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Nice job creating a sense of distance and motion! I'm already anticipating characters entering the scene, having to choose the treat they want! One suggestion - maybe in the next draft, move the lamp posts further away from the snack stands so we can see the signs labeled "mochi" and "ice cream, or create signs that don't need to overlap onto the lamp posts?

Sally

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