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The story is decent, though I think it's quite strange how the conflict seems to resolve itself. The protagonist doesn't do anything but apologize. Perhaps the mother should actually care whether the protagonist wants to be a fashion designer, and the protagonist and doppelganger have to work together to change her mind?

Rhoslyn

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