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I like the idea of a post apocalyptic world where a boy is trying to journey on to find what he needs but I do think you should put more depth and thought on how the two characters meet instead of just showing 1. He's walking 2. They meet 3. They help each other there should be little minor beats in between to help your story flow and make sense
Gabriel
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