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Video presentation was very choppy and rough draft-ish. Story has right idea in beginning but fails to satisfy his need for others. Do friends from far away stay near him now, so he is not alone? Yes he is cured of cancer, But is he accured of loneliness in some way? “And then” way too overused. Figures in drawings need to be bigger & easier to interpret in some cases.

Louise

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