I really love the drawings but in the video 2 voices are over lapped and it is hard to understand the story line of the video

Pablo's

The drawings are very detailed and i love how it has the little word bubble. However i think that the video left on kinda a cliffhanger on what happens next but i also like how there are different pictures on whats going on.

Jayden

First off i really like the animation you guys did, I love all the drawings and the description of it. I feel like maybe you should focus on characters and explain some more about them because right now all you really explained was your scene and didn't touch base on any of your characters so i feel like maybe you should do that. But other than that you did really well

samantha

I really like the drawings, where is the home located what is the scenery? and who is the main character? I love the idea.

mia

I don't understand whats going on are they fighting playing etc
i wonder what they are doing

Preston

I really like the backstory of the movie and the drawing of the 2nd story house.
Maybe if the house had some color it would look a lot more colorful.

Yusuf

I liked the drawing it looked great
I liked how you had everything so detailed.
Something I would so to it so it could be more better is add some color.

Victoria

Really organized
Add color
add more to the story
This is something that i would watch

Diego

very good art so far, which we got a summary of the characters and story than the beginning of it to make it more clear though. other than that great start.

Hunter

I like the concept of mystery buit but i think you could do better but I like how you added multiply pictures

Jacob

I liked that it was very neat. I think maybe you could have added colors. I liked how you guys put boom and crash in the picture.

Grace

Its cool, Itx very disorganised.

Julieanne

I thought that the visuals were very informative. I thought that you could've added more information about the story. I thought that you could've set the scene better. I think that the characters you had could be great!

Graham

I thought that the visuals were very informative. I thought that you could've added more information about the story. I thought that you could've set the scene better. I think that the characters you had could be great!

Graham

Very cool, hyped to see more of the character.

Dillon

Where is the house located and who's your character it seems like a good story (introduction to one) but i'm not sure who the character is.

Corbin

I love this video, so much fun. Sounds like a great way to start a story....I'm curious more about your characters wants/needs but I guess we'll find out soon. It makes me wonder what these animals are going to get up to?? can't wait for more. nice choice of music!

Brit