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What I found most interesting about your story is the problem being thinking you are the only one that is different or makes mistakes. I like that many people could relate to this at some point in their lives. I was confused about why Elliot was laughed at in the store, and what the argument about him involved. Overall, I think this is a great story and I am looking forward to viewing the next two acts.

Parker

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