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I really enjoy the suspense that you've built up with your story structure and can't wait to find out about Mo's past life. I'm curious how your story would play if you held off on sharing that Mo was kidnapped until the moment that his teacher put him in the car and Mo remembers at the time? Everything is very clear and your character development is great, along with your clear drawings. Excellent work and can't wait to hear more!



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