I think the story was very nice/relaxing to hear, but I wish there was a little more conflict and explanation. It follows a formula a little too closely, and I wish it branched out more and got a little more exciting. I do like the premise, and I think it has a lot of potential! The art was cute too, but I wish there was a little more detail! Overall, I thought it was pretty neat and definitely want to see it more fleshed out!