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Your story is really cute! The story doesn't drag on, has a lot of charm, and the artwork complements the narration well. The only minor complaint I have is I don't think the animals should work with chocolate. If the food is only meant for humans I don't think you need to change this, but I just kept thinking about how chocolate is poisonous for cats. Otherwise, great work!
Audrey
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