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I like the idea of making a sock the main character. I think you should also work in some more detail about the story. How does he get lost? How does he get home? I like how you added patterns onto the sock to show his personality more through his external features.
Sam
I really love the concept of the sock and i love the artwork. I have a few questions, like what does the sock do? what is the socks purpose in life? maybe talk more about that but other than that i love it so much
samantha
I think that your idea sets up your story well to be about not just the socks struggles but his strugles about being alone. I thought that you could've talked more about the struggles that he will face when being apart from his pair. I think that he could be more complex than just being arrogant. I think that the idea you have is great.
Graham
The story line of this is great but i also think there should be more details about the setting hes in. All in all good story
Jayden
I liked that you added designs on the sock. I though maybe you could have made it look torn and old. But over all i liked the plot of the story.
Grace
I like the idea of the sock getting in a relationship. I wounded hoe he's gonna find her, and how his journey will continue. I love the drawings and the characteristics.
mia
How did Preston get separated from his pair and why
does this sock talk
Preston
I like the idea but I think it could use alittle more color but overal i love this one.
Jacob
This seems like a very funny story, I like the idea and originality but it kinda also seems a bit like toy story. I wonder how this story will be different from toy story.
Hunter
I quite like the concept here! The drawing's really well done, very expressive. So do you think the story you're telling here could only be told with socks? This story still very much reminds me of Toy Story, so I don't really see a problem, I'm just highlighting that question so maybe you could think a bit deeper about it. I must say though, the concepts you have here are quite unique.
Christian
This story has a lot of potential
Spend more time on your drawing
Speak more clearly
funny story
Diego
The sock looks great I like how you added sports balls on them and its creative.
I think that you should add some color so it could stand out to people and make a cool background.
But everything looks detailed.
Victoria
I dont understand it verry much. Maybe somthing thats more dramatic
Julieanne
hilarious, this will become my favorite story i know it. i wonder how you'll get me to care about his wants? maybe a dramatic opening to the story?
tim
Love the originality of this idea...never thought a sock could be arrogant. It makes me wonder who he's going to befriend in his search for his pair? underwear, tshirts? I could imagine this being a great comedy....the first comedy ever about clothes??? can't wait to see how you pull this off
Brit
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