Ok. I love this. The story is simple, and sweet. We see that even though we may feel that we don't fit in, we need each other more then we may want to admit. But, as much as we can really see the story coming to life through the pictures, I really think they could use some work. using pen or color could do just that. Possibly even using bigger paper could benifit the amount of detail possible that would really make this spectacular.