wonder-if-you-could-do-some-more-of-these- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-%22every-time-you-took-one-step-you-go-1km%22.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-cars-would-work. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-magic-hat-one-that-can-turn-into-anything-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-the-hat-is-in-some-good-hands-or-is-with-a-bad-guy 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-%22every-time-you-took-one-step-you-go-1km%22.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-cars-would-work. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/he-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-if-you-could-go-thought-portals.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-would-you-make-the-portals. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-third-what-if.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-person-would-react-to-that. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-prince-that-fell-in-love-with-the-witch-was-the-most-interesting%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-if-he-knew-she-was-a-witch-or-not. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-one-that-has-potential-for-pixar-is-the-magic-cat-because-i--think-a-lot-of-younger--children-might-like-the-thought-of-a-cat-that-could-change-shape. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-one-that-has-potential-for-pixar-is-the-magic-cat-because-i--think-a-lot-of-younger--children-might-like-the-thought-of-a-cat-that-could-change-shape. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-loved-most-was-the-if-the-grass-was-blue-and-the-sky-was-green--it-makes-me-wonder-more-if-yu-could-come-up-with-some-more-ideas-on-that-topic 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-two-dogs-competing-for-the-highest-sales.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-dogs-communicate-(do-they-talk%3F).-i-also-am-wondering-what-their-sales-pitch-is.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-fun-ideas%2C-i'm-most-interested-in-this-hat-which-can-turn-into-anything-you-want.-i-wonder-who-created-the-hat-and-if-only-one-exists%3F-would-it-be-a-blessing-or-a-curse%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-nice-ideas%2C-i-love-this-idea-of-%22work-earth%22-and-%22living-earth%22....would-they-have-different-people-or-would-they-go-back-and-fourth%3F%3F%3F-i-wonder-what-would-happen-if-the-two-earths-met%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/fascinating-ideas%2C-i-love-all-of-them.-i'm-most-interested-in-this-person-who-lived-through-all-of-human-history...it-makes-me-wonder-what-they-would-tell-others%2C-and-would-they-still-be-learning-today%3F-or...would-they-hit-at-point-where-they-had-all-the-answers.-what-would-they-tell-our-modern-civilization%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-a-world-where-creatures-didn't-do-their-jobs.-i-think-that's-fun-because-we-could-learn-about-jobs-creatures-do-that-we-never-thought-of-(we-all-know-why-bee's-are-important-but-maybe-we-don't-all-know-why-ants-or-flies-are-important%3F)-super-interesting!!!-can't-wait-to-see-more.-i-wonder-what-would-go-wrong%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/fun-ideas.-i'm-most-interested-in-this-idea-where-phones-are-illegal.-i-wonder-what-caused-this-to-happen-and-if-it-makes-the-world-a-better-place%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-this-robot-being-in-charge-of-last-2-humans%2C-and%2C-the-child-finding-food-for-first-time.-those-really-are-original-ideas.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-would-be-lost-in-a-world-without-normal-food....great-ideas 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-all-of-these-are-great%2C-hard-to-pick.-i'm-most-interested-in-this-idea-of-a-city-for-kids%2C-that-sounds-like-a-ton-of-fun.-makes-me-wonder-how-kids-would-design-a-city-differently%2C-would-there-be-no-cars%3F-who-would-be-in-charge%3F-can't-wait-to-see-more 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-this-idea-of-a-society-with-no-standards%2C-that's-fascinating...i-wonder-if-things-would-work-out-and-what-new-things-we-would-do-that-normally-we-didn't-allow.-would-the-world-be-a-better-place%3F-maybe-you-could-bring-the-ai-into-this-story-as-well-to-make-the-rules-%3A) 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-ideas-and-drawings.-i'm-interested-in-this-idea-where-everyone-in-the-world-has-a-super-power%2C-i-wonder-if-that-would-make-someone-without-a-super-power-the-new-hero%3F%3F-where-did-these-powers-come-from. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-this-entire-galaxy-underwater-idea...i-wonder-where-all-the-water-came-from-and-if-sea-creatures-would-take-over%3F-how-would-humans-figure-out-how-to-adapt-to-this-world%3F-lots-of-interested-ways-this-could-go... 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-this-2nd-ice-age-idea%2C-i-wonder-how-people-would-adapt-and-if-they-would-find-a-way-to-survive%3F-what-caused-the-2nd-ice-age%3F-can't-wait-to-see-more-from-this-group. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-interested-in-this-baby-bird-which-lives-on-a-cliff-top.-would-they-stay-on-it-their-whole-life%3F-where-did-they-get-their-fear-of-heights-from%3F-i-wonder-if-they-would-overcome-it-or-learn-to-love-life-without-flying%3F-maybe-it-would-be-a-good-thing%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ooo-i'm-interested-in-the-4-element-tribes%2C-i'd-love-to-know-the-backstory-for-how-they-formed-those-groups.-i-wonder-who-would-be-most-powerful%3F-would-they-learn-to-live-in-harmony-or-would-it-be-perpetual-war%3F-would-they-use-their-elements-in-battle%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-ideas%2C-i-definitely-am-most-interested-in-a-world-without-phones!-i-wonder-how-that-would-change-the-way-people-communicate-and-meet-each-other.-would-it-improve-their-lives-in-the-end%3F%3F-can't-wait-to-see-more. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/amazing-ideas-and-drawings.-i'm-most-interested-in-the-idea-where-children-have-same-knowledge-as-adults....i-wonder-what-the-role-of-adults-would-be%3F-would-it-make-their-lives-easier-or-more-difficult%3F-i-also-wonder-where-the-kids-got-that-knowledge%2C-were-they-born-with-it%3F%3F-would-there-be-anymore-things-to-%22learn%22%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/fantastic-ideas%2C-i-think-i'm-most-interested-in-%22the-whole-world-became-technology%22%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-would-happen-to-all-the-plants-and-animals%3F-would-it-make-our-lives-better-or-worse%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ooo%2C-super-interested-in-the-%22what-if-everyone-was-the-same%22-idea%2C-lots-of-ways-that-could-go.-i-wonder-if-people-try-to-find-ways-to-be-different%2C-and-what-is-lost-in-a-world-with-no-variety%3F-do-people-find-way-to-%22break-free%22-and-be-themselves%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/amazing-drawings-and-concepts.-i'm-most-interested-in-the-group-of-friends-who-took-odd-jobs%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-they-are-saving-up-for%3F-and-does-the-money-help-them-get-what-they-want%3F-or-does-it-backfire..... 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-drawings!!!--(your-video-was-cut-off-btw)%2C-i-love-the-shark-vegetarian-one.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-food-chain-would-be-different-in-the-ocean%2C-and-how-people-would-treat-sharks-differently%3F-i-wonder-if-humans-still-thought-they-were-meat-eaters-as-well.-i-can-already-see-that-shark-as-a-really-funny-character-i-hope-you-develop-them. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-original-ideas%2C-i'm-most-interested-in-the-sound-which-can-control-people...but-the-teleportation-into-tv-shows-is-a-close-second.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-sound-it-is-and-if-someone-created-this-technology-or-it's-just-the-way-the-world-works.-for-the-tv-show-one%2C-i-wonder-if-people-would-enjoy-going-into-the-shows-and-if-they-could-get-back-out%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice-work%2C-i-love-the-idea-of-people-who-don't-speak-the-same-language!-it-makes-me-wonder-how-they-would-find-a-shared-way-to-understand-each-other...i-think-that-would-make-an-awesome-story...can't-wait-to-see-more 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-nice-ideas%2C-i'm-most-interested-in-the-face-turning-color-of-your-feelings-idea.-i-wonder-how-that-would-change-our-lives%2C-would-it-make-it-easier-to-communicate%3F-would-it-change-the-way-we-dress-(hide-our-faces%3F) 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-most-interested-in-the-alien-family-story%2C-lots-of-potential-there.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-they-like-earth%2Fhumans-and-what-they-would-'want'-from-us.-do-they-just-want-to-fit-in%2C-or-are-they-studying-our-culture%3F-can't-wait-to-find-out 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-nice-work.-the-video-was-cut-off-slightly%2C-but-the-first-%22copy-earth%22-idea-interests-me-most.-i-wonder-what-stage-of-development-that-earth-is-at%2C-behind-us-or-ahead-of-us%3F-maybe-it-helps-us-see-the-future%3F%3F-super-cool 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/super-cute-ideas.-the-animals-who-talk-to-fruit-is-the-most-interesting-to-me...totally-original.-i-wonder-if-they-would-get-along%3F-who-would-be-in-charge%3F-and-what-would-the-fruit-want%3F-can't-wait-to-see-more 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-original-ideas%2C-i'm-torn...i-think-the-portal-idea-interests-me-most%2C-but-because-i-like-scary-movies-i'm-interested-in-the-house-of-the-dead-too....hm...it-makes-me-wonder-who-created-the-portals-and-why%3F-does-something-go-wrong-with-the-portals%3F%3F-maybe-we-learn-that-instant-travel-isn't-always-a-good-thing%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/interesting-ideas%2C-i'm-most-interested-in-%22what-if-homes-stopped-being-built%22.....i-wonder-why-that-happens-and-what-people-would-do-instead%3F-would-it-lead-to-a-better-society%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/cool-ideas%2C-i'm-most-interested-in-the-underground-world.-i-wonder-if-the-above-ground-world-would-know-about-them%3F-how-did-they-end-up-down-there%3F-can't-wait-to-see-more 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/fascinating.-most-interested-in-a-world-with-no-rain....i-wonder-what-people-would-do-to-make-up-for-that.-would-there-be-no-plants%3F-would-humans-create-the-rain%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool-ideas...i-like-this-aging-backwards-idea.-makes-me-wonder-why-this-is-happening-and-what-would-it-be-like-with-parents-who-were-younger-looking-than-their-kids.-would-their-brains-age-backwards-too%3F-can't-wait-to-learn-more! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool%2C-i'm-most-interested-in-waking-up-with-super-powers.-makes-me-wonder-what-a-'normal'-person-would-do-suddenly-with-power-they-didn't-know-how-to-control%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool.-i'm-most-interested-in-the-dreams-leading-to-another-dimension!-that-sounds-fascinating-and-great-for-a-short-story.-i-wonder-how-they-get-out%2C-and-what-they-learn-while-they-are-there-about-our-world%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow....i-think-my-favorite-is-the-%22machines-make-decisions-for-them%22%2C-it-feels-like-we-are-already-almost-in-that-world-so-there-is-lots-of-potential-to-see-where-it-leads.-does-it-make-our-lives-better-or-worse%3F-i-wonder-if-the-machines-are-aware-of-themselves%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/really-original-ideas.....that-third-one-is-chilling.-i-love-all-of-them-but-the-third-could-have-a-really-interesting-twist.-i-wonder-how-the-main-character-would-first-start-their-search-for-the-missing-person%3F-can't-wait-to-see-what-you-do-next 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oooo-i-love-the-%22height-is-currency%22-idea....that's-super-interesting.-i-wonder-how-the-world-came-to-be-that-way-and-how-short-people-would-deal-with-that-world...do-the-tall-people-run-the-world%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-also-seem-like-a-really-great-kid.-you-did-an-awesome-job.-all-of-us-have-had-problems-with-stuff-like-that-before.-love-it! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/as-a-member-of-this-team%2C-its-just-a-theme-used-to-get-our-point-across.-i-read-your-other-comments-on-other-videos-and-i-just-wanted-to-say-you-seem-like-a-very-nice-person.-thanks-4-da-feedback! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/my-favorite-was-the-one-about-the-smile.-it-would-be-so-entertaining.-how-would-you-get-one-of-those-smiles%3F-y'all-did-a-great-job-with-the-video. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-about-the-monster.-it-sorta-breaks-the-stereotype-of-monsters-being-scary-and-not-scared-of-stuff.-i-love-it! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-this-idea!!!-it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-we-would-have-to-change-our-lives-to-stay-safe. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow%2C-very-good.-i-think-the-children-being-children-forever-is-the-most-interesting-to-me.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-'old'-children-would-act%3F-what-would-be-different-about-society%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-absolutely-loved-this-one!!!!-you-guys-did-a-great-job-coming-up-with-interesting-ideas!-the-one-i-found-most-interesting-was-%22what-if-a-solar-flare-allowed-us-to-interact-with-technology%3F%22.-it-makes-me-think-about-how-much-time-we-spend-on-our-devices.-you-guys-did-a-really-great-job-on-the-video! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-ideas%2C-i-love-the-germs-%22what-if'-the-most-because-it-makes-me-think-of-all-the-characters-you-could-come-up-with.-i-wonder-what-the-germs-would-want-in-the-story%3F%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-%22what-if-the-nerd-and-the-bully-switched-bodies%3F%22.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-home-they-would-have-to-change-their-attitude-in-order-to-fit-in-to-the-others-social-groups. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-alien-and-the-skate-park.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-aliens-would-interact-with-humans-if-they-came-to-earth. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-robot-idea.-will-humans-revolt-and-try-to-fight%3F-or-are-the-robots-to-advanced%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-reminds-me-of-a-story-i've-heard-before.-stuffed-animals-and-monsters-were-fighting-for-generations.-but-on-one-particular-night-they-had-a-dance-off.-i-wonder-if-you-could-make-the-stuffed-animals-fail%2C-and-that's-how-nightmares-happen%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-the-moon-and-waves.-i-wonder-if-the-mushroom-and-cow-are-humanoid-or-in-their-usual-forms%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-first-idea-the-most.-would-she-ever-find-love-in-this-life-since-not-in-the-last%3F-i-wonder-how-the-hunter-will-fall-in-love-with-her%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-ghost-idea-the-most%3F-would-the-ghosts-use-the-phones-to-call-their-loved-ones%2C-or-would-they-use-them-to-haunt-their-grudges%3F-i-wonder-if-the-cats-and-dogs-could-be-in-a-race-to-get-to-mars-or-another-planet%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-your-idea-about-the-clown-and-cat-the-most.-there-is-even-potential-to-set-the-clown-story-back-in-mid-evil-times-with-a-traveling-circus.-i-wonder-if-your-clown-had-a-reason-to-steal-other-than-just-for-extra-profits%3F-is-he-trying-to-pay-off-a-debt%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-first-concept-the-most-because-of-all-the-routes-that-could-be-taken-with-it.-i-wonder-if-you-could-make-the-waves-have-a-goal-to-make-your-story-have-a-point%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/now-that-last-one%E2%80%94that's-the-one-i'm-most-interested-in.-that-boy's-going-somewhere%E2%80%94%22what-if-the-milky-way-had-milk%3F%22%E2%80%94phenomenal.-i-love-it-so-much.-it's-simple%E2%80%94but-it-really-captures-your-attention.-i-mean%E2%80%94it's-a-similar-reason-why-the-moon-being-made-of-cheese-is-such-an-amusing-and-entertaining-thought-for-us.-very-good.-scooting-back-to-that-first-one%E2%80%94i-love-thinking-about-this-sort-of-thing.-there's-just-some-wonderful-aesthetic-appeal-to-nature-reclaiming-the-things-we've-built-over%E2%80%94some-of-the-most-beautiful-things-are-both-manmade-and-natural.-i-recommend-looking-at%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94any-of-the-ghibli-films-for-reference%E2%80%94also-check-out-origin%3A-spirits-of-the-past-and-patema-inverted.-i-actually-have-a-list-of-plants-that-i-think-have-a-good-chance-of-taking-over-the-world-(or-plants-that-i-think-would-just-be-pretty-if-they-did).-among-those-plants%2C-i-have-bamboo-(because-it's-a-grass-and-it-grows-super-quickly-and-can-multiply-from-its-roots)%2C-and-i-have-mangrove-(because-it-has-a-long-root-system%2C-can-also-multiply-from-its-roots%2C-can-send-off-seeds-through-the-ocean%2C-and-so-on).-following-that-same-logic%2C-i-mean%2C-you-can't-not-enjoy-thinking-about-the-apocalypse-(i-mean%2C-well%2C-actually-you-can%2C-but-i-enjoy-thinking-about-it%E2%80%94from-an-aesthetics-standpoint%E2%80%94and-'cuz-it's-small-kine-dope).-but%2C-uh%2C-i-feel-like-in-most-apocalyptic-scenarios%2C-only-a-few-people-tend-to-survive.-how-do-you-plan-to-make-it-unique%3F-is-there-a-resolution%3F-what-kind-of-apocalypse-is-it%3F-can-the-damage-be-undone%3F-then%2C-circling-back-to-milky-milky-way%E2%80%94how-much-milk-is-in-it%3F-i'm-assuming-you-mean-the-milk-is-amongst-the-stars-and-in-space-('cuz-i-mean%2C-since-earth-is-in-the-milky-way-we-technically-have-milk-in-the-milky-way)%3F-finally%2C-what-causes-the-flowers-to-take-over-the-world%3F-are-there-still-humans%3F-are-the-flowers-a-threat-to-them-in-any-way%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hey!-super-fun-opening%2C-and-beautiful-color-pencil-(and-i-love-how-it's-one-long-continuous-drawing).-i-don't-know-what-it-is-about-narwhals%2C-but-everyone-likes-them-a-whole-lot%2C-so%2C-you-chose-a-very-good-subject.-and%2C-having-them-being-skilled-at-construction-is-just-so-novel-a-concept%E2%80%94it-just-sounds-interesting.-also%2C-ocean-train%3F-yes-please.-i've-always-loved-trains%E2%80%94they're-just-so-appealing.-aesthetically%2C-mechanically%E2%80%94both-the-exterior-and-the-interior-of-the-cabins.-in-fact%2C-my-favorite-toys-growing-up-were-thomas-the-tank-engine-trains%E2%80%94and%2C-the-ocean-is-just-generally-hype%2C-so%2C-like%2C-there-we-go.-furthermore%2C-the-cure-all-to-climate-change-is-a-fun-idea%E2%80%94especially-with-your-footnote-that-it-can-only-be-used-once%3B-i-can-see-it-becoming-a-%22will-we-learn-from-history-or-will-we-repeat-our-mistakes%22-kind-of-dealio%E2%80%94a-supremely-important-lesson.-m'k%E2%80%94let-me-ask-some-questions-now.-starting-off-simple%2C-why-did-you-choose-narwhals-for-your-idea%3F-is-there-a-characteristic-about-them-that-makes-them-excel-at-construction%3F-on-that-subject%2C-why-did-you-choose-construction%3F-why-not-something-else%3F-then%2C-for-the-train%E2%80%94where-does-it-go%3F-why-is-it-underwater%3F-who-are-the-passengers%3F-are-they-human%3F-are-there-even-passengers%3F-are-the-cabins-pressurized-like-an-airplane-or-a-submarine%3F-finally%2C-who-made-the-wand%3F-where-did-it-come-from%3F-who-has-access-to-it%3F-who-makes-the-decision-about-when-to-use-it%3F-is-it-in-government-hands%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-interesting-work-of-commentary%E2%80%94it's-extremely-relevant%3A-it's-clear-how-it-pokes-fun-at-perfectionism%2C-conformism%2C-unrealistic-expectations%2C-self-deprecation%2C-lack-of-self-care%2C-lack-of-accessibility%2C-lack-of-accommodation%2C-and%2C-as-you-mentioned%2C-ableism.-but%2C-uh%E2%80%94i-do-have-a-few-questions.-maybe-its-the-lack-of-visuals-that-made-it-difficult-to-understand%2C-but-you-kept-referring-to-box-hands-and-prong-hands%E2%80%94are-these-supposed-to-be-visual-representations-of-ability-or-standards%3F-like%2C-are-the-box-hands-indicative-of-the-kind-of-person-expected-within-the-society%2C-and-are-the-prong-hands-representative-of-other-styles-of-learning-and-other-types-of-people-that-aren't-as-accepted%3F-you-also-mentioned-drawing-boxes%3F-is-drawing-boxes-all-that-they-do-within-this-society%3F-and%2C-the-main-character-is%2C-so-to-say%2C-a-round-peg-trying-to-fit-into-a-square-hole%3F-try-playing-with-the-idea-to-come-up-with-three-variations-of-it.-for-future-reference%2C-during-these-early-stages-of-iteration%2C-you-might-want-to-try-more-rapid-ideation-as-opposed-to-going-so-in-depth-with-one-idea.-remember%2C-this-exercise-was-a-%22what-if%22%E2%80%94which-you-give-comprehensively-within-the-first-slide.-still%2C-wonderful-idea%2C-and-i-look-forward-to-seeing-what-you-do-later. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yay%2C-alchemy!-yay%2C-robot-uprising!-yay%2C-inanimate-objects!-robots-replacing-humans-is%2C-of-course%2C-a-very-relevant-concern-(even-though-it's-really-nothing-to-worry-about).-alchemy-is-just-all-around-fun%E2%80%94anything-magical-and-witchy%E2%80%94it-makes-my-brain-vibrate-happily.-and%2C-inanimate-objects%E2%80%94c'mon%E2%80%94pareidolia%E2%80%94personification%E2%80%94we-love-humanizing-things.-i-mean%2C-just-look-at-the-pixar-lamp.-the-ball.-okay%2C-enough-of-that%E2%80%94investigation-time.-is-alchemy-widespread-within-your-world%3F-is-it-easy%3F-how-many-people-practice-it%3F-who-discovered-it%3F-can-you-get-an-education-in-alchemy%3F-is-there-a-school%3F-the-robots%E2%80%94are-humans-gone-entirely%3F-or%2C-have-humans-just-become-obsolete-as-a-working-force%2C-and-robots-do-all-the-work-for-them%3F-at-last%2C-are-people-aware-that-the-objects-come-to-life%3F-what-do-they-do%3F-how-do-they-interact%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh!-lovely!-i'm-sure-most-of-us-have-imagined-our-drawings-popping-out-of-the-page-before%E2%80%94it's-a-thought-familiar-to-everyone%2C-and-it's-definitely-the-kind-of-thing-worth-expressing.-in-your-drawings%2C-i-see-that-there's-a-clear-space-theme-and-some-sort-of-astronaut-storyline%E2%80%94do-you-envision-it-being-about-those-characters%3F-or%2C-is-that-only-one-of-the-drawings%3F-and%2C-do-the-drawings-stay-within-their-illustrations%3F-or%2C-do-they-come-out-into-the-real-world%3F-maybe-try-splitting-that-idea-into-three-unique-ones. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yeaaaaaaaaaaaaa%E2%80%94oh-my-gosh%E2%80%94corn-chip-crusaders-is-the-cutest%E2%80%94the-li'l-corn-chip-at-the-end-really-got-me-all-%22hee-hee%22%E2%80%94so-good.-it-makes-me-think-of-cornchip-girl-from-recess-(also-know-as-theresa-laverne-lamaise)%E2%80%94it's-on-disney%2B-now-so-you-have-no-excuse-not-to-watch-it%E2%80%94except-for-maybe-money-issues-and-the-fact-that-subscriptions-are-just-about-the-worst-thing-to-plague-human-existence.-anyways%2C-very-hyped-for-episode-2-of-the-corn-chip-chronicles.-but%2C-living-underwater%3F-body-gardens%3F-magical-familiar-villages%3F-all-of-these-are-very-aesthetically-pleasing-(if-you've-seen-any-of-my-other-comment-you'll-know-that-i-use-that-word-a-lot%E2%80%94i-have-a-big-vocabulary-i-swear-i-just-choose-not-to-use-it).-underwater-stuff%E2%80%94really-anything-to-do-with-water%E2%80%94it's-just-great.-check-out-contre-temps.-of-course%2C-there's-ponyo-(and%2C-i-mean%2C-really-all-ghibli-films-have-beautiful-water)%3B-there's-the-lesser-known-future-boy-conan.-also%2C-children-of-the-sea-is-hot-garbage%E2%80%94just-about-the-worst-movie-i've-ever-watched%E2%80%94but-it-looks-pretty%E2%80%94i'll-give-it-that%E2%80%94begrudgingly.-same-with-big-fish-%26-begonia%E2%80%94also-trash-but-pretty.-there's-also-ride-your-wave-and-lu-over-the-wall.-there's-a-lot-that-you-can-draw-on%E2%80%94even-games-like-raft.-anyways%E2%80%94given-that-you-said-%22suddenly%22%2C-i'm-assuming-this-was-the-result-of-some-natural-disaster-of-some-kind%3F-rising-sea-levels-and-all-that%3F-how-do-they-adapt-so-quickly%3F-do-they-have-oxygen-tanks%3F-can-they-not-build-anything-above-the-water%3F-is-there-some-danger-above-the-sea%3F-then%2C-for-the-plant-people-one%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94real-quick-castle-in-the-sky's-got-some-real-pretty-nature%E2%80%94again%2C-all-ghibli-stuff-do%E2%80%94but%2C-it's-got-the-plant-covered-robots%E2%80%94also-totoro-for-the-rapidly-growing-tree-sequence.-sorry%E2%80%94my-thoughts-are-a-bit-scattered.-but%2C-do-the-plants-grow-from-the-people%3F-can-they-introduce-new-plants-to-their-gardens%3F-can-they-fuse-with-plants%3F-what-happens-if-the-plants-die%3F-oh%E2%80%94sorry%E2%80%94check-out-tomorrow's-leaves%E2%80%94it-was-an-animation-produced-by-the-olympics-that-i-think-is-severely-underappreciated.-okay%2C-but-yeah%E2%80%94what-if-the-plants-die%3F-what-if-the-person-dies%3F-do-they-become-one-with-the-environment-when-they-pass-away%3F-oh-my-gosh%E2%80%94sorry-i-need-to-stop-screaming%E2%80%94origin%3A-spirits-of-the-past%E2%80%94it's-got-some-real-good-tree-people.-are-there-any-other-sort-of-abilities-granted-through-these-familiars-(...-*cough*-i-lied%E2%80%94play-some-ni-no-kuni)%3F-what-makes-them-connected%3F-can-they-communicate-with-one-another%3F-does-this-only-happen-in-this-particular-village%3F-are-the-animals-mythical%3F-what-about-bugs-and-fish%3F-do-they-count-as-animals%3F-alright%2C-that's-a-wrap. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/woah-the-production-on-this-is-amazing-%3A0-my-favorite-idea-out-of-all-of-these-(outstanding)-ideas-is-the-first%2C-it's-so-charming!-it-makes-me-wonder-how-all-the-pages-would-interact-with-each-other%2C-especially-with-their-placements 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/woah%2C-all-of-your-ideas-are-stunning-%3A0-out-of-all-of-them%2C-the-one-i'd-like-to-see-produced-the-most-is-the-final-one%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-her-creativity-would-produce-and-how-that-could-be-battled-in-a-healthy-way 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-these-ideas-are-so-cool-%3Ad-the-one-i'd-like-to-see-the-most-is-your-first-idea%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-waves-would-think-about-other-life-and-how-they-would-interact-with-the-world-around-them 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/sweet-%3Ad-your-last-idea-got-me-hooked-the-most%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-activities-they'd-do-as-a-witch-queen-%3A0 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/so-neat!-was-really-interested-in-your-sunlight-idea%2C-makes-me-think-about-what-the-characters-would-do-with-the-access-it-gives-%3A0 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-last-idea-of-the-boy-with-too-much-grief-is-an-amazing-idea%2C-it-really-represents-how-others-in-the-world-work-with-grief-and-also-show-how-important-it-is- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/so-cool-%3Ad-the-idea-i-thought-was-the-most-interesting-was-your-first%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-instruments-can-be-associated-with-certain-moods-and-how-they-collide-with-others 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh%2C-fun!-debilitated-or-abnormal-animals-are-a-staple-of-animation%E2%80%94dumbo.-very-solid.-and%2C-giving-people-flight-is-a-simple-idea%2C-but-it's-very-effective%E2%80%94it's-something-that-many-people-have-dreamed-of%2C-so-it-captures-the-imagination-super-easily.-and%2C-talking-planets%3F-we-all-have-some-severe-cases-of-pareidolia%2C-and-humanizing-the-planets-is-something-that-comes-natural-to-us%2C-so%2C-again%E2%80%94relatable%E2%80%94you've-got-an-audience.-but%2C-yeah!-humans-flying-is-a-lovely-thought%E2%80%94do-they-have-wings-instead-of-arms%3F-like-in-your-drawing%3F-check-out-sky%3A-children-of-the-light-for-inspiration%E2%80%94'cuz-boy-howdy-do-i-love-my-sky-aesthetics.-then%2C-does-the-bird-find-a-way-to-fly%3F-(maybe-all-toothless-how-to-train-your-dragon-style%3F)-are-they-placed-under-any-human-care%3F-perhaps-the-bird-is-aided-by-a-prosthetics-company-or-some-animal-shelter%3F-and%2C-so%E2%80%94the-planets-can-talk%E2%80%94can-the-people-who-live-on-them-hear-it%3F-do-they-have-faces%2C-as-depicted-in-the-drawing%3F-what-are-their-thoughts-on-their-inhabitants%3F-can-they-do-anything-else-besides-talking%3F-do-they-speak-english%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-were-so-cool-%3Ad-the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-your-first%2C-the-electrical-systems-being-a-physical-process-sounds-so-festive%2C-it-has-me-intrigued! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-my-gosh%2C-all-of-those-ideas-are-bangers-%3A0-the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-first%2C-the-figurative-concept-being-taken-literally-is-so-interesting-%3Ad 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hold-up-before-i-give-any-feedback%E2%80%94i-just-need-to-say%E2%80%94that-is-an-amazing-team-name.-it-sounds-like-a-really-good-band.-if%2C-one-day%2C-i-inadvertently-steal-it-when-i-dig-it-out-from-my-memory-banks%2C-don't-blame-me%2C-blame-your-super-good-naming-sense.-for-whoever-came-up-with-idea-number-2%2C-go-read-the-monster-under-my-bed-on-webtoon.-but%2C-yeah%E2%80%94very-solid-stuff.-extraterrestrial-life-is-a-staple-in-a-lot-of-great-and-classic-stories-(and-likely-not-a-fiction).-monsters-under-the-bed-is-a-myth-everyone-grows-up-fearing.-and%2C-c'mon%E2%80%94everyone-in-the-world-has-wanted-a-super-power-at-one-point-in-time%E2%80%94so%2C-there's-your-demographic.-but%2C-look%2C-because-these-ideas-are-so-good-and-so-classic%2C-i'm-gonna-need-some-more-distinguishing-features.-like%2C-what-types-of-aliens-are-out-there%3F-are-they-capable-of-speech%3F-culture%3F-are-they-advanced%3F-do-they-have-their-own-space-missions%3F-as-for-the-monsters%2C-how-many-are-there-under-each-bed%3F-do-they-all-look-different%3F-how-do-they-get-there%3F-where-do-they-come-from%3F-how-do-they-fit-under-there%3F-what-about-kids-that-sleep-in-futons%3F-are-there-monsters-in-the-closet%2C-too%3F-for-the-last-one%2C-is-it-superpowers-or-superpower%3F-like%2C-do-they-wake-up-with-more-than-one-power%3F-what-powers-do-they-have%3F-how-long-do-they-retain-it%3F-or%2C-do-they-keep-their-powers-forever%3F-what-about-everyone-else%3F-have-they-also-developed-powers%3F-what's-caused-this%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-adore-the-ghost-and-ghost-hunter-idea%2C-a-really-neat-take-on-the-opposite-roles-getting-along-dynamic-%3Ad- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hohohoh%E2%80%94nice%E2%80%94nice.-the-one-with-the-book-reminds-me-of-stranger-than-fiction-and-some-other-things.-the-doppelg%C3%A4nger-one-obviously-reminds-me-of-the-parent-trap.-and-the-last-reminds-me-of-invisible-day-and-invisible-in-the-third-grade.-sorry%E2%80%94i-really-should-be-giving-more-concrete-feedback-then-what-it-reminds-me-of%E2%80%94prophetic-works-are-always-fun-in-books-because-there-are-a-lot-of-real-life-examples-of-books-predicting-things-in-the-modern-day%E2%80%94not-necessarily-in-the-form-of-a-prophesy%2C-and-it-plays-with-the-whole-%22life-imitates-fiction%22-thing.-doppelg%C3%A4ngers-are%E2%80%94as-a-concept-alone%E2%80%94very-compelling.-the-thought-that-there's-someone-out-there-that-shares-your-exact-physical-appearance-is-both-fun-and-frightening.-so%2C-it's-a-strong-foundation.-and%2C-i-mean%2C-come-on%E2%80%94who-hasn't-thought-of-invisibility%3F-it's-one-of-the-first-things-to-come-up-after-flight-for-what-super-power-you'd-want-to-have.-anyways%2C-if-what's-written-in-the-book-comes-true%2C-then-how-does-it-handle-paradoxical-content%3F-like%2C-say-that-someone-writes-%22this-is-not-written-on-this-book%22-or-%22this-book-does-not-exist%22%3F-maybe-they-write-something-and-add-and-addendum-that-%22this-does-not-come-true%22.-also%2C-where-is-this-book-kept%3F-is-it-protected%3F-then%2C-for-the-doppelg%C3%A4nger-one%E2%80%94do-they-ever-switch-back%3F-how-far-away-are-they-from-each-other%3F-do-they-ever-meet-face-to-face%3F-what-caused-them-to-switch%3F-finally%2C-how-does-the-invisibility-work%3F-does-it-make-only-the-person-go-invisible%3F-does-it-make-what-they-touch-turn-invisible-too%3F-like%2C-what-about-their-clothes%3F-stuff-to-consider. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/okay%E2%80%94okay%E2%80%94i-like-it%E2%80%94i-like-it.-the-first-one-feels-like-the-sort-of-thing-to-validate-all-of-our-fears-of-being-watched%E2%80%94whenever-we-have-some-sensation-of-feeling-that-we're-not-the-only-one-there%E2%80%94love-it.-and%2C-the-other-one's-very-wacky%3B-i-anticipate-a-lot-of-antics.-so%2C-okay%E2%80%94by-never-alone%2C-i-assume-that-you-mean-always-being-watched-(based-on-the-drawing)%3F-or%2C-is-it-that-you-always-are-in-the-company-of-another-person%3F-and%2C-by-%22discover-gravity%22%2C-do-you-mean-that-gravity-doesn't-exist%3F-or%2C-do-you-mean-that-no-one-has-come-up-with-an-explanation-for-it-(because-it's-not-like-we-discovered-it%E2%80%94it's-just-always-existed).-anyways%2C-good-stuff.-maybe-try-messing-with-one-of-those-ideas-or-synthesizing-the-two-to-generate-a-third-one. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-super-fun%E2%80%94messing-with-the-monomyth-is-something-that-i've-always-wanted-to-do%2C-and-given-how-weird-and-unnatural-some-character-tropes%2C-i-can-imagine-them-being-very-amusing-in-real-life.-what-kind-of-character-tropes-do-you-envision-playing-with%3F-and%2C-what-is-your-hero-to-do-now-that-the-villain-and-main-conflict-has-already-been-conquered%3F-i'm-a-smidge-disheartened-that-your-last-idea-got-cut-off%E2%80%94i-was-super-curious.-was-it-%22before-they-were-animated%22%3F-so%2C-like%2C-a-character-comes-to-life-before-they're-completely-animated%3F-maybe-they're-in-a-storyboard-or-concept-art-or-an-animatic%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-you-ideas-and-art-style!-i-think-any-of-your-ideas-would-turn-out-be-amazing.-i-really-like-the-first-one-with-the-dog-wanting-to-be-a-cat.-it-looks-like-the-cat-doesn%E2%80%99t-like-the-dog.-is-the-dog%E2%80%99s-wish-fulfilled%3F-do-the-dog-and-the-cat-swap-bodies%3F-that-could-be-fun-and-play-into-the-fact-that-the-cat-doesn%E2%80%99t-look-pleased.-anyways-i-think-you-did-a-great-job-%3A)-keep-up-the-good-work!- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yes!-long-like-the-dinos!-i-love-this-idea-and-thing-it-has-so-much-potential.-my-question-for-you-is-would-the-story%E2%80%99s-focus-be-on-the-dinosaurs-as-characters-trying-to-live-out-in-modern-times-or-who-the-focus-be-on-how-humans-are-dealing-with-the-dinos.--keep-up-the-good-work! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/lumin!!!!!-it-was-lumin!!!-lumin-by-alan-becker-hahah%E2%80%94okay-go-watch-it-please-it's-great. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-your-ideas-have-so-much-potential-for-a-great-story-to-happen.-i-love-the-idea-of-the-stereotypical-black-equals-bad-luck%2C-swapped-to-good.-(loved-the-cat-drawing)-my-one-question-is-how-do-you-think-the-cat-got-its-good-luck%3F--the-ghost-and-ghost-hunters-is-giving-me-the-best-spooky-and-sweet-vibes-and-would-love-to-see-where-the-story-goes.-is-the-ghost-hunter-in-love-with-ghost%3F-or-not.-that-could-be-fun%2C-if-he-didn%E2%80%99t-love-her-or-the-story-was-how-he-came-to-know-and-love-her%3F-just-and-idea-%3A)-lastly%2C--the-body-swap.-again-i-loved-how-you-flipped-the-stereotypes-over-or-nerd-vs-bully.-i-think-the-what-if-question-would-be-a-great-way-to-send-an-underlying-message-of-anti-bullying.--overall-i-think-you-did-awesome-and-i-love-your-art-too-%3A)- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/dark%E2%80%94but-very-interesting.-i-can-already-see-a-lot-of-opportunity-for-fun-moral-questions-and-stylistic-lighting.-so%2C-does-she-become-the-shadow-of-someone-else%3F-is-it-a-peter-pan-scenario%3F-i-recommend-you-check-out-the-shadow-house-manga-(not-sure-about-the-quality-of-the-anime%2C-but-i-can-ensure-the-manga-is-good).-gosh%E2%80%94there's-another-thing-i'm-thinking-of%2C-but-i-can't-think-of-it-right-now.-it's-some-animation-in-which-there's-some-kind-of-labyrinth-and-two-people-try-to-escape-a-bunch-of-shadow-monsters.-anyways%2C-what-does-she-do-as-a-shadow%3F-can-she-turn-back-into-a-human%3F-try-messing-with-it-and-coming-up-with-three-iterations. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-my-gosh%E2%80%94i-love-your-art-style.-and%2C-yesss%E2%80%94play-with-those-stereotypes-i'm-all-for-it.-anything-that-messes-with-tropes-and-clich%C3%A9s-is-great-in-my-book.-the-black-cat-one%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94actually%E2%80%94all-of-them-teach-important-lessons-like-not-to-judge-a-book-by-its-cover.-oh%2C-by-the-way%2C-for-future-reference-if-you-want-to-go-with-this-slideshow-sort-of-thing-on-your-ipad%2C-you-can-screen-record-and-make-sure-that-your-screen-record-is-capturing-audio-from-your-microphone-(press-and-hold-the-record-button-and-it-should-expand-to-show-how-to-enable-the-microphone).-that-way%2C-we-can-see-your-drawings-in-the-best-quality-possible-whilst-being-as-easy-as-possible.-okay%2C-but%2C-some-questions.-are-ghosts-and-ghost-hunters-normal-within-this-world%3F-or%2C-are-they-both-oddities%3F-maybe-the-ghost-hunter-is-treated-as-some-sketchy-man-(in-the-same-way-most-exorcists-and-spiritualists-are-treated)-but-he-actually-can-see-and-capture-ghosts%3F-then%2C-for-the-latter%2C-does-anyone-come-to-learn-that-the-cat-is-good-luck%3F-does-anyone-ignore-the-superstition-and-care-for-it-anyways%3F-does-anyone-treat-it-well-only-after-they-find-out-it's-good-luck-(all-rudolph-style%E2%80%94such-a-backward-moral-story)%3F-finally%2C-what-causes-the-bully-and-the-nerd-to-switch-places%3F-do-they-discover-things-about-one-another-that-they-didn't-know%3F-maybe-the-nerd-discovers-that-the-bully-has-a-bad-home-life%3F-or%2C-maybe-the-bully-learns-how-much-it-sucks-to-be-bullied%3F-maybe-he-learns-that-the-nerd's-hobbies-aren't-so-boring-after-all%3F-maybe-the-nerd-begins-to-enjoy-sports%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawings-are-so-cute!--i-love-your-shading.--i-found-the-idea-about-your-drawings-coming-to-life-the-most-interesting.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-them-%E2%80%94-who-are-they%3F--would-they-get-along%3F--what-would-they-do%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-hidden-sun.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-that-is-%E2%80%94-what-would-that-look-like%3F--how-would-that-affect-nature%3F--how-would-people-adapt-to-live%3F--i-love-the-colors-you-used%2C-by-the-way! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-last-one%2C-about-everything-in-nature-having-a-sentience.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-that-would-manifest%2C-and-how-everything-would-get-along. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/to-the-person-who-made-the-second-idea%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94actually%2C-just-to-all-of-you.-please-play-pajama-sam%3A-no-need-to-hide-when-it's-dark-outside-(you'll-understand-why-when-you-play-it).-also%2C-nocturna%E2%80%94the-animated-one.-then%2C-to-time-is-money-man%2C-i-recommend-you-watch-in-time.-oh%2C-and-for-the-first-guy-(don't-wanna-leave-anyone-out)%2C-check-out-birthday-wonderland%2C-inception%2C-and-total-recall-(the-2012-version-because-we-don't-recommend-r-rated-movies%E2%80%94not-in-this-household%E2%80%94no-sir%E2%80%94pg-13-and-lower-only).-okay%2C-but%2C-yes%2C-super-good-ideas.-we-always-joke-about-sock-monsters%E2%80%94so-coming-up-with-some-explanation-for-the-missing-socks-tickles-my-fancy.-anything-that-plays-with-dreams-is-enjoyable.-and%2C-messing-with-idioms-is-just-good-fun-(also-recommended-this-to-someone-already-but-check-out-symphony-in-slang).-m'k-question-time-question-time.-so%E2%80%94i-find-it-interesting-that-you-say-the-dreams-are-a-portal-to-another-world-instead-of-the-other-world-itself%E2%80%94do-you-mean-to-say-that-dreams-serve-as-the-gateway%3F-like%2C-they're-the-passageway-that-connects-or-tethers-you-to-the-dream-world%3F-next%2C-does-someone-end-up-discovering-the-sock-portal%3F-do-they-fall-into-it%3F-where-does-it-go%3F-last-but-not-least%2C-can-you-spend-your-time-like-currency%3F-can-you-convert-dollar-bills-into-additional-time-and-vice-versa%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/so%2C-this-is-quite-obscure-and-incredibly-random%2C-but-please-watch-episode-62-of-puchimas!!-petit-petit-idolmaster-for-inspiration-on-that-second-idea%E2%80%94because%E2%80%94gosh%E2%80%94it's-just-too-funny%E2%80%94it's-too-good.-do-it-for-me.-i-feel-no-shame.-but%E2%80%94yes!-spirits-are-conceptually-entertaining-and-a-good-way-to-mess-with-synesthesia-and-physical-representations-of-inward-dynamics.-and%2C-the-last-one-is-also-wonderful%E2%80%94it's-the-plight-of-immortality.-i-can-only-imagine-its-the-kind-of-thing-that-john-the-beloved-might-have-experienced-(look-into-the-forgotten-carols)%2C-as-well-as-the-three-nephites-mentioned-within-the-book-of-mormon.-you-might-also-look-into-john-carter-from-the-league-of-extraordinary-gentlemen.-okay%2C-question-time!-ding-ding-ding!-wahoo~!-um%E2%80%94wait-give-me-a-second.-are-the-spirits-the-spirits-of-the-deceased%3F-or%2C-are-they-spirits-in-the-sense-of-a-divine-or-supernatural-being%3F-next%2C-is-the-shrinking-literal%3F-or%2C-is-it-a-visual-aid-for-the-audience%3F-like%2C-do-people-within-the-universe-acknowledge-that-people-shrink-when-they're-embarrassed%3F-finally%2C-while-this-person-remains-young-forever%2C-are-they-still-susceptible-to-injury-and-disease%3F-are-they-only-impervious-to-old-age%3F-or%2C-could-they-die-or-be-killed%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-very-creative.-i-love-the-music-according-to-your-mood-and-that's-most-interesting-to-me.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-people-would-adjust-their-behaviour-accordingly.-but-visually....-the-last-one-really-set-my-mind-on-fire. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ah!-yes%2C-fun%2C-fun.-bringing-prehistoric-(or%2C-really%2C-any-historic)-things-into-the-modern-world-is-always-amusing.-there's-always-a-lot-of-room-to-play-with-stuff-(like-in-mr.-peabody-%26-sherman).-of-course%2C-the-most-famous-example-of-this-is-jurassic-park%2C-but-it's-more-of-a-%22what-if-dinosaurs-were-brought-back-to-life%22-sort-of-dealio.-anyways%E2%80%94in-this-idea%2C-is-it-just-that-dinosaurs-have-never-gone-extinct%3F-are-they-returned-to-life%3F-did-the-devastating-meteor-impact-never-happened%3F-are-humans-still-a-thing%3F-or%2C-have-dinosaurs-become-the-dominant-species%3F-do-the-dinosaurs-coexist%3F-is-there-culture%3F-can-the-dinosaurs-speak%3F-consider-coming-up-with-three-different-version-of-this-idea-by-switching-up-your-answers-to-each-of-these-questions. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hahah-hilarious-delivery..-sucked-into-board-game-is-most-interesting-what-if-idea-to-me.-we-need-a-new-take-on-jumunji-too-%3A)-it-makes-me-wonder-what-game-it-is.....monopoly%3F--exploding-kittens%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/haha%2C-the-most-interesting-idea-to-me-was-the-bug-grocery-store.-makes-me-wonder-who-works-at-this-story-and-if-the-bugs-are-the-owners%3F%3F-maybe-bugs-are-a-good-thing%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/woah%2C-crazy-good-ideas.-humans-and-animals-procreating-is-most-interesting-to-me.-makes-me-wonder-about-all-the-incredible-creatures-that-would-result. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/both-ideas-are-so-original%2C-love-it.-monsters-who-like-pizza-was-most-interesting-to-me.-makes-me-wonder-if-this-could-be-a-funny-zombie-movie.-the-talking-dog-one-might-have-more-character-potential.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ahahahahack%E2%80%94oh-my-gosh-you're-so-sweet%E2%80%94no-need-to-apologize-for-the-lack-of-an-explanation-for-the-second-idea%E2%80%94you're-already-going-above-and-beyond-trying-to-come-up-with-one.-and%2C-not-to-worry%2C-i%2C-too%2C-am-perversely-directionally-challenged%3B-what-you're-doing-is-really-difficult.-as-far-as-the-idea-go%E2%80%94technology-being-wiped-out-has-always-been-a-very-entertaining-thought-for-the-modern-world%E2%80%94we've-all-become-a-bit-too-reliant-on-technology%2C-so-the-idea-that-everything-suddenly-stops-working-always-seems-like-an-apocalyptic-scenario-(that-some-people-would-characterize-as-a-fate-worse-than-death).-i-suggest-that-you-watch-veritasium's-%22the-universe-is-hostile-to-computers%22%E2%80%94very-relevant.-anyways%2C-i'm-assuming-these-terrestrial-gamma-ray-flashes-would-act-as-an-electromagnetic-pulse-of-some-kind%3F-what-would-happen-to-all-of-the-airborne-passenger-planes-and-fighter-jets-and-such%3F-what-would-happen-to-nuclear-power-plants-now-that-their-cooling-systems-have-gone-offline%3F-as-for-the-game-physics-idea%E2%80%94i-love-it.-i'm-a-huge-fan.-merging-characteristics-of-reality-with-fiction-has-always-been-a-passion-of-mine.-and%2C-game-physics-are-just-so-ridiculous-when-taken-at-face-value%3B-there's-huge-potential.-anyways%2C-what-type-of-physics-systems-would-you-adopt%3F-you've-already-brought-up-inventory-space%2C-double-jumps%2C-floaty-jumps%2C-and-lives%2C-but-even-these-systems-can-vary-differently-depending-on-each-game.-do-people-take-death-less-seriously-with-more-lives%3F-what-happens-when-someone-gameovers%3F-how-have-the-new-physics-systems-changed-sports%3F-are-people-aware-that-their-physics-system-is-modeled-after-the-games%3F-then%2C-finally%2C-the-last-one%E2%80%94it's-another-classic%E2%80%94getting-sucked-into-a-computer-is-something-most-people-today-have-mused-about-at-least-once-in-their-lives.-while-in-the-computer%2C-how-do-they-perceive-the-world%3F-is-the-world-2d%3F-how-do-they-see%3F-can-they-see-the-entire-computer-screen-at-once%3F-i've-recommended-this-to-someone-already%2C-but-consider-looking-at-miegakura%2C-hyperbolica%2C-superliminal%2C-and-super-paper-mario-for-inspiration.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool-ideas.-school-never-existed!-was-most-interesting-to-me.-makes-me-wonder-what-all-the-kids-do%3F-and-why-it-doesn't-exist.-can't-wait-to-see-what's-next! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool-ideas.-(anime-pixar-would-be-awesome).-i'm-most-interested-in-the-boxer-story%2C-those-characters-look-adorable!-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-prawn-and-chet-became-friends. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-doll-like-body-part-idea-is-cool!-would-you-buy-new-body-parts-if-you-didn%E2%80%99t-like-your-current-ones%3F-could-you-get-custom-body-parts-like-a-hand-that-looks-like-a-giant-claw-or-something%3F- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-these-are-very-original-ideas.-i-think-i'm-most-interested-in-the-person-who-sticks-to-everything...but-the-test-tube-idea-feels-like-a-cool-plot-point-to-use.--it-makes-me-wonder-how-you-could-turn-that-into-a-super-hero.-maybe-their-power-is-touching-maps-to-transport-%3A)- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/amazing-art%2C-really-fun-video!-i-like-the-idea-of-a-crayon-world-about-ginseng-with-magic-limbs.-makes-me-wonder-what-it-would-feel-like-to-live-in-that-world%2C-like-the-eyes-of-a-child 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-city-water-park-idea-is-cool!!-would-people-actually-live-there-or-would-it-be-more-of-a-water-park-where-you-pay-to-explore-it%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-city-water-park-idea-is-cool!!-would-people-actually-live-there-or-would-it-be-more-of-a-water-park-where-you-pay-to-explore-it%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-city-water-park-idea-is-cool!!-would-people-actually-live-there-or-would-it-be-more-of-a-water-park-where-you-pay-to-explore-it%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hard-to-pick-but-i-think-i'm-most-drawn-to-both-the-robots-and-spirits-what-if-idea.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-the-robots-were-created-and-who-created-them%3F-nice-ideas! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-snake-idea-is-amazing!-i-can-just-imagine-someone-walking-on-the-sidewalk-and-having-to-do-a-double-take-when-they-see-a-house-with-snakes-all-around-it! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/after-hearing-the-second-idea-i-immediately-started-wondering%2C-if-there-were-people-or-human-like-creatures-in-this-sock-dimension%2C-would-everything-they-create-be-made-of-socks%3F-are-their-clothes-made-of-socks%3F-are-their-houses-made-of-socks%3F-is-the-actual-ground-just-layers-and-layers-of-lost-and-forgotten-foot-sleeves%3F-and-what-do-they-have-for-nutrition%3F-do-they-just-eat-socks%3F-this-is-all-assuming-there-is-nothing-in-this-dimension-but-socks-and-people%2C-so-none-of-this-may-actually-matter%2C-but-doesn%E2%80%99t-everything%2C-to-some-degree%2C-not-matter%3F-who-knows-what-the-true-questions-are%3F---anyway-yeah-it%E2%80%99s-cool-i-hope-my-socks-are-being-used-for-good 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-second-idea!!!-the-alien-looks-adorable!!!- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-second-idea-stands-out-to-me%2C-partly-because-it-would-be-very-easy-to-use-to-one%E2%80%99s-advantage.-for-example%2C-one-could-shrink-someone-using-one%E2%80%99s-bullying-skills%2C-and-quite-easily-step-on-them.-murder-would-be-possible-to-anyone-at-anytime%2C-which-i-think-makes-this-a-great-%E2%80%9Cwhat-if%E2%80%9D.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-absolutely-love-the-art!-it-really-adds-to-every-idea!-what-if-there-was-music-tuned-to-peoples-emotion-too%3F-what-would-happen-if-someone-was-singing-and-dancing%2C-does-it-match-up%3F-or-does-singing-count-as-an-action%2C-and-the-music-goes-with-whatever-you're-singing%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-all-of-the-ideas%2C-i-would-pay-to-see-a-movie-about-the-second-one.-about-the-first-one%2C-where-do-these-spirits-come-from%3F-do-they-have-a-different-hew-on-them-due-to-how-they-feel%3F-overall%2C-i-really-like-it%2C-and-it-has-o-much-potential! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-art-is-amazing-and-really-stand-out-against-the-backgrounds%2C-the-fist-idea-reminds-me-of-the-villain-(i-don't-know-how-to-spell-his-name)-from-the-incredibles%2C-if-everyone-is-super%2C-no-one-is.-maybe-if-everyone-is-able-to-control-space-and-time%2C-there-are-laws-set-up-to-prevent-the-misuse-of-it%2C-and-you-get-stuck-in-a-void-of-nothingness-if-you-break-them%3F-the-ideas-are-intriguing-and-have-a-lot-to-explore-about-them. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-loved-the-first-idea%2C-makes-you-wonder-how-the-other-fireflies-would-react%2C-do-they-just-find-the-other-one-weird%3F-does-the-firefly-not-light-up-by-choice%3F-or-is-it-something-else%3F-i-like-the-art%2Cit-can-be-hard-to--draw-with-digital-resources%2Cso-i-think-it's-impressive-that-you-got-these-results-with-it.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-first-one-the-most%2C-made-me-wonder-what-the-rest-of-the-cats-and-dogs-would-do%2C-like-trans-people.-i-couldn't-tell-what-you-said-about-the-vampire%2C-i-think-it-cut-out.-if-there's-anything-you-can-do-to-improve-the-audio%2C-it-would-make-it-a-thousand-times-easier-to-watch.-your-ideas-are-going-outside-of-what-you'd-typically-expect-things-to-be-like%2C-and-i-love-it.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-one-with-the-moana-ish-concept-was-the-most-interesting-one-to-me 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-last-one-with-the-hidden-sun-the-most-interesting%2C 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/good-job!-i-think-the-3rd-idea-could-start-a-great-story.-what-would-that-person-feel-like%3F-would-they-enjoy-being-immortal%2C-or-regret-that-everyone-else-gets-older%3F-when-would-they-stop-growing%3F-would-they-be-stuck-as-a-child%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-mafia-turtle-the-most-hilarious-and-the-most-interesting. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/my-what-if-is-also-about-gods-so-i-think-the--alien-raised-by-a-god-would-make-a-great-story-and-where-did-the-alien-come-from%3F-what-god-raised-him%3F-this-can-really-be-emphasized-on. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-all-of-your-ideas%2C-especially-the-second-one%2C-they-were-all-really-intriguing!-that-being-said%2C-maybe-you-could-combine-some-of-them%2C-like-being-able-to-interact-with-technology%2C-and-video-games-physics-in-real-life.-what-if-someone-is-in-a-video-game%2C-and-then-suddenly-everything-goes-black-from-the-lightning%3F--if-you-can-do-anything-to-improve-the-recording-or-audio-quality%2C-it-would-make-it-a-lot-easier-to-watch.-i-thought-all-of-your-what-ifs-were-exceptionally-interesting-and-made-you-think-of-what-the-world%2C-or-what-countries-would-do%2C-as-a-society. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-one-is-something-i-have-been-thinking-about-and-it-has-been-driving-me-crazy-since-i-was-eight-years-old-and-i-finally-found-a-story-that-relates-to-my-dilemma-definitely-promising. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-tiger-idea-very-interresting 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-super-interesting!-if-there-was-infinite-electricity%2C-i-wonder-what-advances-humans-could-make-and-problems%2C-such-as-climate-change%2C-it-might-solve.-also%2C-where-does-the-electricity-come-from%3F-how-is-it-made%3F-did-humans-invent-or-discover-the-source-of-infinite-electricity%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-how-you-and-your-team-drew-the-dinosaurs-near-a-bridge-interacting-with-it-and-a-question-i-have-is-will-it-affect-humans-in-a-good-or-bad-way%3F 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-want-to-see-how-characters-react-to-the-smil-lighting-up-the-room-and-if-a-frown-could-make-it-dark-again. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/monster-terrified-by-its-shadow-was-the-most-interesting 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/awesome-job!-i-like-that-you-had-a-blend-of-specific-and-worldwide-what-ifs.-i-found-the-idea-about-giants-most-interesting.-it-could-be-interesting-to-follow-one-giant's-experience-of-hiding%2C-or-what-would-happen-if-humans-discovered-them. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-one-sounds-great-and-i-can-see-this-turning-out-great-because-humans-are-so-dependent-on-technology-and-without-it-i-would-like-to-see-how-the-characters-react. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/funny-ideas%2C-short-and-sweet. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-funny-ideas-that-would-be-awesome-for-shorts 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-coll-ideas-and-they-seem-like-they-could-be-expanded-on-in-a-way-that-wouldn't-seem-either-cliche-or-like-the-plot-has-been-done-already 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/accurate-number-of-what-if's-and-very-intriguing-story-plots%2Fwhat-if's. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/not-long-and-didn't-explain-it's-what-if%2C-but-i-still-got-a-lot-of-info-from-just-the-title-and-video%2C-also-i-can-tell-how-it-would-work. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-cool-ideas-and-very-able-to-expand-upon 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-last-idea.-it-would-be-super-cool-if-our-eyes-could-change-colours-based-on-our-emotions.-i-wonder-if-it-would-be-the-same-colours-for-each-feeling-for-everyone-or-it-would-be-different.-super-intriguing. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-these-ideas.-very-creative.-and-fun.- 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/this-is-very-creative-and-fun.-the-drawings-are-good-too! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-first-and-second-ones.-the-first-one-makes-me-think-about-the-possibility-of-parallel-worlds%2Funiverses%2C-and-the-second-one-could-be-a-neat-way-to-comment-on-the-ways-we-might-not-always-feel-in-control. 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-liked-the-concepts-that-you-came-up-with.--i-personally-would-love-to-see-the-idea-of-mushrooms-being-a-dominant-species.--but-my-only-question-about-that-idea-is-how-could-you-make-a-good%2C-relatable-story-from-that-because-of-the-way-the-idea-was-presented%2C-it-doesn%CA%BBt-seems-like-there%CA%BBs-a-lot-of-characters-in-that-story-(but-i-could-be-wrong%2C-or-if-you-have-a-deeper-idea-about-this-in-mind). 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-strings-one!-it-seems-like-an-interesting-way-to-talk-about-how-we-may-not-always-feel-like-we're-in-control-of-ourselves. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-both-your-first-and-second-ideas%2C-and-i-think-they-could-open-up-a-lot-of-new-ideas.-i-wonder-what-would-cause-humans-to-avoid-the-sun-as-suggested-in-your-first-what-if. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/grow%3A-i-liked-how-detailed-and-refined-your-drawings-look.-grow%3A-next-time%2C-you-should-try-not-to-cut-off-your-audio-recordings-so-shortly%2C-as-we-didn%E2%80%99t-fully-know-what-you-were-going-to-say-for-your-second-idea. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-your-first-idea-most-interesting%2C-i-wonder-how-you-could-base-a-story-off-of-it. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-your-last-idea-most-interesting%2C-and-it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-specific-rules-of-that-world-might-be. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-first-what-if 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh%E2%80%94i-really-love-how-you-blended-your-drawing-into-a-photograph%E2%80%94it-gives-me-some-looney-tunes%3A-back-in-action-energy.-but%2C-okay%2C-okay.-so%2C-if-everyone-can-control-space-and-time%2C-wouldn't-that-cause-a-lot-of-back-and-forth-time-paradoxes%3F-and%2C-like%2C-just-how-strong-is-this-control%3F-can-they-move-time-back-to-before-they-were-born%3F-or%2C-can-they-move-time-forward-to-after-they-die%3F-do-their-abilities-only-influence-a-certain-volume-around-them%3F-what-about-if-time-is-moved-to-before-someone-else-is-born%3F-what-happens-to-that-person%3F-what-if-their-birth-is-prevented%3F-and%2C-with-space-manipulation%2C-can-you-create-a-singularity%3F-then%2C-for-the-last-one%2C-do-the-drawings-come-to-life-from-paper%3F-are-they-still-2d-or-do-they-become-3d%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-all-of-the-ideas-that-you-came-up-with-because-they-are-all-unique-and-have-interesting-concepts-that-can-be-taken-in-a-lot-of-different-directions.--i-personally-love-the-idea-about-your-actions-creating-music-because-i-haven%CA%BBt-seen-a-lot-of-ideas-like-this-and-i-think-a-story-like-this-would-be-very-entertaining-to-watch.--i-really-love-all-the-drawings-you-did-because-they-helped-me-to-understand-your-concepts-more.--good-luck-with-the-project!-%3A) 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/would-the-fish-be-able-to-survive-outside-of-the-water 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-all-of-your-ideas%2C-especially-the-clown-one-at-the-beginning!-your-art-is-really-good%2C-keep-up-the-good-work! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-idea-about-the-dog!-it-would-be-pretty-fun-(and-funny)-to-see-a-dog-trying-to-fit-in-amongst-the-cats.-it-makes-me-think-more-about-accepting-other-people-and-cultures-because...-ya-know...-dogs-and-cats.-(maybe-fix-the-vampire-thing-though%2C-it-kinda-got-cut-off) 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-would-have-been-nice-if-you-had-included-a-few-other-ideas.-this-one-is-interesting%2C-but-it-has-already-been-explored-by-other-media%2C-and-i-wonder-what-your-take-on-it-will-be.-whatever-it-is%2C-make-sure-it-stands-out-from-existing-content! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-idea-about-the-dog!-it-would-be-pretty-fun-(and-funny)-to-see-a-dog-trying-to-fit-in-amongst-the-cats.-it-makes-me-think-more-about-accepting-other-people-and-cultures-because...-ya-know...-dogs-and-cats. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-ideas-you-came-up-with-that-aren%CA%BBt-typical-ideas-and-they-all-have-a-lot-of-room-to-play-around-with.--i-am-personally-interested-in-the-idea-of-the-socks-being-teleported-because-i-have-never-even-considered-an-idea-similar-to-this-before.-- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-found-the-monster-one-really-interesting 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-all-your-what-if's-all-of-these-ideas-are-really-good-for-future-movies 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-that-a-smile-could-really-light-up-a-room%3F-what-would-it-be-like-if-no-one-smiles%2Feveryone-smiles%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/heeey%E2%80%94nice.-love-how-you-played-with-an-idiom-for-the-last-one%3B-that's-always-fun-(watch-syphony-in-slang).-and%2C-for-the-other-two%E2%80%94taking-away-a-defining-characteristic-of-an-animal-is-a-classic.-so%2C-a-few-questions%E2%80%94is-the-firefly-incapable-of-lighting-up-from-a-biological-standpoint%3F-like%2C-have-they-sustained-some-sort-of-damage-or-been-victim-to-some-disability-or-defect%3F-or%2C-do-they-just-not-know-how-to-light-up%3F-then%2C-for-the-tiger%E2%80%94has-it-been-missing-teeth-all-of-its-life%3F-or%2C-is-this-a-recent-development%3F-how-old-is-the-tiger%3F-have-their-teeth-just-not-grown-in%2C-or-have-they-fallen-out%3F-and%2C-does-the-smile-emit-light%3F-or%2C-does-the-room-itself-light-up-whenever-someone-smiles%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-second-idea.-it-makes-me-think-of-the-doodles-i-did-during-different-classes.--what-if-they-can-know-all-about-that-subject-(like-math-or-science)%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-ideas-are-super-cool%2C-i-love-all-of-them-so-much!-the-magic-one-stands-out-to-me---how-would-magic-be-used-in-modern-society%3F-could-it-be-used-for-everyday-things-like-cooking-or-chores-or-for-more-extreme-situations%3F-i-think-there's-a-lot-of-room-to-play-around-with-the-idea-which-is-super-fun! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-your-ideas-were-really-interesting 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-these-ideas-are-super-cool!-i-really-love-all-of-them%2C-especially-the-one-about-the-firefly.-i-wonder-how-the-firefly-feels-about-not-being-able-to-light-up%3F-does-it-feel-excluded-from-the-other-fireflies%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ohhh-cute!!!-it's-always-fun-having-characters-with-more-or-less-impossible-aspirations%E2%80%94and-the-monster-being-afraid-of-its-own-shadow-is-just-some-good-comedy.-as-for-the-middle%2C-i-love-it%2C-but-it-gets-cut-off%2C-so-i-have-no-clue-what-you-said%E2%80%94what-about-the-vampire-is-unique%3F-based-off-of-the-picture-alone%2C-i'm-gonna-assume-maybe-they're-not-allergic-to-the-sun%3F-then%2C-as-for-the-dog-wanting-to-be-a-cat%2C-how-do-they-accomplish-this%3F-and%2C-for-the-monster%2C-is-it-unaware-of-its-own-appearance%3F-like%2C-would-they-be-scared-if-they-ran-into-a-mirror-as-well%3F-or%2C-do-they-just-not-understand-shadows%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-first-idea!-what-will-it-be-like-if-everyone-has-their-own-music-playing-out-loud-and-you-would-hear-a-thousand-different-moods%3F-would-it-be-causing-a-problem%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-art-style-you-used-in-your-what-if's.-i-found-the-second-one-about-magic-really-interesting-would-you-still-be-able-to-living-above-water-or-would-you-have-to-stay-under-water%3F-could-you-talk-to-your-angel%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-alleyway-connected-to-another-world%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-that-world-was 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-robot-that-had-an-identity-crisis.-i-wonder-why-the-robot-is-going-through-it-and-how-it-affects-it's-functions.-it's-a-very-cool-idea-and-i'd-love-to-see-more-of-it! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-that-you-can-walk-on-sunlight.-where-would-you-go%3F-what-if-the-sun-goes-down%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-everyone-had-control-of-space-and-time.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-that-would-lead-to-and-what-would-be-done-with-it 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-everyone-had-control-of-space-and-time.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-that-would-lead-to-and-what-would-be-done-with-it 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/(first-off%2C-lemme-say-that-all-of-these-ideas-are-amazing!!-i-was-stumped-on-which-to-pick.)-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-out-of-these-was-'what-if-a-criminal-met-himself-as-a-child'.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-his-young-self-would-react%2C-as-well-as-how-his-current-self-would. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-everyone-had-control-of-space-and-time.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-that-would-lead-to-and-what-would-be-done-with-it 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-idea-of-the-dream-world.-i-absolutely-feel-in-a-different-world-in-my-dream.--you-can-even-connect-your-stories-in-different-dreams 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-one-where-you-become-smaller.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-psychological-developments-about-all-the-characters-in-your-stories.-what-would-a-person-feel-like-if-they-see-everyone-grow-old%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-love-it%E2%80%94i've-always-loved-the-whole-abandoned%2C-spirited-away-aesthetic%3B-in-fact%2C-one-of-the-first-stories-i-ever-wrote-was-about-exactly-that%E2%80%94a-kid-wakes-up-to-find-everyone-else-is-gone.-same-with-the-last-one%E2%80%94dreams-being-other-dimensions-has-always-been-an-entertaining-thought-for-me.-and%2C-yesss%E2%80%94plant-fairy-elves%3F-lit%E2%80%94elements-of-fantasy-being-hidden-in-plain-sight-is-another-favorite-of-mine.-anyways%2C-anyways%E2%80%94what-happened-to-all-of-the-people-in-the-city%3F-do-they-ever-come-back%3F-were-the-people-ghosted-away%2C-or-was-he-sent-to-an-identical-world-void-of-humans%3F-are-there-any-animals%3F-how's-the-electricity-situation%3F-is-he-at-risk-of-running-out-of-food%3F-(er%E2%80%94well%2C-probably-not-canned-food-given-how-they-can-more-or-less-last-indefinitely)-is-the-phenomenon-isolated-to-his-city-alone%3F-is-the-whole-world-lacking-people%3F-what-happened-to-all-of-the-vehicles-that-were-being-driven-about-when-everyone-up-and-vanished%3F-is-the-road-filled-with-crashed-cars%3F-are-there-any-planes-falling-from-the-sky%3F-then%2C-as-for-the-elves-and-fairies%E2%80%94does-that-mean-that-they-produce-oxygen-instead-of-plants%3F-do-they-breathe-carbon-dioxide%3F-how-do-they-disguise-themselves%3F-what-about-all-of-the-trees-that-we've-cut-down-and-converted-into-paper-and-wood%3F-produce%3F-have-we-been-unknowingly-committing-genocide%3F-it's-dark%2C-i-know%2C-but-it's-a-valid-question.-finally%2C-the-dream-one%E2%80%94can-she-manipulate-things-like-in-a-lucid-dream%3F-is-she-aware-that-she's-stuck-in-a-dream%3F-or%2C-does-she%2C-as-in-most-dreams%2C-believe-that-everything-is-completely-normal-and-nothing-is-awry%3F-is-there-anything-dangerous-in-this-alternate-dimension%3F-will-it-devolve-into-a-nightmare%3F-what's-going-on-with-her-family-and-her-parents%3F-are-they-freaking-out%3F-have-they-brought-her-to-the-emergency-room%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-in-this-submission-was-'what-if-the-sun-never-rose'.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-much-daily-life-would-change%2C-and-what-would-happen-if-the-sun-did-rise-one-day. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-water-falling-in-love-with-fire-story!-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-where-will-they-meet-and-how-would-they-interact-with-each-other.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-idea-of-the-world's-salvation-being-brought-by-demons-to-be-really-interesting.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-the-general-public-would-react%2C-and-if-they-would-accept-this-truth-or-not. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-f-when-people-played-with-dolls-it-came-true-in-another-dimension-2.-this-made-me-wonder-if-the-dolls-would-know-they-are-being-controlled 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-four-people-became-responsible-for-the-elements--2.-it-made-me-wonder-what-kind-of-responsibilities-they-would-have-and-what-they-would-do-with-their-power. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-ideas-you-guys-came-up-with.--i-think-that-they-could-be-really-interesting-concepts-that-haven%CA%BBt-really-been-told-before-so-i-think-it-would-be-new-and-interesting.--i-personally-would-like-to-see-the-idea-about-how-you-shrink-based-on-your-feelings-because-i-think-a-lot-of-people-would-be-able-to-relate-to-this-idea-in-different-ways.--i-also-really-like-the-drawings-you-made-for-these-ideas.-- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-two-ideas-you-came-up-with-because-they-have-a-lot-of-ways-the-story-could-be-written-because-of-how-open-ended-they-are.--i-would-love-to-see-you-try-out-the-idea-about-your-drawings-coming-to-life-because-i-think-i-could-relate-to-that-because-i-love-to-draw.--i-think-that-using-either-of-these-ideas-would-have-a-lot-of-room-for-your-imagination-to-run-wild.--also%2C-i-really-love-the-drawings-you-did-for-these%2C-they-are-very-well-done.-- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-one-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-there-was-a-prince-who-fell-in-love-with-a-witch-2.-this-made-me-wonder-about-what-there-families-would-think%2C-what-kind-of-relationship-they-would-have%2C-would-the-prince-know-his-girl-friend-is-a-witch 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-ideas-that-you-came-up-with-this-and-i-think-they-have-a-lot-of-room-to-play-around-with.--the-first-two-ideas-are-a-little-simple-but-i-think-that-they-could-be-really-good-and-emotional-stories-if-written-the-right-way.--i-really-loved-the-idea-of-if-a-smile-could-literally-light-up-a-room-because-this-is-something-you-would-not-see-every-day-and-the-story-could-be-taken-in-so-many-different-directions.--also-i-really-like-the-drawings-you-did-for-this-to-show-the-ideas-you-have-in-mind-%3A) 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-ghosts-could-call-the-living-through-telephones.-2.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-they-would-say%2C-who-they-would-call-and-why%2C-would-they-keep-calling-and-become-friends- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-is-the-ocean-waves-had-a-conscience%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-happen-if-the-did%2C-if-they-would-act-differently%2C-what-kind-of-conscience-they-would-have. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-humans-didn't-like-the-sun.--2.-this-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-our-lives-would-look-like-if-we-didn't-like%2Fhave-the-sun 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/there's-such-variety-between-the-submissions-and-i'm-very-curious-about-all-of-them!-i-really-want-to-see-mia's-reaction-when-she-finds-out-she's-got-kicked-out-of-ballet-and-i'm-wandering-how-she-will-get-back-to-mike-for-that!-and-how-will-they-switch-back%3F--seems-like-mia-needs-it-to-happen-very-soon!-for-the-second-one%2C-i-have-some-ideas-about-which-creature-i-would-want-to-come-back-and-i'm-curious-what-you-will-choose!-and-will-they-live-in-the-wild%2C-in-a-zoo%3F-so-many-possibilities.-for-the-last-one%2C-i-really-want-to-find-out-if-we-humans-can-visit-their-planets-and-interact-with-them%3F-also-would-love-to-see-who-shares-a-plabnet-with-whom!-so-much-potential%2C-keep-going-destiny-team! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-imagery-and-creativity-of-your-ideas-they-dreamy-feel 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-nooo%2C-the-third-idea%2C-aaaaaaahhh!-it's-so-fascinating%2C-i-can-imagine-that-since-they-know-how-to-fake-love%2C-it-could-have-died-out-in-the-past%3F-what-set-the-trend-for-faking-love%2C-is-it-just-to-fit-in-or-to-act-normal%3F-is-it-just-romantic-love-that's-faked%2C-or-is-it-also-platonic%3F-gosh%2C-it-would-be-so-hard-to-fake-a-friendship%2C-not-to-mention-it-would-hurt-too.-here's-a-what-if-idea-i-came-up-with-deriving-off-of-that-idea%3B-what-if-there-were-two-soulmates-that-truly-did-love-each-other%2C-but-both-of-them-thought-the-other-was-faking-it%3F-awesome-drawings-by-the-way!-great-work! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-art-style-is-really-pleasing-to-the-eye%2C-love-it.-moving-onto-the-ideas%2C-my-favorite-was-the-one-where-humans-could-live-underwater.-it's-a-concept-many-people-explore%2C-but-no-one-has-ever-went-into-detail-about%3F-like%2C-what's-up-with-that%3B-it's-a-great-idea!-i-could-see-different-people-living-in-different-areas.-how-would-the-people-living-in-a-river-or-pond-be-different-to-the-people-living-in%2C-say%2C-the-ocean%3F-and-how-would-life-on-the-surface-be%3F-considering-humans-have-a-tendency-to-uh...-wreck-havoc-on-certain-species%2C-would-fish-life-be-changed-even-more%2C-or-would-the-surface-be-effected-just-as-much%3F-man%2C-so-many-concepts-to-explore! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-your-art%E2%80%93%C2%A0ahem%2C-anyway.-i-am-really-fond-of-the-cat.-like...-the-sketch-of-it-is-so-beautiful.-what-would-they-watch-over%3F-would-there-be-someone-attempting-to-destroy-the-flower-field%2C-or-are-they-a-helper-that-attempts-to-guide-any-lost-beings%3F-what-if-the-cat-met-the-girl-who-could-control-plants%3F-that-would-be-an-interesting-crossover%2C-seeing-how-the-girl-can-manipulate-the-plant-life-there.-awesome-work! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ooh%2C-i-can-totally-see-a-film-being-made-from-the-second-idea%2C-that-one-was-really-interesting.-or-like%2C-a-music-video-of-some-sorts.-i-wonder-if-different-genres-would-have-different-colors%2C-for-example-lofi-music-could-make-everything-a-soft-pastel-color-scheme%2C-while-rock-music-could-make-everything-bright%2C-vivid-flashing-colors.-and-the-third-one...-so-cute!-is-it-literal%2C-or-can-it-also-be-a-metaphor-of-some-sort%3F-very-good-work! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-would-love-to-see-a-story-where-the-sun-never-rose.-i-wonder-if-this-means-that-the-sun-has-never-risen-before-or-if-this-is-a-new-development. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-second-idea-strikes-me-as-the-most-interesting%2C-it-has-tons-of-potential-to-use-real-world-history-with-women's-work-strikes.-i-wonder-what-could-have-caused-such-a-large-group-of-people-to-completely-disappear%2C. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/woah.-okay%2C-before-i-go-into-the-feedback-i'd-just-like-to-say-i-loved-all-the-visuals.-i-was-caught-so-off-guard-by-the-animation-in-the-beginning%2C-i-really-wanted-to-do-animation-for-our-video-but-couldn't-due-to-time-restraints-so-i'm-super-glad-someone-else-did-it-for-us.-anywayyyy%2C-the-idea-i-found-that-was-the-most-interesting-was-the-yearbook-one.-i-can-imagine-it-being-so-chaotic.-would-each-person-have-their-own-little-compartment-in-the-yearbook%3F-is-it-like-an-apartment-complex%3F-could-they-decorate-their-own-room%3F-would-other-people-be-able-to-visit-other-people's-windows%3F-i-mean%2C-technically-that-would-make-them-absent-in-their-own-picture%2C-but-whatever!-and-what-about-the-other-spots-in-the-yearbook%2C-like-how-there-are-different-pages-other-than-just-the-student-pictures.-the-teachers%2C-the-activities-brought-in-school%2C-the-grade-levels...-so-many-different-possibilities!-good-work! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-second-idea-strikes-me-as-the-most-interesting%2C-it-has-tons-of-potential-to-use-real-world-history-with-women's-work-strikes.-i-wonder-what-could-have-caused-such-a-large-group-of-people-to-completely-disappear%2C. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-these-ideas-are-immaculate%2C-it's-hard-to-choose-but-the-3rd-stands-out-to-me-because-of-how-relatable-it-is.-i-wonder-how-the-style-of-the-final-product-would-look-due-to-the-clashing-of-aesthetics. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea%2C-i-think%2C-has-the-most-potential-for-an-amazing-story.--i-wonder-if-you-are-going-to-use-established-religion-as-a-basis-or-if-these-guardians-are-living-entities. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-last-one-is-quite-fitting-for-the-time-of-the-year-and-i'd-love-to-see-it-fleshed-out-more.-i-wonder-what-kind-of-world-you-wish-to-build-through-the-portal. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-clown-idea%2C-i-wonder-if-it-could-turn-into-a-robin-hood-type-of-story%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-first-what-if-was-the-most-interesting%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-conflict-of-the-story-would-end-up-being. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-first-what-if-was-the-most-interesting%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-the-conflict-of-the-story-would-end-up-being. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-agree-with-nova-in-the-replies!!-british-trees-are-awesome!!- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-piano-idea-is-great!-does-the-piano-have-a-favorite-type-of-music%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-piano-idea-is-great!-does-the-piano-have-a-favorite-type-of-music%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-piano-idea-is-great!-does-the-piano-have-a-favorite-type-of-music%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/omg-i-love-the-video!!!-my-favorite-concept-was-the-wand-one.-who-has-control-over-it%3F%3F-who-knows-about-it%3F%3F-have-we-already-used-it%3F%3F%3F-this-story-has-a-lot-of-potential-and-i-am-here-for-it.-ahhh-can't-wait-too-see-what-comes-next 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-the-different-colors-be-based-on-the-instrument-or-the-genre-or-the-person-playing-the-music%3F%3F-what-do-the-colors-mean%3F-i'm-here-for-someone-controlling-everyone-with-their-music.-i-want-to-hear-more-about-the-ocean-waves.-would-this-mean-that-they-purposely-drown-people%3F%3F-can-they-communicate%3F%3F-would-the-sunflowers-also-have-a-conscience%3F%3F-are-they-still-growing-facing-the-sun%3F%3F%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-mushrooms-being-the-dominant-species.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-%22dominant%22-would-mean-in-this-scenario.-would-it-mean-that-they-have-the-largest-population%3F-or-that-they-are-the-tallest%2C-strongest%2C-and-most-powerful%3F-or-both%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/are-the-monsters-trying-to-kidnap-us%3F%3F-where-do-the-monsters-come-from%3F%3F-are-all-teddy-bears-protectors%3F%3F-ahhh-i-will-for-sure-keep-my-eye-on-this-story.-can-the-angel-die%3F%3F-what-happens-when-the-person-dies-does-the-angel-go-to-someone-else%3F%3F-are-there-bad-angels%3F%3F-how-does-living-in-a-2-d-world-effects-our-lifes%3F%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/sorry-not-the-best-at-giving-feed-back%2C-but-i-do-have-a-lot-of-questions.-what-do-the-powers-say-about-them%3F%3F-would-they-be-taught-how-to-use-these-powers-at-school%3F%3F-did-there-powers-determine-what-career-path-they-took%3F%3F-i-think-this-is-a-really-great-concept-and-can't-wait-to-see-where-you-take-it. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-the-last-one!-i-feel-like-it-would-be-an-amazing-stiry 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-all-three-ideas%2C-i-really-enjoyed-the-second-one-though%2C-a-god-making-friends-with-a-mortal. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-history-one-would-be-a-really-good-movie%2Fbook%2C-we-all-know-about-story-of-time-travelers-but-i-love-the-idea-of-it-being-based-more-on-history- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/by-this-did-you-mean-your-own-show-or-an-actual-channel.-fro-show-what-would-be-on-your-show%3F%3F-for-channel-what-kind-of-content-would-you-want-on-it-and-what-would-you-not%3F-would-you-have-shows%2C-talkshows%2C-game-shows%2Cnews%3F%3F%3F-would-the-dat-have-any-powers%3F%3F-could-it-talk-to-humans-or-any-other-animal%3F%3F-would-there-be-others-like-it%3F%3F-how-did-the-animal-get-on-the-moon%3F%3F-are-they-from-earth%3F%3F-i-know-i-have-so-many-questions%2C-but-i'm-just-so-excited-to-see-where-these-ideas-go!!! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-dream-portal%2C-if-every-night-you-went-to-bed%2C-dreaming-then-woke-up-in-a-different-world.-then-it-would-repeat-every-night- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/why-is-the-stork-keeping-the-baby%3F%3F%3F-i-love-the-connect-of-humans-being-raised-by-animals.-i-just-want-to-know-more-of-the-backstory-of-the-stork.-omg!!!!-visiting-history-sounds-sooo-cool.-imagine-having-to-do-a-history-assignment-and-being-able-to-just-go-to-the-moment-you-are-studying.-or-visiting-isaac-newton-and-asking-for-him-help-with-the-laws-of-motion.-my-questions-are-what-the-rules-are-for-visiting-history%3F%3F-are-you-traveling-back-in-time%3F%3F-i-want-to-hear-more-about-this-hidden-sun.-is-it-the-same-sun-we-see-every-day%3F%3F%3F-also-i-saw-the-one-about-what-if-someone-never-saw-the-sun.-i-am-very-intrigued.-why-would-this-person-never-see-the-sun%3F%3F-blind%3F%3F-kept-hidden-away-since-birth%3F%3F-what-happenes-when-they-finally-see-the-sun%3F%3F%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/why-is-the-last-what-if-me%3F%3F%3F%3F-lol.-what-kind-of-world-would-the-person-live-in%3F%3F%3F-like-is-this-a-place-were-they-way-you-dress-says-something-about-you%3F%3F-is-having-so-many-different-aesthetic-bad%3F%3F%3F-the-year-book-one-sounds-sooo-creepy.-i-am-here-for-it!!!-would-all-the-picture-in-the-year-book-be-alive%3F%3F%3F-omg-imagine-closing-it-and-someones-head-is-just-hanging-out.-lol-i-love-the-music-in-the-sky.-one-question-are-there-people-playing-that-music%3F%3F%3F-if-so-how-did-they-get-up-there.-ahhhh-i-am-hooked-and-can't-wait-for-more.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-actually-think-all-three-of-those-ideas-are-super-interesting.-the-one-i-wonder-about-most-is-the-first%2C-like-how-would-people-adapt-to-the-new%2C-only-option-of-light%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-superpowers-idea-really-interesting.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-all-humans-will-have-the-same-sets-of-powers%2C-or-each-person-will-have-their-own-unique-power.-many-great-stories-that-could-come-from-this-idea! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-liked-most-was-the-sunflower%2C-i-feel-like-that-would-be-a-good-story-to-build-on 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-cat-cafe%2C-i-would-love-to-watch%2Fread-a-story-about-something-like-that- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-travelling-by-clouds.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-people-would-get-into-the-clouds.-does-each-person-have-their-own-cloud-that-they-travel-by%3F-there-are-so-many-great-stories-that-could-come-from-this-idea! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-last-idea-sounds-very-interesting.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-and-why-the-sun-was-hidden%3F-i%E2%80%99d-really-like-to-read-or-watch-a-story-about-that! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-visiting-history.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-what-we-could-learn-from-witnessing-historical-events-first-hand.-it-also-makes-me-wonder-how-we-would-visit-history...would-there-be-a-time-travel-machine%3F-would-every-person-be-able-to-visit-history-or-just-one%3F-overall%2C-great-ideas! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/what-if-a-planet-ran-away%3F!-i-am-very-curious-to-know-what-would-indeed-happen.-very-good-what-ifs!-about-the-planet-idea%2C-does-this-mean-celestial-objects-are-sentient%3F-do-they-have-personalities%3F-also%2C-what-would-be-this-planets-motive-for-running-away%3F-you-have-sparked-much-curiosity-in-me.-good-work! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-three-of-your-ideas-are-really-unique%2C-especially-the-last-one.-it-would-be-very-interesting-to-see-how-it-would-be-used-and-incorporated-into-a-story!-i-hope-you-eventually-get-to-create-something-with-it. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/that-last-one-was-particularly-outrageous-(in-the-best-way-possible%3B-it's-wildly-creative).-excellent-job-on-coming-up-with-ideas!-for-the-turtle-idea%2C-i-wonder-if-this-takes-place-in-a-world-where-turtles-live-among-humans-or-if-this-is-one-specific-turtle. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-a-time-traveling-cowboy.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-the-cowboy-will-be-awkward-in-different-time-periods%2C-or-if-he-adapts-to-the-normal-life-of-each-time-period. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-an-ongoing-train.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-people-would-see-the-same-thing-more-than-once%2C-or-if-it-has-a-path-the-never-repeats.-great-drawings-and-%22what-if%22-ideas-as-well! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/these-what-ifs-are-quite-unique!-the-sun-idea-leaves-room-for-many-more%2C-let's-say%2C-sub-ideas-which-is-great.-i-am-curious-to-see-what-you-will-do-to-develop-these-ideas-since-each-allows-for-many-potential-plots. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-different-and-creative-what-ifs!-these-ideas-are-not-too-broad-but-there-are-still-lots-of-ways-each-idea-could-be-explored-which-is-excellent.-the-mushroom-idea-makes-me-think-about-how-humans-would-have-evolved-to-survive-in-this-world-(or-perhaps-there-are-no-humans-at-all%3F).-well-done! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/headed-in-a-very-good-direction!-i-like-the-concept-that-everybody-has-powers-but-they-are-different.-to-develop-idea%2C-maybe-consider-consequences-of-this-phenomenon.-example%3A-how-does-this-world-handle-criminals-that-have-powers%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea-is-very-creative-and-your-description-and-drawings-allowed-me-to-picture-it-easily.-for-the-second-idea%2C-i-wonder-how-people-discover-that-they-are-able-to-do-this-and-how-they-get-to-the-clouds.-very-unique-what-ifs! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-music-instruments-can-change-colors-around-us.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-it-would-look-like-if-there-was-no-music-playing 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-secret-treasure-under-our-house-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-to-find-the-treasure-without-destroying-the-home 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-aliens-visiting-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-they-go-to-earth 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-objects-came-to-life-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-objects-talking-in-youtube-series 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea--i-found-most-interesting-was-the-animals-on-the-moon-and-the-cat-and-dog-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-cat-and-dog-combine-and-how-they-are-space-animals 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-how-narwhals-do-construction.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-construction-workers-work-each-other. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-that-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-going-back-in-time-for-brief-moments-when-you-do-specific-activities.-i-am-intrigued-as-to-what-this-would-look-like-because-i-am-not-sure-exactly-how-this-would-work.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-why-someone-would-want-to-travel-in-time.-or-would-they-not-want-to-but-have-no-choice%3F-what-activities-would-cause-them-to-travel-back-in-time%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-humans-having-already-gone-to-another-galaxy.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-life-would-look-like-on-earth-at-this-time.-would-people-travel-between-galaxies-the-way-we-travel-between-cities%3F-what-would-transportation-to-other-galaxies-look-like%3F-i-think-this-idea-has-a-lot-of-potential-for-a-well-developed-story.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-is-the-one-what-if-mirrors-gave-a-different-reflection.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-it-could-change-our-moods%2C-attitudes%2C--feelings-for-the-day...-would-we-pre-program-the-mirror-to-be-a-positive--message-only-and-have-a-twist-that-an-evil-source-was-coming-to-take-over-all-reflections-to-control-them...-so-many-angles. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-the-first-one.-the-way-their-expressions-look-really-captures-how-they-feel.-i-absolutely-love-your-art-as-well!-although-i-do-have-a-question-about-the-second-one.-why-does-he-have-to-let-go-of-his-friend%3F-i-really-am-curious.-have-an-amazing-day%2Fnight-as-well! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-sunflowers-growing-to-face-things-they-love.-would-a-story-about-this-focus-on-the-lives-of-the-sunflowers-or-the-people-around-them%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-what-it-would-be-like-for-plants-to-have-personalities-and-how-that-would-be-evident-if-sunflowers-grew-towards-what-they-loved.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-michael-penwell-and-his-imagination-world.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-his-imagination-world-is-like-and-how-stressful-his-real-life-is.-does-he-really-want-to-get-back-if-it-was-that-stressful%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-ongoing-train-really-intrigues-me%2C-although-i-do-have-a-few-questions.-where-is-the-train-going%3F-is-anyone-in-the-train%3F-why-is-it-endless%3F-i'm-really-curious-and-i-love-your-art-by-the-way!-have-an-amazing-day%2Fnight! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-humans-not-liking-the-sun.-would-we-be-afraid-and-hide-from-it%3F-or-would-we-just-prefer-to-be-out-of-the-sun%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-we-react-to-weather-that-we-don't-like.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-love-the-cat-idea!-the-way-you-portrayed-them-in-your-artwork-really-made-it-pop-out-to-me!-also%2C-i-am-curious-as-to-why-the-clown-would-pickpocket.-you-have-an-amazing-art-style-and-i-cannot-wait-to-see-your-future-work.-have-an-amazing-day%2Fnight-as-well! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-ocean-waves-had-a-consciousness.-i-think-there-would-be-many-angles-to-a-story-about-this%2C-would-the-relationship-with-the-wave-be-with-the-swimmer%2C-the-surfer%2C-the-sea-creatures.-many-polynesians-have-deep-cultural-relationships-with-the-ocean-waves-naming-many-types-of-them....worth-exploring-the-mythical-tie- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-walking-on-sunlight.-how-would-that-change-people's-daily-lives-or-why-would-that-make-an-impact%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about--how-the-way-we-travel-places-impacts-what-we-see-on-our-journey-and-how-we-can-explore-more-of-the-universe-beyond-our-world.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-last-one-really-popped-out-to-me%2C-especially-the-drawing.-i-absolutely-love-the-idea-and-i-see-so-much-potential-for-it.--the-one-i-do-question-the-most%2C-although%2C-is-how-would-people-get-onto-the-clouds%3F-i'm-genuinely-curious.-have-an-amazing-day%2Fnight-as-well!- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-history-could-be-visited.-it-makes-me-wonder-if-we-visited-it-would-we-fix-what-we-now-know-is-broken... 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-a-child-born-without-an-imagination.-would-they-be-the-only-one-without-an-imagination-or-would-everyone-else-be-in-the-same-position%3F-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-their-life-would-look-like-and-what-they-may-miss-out-on-because-they-cannot-imagine-things.-i-would-be-curious-to-see-what-it-would-look-like-in-a-world-where-only-one-child-had-an-imagination-and-all-the-others-did-not.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-about-the-cutest-couple-breaking-up-causing-world-wide-panic-by-questioning-love.-it-makes-me-wonder-does-true-love-exist%3F-and-if-it-does-do-they-find-it-in-the-end-and-fix-the-world-wide-panic%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea-is-so-interesting!-i'd-really-love-to-know-more-about-it.-also-my-only-question-is-that-if-love-never-existed%2C-then-how-would-people-fake-it%3F-like-how-would-they-know-what-love-is%3F-amazing-art-by-the-way%2C-and-i-hope-you-all-have-an-amazing-day%2Fnight.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-could-travel-back-in-time-for-brief-moments.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-i-would-change-or-decide-to-stay-longer-for. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-we-could-travel-back-in-time-for-brief-moments.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-i-would-change-or-decide-to-stay-longer-for. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-with-constellations.-i-honestly-love-constellations%2C-so-living-in-a-world-like-that-would-be-a-dream-come-true.-although-it-does-make-me-wonder-about-the-types-of-constellations-we-could-bring-back%2C-such-as-ursa-major-or-minor%2C-or-orion.-(also-i-just-wanted-to-say-that-your-art-is-lovely%2C-and-i-apologize-if-i-submit-this-more-than-once%2C-the-site-is-rather-laggy-as-of-now.-have-an-amazing-day%2Fnight-as-well!) 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/such-creatively-rich-ideas.-i-would-be-interested-in-seeing-you-develop-any-of-these-ideas-further%2C-and-am-particularly-curious-to-know%3A-1)-would-the-notebook-be-used-for-good-or-evil-purposes%3F-would-it-change-hands-often%3F-how-would-the-writer-discover-its-special-powers%3F-2)-curious-to-know-more-about-both-of-these-characters-and-the-lives-they-previously-led.-plus%2C-what-do-they-learn-from-this-life-switch%3F-3)-where-did-this-magic-juice-come-from%3F-who-gets-access-to-it%3F-when-would-your-main-character-choose-to-use-it%3F-fantastic-ideas%2C-can't-wait-to-learn-more! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-your-idea-with-the-superpowers.-theres-so-many-ways-you-could-take-it.-i-suggest-narrowing-it-down-to-not-overwhelm-with-all-the-possibilities.-what-do-they-use-the-powers-for%3F-what-kind-of-powers-do-they-have%2C-things-like-flying-or-teleportation%3F-or-maybe-you-could-go-really-specific-like-the-power-to-grow-plants-off-your-body. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-first-idea-had-me-most-interested.-and-made-me-think-why-was-it-hidden%3F-overall%2C-very-good-topics! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/such-rich-ideas.-i-am-really-drawn-to-the-first-idea%2C-mostly-because-it-is-even-more-important-in-today's-times-to-connect-with-one-another-face-to-face-and-not-through-devices.-i-would-be-very-interested-to-know-more-about-the-first-or-third-idea%2C-and-the-worlds-you-are-going-to-create-around-those-ideas.-great%2C-clear-illustrations-too. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-feel-like-your-ideas-and-how-they-are-all-different!-i'm-really-excited-to-see-how-the-story-unfolds.-i-like-how-all-the-stories-have-a-little-bit-of-science-woven-into-the-overall-topic. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-feel-like-your-ideas-and-how-they-are-all-different!-i'm-really-excited-to-see-how-the-story-unfolds.-i-think-you-idea-with-super-powers-would-be-super-fun-to-play-around-with. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-metaphor-that-you-are-creating-with-your-%22what-if%22-world%2C-and-it-seems-like-you-already-know-the-story-you-want-to-create.-it-is-rich-in-possibility-in-the-different-directions-you-can-go-and-especially-in-how-you-can-visually-create-this-world.-i'd-like-to-see-you-really-take-time-to-develop-your-%22what-if%22-idea-and-your-character-in-that-world%2C-before-jumping-ahead-to-the-rest-of-your-story-so-that-you-give-adequate-time-to-dive-deeper-into-who-your-character-is.--fantastic-idea-and-can't-wait-to-learn-more-about-your-character! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-feel-like-your-ideas-and-how-they-are-all-different!-i'm-really-excited-to-see-how-the-story-unfolds.-%233-is-a-little-confusing-to-understand-but-i'm-sure-it'll-make-a-great-story. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-three-of-your-ideas--are-so-interesting!-i'm-really-excited-to-see-how-the-stories-unfold.-something-i-would-add-is-color%2C-as-a-visual-learner-i-feel-like-color-really-tells-a-story. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-second-idea-about-walking-on-sunlight!-it's-such-a-beautiful-image-if-you-imagine-it!-where-would-the-sunlight-lead-to%3F-what-difference-will-it-create-in-our-world%3F-i'm-so-excited-about-this-idea!--the-third-gave-me-shivers%2C-soooo-mysterious!-the-way-you-drew-the-picture-was-also-captivating!-it-gives-off-a-sense-of-loneliness-and-quietness%2C-and-that-so-many-stories-could-happen-with-this-train.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hi!-i-found-the-first-idea-very-interesting%2C-i-immediately-started-imagining-a-world-without-the-sun!-would-humans-and-animals-still-survive%3F-if-yes-how-would-we-live%3F-how-fun!-maybe-you-could-do-some-research-about-that-to-help-you-further-develop-your-idea%2C-it-might-give-you-more-inspiration.-i-believe-that-your-team-can-create-wonderful-things-with-it%2C-it-has-the-potential-to-blow-everyone's-mind!--the-second-one-is-creative-too!-since-plants-could-walk%2C-would-they-become-a-part-of-our-society%3F-or-will-they-become-beings-like-animals%3F-so-interesting!--oh-the-third-one's-definitely-going-to-create-a-world-that-everyone-dreams-about!-it-would-be-heart-warming-to-see-how-you-show-the-world's-beauty-without-global-warming!--- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-very-interested-in-your-first-idea-and-want-to-know-more-details-about-this-concept.--do-you-mean-people-are-expending-energy-to-generate-electricity-or-how-exactly-are-people-%22doing%22-the-electricity%3F-this-is-a-rich-idea-and-i-look-forward-to-seeing-the-direction-you-take-this-in.-nice-work! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-am-really-intrigued-by-your-first-idea.-past-lives-and-imaginary-friends%2C-are-the-seeds-to-grow-this-idea-into-many-different-paths---it-has-me-hooked-and-i-want-to-know-more. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-planets-talking.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-earth-would-say-to-people-about-climate-change. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-that-humans-didn%E2%80%99t-like-the-sun.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-caused-this-and-how-humans-would-remodel-their-society.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hey-everyone!-uhh..-my-names-charles-choo-and-im-looking-forward-to-seeing-you-on-monday-to-talk-about-characters. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-earth-running-out-of-oxygen.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-earth-came-to-have-no-oxygen.-i-also-wonder-how-people-would-cope-and-how-people-would-decide-who-gets-oxygen. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-earth-running-out-of-oxygen.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-earth-came-to-have-no-oxygen.-i-also-wonder-how-people-would-cope-and-how-people-would-decide-who-gets-oxygen. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-job! 2021-10-12 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-time-traveling-cowboy.-it-makes-me-wonder-wether-they-lived-in-a-place-or-time-where-a-wristwatch-was-common%2C-or-was-it-an-unknown-invention%3F-also-in-the-picture-there-was-a-bird%2C-and-i-wonder-what-significance-this-bird-will-have-in-the-story.-i-also-wonder-what-times-they-will-travel-to%2C-and-how-they-will-think-about-the-things-they-see-from-their-perspective. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-the-idea-about-the-yearbook%2C-i-have-so-many-different-ideas-of-what-their-personalities-would-be-like!-i-wonder-if-the-younger-yearbooks-would-be-quirkier-and-sillier-than-the-older-yearbooks.-would-they-get-along-together%3F-how-would-they-talk%3F-would-they-have-different-appearances%3F-is-their-one-yearbook-assigned-to-a-year-and-they-represent-that-year%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-magic-in-the-modern-day.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-magic-vs.-technology-would-influence-people%E2%80%99s-daily-lives.-i-wonder-what-conflicts-people%E2%80%99s-preference-would-bring. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-loved-this-idea-about-powers%2C-it-made-me-have-lots-of-curiosity-and-fun-questions%2C-it-sparked-lots-of-interesting-conversations-with-me-and-my-peers.-the-creativity-in-this-idea-is-inspiring%2C-good-job! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-for-a-story-was-the-idea-of-a-dream-becoming-reality-for-one-day.-i-wonder-how-would-manage-your-time-that-single-day. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-secret-world-on-the-arctic.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-the-plot-of-the-story-and-if-humans-would-find-out.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-a-cat-cafe-run-by-cats.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-how-people-would-react-to-that-situation.-would-people-be-afraid-of-the-cats%3F-or-would-their-cafe-be-a-popular%2C-and-accepted-by-the-local-community.-also%2C-the-cat-cafe-could-be-a-normal-thing%2C-with-cats-doing-other-jobs.-also%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-what-unique-problems-the-cat-cafe-would-have.-i-think-those-could-make-a-good-story. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-if-the-world-went-dark-and-you-only-had-the-light-of-others-to-guide-you.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-people-gave-off-light-and-where-this-story-would-take-place. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-certainly-likes-the-man-living-through-human-history.-however-the-second-one-is-highly-possible-making-it-a-real-life-scenario.-i-feel-that-could-use-some-work%2C-for-instance-the-boy-is-found-a-hidden-pathway-leading-to-the-future-of-something-more-on-those-lines.--rest-everything-is-absolutely-fine-and-visually-appealing.--do-leave-your-feedback-on-my-page-(ayush-%2C-team%3Ajarvis)_ 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-these-illustrations-are-innovative.-i-liked-the-last-one-(what-if-everyone-looked-like-what-the-like)-however-the-dog-one-could-have-uses-a-little-work.-for-example-what-if-the-dogs-started-industrialization-on-mars-and-begun-civilization.--besides-that-everything-else-is-great%2C-especially-the-vibrancy-of-colors-used.-its-making-these-illustrations-really-appealing-to-the-eyes.--do-leave-your-feedback-on-my-page.-(-ayush%2C-team%3A-jarvis)-- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/all-of-these-clips-are-brilliant-ideas%2C-specially-the-first-one.--the-only-work-you-can-do-to-enhance-these-is-the-addition-of-colors.-visual-appealing-is-as-important-as-the-stories-behind-them.--rest-everything-is-good.--do-leave-a-feedback-on-my-page-(ayush%2C-team%3Ajarvis) 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-clip-which-i-loved-the-most-was-about-the-sunflower.-i-loved-how-the-way-you-adopted-and-idea-from-nature-and-constructed-a-well-structured-%22what-if%22.-on-the-other-hand%2C--i-do-feel-the-wave%2Focean-could-have-used-a-little-more-work.-its-kinda-similar-to-the-disney-movie-moana.-but-that-should-not-stop-you.-a-little-more-work-on-it-for-instance-%22-what-if-the-ocean-created-different-patterns-on-hearing-different-musical-tunes%22-etc%2C-could-do-the-job-for-enhancing-it.--it-would-be-appreciated-if-you-could-leave-a-feedback-on-my-clip-as-well.-(ayush%2C--team%3A-jarvis)- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-one%2C-about-the-yearbook-was-thee-bestt!!-it-would-have-been-amazing-if-the-yearbook-really-came-to-life.-i-loved-what-you-did-with-the-pictorial-representation.-it-was-comprehensive-yet-extremely-simple-to-understand.-however%2C-the-rest-of-the-clips-could-have-used-the-some-more-work%2C-for-instance-better-visuals.-moreover-the-idea-of-teenager's-aesthetic-looks-could-have-used-vibrancy-in-the-colors-of-the-dresses..as-they-weren't-standing-out-much-from-the-background.--beside-that%2C-the-idea-for-all-the-clips-were-extremely-unique-and-creative.--btw%2C-do-leave-your-feedback-on-my-submission-(ayush%2C-team%3Ajarvis)-all-feedback-are-welcomed.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-artwork.-this-makes-me-wonder-what-the-dog's-brain-would-be-like.-would-the-brain-still-be-the-same-dog-brain%3F-does-the-dog-turn-into-the-owner-or-does-the-owner-get-to-hand-out-with-the-new-dog%2Fhuman.-can't-wait!! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hey%2C-the-food-one-surely-made-me-think%2C-it-was-a-pretty-interesting-one.-all-of-your-%22what-if's%22-are-interesting%2C-but-i-feel-you-could-have-put-in-more-efforts-in-drawing.-as-to-if-there-is-no-voice-over%2C-people-will-still-understand-what-your-trying-to-share.--oh%2C-do-leave-your-feedback-on-mine-too-(ayush%2C-team%3A-jarvis).-im-open-to-all!-thanks 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow%E2%80%94before-i-talk-about-anything-else%2C-that-is-a-very-impressively-drawn-child-in-the-first-drawing%E2%80%94it-reminds-me-of-some-of-those-beautifully-illustrated-picture-books.-but%2C-about-the-idea-itself%E2%80%94super-good.-love-the-tiny-sword-in-the-bear's-hand.-the-concept-is-just-a-bunch-of-fun%2C-and-the-ghost-gives-me-luigi's-mansion-energy.-question%E2%80%94is-the-defending-limited-to-teddy-bears%3F-or%2C-do-other-stuffed-animals-also-protect-you%3F-actually%2C-do-other-toys-in-general-also-protect-you%3F-and%2C-as-for-the-monsters%E2%80%94how-much-live-under-the-bed%3F-is-there-a-portal-from-which-they-come-out-of%3F-next-idea%E2%80%94i-always-love-a-good-guardian-angel.-they're-depicted-like-shoulder-angels%E2%80%94are-there-also-shoulder-demons%3F-do-people-see-the-guardian-angels%3F-or%2C-at-the-very-least%2C-do-they-see-their-own-guardian-angels%3F-how-do-the-guardian-angels%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94guard%E2%80%94the-humans%3F-do-people-only-have-one-guardian-angel-throughout-their-lives%3F-or%2C-are-there-multiple%3F-okay%2C-okay%2C-okay.-last-one.-the-2d-world-one.-so-meta%E2%80%94it's-wonderful.-gives-me-super-paper-mario-(play-it-it's-great-i-don't-care-what-other-people-say-because-they're-wrong-and-it's-amazing)-vibes%E2%80%94particularly%2C-i'm-reminded-of-flipside-and-flopside-(for-more-stuff-that-plays-with-space-and-dimensions-look-into-miegakure%2C-hyperbolica%2C-and-superliminal).-anyways%2C-lots-of-fun-to-be-had-with-dimensions.-so%2C-let-me-pose-an-interesting-question%2C-what-do-people-within-the-2d-world-perceive.-is-their-vision-omnipresent-and-just-able-to-view-the-world-the-way-we-would-on-a-screen%3F-because%2C-well%E2%80%94here%3A-we-live-in-a-world-with-3-spatial-dimensions-(as-far-as-we're-aware%E2%80%94ignoring-string-theory-for-a-second)%2C-so-we-perceive-length%2C-height%2C-and-depth.-so%2C-we-can-tell-if-something-is-to-our-left.-we-can-tell-if-something-is-below-us.-and%2C-we-can-tell-if-something-is-in-front-of-us.-now%2C-imagine-you-are-in-a-2d-world.-if-your-2d-eyes-are-kinda-similar-to-the-3d-equivalent%2C-you're-gonna-be-able-to-perceive-height-and-depth.-so%2C-more-or-less%2C-your-line-of-sight-will-literally-be-restricted-to-a-vertical-line.-so%2C-if-we-took-the-a-2d-game-sprite%2C-we'd-only-see-the-outermost-pixels.-sorry%E2%80%94that-was-a-tangent%E2%80%94and-that's-probably-not-how-you-want-to-make-yours-work-nor-would-it-necessarily-be-a-good-idea%E2%80%94but-it's-a-thought-experiment-i-had%2C-and-i-thought-i'd-share-how-fun-it-was.-hopefully%2C-i-didn't-bore-you-to-death.-w%E2%80%94hold-on-a-second.-so%2C-you-know-how%2C-in-most-2d-games%2C-the-character-sprites'-face-is-facing-towards-the-screen%3F-well%2C-in-their-perspective%2C-since-they-have-two-eyes%2C-that-means-that-they-can-probably-see-3d%2C-but-they're-always-looking-outside-of-their-own-dimension.-i%E2%80%94sorry%2C-i'm-very-sidetracked.-bottom-line%3F-great-idea. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/plant-hooman-yes-please.-ghost-x-human-yes-please.-super-power-raffle-yes-please.-*chokes*-sorry%2C-i'm-overly-excited.-i-love-it-all.-combining-humans-with-nature-is-always-fun-for-metaphors-and-messages-and%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94mainly-just-aesthetics.-very-cute.-it-reminds-me-of%E2%80%94oddly-enough%2C-the-veggie-might-microgame-from-warioware%2C-inc.%3A-mega-party-game%24!-another-thing-it-reminds-me-of-is-the-legend-behind-kalo.-but%2C-so%2C-is-this-how-all-humans-are-born%3F-or%2C-is-this-only-how-some-humans-are-born%3F-how-long-does-it-take-for-them-to-grow%3F-is-it-9-months%3F-do-they-ever-unroot-themselves%3F-are-the-humans-the-fruit-of-the-plant%3F-or%2C-are-they-more-of-a-root-vegetable%3F-next%E2%80%94i-mean.-hey%2C-there's-nothing-that-says-humans-can't-fall-in-love-with-ghosts.-the-only-barrier-to-our-love-is-the-fact-that-we've-yet-to-definitively-see-any%2C-and-all-the-purported-encounters-haven't-been-very-romantic.-but%2C-so%2C-what-are-ghost-in-this-scenario%3F-are-ghosts-not-the-same-as-people-who-have-passed-on%3F-are-they-a-separate-entity-all-together%3F-can-you-have-half-ghost-children-with-them%3F-can-you-touch-them%3F-can-they-touch-you%3F-finally%2C-for-the-super-power-one%2C-how-are-the-powers-selected%3F-i-sort-of-assumed-that-it-was-by-some-type-of-raffle-based-on-the-drawing-but-i-want-to-make-sure.-also%2C-what's-the-age-that-you-get-your-super-power%3F-or%2C-does-the-age-vary-from-person-to-person%3F-anyhow%2C-good-stuff. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i%E2%80%94wh%E2%80%94i%E2%80%94mushro%E2%80%94co%E2%80%94wha%E2%80%94*dies*-yes.-sorry%E2%80%94i-was-so-blindsided-i-needed-a-moment-to-recover.-mushroom-and-cow%3F-romance%3F-anthropomorphized-(i-assume-from-the-drawing)%3F-my-new-otp.-no-idea-how-you-thought-of-this%2C-but-i'm-absolutely-glad-that-you-did.-is-the-world-filled-with-these-kinds-of-anthropomorphized-creatures%3F-do-they-share-the-same-sort-of-biological-characteristics-as-their-real-life-counterparts%3F-like%2C-do-the-mushrooms-have-their-up-to-36%2C000-odd-genders%3F-do-the-cows-have-4-stomach-compartments%3F-oh%2C-to-have-4-stomach-compartments.-i-can-see-the-allure-now.-how-do-mushroom-and-cow-meet%3F-second%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94before-i-ask-any-questions-about-it%2C-i'll-give-my-answer.-nothing-good.-nothing-good-would-happen-if-women-disappeared.-the-world-(the-human-world-at-least)-would-most-assuredly-end.-i-mean%2C-first-of-all%2C-women-make-up-a-great-deal-of-the-workforce.-all-families-would-be-without-mothers.-and%2C-of-course%2C-procreation-is-now-impossible-(i-mean%2C-technically-there-are-potential-surgical-solutions-but-most-of-them-are-transplants-which%E2%80%94you-guessed-it%E2%80%94require-women%2C-and-even-if-that-weren't-an-issue%E2%80%94maybe-we-did-some-3d-printing-stuff-with-stem-cells%E2%80%94no-such-surgery-has-been-done-before).-*cough*-sorry%2C-sorry%E2%80%94not-docking-the-idea-i-think-it's-great%E2%80%94i'm-just-fairly-confident-that-my-answer-is-accurate.-also%E2%80%94maybe-it's-semantics%2C-but-you-did-say-that-they-%22disappear%22-from-earth%2C-rather-than-%22disappeared%22%2C-so-i-assume-it's-an-ongoing-process%3F-so%2C-anyone-who-later-goes-on-to-identify-as-female-will-vanish-immediately%3F-anyways%2C-very-good-idea%E2%80%94it'd-really-help-to-cement-the-idea-that-we-need-all-types-of-people%2C-and-diversity-is-really-important.-okay%2C-last-but-not-least%2C-the-moon-and-the-ocean%E2%80%94i-love-it.-it's-so-cute-because-it-plays-with-the-whole-idea-of-the-tide-and-how-that's-caused-by-the-attraction-of-the-ocean-to-the-moon-through-gravity%E2%80%94ugh%E2%80%94love-it.-so%2C-is-the-ocean-and-the-moon-both-sentient%3F-do-they-both-have-faces%3F-does-the-ocean-have-no-hopes-of-ever-reaching-the-moon%3F-is-water-that's-removed-from-the-ocean-still-considered-part-of-the-ocean%3F-what-about-water-that-evaporates%3F-if-someone-were-to-take-water-on-their-trip-to-the-moon-(which%2C-they-would-need-to)%2C-and-the-water-originated-from-the-ocean-but-was-filtered-and-purified-with-uv-and-such%2C-would-it-still-count-as-the-ocean%3F-sorry%E2%80%94lots-of-needlessly-complicated-questions%2C-but-i-just-love-these-ideas-a-lot%2C-so-i'm-curious. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-lovely%E2%80%94personifying-objects-is-always-enjoyable%2C-so-literally-bringing-the-walls-to-life%3F-nice.-though%E2%80%94what-defines-a-wall%3F-it-sounds-like-a-bit-of-a-silly-question%2C-but-in-houses-that-aren't-as-traditional%2C-it-gets-a-bit-tricky.-like%2C-what-if-a-house-was-circular%3F-is-it-all-one-wall%3F-or%2C-is-it-infinitely-many-walls%3F-what-about-a-dome%3F-is-it-a-ceiling%3F-a-wall%3F-both%3F-what-about-in-space%3F-(i-know-i'm-reaching-a-bit%2C-but-i'm-just-really-curious)-is-everything-a-wall-in-a-space-station-because-of-the-lack-of-directions%3F-do-we-also-count-the-exterior-of-a-house-as-being-able-to-talk%3F-do-we-count-the-inside-and-outside-of-the-wall-as-the-same-wall%3F-do-the-walls-have-faces%2C-like-depicted-in-the-drawing%3F-which-side-of-the-wall-is-the-front%3F-okay%2C-i'm-done-with-that-one-for-now%E2%80%94as-for-the-second%E2%80%94i-mean%E2%80%94it's-not-that-far-off-from-reality-is-it%3F-much-of-our-decisions-are-already-being-dictated-by-computers-and-algorithms%E2%80%94we-rely-heavily-on-technology.-i-mean%2C-take-media-platforms-like-youtube%E2%80%94there's-the-recommended-list%2C-there's-the-trending-videos%2C-you-can-enable-autoplay%E2%80%94it's-a-pretty-controlled-experience.-we-have-voice-activated-assistants.-we-have-smart-home-technology.-self-driving-cars-are-on-the-rise.-don't-get-me-wrong-these-aren't-bad-things%E2%80%94they-certainly-make-life-a-whole-lot-more-convenient%2C-but-we're-not-too-far-off-from-that-world-you've-imagined.-so%2C-is-the-story-a-precautionary-tale%3F-do-they-use-machines-even-to-decide-when-they-should-use-the-restroom%3F-when-they-should-blink%3F-what-they-should-say%3F-and%2C-then%2C-the-human-time-machine-one%E2%80%94i'm-reminded-of-prince-of-persia%3A-the-sands-of-time%2C-edge-of-tomorrow%2C-and-arrival.-how-does-the-time-travel-work%3F-is-it-a-biological-mechanism%3F-can-only-they-time-travel%3F-or%2C-can-they-bring-other-people-with-them-if-they-are-in-contact-with-them%3F-can-they-bring-items%2C-like-their-clothes%3F-how-far-into-the-past-and-future-can-they-go%3F-can-they-go-even-to-times-where-their-body-doesn't-exist%3F-like%2C-before-they're-born-or-after-they-die%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you've-caught-my-interest.-love-the-dat%E2%80%94very-cute%E2%80%94very-good-onomatopoeia-at-the-end%2C-too-(the-meow-wow).-is-it-by-any-chance-inspired-by-blue-from-blue's-clues%3F-big-fan%2C-but-i-feel-like-we-might-run-into-legal-issues-haha.-then%2C-for-the-five-animals-one%E2%80%94i-see-that-you've-depicted-some-mythical-creatures%3F-you've-also-depicted-more-than-5-animals-(even-excluding-the-alien)%E2%80%94are-they-not-all-stuck-on-the-moon%3F-can-they-all-breathe-without-equipment%3F-how-did-they-get-stuck-there%3F-do-they-ever-return-to-their-homes%3F-finally%E2%80%94i%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94what-if-you-had-your-own-television-channel-indeed.-i-support-this.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/personally%2C-i-would-love-to-watch-a-teddy-bear-go-toe-to-toe-with-a-monster.-whether-it-is-presented-as-funny%2C-serious%2C-or-dramatic%2C-it's-a-very-creative-and-entertaining-idea!-it-reminds-me-of-both-toy-story-and-monsters%2C-inc.-while-still-feeling-like-its-own%2C-original-idea%2C-which-is-super-cool!-does-the-teddy-bear-become-less-needed-as-the-child-ages%3F-does-the-monster-get-weaker-over-time%3F-it-would-also-be-pretty-funny-to-see-the-teddy-bear-and-the-monster-scrambling-to-conceal-themselves-if-the-child-started-waking-up. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/your-drawing-for-the-a-capella-dogs-really-got-me%E2%80%94i-was-laughing-so-hard.-it's-just%E2%80%94everything-about-it-is-so-beautiful%E2%80%94the-caption-really-makes-it.-and%2C-the-gun-powered-vehicles-idea-is-just-so-over-the-top-and-ludicrous%E2%80%94i-love-it.-then%2C-that-second-one%3F-yeessss%E2%80%94if-you-haven't-already%2C-please-watch-the-first-two-episodes-of-hilda-because-it-plays-with-that-exact-idea%E2%80%94actually%2C-just-watch-them-all%E2%80%94hilda-is-amazing.-m'k%E2%80%94um%2C-guns%E2%80%94guns.-so%2C-since-the-cars'-locomotion-is-entirely-reliant-upon-gun-recoil%2C-does-that-mean-that-instead-of-a-gas-station%2C-there's-just-a-bullet-refill-station%3F-do-they-insert-new-magazines-into-the-car%3F-how-would%E2%80%94uh%E2%80%94how-would-driving-in-a-lane-work%3F-what-happens-to-the-cars-behind-the-first-driver%3F-in-fact%2C-what-happens-to-anyone-who-happens-to-be-behind-the-cars-while-they're-driving%3F-what's-the-braking-system-like%3F-since-vehicle-propulsion-systems-have-been-replaced-with-guns%2C-have-guns-been-replaced-by-propulsion-systems%3F-do-flying-vehicles-shoot-downwards-to-maintain-lift%3F-next%2C-do-the-giants-do-nothing-but-sleep%3F-like%2C-are-they-just-staying-still-all-day%3F-or%2C-do-they-occasionally-stir-and-move%2C-but-without-people-noticing%3F-also%2C-how-big-are-we-talking%3F-the-size-of-a-two-story-building%3F-the-size-of-a-skyscraper%3F-an-ocean%3F-are-the-sizes-variable%3F-finally%2C-are-the-dogs-singing-in-english-or-are-they-just-singing-with-their-howls%3F-whatever-the-case%2C-lovely-work. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-in-awe.-this-art-style-is-phenomenal%2C-and-the-concepts-are-so-creative!-the-last-idea-caught-my-attention-because-of-how-it-subverts-usual-fairy-tale-tropes.-there-are-so-many-aspects-of-this-idea-to-explore.-how-did-he-meet-the-witch%3F-why-does-he-prefer-the-witch-to%2C-say%2C-a-princess-or-a-normal-peasant-girl%3F-that-being-said%2C-i-would-absolutely-love-to-see-a-screen-adaptation-of-the-second-idea.-there's-room-for-adventure-and-humor%2C-and-it-would-be-so-interesting-to-see-the-creatures-the-elderly-people-turn-into! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/gaahhh%2C-i-have-such-a-hard-time-choosing-just-one-of-these-ideas-to-talk-about.-they-are-all-so-interesting-and-unique.-the-yearbook-concept-is-particularly-intriguing-to-me%2C-because-if-the-people-in-the-yearbook-don't-age%2C-there-is-room-to-develop-some-very-interesting-commentary-about-youth-and-growth.-would-the-students'-interpersonal-relationships-be-static%2C-mimicking-and-repeating-what-happened-in-real-life%2C-or-would-the-yearbook-personas-grow-into-their-own-people-over-time%3F-at-the-same-time%2C-the-music-school-in-the-clouds-has-the-potential-to-be-a-very-visually-and-audibly-appealing-piece%2C-with-sunsets-and-a-brilliant-score.-meanwhile%2C-the-idea-about-a-teenager's-aesthetic-could-make-for-a-very-cute%2C-colorful%2C-and-funny-short-film.-it-could-also-expand-on-topics-like-individuality%2C-conformity%2C-and-adolescence.-i-can't-wait-to-see-how-you-develop-them-further. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-so-hyped.-this-is-so-epic-i'm-so-pumped-up.-love-it.-i-appreciate-the-comedy-in-all-of-your-ideas.-incompetent-space-invaders%3F-everyday-dragons%3F-confirmation-that-clowns-are-devil%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94d...octer-evil-spawn%3F-fantastic.-delectable.-what-kind-of-silly-antics-would-the-aliens-get-up-to%3F-what-mistakes-would-they-make%3F-would-the-conflict-resolve-peacefully%3F-are-there-any-wild-dragons-in-this-world-of-domesticated-ones%3F-are-they-able-to-breathe-fire%3F-what's-the-purpose-of-intentionally-tormenting-people%3F-do-people-ever-find-out-about-the-origin-of-clowns%3F-are-there-any-clowns-that-are-just-regular-people-who-have-chosen-a-profession%3F-or%2C-are-all-clowns-lab-produced%3F-love-your-ideas%E2%80%94love-your-voice%E2%80%94keep-it-up. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow!-all-three-of-these-ideas-were-unique-and-original%2C-but-my-favorite-was-the-dream-crusher.-the-execution-of-this-storyline-could-really-resonate-with-people%2C-and-there's-a-lot-of-potential-for-emotionally-charged-scenes-and-character-development!-why-does-the-dream-crusher-want-to-go-to-the-human-realm-to-make-new-friends%3F-does-he-not-get-along-with-the-other-monsters-in-his-realm%3F-do-they-look-like-him%3F-what-causes-the-human-boy-to-treat-him-with-kindness%3F-is-he-an-outcast-that-empathizes-with-the-dream-crusher's-predicament%2C-or-is-he-just-nice-by-nature%3F-there-is-so-much-to-explore-here! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-particularly-fond-of-the-last-idea!-it-really-got-my-attention-and-made-me-think.-how-would-an-underwater-society-function%2C-or-a-sky-society-for-that-matter%3F-are-the-kids-in-question-all-human%2C-or-are-they-all-of-different-species%3F-why-do-the-three-kingdoms-hate-each-other%3F-did-something-happen-between-them-in-the-past%3F-how-do-they-sustain-life-in-the-air-and-water%3F-is-there-magic-involved%2C-or-do-these-kingdoms-thrive-on-advanced-technology%3F-how-do-the-children-even-meet%2C-and-why%3F-it's-such-a-wonderful-prompt-with-so-much-potential!-this-story-could-go-in-any-number-of-directions. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-very-cool.-love-the-expressions-in-the-game-reality-one.-how-does-it-work%2C-though%3F-are-the-two-worlds-separate-but-directly-influenced-by-one-another%3F-do-people-play-the-game-by-doing-things-in-real-life%3F-do-gamers-control-characters-that-are-actually-reflections-of-real-life-people%3F-like%2C-gamers-are-inadvertently-controlling-real-people-in-addition-to-their-characters%3F-the-second-one...-don't-get-me-wrong%2C-i-love-it%2C-i'm-just-not-too-sure-how-this-would-be-different-from-reality.-i-mean%2C-pretty-much-any-world-religion-you-subscribe-to-that-has-a-god-believes-that-god-can-or-does-control-the-world.-is-the-difference-in-level-of-involvement%3F-like%2C-does-the-god-you-imagine-intervene-frequently-and-heavily-and-in-very-distinct-and-obvious-ways%3F-do-they-interact-directly-with-people-on-a-daily-basis%3F-are-people-aware-of-this-god%3F-as-for-the-last-one%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94not-to-be-dark-or-anything%2C-but-we-totally-can-eat-our-own-bodies.-there-are-some-people-that-do.-anything's-edible-if-y'-try-hard-enough.-so%2C-to-build-on-that-idea%2C-is-there-any-advantage-to-consuming-your-body-parts%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-of-robots-replacing-humans-opens-the-door-for-so-much-world-building!-i-love-this-idea%2C-and-it-makes-me-wonder-what-happened-to-the-humans.-how-did-they-disappear%3F-did-they-leave-the-planet-or-die-off-in-an-apocalypse%3F-or-maybe-they-didn't-disappear-at-all%2C-but-they-live-as-second-class-citizens.-would-the-protagonist-of-the-story-be-a-robot-or-a-human%3F-how-does-this-tie-into-ideas-about-artificial-intelligence-and-consciousness%3F-would-the-plot-of-the-story-focus-on-restoring-humanity's-global-dominance%2C-or-would-it-ignore-the-existence-of-humans-altogether%3F-this-idea-has-so-much-potential%2C-and-i-can't-wait-to-see-what-you-do-with-it-(if-you-choose-to-expand-upon-it%2C-of-course)! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-someone-is-watching-because-your-drawing-caught-my-eye-(get-it).-after-looking-at-the-full-picture-of-this-what-if%2C-there-is-what-looks-like-to-be-a-huge-ghost-in-the-back-of-the-eyes-and-i-am-wondering-what-that-is%3F-do-the-eyes-come-out-of-that-huge-being%3F-the-eyes-are-also-very-cool-and-the-person-looks-shy-but-happy-because-he%3F-is-smiling%2C-which-makes-me-wonder-if-he-knows-he-is-being-watched%2C-and-how-would-he-find-out-if-he-didn't.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-probably-the-second-one-because-it-is-a-place-without-women%2C-which-seems-really-interesting-to-talk-about-and-makes-the-gender-equality-and-all-the-women's-rights-and-men-over-women-politics-come-around-and-be-discussed-in-a-very-settled-and-creative-way.-the-whole-theme-that-i-am-getting-at-from-your-3-what-ifs-are-relationships-and-your-drawings-make-me-wonder-how-the-characters-would-handle-the-situations-they-might-face-(whatever-that-may-be)-%2C-or-if-none-at-all.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-last-one-because-when-i-think-of-gods-and-goddesses%2C-i-think-of-beauty-and-power%2C-like-dragons-and-princesses-and-all-these-fantastical-ideas.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-characters-of-the-gods-and-goddesses-you-might-make%3A-if-they-have-feelings%2C-have-relationships-with-humans%2C-spiritual-or-physical-form%2C-what-humans-see-them-as%2C-etc.-it-just-goes-on-and-on.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/first-off%2C-i-just-want-to-say-that-your-first-drawing-just-caught-my-eye-and-made-me-want-to-watch-this-submission-video-because-you-can-really-draw!-2nd%2C-the-idea-that-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-first-idea-of-what-if-everyone-had-a-personal-guardian-that-they-couldn't-see-because-it-makes-me-wonder-how-different-humans-would-be-towards-each-other-and-depending-on-how-good-the-personal-guardian-is%2C-to-their-environment.-i-kind-of-just-have-this-main-question-of-%22what-would-life-be-like%3F%22-in-these-3-situations%2C-which-makes-me-want-to-find-out-what-comes-next.-- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/first-off%2C-i-just-want-to-say-that-your-first-drawing-just-caught-my-eye-and-made-me-want-to-watch-this-submission-video-because-you-can-really-draw!-2nd%2C-the-idea-that-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-first-idea-of-what-if-everyone-had-a-personal-guardian-that-they-couldn't-see-because-it-makes-me-wonder-how-different-humans-would-be-towards-each-other-and-depending-on-how-good-the-personal-guardian-is%2C-to-their-environment.-i-kind-of-just-have-this-main-question-of-%22what-would-life-be-like%3F%22-in-these-3-situations%2C-which-makes-me-want-to-find-out-what-comes-next.-- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-key-that-unlocks-everything-inside-the-person-because-with-all-this-information-unlocked-about-one-person-and-maybe-many-more-people%2C-i-wonder-what-the-person-that-has-control-of-the-key-would-do-with-this-information%2C-and-keep-it-locked-away-to-do-their-own-%22research%22-or-expose-it-for-witchcraft%2C-etc.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-a-boy-who-was-overcome-with-so-much-grief-that-he-hallucinated-a-world-of-his-own.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-the-boy-imagines%2Fdoes-in-his-own-world-and-what-he-does-in-the-real-world.-in-the-second-idea%2C-the-words-you-used-for-explaining-your-what-if-was-a-very-good-use-of-words-to-make-a-complete-thought%2C-with-no-gray-areas.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-breaking-romance-tropes%E2%80%94a-witch-and-a-prince%3F-i-ship-it.-it-is-mutual%3F-how-did-the-prince-fall-in-love-with-the-witch%3F-how-did-they-meet%3F-is-there-anything-impeding-their-romance%3F-is-this-a-star-crossed-lovers-scenario%3F-then%E2%80%94the-senior-home%E2%80%94how-do-the-nurses-and-caretakers-react-to-the-elders-becoming-weird-creatures%3F-are-they-aware-of-it%3F-are-the-families-aware-of-it%3F-is-it-a-phenomenon-isolated-to-the-care-center%3F-or%2C-would-the-elders-that-live-there-transform-regardless-of-the-location%3F-finally%2C-that-alleyway%E2%80%94big-fan.-what's-the-other-world-like%3F-what-lives-there%3F-are-people-aware-of-this-alleyway%3F-do-people-ever-crossover-to-the-other-side-and-vice-versa%3F-is-the-other-end-of-the-portal%2C-the-one-in-the-other-world%2C-also-in-an-alleyway%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-my-gosh.-so.-i'm-not-sure-if-you-thought-of-it.-but%E2%80%94and-i'm-so-sorry%E2%80%94but-i-am-absolutely-using-this-idea-later%E2%80%94'cuz%E2%80%94the-secret-society-of-snakes...-would-be-called-%22sss%22.-so-good.-amazing.-are-they-able-to-disguise-themselves-amongst-humans%3F-all-illuminati-style%3F-what-kind-of-magic-can-they-use%3F-and%2C-aw-yeaah%E2%80%94tiny-people-are-very-good.-so%2C-are-they-completely-in-control-of-her-behavior%3F-or%2C-are-they-informing-and-suggesting-decisions%3F-finally%E2%80%94are%E2%80%94lizards-bipedal-in-this-universe%3F-are-they-human-sized%3F-are-there-any-humans%3F-or%2C-is-this-a-society-of-only-lizards%3F-what-do-they-do-on-the-road-trip%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/delightful!-mars-dogs%3F-mars-dogs.-yes%2C-i-concur.-maybe-they're-the-ones-cleaning-the-dust-off-the-solar-panels-of-the-opportunity-mars-rover.-ghost-hotline%3F-very-cute.-very-wholesome.-funnily-shaped-humans%3F-yes.-i'm-already-enjoying-the-prospect-of-a-human-who-looks-like-a-guitar.-anyways%2C-so%2C-mars-dogs%E2%80%94don't-need-oxygen%3F-how-do-we-first-encounter-them%3F-then%2C-ghosts-can-call-the-living%2C-but-can-the-living-call-ghosts%3F-can-ghosts-call-fellow-ghosts%3F-is-this-well-known%3F-finally%2C-do-people's-appearances-change-whenever-they-develop-a-new-favorite-item%3F-or%2C-is-it-only-the-first-favorite-item%3F-are-people-aware-that-their-appearance-is-dictated-by-their-favorite-items%3F 2021-10-11 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2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-third-one.-you-could-play-off-of-both-sides%2C-like-what-would-the-parents-be-doing-in-space-and-why-are-they-there.-or-what-would-the-kids-do-with-no-parents%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-humans-living-underwater.-i'm-curious-about-why-they-live-underwater.-also%2C-can-they-communicate-with-the-wildlife%2C-if-there-is-any-at-all%3F-it-reminds-me-of-the-story-of-atlantis-and-you-could-play-off-of-that-too. 2021-10-11 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https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/that-man.-that-man-is-onto-something.-trees-that-are-sentient-and-british%3F!-literally-too-powerful.-a-deadly-combination.-i-love-it.-if-trees-were-to-speak-in-any-accent%2C-british-is-the-only-acceptable-option.-i'm-intrigued%2C-though%E2%80%94what-does-11%3A55-mean-in-your-drawing%3F-also%2C-you've-established-that-they're-sentient-and-british-(and-i'm-still-reeling-from-it)%2C-but-are-they-also-able-to-move%3F-are-they-able-to-dress-and-appear-human-like-in-your-drawing%3F-m'k%E2%80%94then%E2%80%94for-the-dolls-one%E2%80%94i-also-love-it%2C-super-fun-idea%E2%80%94it's-like-toy-story-but-more-meta%E2%80%94but%2C-le'ssee%E2%80%94um.-what-are-the-implications%3F-are-the-dolls-able-to-break-free-of-their-playtime-fate%3F-is-the-opposite-also-true%3F-does-whatever-the-people-do-in-the-alternate-dimensions-translate-over-to-the-dolls%3F-what-happens-when-they-aren't-being-played-with%3F-are-the-people-frozen-stiff%3F-okay-last-one%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94the-first-one%E2%80%94ghost-clouds%3F-that's-my-new-headcanon-i-think%E2%80%94if-it-wasn't-already-reality%2C-it-is-now-because-i-said-so.-super-fun.-so%2C-what-do-the-ghost-clouds-do%3F-and%2C-what%2C-then%2C-is-rain%3F-is-it-their-tears%3F-what-about-snow%3F-are-they-shedding-baby-ghosts%3F-are-they-moving-on%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-wave-one.-it-makes-me-wonder-about-if-the-sea-life-and-the-waves-could-communicate. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/very-interesting-ideas%E2%80%94all-of-them-seem-to-poke-at-the-seams-of-societal-conventions-which-is-neat.-i've-a-lot-of-questions%2C-though.-first-and-foremost%2C-by-school-not-being-needed-do-you-mean-not-mandated-by-law%3F-or%2C-do-you-mean-that-school-literally-doesn't-exist%3F-do-you-mean-that-it's-unessential-for-those-that-want-to-fulfill-their-dreams%3F-what-about-those-who-have-dreams-of-becoming-a-teacher%3F-then%2C-the-second-one%E2%80%94as-climate-change-is-always-speeding-up%2C-how-fast-do-you-mean%3F-do-you-mean-so-fast-that-you-can-visually-and-physically-see-and-feel-the-impact-of-every-decision-you-make%3F-like%2C-turning-on-the-car-instantly-starts-a-small-bush-fire-or-something%3F-third%E2%80%94by-everyone-being-the-same%2C-do-you-mean-they're-all-genetically-identical%3F-the-same-job-and-family-life%3F-both%3F-a%E2%80%94are-their-parents-also-themselves%3F%3F%3F-is-this-society-asexual%3F-do-we-have-some-mitosis-business-goin'-on%3F-lastly%2C-what-do-you-mean-by-humans-not-being-needed%3F-do-you-mean-that-human-labor-is-unnecessary-to-sustain-human-life%3F-do-you-mean-humans-in-general-are-unnecessary-in-the-grand-scheme-of-the-world%3F-the-solar-system%3F-the-universe%3F-because%2C-that's-just-reality%E2%80%94neither-the-world%2C-the-solar-system%2C-or-the-universe-would-bat-an-eye-if-we-all-mysteriously-vanished.-the-world-would-probably-be-able-to-get-back-to-normal-too.-hey~!-there's-the-solution-to-your-%22what-if-climate-change-was-happening-a-lot-faster%22-idea.-in-all-seriousness%2C-though%2C-i-am-curious-about-what-you-mean. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-second-and-last-ideas!-the-second-makes-me-wonder-about-why-a-person-would-want-to-log-into-a-digital-world%3F-do-they-feel-like-their-lives-are-missing-something%2C-do.-they-go-online-to-talk-to-their-friends-or-a-romance-interest%3F--the-last-one-interests-me-because-it-feels-like-a-good-premise-for-an-apocalypse-story.-without-sunlight-there-can-be-drastic-mood-and-health-effects.-would-the-lack-of-sunlight-help-spread-a-rampant-disease%2C-create-a-vibrant-new-humanity-that-replaces-the-beauty-of-sunlight-with-vibrant-neon-streets%2C-or-would-the-lack-of-sunlight-be-metaphorically-used-for-a-character-that-looses-someone-important-to-them-and-after-overcoming-grief-sees-the-sun-again%3F-you-have-good-premises-just-remember-how-you-can-use-the-worlds-you-have-created-to-tie-in-an-emotional-aspect-that-will-help-your-audience-relate-to-your-story.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-idea-about-the-romance-story-between-fire-and-water!-what-kind-of-world-would-the-elements-live%3F-do-you-plan-to-add-specific-cultural-influences-from-somewhere-to-help-with-world-building-or-adding-a-moral-to-the-story%3F--is-it-a-cautionary%2C-tragic%2C-or-wholesome-love-story%3F-since-you-have-a-good-emotional-story-premise-i-would-recommend-really-focusing-on-world-building-and-establishing-why-it-might-be-good-or-bad-for-the-two-characters-to-fall-in-love.-most-love-stories-are-compelling-because-the-environment-around-the-couple-establishes-tension-and-consequences.-but-overall-cool-ideas! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-concept-of-the-yearbook-being-alive.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-different-sections-of-the-yearbook-would-interact.-would-the-things-within-the-yearbook-only-come-to-life-under-certain-circumstances%3F-are-the-people-on-the-ground-affected-by-the-school-in-the-clouds-and-their-music%3F-i'm-curious-about-what-makes-this-school-of-music-so-significant%3F-the-idea-of-extreme-struggles-with-trivial%2C-daily-tasks-makes-me-curious-as-to-how-limited-their-patience-levels-are.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-first-idea!-it-reminded-me-about-coraline-and-how-the-%22other%22-world-was-able-to-be-reached-through-the-pink-house's-crawl-space-door.-the-idea-offers-a-lot-of-potential-for-world-building-and-characters.-but-what-kind-of-emotional-story-telling-would-the-story-center-on%3F-would-it-be-interesting-to-make-it-about-how-the-real-world-has-better-opportunities-than-a-fantasy-world%2C-an-escape-from-a-horrible-childhood%2C-a-war-between-fantasy-and-reality%2C-a-moral-tale-describing-a-battle-between-good-and-evil%3F 2021-10-11 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https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-immortal-cat-idea.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-would-they-be-protecting-the-flower-field.-but-what-kind-of-emotional-story-telling-would-be-in-the-premise%3F-does-the-cat-protect-the-field-after-loosing-someone-it-loves-within-it%2C--is-it-protecting-others-from-something-within%2C-does-someone-stumble-across-the-field-and-have-a-life-changing-experience%3F-also-love-the-art!-all-concepts-seem-to-have-a-good-start-for-character-design! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-thought-the-best-idea-was-%22the-light-of-others-guiding-you%22.-the-idea-leaves-a-lot-of-good-room-for-creative-story-telling!-i-also-liked-the-demon-idea%2C-because-it-feels-like-a-great-concept-for-a-video-game.-but-i-feel-like-it-would-be-hard-to-add-emotional-implements-to-it.-do-you-believe-making-the-story-a-commentary-on-religion-or-religious-values-would-help-to-give-it-a-more-understandable-premise%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/pfschk%E2%80%94oh-my-gosh-i'm-dying%E2%80%94oh-no%E2%80%94the-cut-toward-the-end-of-%22what-if-earth-ran-out-of-oxygen%3F%22-was-too-good%E2%80%94doesn't-matter-if-it-wasn't-intentional%E2%80%94comedy-genius-either-way.-we-ran-out-of-oxygen-man.-goodness-gravy-let-me-collect-myself.-*breathe-in%2C-breathe-out*-okay-i'm-good.-so%E2%80%94dogs-ruling-the-world-is-just-great.-it's-funny-because-they-at-the-very-least-rule-a-lot-of-the-internet-world%2C-so-this-isn't-too-much-of-a-leap-in-logic.-i-just-love-the-idea-of-pamperin'-our-dog-overlords.-but%2C-so%E2%80%94can-they-talk%3F-like-in-up%3F-or%2C-do-humans-just-have-to-decipher-what-they-mean%3F-will-we-get-fun-dog-subtitles-over-the-animation%3F-next-up-to-bat%2C-aliens-coming-to-earth-is-always-fun%2C-but-i'd-like-to-know-what-twist-you're-putting-on-it.-are-the-aliens-the-traditional-green-ones%3F-are-they-more-humanoid%3F-more-un-human%3F-do-they-come-in-peace%3F-finally%2C-no-oxygen-earth-sounds-like-it-could-be-very-intense.-what-are-they-gonna-do%3F-have-they-come-up-with-a-solution%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hooo-yea.-my-aesthetics-sense-is-going-rampant-after-hearing-hazardous-sunlight%E2%80%94do-they-only-go-out-at-night%3F-just-how-hazardous-is-sunlight%3F-is-anyone-not-affected-by-sunlight%3F-are-animals-influenced-by-sunlight%3F-is-this-some-sort-of-reverse-gargoyles-scenario-(watch-gargoyles-it's-great)%3F-can-they-go-out-in-the-light-with-an-umbrella%3F-what-about-reflected-sunlight%2C-ambient-lighting%2C-and-subsurface-scattering%3F-is-the-sunlight-only-dangerous-in-large-amounts%3F-number-two%E2%80%94does-the-ruler-of-the-earth-rule-justly%3F-are-the-people-happy-under-his-reign%3F-how-did-he-obtain-this-power%3F-why-have-people-not-rebelled%3F-is-there-peace%3F-third%E2%80%94love-the-implied-message-of-individuality%E2%80%94but%2C-how-do-they-communicate%3F-can-they-write-in-the-same-language%3F-can-they-sign-in-the-same-language%3F-do-they-just-get-by-with-body-language-(lots-of-potential-with-humor-there).- 2021-10-11 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2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow%2C-i'm-not-sure-if-it's-the-gospel-music-or-your-luxurious-voice-or-both-but-i'm-feeling-so-inspired-right-now.-okay-but%2C-super-good-ideas!-the-first-idea-has-a-really-good-message-that-tackles-many-issues-ingrained-in-mainstream-society%2C-and-i-love-that-it-rejects-traditional-perspectives-of-beauty%2C-appearance%2C-and-race.-the-second-also-has-a-good-commentary-about-overworking-and-stress%2C-and-it-reminds-us-to-recall-the-things-that-made-us-happy.-and%2C-i-mean%2C-animal-people%3F-anthropomorphizing-is-just-fun.-so%2C-just-a-few-questions.-why-is-the-monster-named-dream-crusher%3F-is-there-any-meaning-behind-it%3F-does-anyone-apart-from-the-boy-begin-to-accept-him%3F-in-the-second-idea%2C-what-is-micheal-penwell-working-so-hard-at%3F-is-he-dreaming-this-imagined-world%3F-does-he-ever-return-from-it%3F-then%2C-the-last-one.-is-the-fact-that-animals-can-transform-into-humans-not-known-by-humans%3F-how-does-she-hide-her-ears%3F-do-people-ever-discover-her-identity%3F-is-the-reaction-to-it-better-than-she-anticipated%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/alright%E2%80%94one-idea%E2%80%94but%2C-hey%2C-do-you-really-need-more-than-one-if-it's-a-great-one%3F-clairvoyance-is-just-super-great.-so%2C-how-does-he-perceive-the-future%3F-is-it-in-a-thought-bubble-visual%3F-does-he-have-a-flash-of-a-vision%3F-does-he-see-doubling-in-his-vision-(i.e.-does-he-see-both-present-and-future-overlaid-simultaneously)%3F-you-might-consider-coming-up-with-three-different-variations-based-on-that-one-concept.- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wait-sorry-i-just-wanted-to-add-onto-my-comment%E2%80%94i-totally-forgot-how-relevant-it-was%E2%80%94in-addition-to-searching%2C-you-also-need-to-watch-another-movie-by-the-same-people%3A-run.-hot-diggity.-okay-great%E2%80%94sorry-again. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/hype.-so-hype.-living-multiple-lives%3F-in-different-places%3F-hyyyype.-soul-capturing-photos%3F-not-sure-if-that's-a-good-thing-but-hype-nonetheless.-lit-mystery-investigation-film%3F-*vibrates*-i-recommend-that-you-watch-searching-and-knives-out%2C-so-you-can-absolutely-explode.-i-also-recommend-ghost-trick-(amnesiac-and-identity-crisis-fun)-and-the-great-ace-attorney-(or-any-of-the-ace-attorney-games-really)%2C-and-famicon-detective-club%3A-the-missing-heir-actually%E2%80%94er%E2%80%94no-spoilers.-okay%2C-um-um-um%E2%80%94so%2C-the-first-one.-are-you-switching-bodies-with-someone%3F-are-your-other-selves-asleep-when-you're-awake-in-one-body%3F-does-this-happen-to-everyone%3F-is-everyone-in-the-world-actually-just-one-person-operating-a-ton-of-bodies%3F-then%2C-for-the-last-one%2C-how-long-has-the-case-been-open%3F-how-does-he-come-to-this-realization%3F-has-he-been-raised-by-his-kidnapper%3F-aw-ye. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/first-of-all%E2%80%94love-the-art%E2%80%94i'm-getting-temmie-vibes%E2%80%94and%2C-maybe-some-nobel-vibes-as-well%3F-but%2C-ohhhhyeeeaaah%E2%80%94i'm-a-huge-fan-of-your-ideas.-i've-always-loved-characters-that-can-read-people's-thoughts-or-see-some-aspect-of-their-mind%2C-so-the-fact-that-they're-able-to-view-people's-dreams%3F-lovely.-is-she-able-to-control-this-ability%3F-or%2C-is-it-involuntary%2C-like-any-of-the-other-senses%2C-and-she's-forced-to-see-everyone's-dreams-at-any-time%3F-does-she-see-them-as-if-they're-coming-out-of-a-thought-bubble%2C-like-depicted-in-the-drawing%3F-then%2C-friendly-neighborhood-alien%3F-postal-worker%3F-mmmmmmmmm.-a-marriage-of-ideas-that-i-approve-of-wholeheartedly.-is-the-alien-well-known-within-her-neighborhood%3F-does-she-live-on-earth%3F-another-planet%3F-does-she-have-other-alien-neighbors%3F-or%2C-is-she-the-only-one%3F-lastly%E2%80%94office-lady-(i-presume)%3F-magical-creatures%3F-mhmmhmhmhmhm.-*rapid-nodding*-oh-yes.-are-other-people-able-to-see-the-magical-creatures%3F-are-magical-creatures-common-knowledge%3F-how-do-people-react-to-her-use-of-magical-creatures%3F-or%2C-does-nobody-ever-see-it%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ooo-interesting!-playing-with-monsters-is-always-a-fun-one%E2%80%94and-the-latter-two-are-simple-but-effective.-so%2C-starting-from-the-top%2C-are-monsters-commonplace-in-this-world%3F-do-people-have-good-relations-with-monsters%3F-or%2C-are-there-only-monsters-and-no-humans%3F-do-fellow-monsters-fear-the-monster-with-a-scary-face%3F-is-the-one-with-the-scary-face-kind%3F-are-the-others-with-kind-faces-evil%3F-for-the-hight-one%2C-since-height-is-currency%2C-are-people-able-to-spend-their-height%3F-like%2C-will-they-get-shorter-as-they-spend%3F-and%2C-are-they-able-to-replenish-or-increase-their-height%3F-finally%2C-does-everyone-that-can't-speak-communicate-through-sign-language%3F-does-the-person-that-can-speak-communicate-with-the-others%3F-how-did-the-person-learn-to-speak-in-a-world-where-no-one-does%3F-are-people-incapable-of-making-any-sounds-with-their-voice%3F-or%2C-are-they-only-incapable-of-vocal-language%3F-like%2C-could-they-laugh%3F-or%2C-could-they-scream-or-cry%3F-excellent. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh%E2%80%94okay%2C-okay.-getting-some-freaky-friday%2Fthe-parent-trap-energy-from-the-first-one.-i-can-imagine-scientists-who-are-in-favor-of-bringing-back-the-wooly-mammoth-would-have-a-kick-out-of-the-second-one%E2%80%94and%2C-yeah-man%2C-you-tryin'-to-steal-the-title-of-most-ambitious-crossover-away-from-avengers%3F-m'k%E2%80%94but-some-questions.-who's-mike-and-mia%3F-i'm-assuming-they're-original-characters%3F-how-old-are-they%3F-why-does-mike-have-to-be-his-sister-mia-for-a-week%3F-are-they-twins%3F-did-they-swap-bodies%3F-you-said-mike-(as-his-sister)-was-kicked-out-of-ballet%2C-right%3F-does-his-sister-find-out-before-he-finds-a-way-to-get-back-in%3F-will-the-story-only-feature-the-brother's-point-of-view%3F-or%2C-will-it-also-showcase-mia's-struggles-as-mike-(if-it-is-indeed-the-case-that-they-are-both-needing-to-switch-places)%3F-then%2C-next%2C-who's-running-the-lottery%3F-how-is-the-lottery-run%3F-what-creature-would-end-up-returning%3F-and%2C-finally%2C-what-characters-or-franchises-would-be-included-within-the-story%3F-how-do-the-characters-cross-paths-(the-ship-from-mario-odyssey%3F-mario-galaxy%3F)-what-about-characters-that-have-appeared-in-multiple-iterations%3F-would-the-zelda-from-breath-of-the-wild-and-the-zelda-from-twilight-princess-reside-in-separate-worlds%3F-anyways%2C-love-it.-keep-it-up. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/le-gasp%E2%80%94so-much-drama%E2%80%94i-love-it.-i'm-enjoying-the-comedy-of-the-first-one%2C-and-the-latter-two-feel-very-pixar-y.-but%2C-without-further-ado%2C-the-interrogation%E2%80%94everything-you-say-can-and-will-be-held-against-you.-no-pressure.-so%2C-the-grandpa%E2%80%94does-he-find-his-dentures-in-the-end%3F-where-did-he-lose-it%3F-does-he-live-with-others%3F-does-he-have-to-communicate-with-a-lot-of-people%3F-is-there-going-to-be-a-family-gathering%3F-why's-the-tortoise-running-away%3F-where-are-they-running-away-to%3F-where-are-they-running-from%3F-is-it-running-from-a-zoo%3F-are-they-privately-owned%3F-are-they-running-away-from-their-tortoise-family%3F-how-old-is-the-tortoise%3F-can-the-fish-fly-always%3F-how-far-can-the-fish-fly%3F-is-the-fish-still-unable-to-breathe-in-open-air%3F-will-birds-pose-a-problem%3F-why-would-the-fish-want-to-fly%3F-are-they-escaping-from-their-fish-bowl%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/wow-what-a-trio-of-handsome-voices%E2%80%94you-can-feel-the-genius-permeate-through-the-air-as-you-speak.-particularly-that-first-man.-what-a-strapping-young-lad.-sorry%2C-sorry%2C-workplace-romance-is-a-no-bueno.-let-me-focus.-so%2C-all-of-the-ideas-are-very-aesthetically-pleasing.-for-the-clouds-one%2C-are-ordinary-people-aware-of-these-music-schools%3F-same-for-the-first-one%E2%80%94are-people-aware-that-the-people-in-each-photo-come-to-life%3F-or%2C-are-they-only-known-to-a-select-few%3F-is-there-a-society-that-lives-exclusively-in-the-clouds%3F-are-there-diverse-ecosystems-native-to-clouds%3F-then%2C-the-clothes-one%E2%80%94just-how-amped-up-and-extreme-of-a-struggle-is-it%3F-are-we-going-to-see-some-action-movie-esque-movement-and-exaggerated-comedy%3F- 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh.-yes.-the-answer-is-yes.-absolutely.-personal-guardian%3F-gorgeous%E2%80%94we-love-guardian-angels.-and%2C-not-to-mention%2C-we-get-to-see-them-while-no-one-actually-can-in-the-story%3F-lovely.-lotsa-opportunity-for-dramatic-irony.-magic-in-the-modern-world%3F-literally%E2%80%94yes.-ugh%E2%80%94any-aspect-of-fantasy-in-the-modern-world-is-just-a-big-yes-from-me.-the-aesthetics.-the-concept.-the-vibe.-blending-two-vastly-different-worlds-is-very-solid.-living-in-the-ocean%3F-big-pretty.-sorry%E2%80%94all-of-the-things-that-i-really-really-like-are-not-things-i-know-how-to-describe-with-words.-but%2C-okay%2C-so%2C-question-time.-can-the-guardians-see-one-another%3F-are-the-guardians-able-to-interact-with-physical-objects%3F-can-they-use-magic%3F-what's-the-extent-of-their-abilities%3F-do-they-always-choose-to-intervene%3F-do-they-forego-protecting-someone-if-they-know-what-happens-will-positively-impact-them-and-help-them-to-learn-in-the-future%3F-for-the-modern-day-magic-usage%2C-what-kind-of-magic-is-it%3F-elemental%3F-are-there-mythical-creatures-in-this-world%2C-too%3F-are-any-modern-day-technologies-supplemented-or-replaced-by-magic%3F-are-the-people-that-live-underwater-able-to-breathe-without-oxygen-breathing-apparatuses%3F-have-humans-developed-gills%3F-are-they-able-to-breathe-above-the-water%3F-do-they-get-altitude-sickness-going-closer-to-the-core-of-the-earth%3F-is-the-surface-like-the-ocean-for-them%3F-do-they-have-to-travel-on-land-with-a-vehicle-filled-with-water%3F-my-brain-is-vibrating-so-intensely-right-now. 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-best-idea-is-the-one-about-walking-sharks.-it-made-me-think-about-how-you-would-keep-one-in-your-house 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-one-that-i-liked-the-most-was-the-last-idea.-it-made-me-think-about-what-she-might-try-to-grow-and-how-large 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-that-i-thought-was-the-most-interesting-was-the-second-one.-it-makes-me-think-of-how-it-might-be-used-to-kidnap-important-people-and-then-ransom-the%2Cm 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-that-i-thought-was-the-most-interesting-was-the-second-one.-it-makes-me-think-of-how-it-might-be-used-to-kidnap-important-people-and-then-ransom-the%2Cm 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/super-cool%2C-hard-to-pick-a-favorite.-i-think-the-money-one-makes-me-wonder-the-most.-how-does-it-disappear%2C-and-i-wonder-how-they-live-without-it-and-is-it-better%3F 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/great-ideas%2C-i-think-i-like-the-book-one-the-best.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-they-use-the-book-for-and-where-it-came-from 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/my-favorite-idea-was-the-second-one.-it-made-me-think-about-how-the-strongest-warrior-throughout-history-could-have-just-been-him 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/that-idea-makes-me-wonder-if-there-could-be-many-doing-that-secretively-and-trying-to-live-like-a-person 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-most-interesting-idea-was-the-last-idea.-it-made-me-think-about-how-my-pet-might-go-to-school-or-how-the-random-animals-around-the-place-might-be-doing-so 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-that-i-thought-was-the-most-interesting-was-the-last-one-about-the-locker.-it-makes-me-think-about-how-it-could-be-similar-or-different-it-compared-to-the-normal-world 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-all-your-ideas%2C-but-i-especially-liked-the-mushroom-one%3B-it-makes-me-think-of-that-fungus-that-basically-controls-ants%2C-and-i-think-there-is-a-lot-you-could-do-with-that-idea! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-that-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-teens-not-being-able-to-decide-between-multiple-aesthetics.--2.-this-idea-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-journey-of-the-main-character-will-be.-will-they-find-their-aesthetic%2C-or-will-they-make-their-own-aesthetic%3F- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-that-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-about-a-time-traveling-cowboy.--2.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-this-cowboy-adapts-to-every-time-period-he-goes-to%2C-or-if-he-still-acts-like-its-the-wild-west%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-society-of-superpowered-snakes-that-live-in-an-abandoned-building.--2.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-these-snakes-do%2C-and-if-they-use-their-superpowers-to-help-themselves-or-others%3F- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-one-about-the-girl-who-could-control-plants.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-she-wants-to-control-plants....or-does-she%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-of-humans-falling-in-love-with-ghosts.-it's-play-on-the-classic-romantic-trope-of-two-beings-from-different-worlds-falling-in-love%2C-and-it-sets-up-many-ways-in-which-the-story-could-go.--2.-this-scenario-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-concept-of-humans-falling-in-love-with-ghosts.-can-everyone-see-ghosts%2C-or-is-it-rare-for-a-human-to-see-a-ghost%3F-is-there-something-about-the-ghosts-themselves-that-draw-people-in%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-that-the-ocean-has-a-consciousness.-it-seems-like-a-very-intriguing-question%2C-and-there's-so-many-possibilities-that-can-be-explored-with-that-idea.--2.-the-idea-of-the-ocean-having-a-consciousness-makes-me-wonder-how-the-ocean-sees-itself.-does-it-see-themselves-as-a-civilian-of-earth%2C-going-to-work-and-doing-it's-job%2C-or-does-it-see-themselves-as-a-ruler%2C-who-protects-its-underwater-subjects%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-what-if-plants-could-talk.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-the-plants-would-do-if-they-could-talk. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-idea-about-cats-running-a-cat-cafe.-i-thought-that-was-a-really-clever-twist-on-the-concept-of-a-cat-cafe.--2.-the-what-if-scenario-about-cats-running-a-cat-cafe-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-backstory-of-this-cafe.-is-the-cafe-a-family-owned-business%3F-is-there-other-cats-who-want-to-put-the-cafe-out-of-business%3F-even-though-cats-run-it%2C-are-humans-still-allowed-at-the-cafe%3F- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-no-gravity.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-everyone-would-survive-with-no-gravity. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-one-with-inanimate-objects-coming-to-life.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-the-objects-would-do-when-they-were-alive%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-you-idea-about-picking-a-super-power-at-a-certain-age-is-really-great.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-powers-would-be-available%2C-how-they-would-be-applied-in-everyday-life%2C-and-how-they-could-be-used-for-the-wrong-reasons. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-idea-of-earth-running-out-of-oxygen-is-a-great-one.-this-questions-makes-me-think-about-the-lorax-movie-where-businesses-are-selling-air-to-keep-the-people-alive.-i-feel-like-your-what-if-statement-can-be-really-funny-while-also-having-the-ability-to-commentate-on-serious-themes-and-subjects. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/my-favorite-idea-of-yours-was-the-first-one-about-dream-crusher-the-monster.--it-makes-me-think-about-the-great-potential-of-themes-and-overall-messages-that-you-could-show-in-the-story. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-a-criminal-seeing-himself-as-a-child.--it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-would-happen-when-they-saw-each-other. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-%22what-if-%233.%22-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-we-had-fish-that-could-fly.-i-think-thats-pretty-cool.-good-job!- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-that-the-idea-that-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-kid-who's-best-friend-is-imaginary.-it-poses-so-many-good-questions-and-potential-situations.-for-example%2C-what-do-people-think-of-him%3F-has-he-turned-down-other-friends-to-hang-out-with-his-imaginary-one%3F-does-his-imaginary-friend-know-that-they-are-imaginary%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-%22what-if-%232.%22-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-places-i-want-to-travel.-i-think-that's-cool-that-we-can-travel-where-ever-we-think-of.-good-job! 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-the-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-everyone-having-personal-guardians-that-they-couldn't-see.--it-makes-me-wonder-if-the-personal-guardians-could-save-everyone-from-anything. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-that-i-found-to-be-the-most-interesting-was-the-ability-to-time-travel-while-doing-specific-activities.-it-opens-so-many-opportunities-for-different-stories-and-unique-situations.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-people-would-discover-these-specific-activities-and-what-these-people-would-do-once-they-were-able-to-access-the-past%3F- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-%22what-if-%232.%22-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-things-that-could-change-color-by-the-tones-and-keys-of-an-instrument.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-%22what-if-%232.%22-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-things-that-could-change-color-by-the-tones-and-keys-of-an-instrument.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-most-interesting-for-me-was-what-if-alchemy-actually-worked.-it-makes-me-think-of-legitimate-world-and-societal-struggles-and-issues-that-would-come-about-because-of-the-discovery. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-%22what-if-%232.%22-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-things-we-could-of-learn-about-history.-good-job! 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-smiling-idea-could-be-cool.-what-if-there-was-a-character-living-in-a-world-where-it-was-illegal-to-be-happy-or-smile%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/for-the-humans-living-underwater%2C-what-if-something-happened-and-mankind-had-to-adapt-and-learn-how-to-live-underwater.-then-maybe-over-time%2C-they-started-to-grow-gills-or-something%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-your-%22what-if-%232.%22-i-think-this-was-interesting-because-it-sounds-cool.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-what-the-sky-would-sound-like-if-there-was-actually-a-music-school.-good-job! 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-cowboy-that-found-a-time-traveling-wristwatch.--it-makes-me-wonder-where-the-cowboy-would-go-with-the-watch. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-it-would-be-cool-to-continue-on-the-guardian-angel-idea.-maybe-everyone's-guardian-angels-could-see-and-talk-to-each-other%2C-then-they-could-have-funny-interactions. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-it-would-be-cool-to-continue-on-the-guardian-angel-idea.-maybe-everyone's-guardian-angels-could-see-and-talk-to-each-other%2C-then-they-could-have-funny-interactions. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-2nd-idea-with-the-dolls-would-be-really-fun!-with-the-ghost-idea%2C-that-seems-like-that-would-be-hard-to-turn-it-into-an-interesting-story.-the-last-what-if-is-sort-of-confusing. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most--interesting-was-your-%22what-if-%231.%22-i-think-that-was-interesting-because-that-is-a-cool-idea.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-it-would-sound-like-when-everyone's-mood-is-playing-at-the-same-time.-it-would-sound-beautiful-to-put-together-everyone's-sound.-anyways-you-did-a-very-good-job! 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-think-the-cow-and-mushroom-idea-is-really-cute%2C-but-the-second-idea-seems-like-it-could-be-very-interesting.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-last-idea-about-if-the-sun-never-rose-is-kind-of-interesting.-mostly-because-this-idea-has-a-real-world-counterpart-(alaska)-and-how-some-days-its-only-the-sun-and-some-only-the-moon.-you-could-research-how-life-works-and-how-you-connect-to-your-storyline-if-you-choose-to-do-this-idea.-i'm-wondering-how-this-story-could-bring-character-growth-or-at-all-in-this-what-if...-idea.-the-over-all-submission-was-really-good%2C-continue-with-that-idea-because-it-has-a-lot-of-potential. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea-was-my-favorite-one-because-first-the-art-is-amazing.-your-art-style-portrays-weirdness-in-a-good-way-(really-great-job-on-that).-this-idea-reminds-me-of-gravity-falls-season-finally-weird-portal-from-another-world-summons-crazy-and-scary-creatures-(weirdmageddon).-you-should-take-inspiration-from-that-to-really-portray-the-feeling-shown-in-your-drawing.-the-submission-was-great-with-some-amazing-art.-really-great-job. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea-about-a-clown-stealing-money-out-pockets-is-my-favorite-one.-mostly-because-of-your-character-design-for-the-small-clown-(you-should-really-keep-that-design).-even-though-i-hate-clowns-it-is-creepy-and-cute-at-the-same-time%3B-which-is-very-hard-to-achieve.-besides-the-design-the-idea-is-also-interesting-because-sounds-like-pixar-thing-to-do.-i-wonder-how-that-theme-could-play-a-role-in-the-story-if-you-choose-this-idea.-the-overall-the-submission-is-really-good%2C-great-job.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-these-ideas-are-very-fun.-they-sound-ridiculous%2C-yet-almost-kinda-cool.-the-third-one-stood-out-to-me-the-most%2C-as-it-would-actually-make-sense-if-people-worshipped-an-alien-or-something.-it's-a-nice-case-of-dramatic-irony.-2.-speaking-of-the-last-idea%2C-i-can't-help-but-wonder-if-the-alien-has-a-cult-or-something.-perhaps-a-whole-religion%3F-with-such-a-big-idea-like-that%2C-you-can't-help-but-wonder. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-a-lot-of-abnormal-stuff-here%2C-i-like-it!-the-first-idea-could-be-built-off-of%2C-the-second-idea-seems-magical%2C-and-the-last-one-is-pretty-mysterious-in-nature.-said-last-one-is-the-most-compelling-to-me%2C-honestly.-2.-honestly%2C-i-can't-help-but-wonder-what-the-infinite-train-contains. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-plenty-of-cool-stuff-here!-all-of-these-ideas-are-distinct-from-one-another-and-seem-very-easy-to-build-off-of.-it's-a-hard-choice%2C-but-the-third-one-rings-best-with-me.-2.-how-and-why-have-the-mushrooms-become-a-'dominant-species'%3F-how-have-they-stayed-that-way%3F-do-people-still-exist%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-all-of-the-ideas-here-feel-unique-to-one-another!-it's-really-good.-the-spirit-idea-sounds--hilarious.-2.-what-kind-of-adventures-would-happen-anyway%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-really-captivating-ideas-here!-nice-that-you-went-into-detail%2C-too.-that-side%2C-i-think-the-zoo-idea-interests-me-the-most.-2.-how-did-these-ideas-come-about%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-all-of-these-have-tons-of-story-potential!-the-farmer-what-if-is-the-most-interesting-to-me.-2.-how-would-someone-adapt-to-such-a-loud-setting%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-all-of-these-are-really-good%2C-but-the-imagination-one-got-me-the-most-hooked.-2.-i-can't-help-but-wonder-how-someone-having-no-imagination-would-impact-their-psyche.-something-like-that. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-ghost-idea-is-pretty-interesting!--2.-can't-help-but-wonder-how-the-ghosts-would-use-it. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/1.-the-wave-idea-is-really-interesting!-it-has-plenty-of-potential.-2.-it-makes-me-wonder-how%2C-like%2C-the-ocean-would-feel-or-something-if-it-had-a-conscious. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/love-the-drawings!-the-2d-world%2C-i-really-want-to-live-there!-the-idea-of-guardian-angels-is-truly-amazing-since-i-want-to-have-one!-the-teddy-bear-fighting-the-monster%2C-i-really-hope-i-am-as-creative-as-you!-good-job-guys! 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-love-this-video!-especially-the-opening-haha!-i-really-like-the-narwhal-idea-because-it-makes-me-think-more-about-what-if-animals-have-the-same-intelligence-as-we-do-%3Ad 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-how-you-organized-the-shadows-and-the-colors-in-those-drawings!-and-i-particularly-like-the-%22light-from-others-guiding-you%22-part! 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-little-clown-one!-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-if-people-can-actually-see-them... 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-little-clown-one!- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-sunflower-one- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-if-a-fish-could-fly.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-you-could-make-that-into-a-story.--would-something-happen-to-the-fish-while-he-is-in-water%3F-or-when-he-is-out-of-water%3F--i-thought-it-was-very-interesting-and-could-make-a-good-story. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-light-from-others-guiding-you- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-digital-world-one! 2021-10-11 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/looove-it.-boy-and-turtle%3F-sold.-literal-cat-caf%C3%A9%3F-please-direct-me-to-the-nearest-one-it-sounds-very-aesthetic-and-comfy-cozy-and%E2%80%94well%2C-the-cats%E2%80%94yes-please.-a-weird-kinda-twilight-zone-reality%3F-fun-stuff.-so%2C-how-do-the-boy-and-the-turtle-meet%3F-why-do-they-meet%3F-what-do-they-do-for-each-other%3F-then%2C-are-the-cats-able-to-talk%3F-do-they-have-*zoom-in-and-turn-on-a-flashlight-beneath-my-face*-dexterous-paws%3F-is-the-currency-different%3F-is-the-owner-also-a-cat%3F-last%E2%80%94do-the-parents-have-these-sort-of-vacations-frequently%3F-or%2C-is-this-a-one-and-done-kinda-deal%3F-what-about-the-babies%3F-what-constitutes-a-child%3F-is-it-physical%3F-mental%3F-'cuz%2C-let's-face-it%2C-the-vast-majority-of-teens-and-adults-are-not-the-least-bit-grown-up-(in-both-good-and-bad-ways).-we're-all-just-babies%E2%80%94just-some-of-us-are-more-wrinkly-and-big-and-sweaty.-also%2C-where-are-the-parents-going%3F-are-they-just-chillin'-in-a-space-ship-in-the-cold-dark-of-space-and-then-coming-back-down%3F-are-they-going-to-the-moon%3F-because%2C-if-so%2C-they-will-enjoy-a-cool-one-day-actually-there%2C-given-that-it-takes-about-3-days-to-travel-there-by-spaceship.-and%2C-how-are-they-traveling-there%3F-are-they-using-conventional-rockets%3F-are-they-all-going-in-one-massive-spacecraft-(in-which-case-i-guess-the-more-advanced-technology-would-warrant-faster-travel-time%2C-too)%3F-would-the-story-only-focus-on-the-children%3F-would-it-focus-on-the-children-and-adults%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/you-struck-all-of-my-aesthetics-pretty-spot-on%E2%80%94combining-music%2C-movement%2C-and-emotion%E2%80%94clouds-and-transportation%E2%80%94colors-and-outlines%E2%80%94lovely.-absolutely-lovely.-so%2C-for-the-first-one%2C-is-the-music-audible-to-people%3F-like-is-it-only-audible-to-whoever-would-be-watching-the-animation%3F-or%2C-are-the-people-within-aware-of-the-sound%3F-if-so%2C-how-would-this-be-in-large-crowd-scenarios%3F-would-the-music-find-ways-to-blend-together%3F-or%2C-would-it-be-cacophonous%3F-then%2C-for-the-clouds%E2%80%94do-the-people-ride-in-them%3F-do-they-walk-into-them-and-come-out-of-another-cloud%3F-is-travel-instantaneous%3F-does-fog-count%3F-finally%2C-for-the-one-on-perception%E2%80%94do-either-people-have-a-knowledge-of-what-the-other-people-see%3F-like%2C-are-they-aware-that-they-see-the-world-differently%3F-or%2C-is-it-something-that-they-discover-within-the-short-story%3F-anyways%2C-great-job! 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nicely-done!-communicating-with-plants-has-always-been-an-interesting-thought%3B-i've-always-wondered-what-they-might-say-or-how-they-might-sound.-as-for-the-other-two%E2%80%94the-first-isn't-much-of-a-hypothetical-for-me-(lol)%2C-and-there-was-indeed-a-time%2C-amazingly-enough%2C-that-computers-didn't-exist.-i'm-not-docking-any-points%2C-i-just-found-it-funny.-and%2C-they-can-still-totally-work-if-built-off-of.-like%2C-why-don't-the-humans-like-the-sun%3F-are-they-very-vocal-about-it%3F-since-all-humans-dislike-the-sun%2C-have-they-created-architecture%2C-technology%2C-or-fashion-that-reflects-that%3F-is-it-woven-into-their-culture%3F-and%2C-for-the-second%2C-is-it-an-imagination-of-if-computers-didn't-exist-in-the-modern-world%3F-does-the-definition-of-computers-encapsulate-even-the-most-rudimentary-computers%3F-the-kind-that-are-mechanical-or-kinetic-rather-than-electrical%3F-just-some-questions-to-whet-your-mind-a-bit. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ooo%E2%80%94big-fan-of-your-art-style.-and%2C-all-of-your-ideas-are-super-unique.-immortal-cat-and-plant-magic-are-a-big-yes-from-me%E2%80%94really-vibin'-with-it.-just-a-few-questions.-is-the-clown-not-a-human%3F-why-is-the-cat-watching-over-a-field-of-flowers%3F-is-there-something-there%3F-is-it-a-holy-place%3F-were-they-given-the-task-by-a-former-master%3F-how-does-the-girl-discover-her-ability-to-control-plants%3F-can-she-also-make-plants-decay%3F-good-stuff. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/before-anything-else%E2%80%94i-just-gotta-say-you've-got-a-really-great-art-style.-super-solid%E2%80%94very-good-expressions-in-particular-(i'm-getting-a-bit-of-an-anthony-holden-vibe).-i-feel-like-i'm-looking-at-sketches-by-a-professional.-anyways%2C-incredible-ideas.-self-reflection%2C-stages-of-grief-(kinda...-maybe-more-like-aging%3F-i'm-not-sure-but-it's-great-either-way)%2C-creative-struggles%E2%80%94you-got-it-all-man.-your-%22harrowing%2C-absolutely-excruciating-brainstorm-sessions-were-well-worth-it.-now%2C-just-to-offer-some-questions-to-consider%E2%80%94how-does-the-criminal-come-across-his-younger-self%3F-does-he-time-travel%3F-does-his-past-self-time-travel%3F-is-his-past-self-a-hallucination%3F-what-inciting-incident-requires-the-man-to-accept-that-his-friend-is-imaginary%3F-how-does-the-girl-%22battle%22-with-her-creativity%3F-does-she-use-her-imagination-to-visualize-a-literal-fight-(kinda-fighting-fire-with-fire)%3F-well%2C-i-look-forward-to-seeing-more-of-your-work. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/might-i-say%2C-epic%3F-because%2C-this-is-quite-epic-indeed.-post-apocalyptic-world%3F-epic.-how-much-time-do-you-imagine-would-have-to-have-passed-for-the-humans-to-evolve-to-breathe-underwater%3F-moreover%2C-what-happened-to-the-machines-during-that-time%3F-the-second-one%2C-the-one-about-the-key%2C-sent-me-for-a-loop%E2%80%94how-does-the-key-work%3F-like%2C-not-scientifically%2C-but-how-does-it-work-conceptually%3F-do-you-have-to-physically-twist-the-key%3F-does-a-keyhole-open-in-space-whenever-you-move-the-key-to-unlock-something%3F-and%2C-what-does-%22unlocking%22-entail-in-regards-to-the-mind%3F-does-this-release-mental-barriers%3F-does-it-give-them-access-to-all-the-information-in-the-world%3F-does-this-open-the-door-to-kingdom-hearts%3F-the-door-is-not-yet-open%E2%80%94anyhow%2C-as-for-the-last-one%E2%80%94no-questions-needed.-you-had-me-at-%22epic-classical-music%22%E2%80%94sentient%2C-self-playing-instruments-are-just%E2%80%94well%E2%80%94epic. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-what-if-animals-lived-in-a-secret-world-in-the-arctic.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-how-the-animals-would-have-evolved-to-be-this-smart 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-were-the-super-powers.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-my-power-would-be. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/so-fun.-lotsa-good-potential-commentary-in-the-first-and-second-one%2C-and-the-last-one%E2%80%94well%2C-i-just-like-the-last-one.-adorable!-super-cute!-appeals-to-my-aesthetics-a-lot.-just-excellent.-only%2C-i'm-curious-to-know-how-exactly-she-becomes-the-queen-of-a-witch-kingdom.-if-it-were-a-candy-kingdom-of-sorts%2C-i-feel-like-there'd-be-enough-whimsy-for-her-to-become-queen-for-no-particular-reason-other-than-being-a-human%2C-but-i'm-interested-to-know-how-she-earns-such-a-high-position-in-a-nation-of-witches. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/ooh-lovely%E2%80%94first%2C-i-mean%2C-c'mon-anything-that-messes-with-ancestors-and-the-spirits-of-family-is-the-greatest-(crying-is-my-favorite-flavor-of-ice-cream).-the-tennis-racket-has-a-lot-of-potential-for-an-ability-vs-resources-thing-(don't-quite-have-the-word-to-explain).-and%2C-the-last-one%E2%80%94time%E2%80%94mm%E2%80%94anything-that-plays-with-time%E2%80%94i-love-it.-does-the-time-traveling-maintain-your-position-relative-to-earth%3F-or%2C-does-it-ensure-you're-still-able-to-do-your-activity%3F-like%2C-if-you-were-surfing%2C-would-you-still-be-above-water-when-you-travel-through-time.-also%2C-what-activities-in-specific%3F-is-it-any-activity-you-love-or-are-passionate-about%3F-also%2C-side-note%2C-but-i-appreciate-the-very-natural%2C-candid%2C-one-take-feel-of-the-video. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i'm-getting-a-lot-of-childhood-adventure-and-romanticism-from-these-ideas%E2%80%94they-all-do-a-really-good-job-of-capturing-that-imagination-and-childlike-free-spiritedness.-a-few-questions-though%2C-does-the-spirit-take-the-form-of-a-human%3F-is-it-a-spirit-in-that-it's-the-spirit-of-a-dead-person-or-is-it-a-spirit-as-in-some-supernatural-being%3F-the-second-one%2C-i-understand-%22what-if-you-lived-your-dream-for-a-week%22%2C-but-what-do-you-mean-by-%22what-if-you-lived-your-life-for-a-week%22%3F-do-you-mean-what-if-you-lived-through-your-entire-life-in-a-week%3F-oh%2C-and-actually%E2%80%94by-dream%E2%80%94i-imagine-you-mean-desired-profession-or-future-or-something%2C-but-did-you-mean-an-actual-dream%3F-like%2C-the-kind-you-experience-in-your-sleep%3F-okay%2C-last%E2%80%94i-don't-really-have-any-questions%E2%80%94but-i-love-the-potential-room-for-political-and-social-commentary%E2%80%94we're-different-but-similar%E2%80%94we-can-all-get-along%2C-but-sometimes-only-kids-are-able-to.-great-stuff. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh%E2%80%94yes%E2%80%94that-first-one%E2%80%94i'm-a-big-fan-of-the-train-within-the-electrical-cord.-though%2C-%22doing%22-is-a-bit-vague-for-my-tastes%E2%80%94do-you-mean-to-say-the-people-within-are-transporting-the-electrical-current%3F-do-you-mean-that-they-are-the-electrical-current%3F-do-you-mean-they-do-some-work-that-keeps-the-electricity-moving%3F-i-also-love-number-two%E2%80%94i-enjoy-any-idea-that-plays-with-the-passing-and-sharing-of-experiences%2C-and-i-love-well-animated-food%2C-so-marrying-the-two-is-just-a-perfect-recipe-for-success.-i'm-not-biased%2C-i'm-just-hungry.-oo!-and-the-last-one%E2%80%94the-last-one-reminds-me-of-yomiel-from-ghost-trick-in-his-object-form.-i-can-also-imagine-some-modern-day-alchemy%2Fwitchery-at-play.-anyways%2C-super-good.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh-my-gosh%E2%80%94that-last-one-is-so-cute.-i-can-imagine-the-audience's-reaction-once-they-figure-out-what-the-meaning-behind-the-flower's-direction.-the-first-one-reminds-me-of-moana%2C-but-the-idea-has-a-lot-of-play%2C-so-i-can-see-how-it'd-be-much-difference.-after-all%2C-in-moana%2C-the-%22wave%22-really-isn't-a-wave-so-much-as-some-strange-ocean-tentacle%2Ftendril-thing.-i-imagine-it-could-be-very-fun-to-experiment-with-the-movement-and-motion-of-the-characters.-conceptually%2C-i-can-imagine-the-waves-enjoying-crashing-upon-the-beach-just-as-much-as-surfers-enjoy-riding-the-waves.-something-else-i'm-reminded-of-is-those-fun-water-creatures-from-ponyo.-last-but-not-least%2C-the-idea-of-music-influencing-color-is-great.-representing-sound-visually-is-just-a-great-idea-all-around%E2%80%94synesthesia-is-a-wonderful-thing. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-%22what-if-a-criminal-came-across-himself-in-his-childhood.%22-it-makes-me-wonder-if-he'll-change-paths-and-turn-into-a-good-person%2C-or-what-if-his-childhood-wasn't-so-good%2C-and-when-he-saw-his-childhood-self%2C-it-made-him-more-angry. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/it-makes-me-wonder-how-the-super-hero's-will-use-their-power%2C-would-they-use-it-to-improve-the-world%2C-will-the-bad-people-use-their-power-to-hurt-the-others%2C-and-what-would-happen-if-one-bad-person%2Fvillain-got-the-strongest-power%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/aw-yea%E2%80%94first-idea's-super-cute%2C-and-i-could-easily-see-it-being-a-pixar-animated-short-(and-i-can-see-it-making-me-cry-just-as-much).-though%2C-is-no-one-able-to-see%3F-or%2C-is-the-world-only-dark-for-one-person%3F-does-the-%22light-of-others%22-only-come-from-certain-kinds-of-people-(e.g.-nice-or-loving-people).-are-those-that-emit-the-light-able-to-see-(otherwise%2C-it's-a-bit-of-a-blind-leading-the-blind-scenario)%3F-does-the-light-emitted-by-these-people-actually-illuminate-the-world%3F-like%E2%80%94can-you-only-see-the-people-themselves%3F-or%2C-does-the-light-actually-increase-the-visibility-of-the-environment-around-them%3F-in-contrast-with-the-first-idea%2C-the-others-are-quite-a-bit-darker.-for-the-second-one%2C-what-would-swapping-angels-with-demons-insinuate-in-this-scenario%3F-like%2C-is-the-only-change-the-appearance%3F-because%2C-i-mean%E2%80%94biblically-correct-angels-aren't-exactly-a-sight-for-sore-eyes-either.-are-the-demons-still-traditionally-evil%3F-if-not%2C-what-makes-them-any-different-from-angels%3F-angels-are-angels-and-demons-are-demons-not-by-appearance-but-by-deed-and-nature.-and%2C-in-the-first-place%2C-were-demons-to-present-themselves-to-man-they'd-likely-appear-very-handsome-and-appealing%E2%80%94after-all%2C-it's-the-nature-of-deception-to-be-attractive.-what-would-salvation-even-refer-to%3F-finally%2C-for-the-last-idea%2C-is-the-aforementioned-world-he-hallucinates-inspired-by-the-digital-world-as-it-appears-to-be-in-the-drawing%3F-what's-the-purpose-of-the-world-he-creates%3F- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/yesssss.-that-first-idea-really-vibes-with-me.-though%2C-personally%2C-i've-never-had-an-imaginary-friend-(guess-this-must-be-my-first-time-on-earth-lol)%2C-it's-definitely-an-idea-that-has-an-easy-%22in%22-for-the-viewers.-but%2C-the-idea-that-these-imaginary-friends-are-just-you-from-a-past-life%3F-mwah~!-past-lives-have-always-been-fascinating-to-me%2C-even-if-i-don't-believe-in-them%2C-and-lingering-memories-or-attachments-only-add-to-that-fascination.-brilliant.-the-second-is-also-equally-interesting-to-me%E2%80%94close%2C-active-relationships-and-interactions-with-divinity.-why-not%3F-out-of-these%2C-what-i-have-the-most-questions-about-is-the-last-one.-what's-the-incentive-to-fake-love-in-a-world-where-it-never-existed%3F-was-there-a-reason-faking-love-took-off-(i.e.-why-did-it-become-a-trend)%3F-in-what-ways-would-this-be-differentiated-from-reality%3F-in-which-people-still-fake-love-even-when-it's-real.-although%2C-with-something-so-intangible-as-love%2C-what-would-even-constitute-realness%3F-if-everyone-believes-in-it%2C-what-makes-an-illusion-different-from-reality%3F-does-it-not-become-self-realizing-at-some-point%3F-everything's-super-interesting%2C-well-done-you-three. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oooh%E2%80%94all-super-different-ideas.-i-like-the-stoplight-one%E2%80%94tiny-people-in-a-big-world-is-an-idea-that's-always-creatively-fascinating-for-me-(e.g.the-secret-world-of-arrietty)%2C-and-i-feel-like-it's-something-that's-been-getting-more-attention-lately.-and%2C-let's-face-it%E2%80%94the-city-aesthetic-is-just-a-good-one.-i'm-reminded-of-smart's-dancing-traffic-light-manikin-and-a-game-called-the-pedestrian.-what-do-the-people-look-like%3F-do-the-people-ever-leave-the-stoplight%3F-the-algebra-one-is-extremely-fun%E2%80%94drawings-coming-to-life-is-already-a-good-idea%2C-but-the-fact-that-it's-during-algebra-class-tickles-my-fancy-because-there's-a-lot-of-fun-to-be-had-with-shape-language%E2%80%94seeing-animals-and-such-in-lines-and-shapes-and-formulas%E2%80%94almost-like-constellations%E2%80%94it's-a-really-effective-way-to-communicate-an-active-imagination.-as-for-the-last-one%2C-i'm-curious-to-know-what-kind-of-world-this-would-be.-does-everyone-know-about-the-couple%3F-is-the-world-at-peace%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/oh%E2%80%94very-fun.-i-can-imagine-all-of-these-being-very-eye-catching%2C-particularly-the-latter-two%3B-light's-always-fun-to-mess-with%2C-and-impossible-structures%E2%80%94particularly-liminal-spaces%2C-and-infinity-is-something-that-boggles-everyone's-minds.-some-things-i'm-curious-about%E2%80%94is-the-planet-sentient%3F-is-it-inhabited%3F-i-see-that-the-planets-you-depicted-seem-to-be-from-our-solar-system%E2%80%94in-which-case%2C-what-planet-is-running-away%3F-or%2C-maybe%2C-you're-suggesting-that-the-solar-system-originally-had-one-more-planet-long-ago%3F-and%2C-this-%22what-if%22-scenario-is-explaining-what-happened-to-it%3F-next%2C-what-counts-as-sunlight%3F-because-i-imagine-it-would-be-very-problematic-if-it-was-all-the-light-from-the-sun.-does-it-only-refer-to-particularly-distinct-beams-of-sunlight%3F-does-the-intensity-of-the-beam-influence-its-properties%3F-(e.g.-does-it-became-more-hard-the-sharper-it-is%2C-does-it-become-softer-the-more-scattered-it-is%3F)-are-you-forced-to-walk-on-sunlight%3F-or%2C-is-it-optional%3F-is-sunlight%2C-then%2C-a-solid%3F-like%2C-is-it-limited-only-to-walking-or-can-you-trip-over-it-or-bump-your-head-on-it%2C-too%3F-do-streetlights-and-other-artificial-lights-not-produce-the-same-effect%3F-finally%2C-is-there-a-destination-for-the-train%3F-does-it-represent-anything%3F-does-it-ever-stop%3F-why-do-people-board-it%3F-or%2C-do-people-board-it%3F-the-idea-reminds-me-of-infinity-train%2C-so-i-highly-recommend-that-you-check-that-out-sometime.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/pf%E2%80%94oh%2C-i-love-all-of-these-ideas.-the-second-idea-is-both-weirdly-specific-and-open-ended-at-the-same-time%E2%80%94absurd-in-the-best-kind-of-way.-i-have-a-few-questions-about-all-of-them%E2%80%94the-first-idea%E2%80%94does-the-wristwatch-itself-time-travel%3F-or%2C-does-it-enable-time-travel%3F-second%2C-what-kind-of-crime-does-the-turtle-deal-in%3F-why-a-turtle%3F-third%2C-is-the-alien-raised-to-become-a-god%3F-is-the-alien-raised-believing-it's-a-god%3F-is-the-alien-raised-by-gods%3F-anyways%2C-love-it. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea-is-a-fun-twist-on-a-classic-myth%E2%80%94there's-a-lot-to-play-with.-but%2C-i'm-actually-more-interested-in-the-last-question%3A-what-if-a-realm-existed-with-a-hidden-sun.-what-exactly-constitutes-%22hidden%22%3F-is-it-constantly-eclipsed-by-another-extraterrestrial-body%3F-is-it-kept-within-a-dyson-sphere%3F-is-the-world-itself-covered-by-some-opaque-shell%3F-and%2C-was-there-an-important-reason-behind-why-you-chose-a-hidden-sun-as-opposed-to-no-sun-at-all%3F-i-look-forward-to-more. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/nice!-out-of-these%2C-i'm-probably-most-interested-by-the-last-question%3A-%22what-if-mushrooms-were-the-dominant-species%3F%22-now%2C-that-is-intriguing.-visualizing-it-in-my-head%2C-i'm-already-enjoying-the-aesthetics.-we-get-more-stories-focused-on-people-or-animals%2C-so-i-appreciate-that-this-idea-drifts-away-from-that.-with-that-in-mind%2C-i'd-like-to-ask%E2%80%94in-what-way-are-they-dominant%3F-dominant-in-terms-of-population-size%3F-dominant-in-terms-of-land-coverage%3F-dominant-in-terms-of-intellect%3F-perhaps-it's-a-combination-of-those-ideas%3F-are-the-mushrooms-sentient%3F-mobile%3F-is-there-a-specific-mushroom-type-that-has-dominated-well%3F-or%2C-is-it-just-mushrooms-in-general%3F-what-about-other-fungi%3F-i-might-suggest-looking-into-the-ophiocordyceps-unilateralis%E2%80%94though%2C-it's-a-bit-gross%2C-so-viewer-discretion-is-advised.-anyways%2C-fun-idea. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-foundmost-interesting-was-the-turtle-crime-boss.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-type-of-crimes-would-it-be-in-charge-of.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-idea-of-each-human-having-a-superpower.-is-there-a-way-youcould-add-onto-this-to-make-it-suit-yor-style-of-storytelling-and-development.-like-what-if-only-adults-had-them%3F 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-liked-the-idea-of-the-reptiles-going-on-a-road-trip.-i-was-confused-about-what-the-little-beings-were-going-to-look-like-for-the-third-what-if.-like-would-they-be-evil%2C-good-or-unbaised.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/%22what-if%22%2C-indeed.-this-is-probably-the-classic-of-all-classics-in-terms-of-what-ifs.-it's-the-kind-of-question-heard-on-the-playground%2C-in-classrooms%2C-and-during-small-talk-hypotheticals%3A-%22if-you-had-a-super-power%2C-what-would-it-be%3F%22-super-powers-are-interesting-because-of-how-unlimited-they-are%3B-the-idea-is-universally-attractive.-so%2C-my-question-would-be-what-framework-or-set-of-constraints-might-you-offer-to-rein-it-in%3F-perhaps%2C-you-could-think-up-three-variations-to-iterate-on. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-third-one.--i%E2%80%99m-kinda-curious-about-what-kind-of-a-story-that-would-incite.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-third-one.-i-would-love-to-see-the-boy%E2%80%99s-reaction-when-he-realizes-that-it%E2%80%99s-a-hallucination.-or-if-he-doesn%E2%80%99t.- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-really-like-the-last-one.-it-makes-me-wonder-what-perspective-the-story-would-be-from-(some-random-person-or-one-of-the-couple)-and-whether-the-couple-would-get-back-together-in-the-end%2C-because-i-think-it-would-be-a-powerful-message-either-way.-- 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-found-the-idea-of-people-suddenly-being-the-only-sources-of-light-in-the-world-one-day-interesting%2C-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-the-worldwide-implications-to-this%2C-how-different-kinds-of-people-would-react-or-explain-the-sudden-change 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/first-of-all%2C-a-fantastic-art-direction%3B-it-really-caught-my-eye-when-i-saw-the-thumbnail.-my-favorite-out-of-all-of-the-ideas-was-the-music-changing-the-color-around-you.-i-could-totally-seeing-something-that-pixar-would-make.-i'm-wondering-about-the-story-direction-for-that-what-if-and-how-it-would-play-out.-if-you-choose-that-what-if...-idea.-the-submission-was-beautiful-and-original%2C-great-job-guys. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-first-idea-was-my-favorite-one-out-of-all-submissions-shown%2C-the-idea-of-shootings-stars-actually-granting-wishes-as-the-whole-plot-line-is-great-idea.-i'm-wondering-how-you-would-make-it-into-a-reel-for-our-final-project%2C-if-you're-taking-that-storyline.-the-submissions-was-really-with-some-awesome-art%2C-keep-up-the-great-work. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-last-idea-where-a-boy-overcame-with-so-much-grief--created-a-world-of-his-own%2C-even-though-that-idea-has-been-used-many-times.-there-are-still-a-lot-of-possible-ways-to-make-it-unique.-that-idea-is-straightforward-but-complex-also.-i'm-curious-on-what-the-grief-could-be-and-the-direction-on-how-this-boy-will-overcome-this-imaginary-world.-the-submission-as-a-whole-was-really-good%2C-and-honestly-was-fascinated-by-each-idea.-really-great-job. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-last-idea-where-a-boy-overcame-with-so-much-grief--created-a-world-of-his-own%2C-even-though-that-idea-has-been-used-many-times.-there-are-still-a-lot-of-possible-ways-to-make-it-unique.-that-idea-is-straightforward-but-complex-also.-i'm-curious-on-what-the-grief-could-be-and-the-direction-on-how-this-boy-will-overcome-this-imaginary-world.-the-submission-as-a-whole-was-really-good%2C-and-honestly-was-fascinated-by-each-idea.-really-great-job. 2021-10-10 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/woah-these-are-awesome%2C-i-think-the-third-is-the-most-interesting-to-me.-i-want-to-know-how-the-phones-came-to-be-that-way%2C-what-is-their-history%3F 2021-10-09 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/woah-cool-ideas%2C-i-think-i-like-the-first-time-travelling-one-the-best.-it-makes-me-wonder-a.-how-they-got-that-watch-and-b.-where-they-go-with-it 2021-10-09 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-one-about-the-cat-cafe.-it-makes-me-wonder-more-about-a-reversed-relationship-between-people-and-animals-and-a-different-power-dynamic 2021-10-09 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-3rd-one!-awesome-idea.-it-makes-me-wonder-why-the-parents-all-left-the-planet-in-the-first-place.-i-can't-wait-for-this-story 2021-10-09 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/i-like-the-third-what-if-most-about-covid-in-hawaii.-it-makes-me-wonder-how-he-cured-everyone. 2021-10-09 https://www.s1.storyxperiential.com/system-comments/the-idea-i-found-most-interesting-was-the-%22what-if%22-there-was-a-grieving-programmer-could-talk-to-his-girlfriend-on-an-app.--it-makes-me-wonder-can-technology-fills-the-void-of-loss-or-can-it-cause-more-damage.- 2021-10-08 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