Very good work, fantastic story and images. I really like the moment when the teacher challenges her to explain why she's interested in dance. that's a strong story point. Love the tension you build to at the end...can't wait to see what happens next. For anyone looking here is act 1 (https://www.storyxperiential.com/video-submissions-week-5/7ade1d2c-0cff-430c-97b3-696fb09e5dd9)