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Love how the story is turning out! It feels like a real manga plot and makes me wonder if the avatar will act nice in the beginning and get slowly more corrupt. There aren’t many story problems that I can sense. Just make sure to flesh out the characters well to make them able to convey strong emotions, and develop the villain as I feel the character has a lot of good story potential.

Audrey

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