This is an awesome story idea!! I like how on side outside he looks shy but on the inside he his different!

Emma

is he the only stuffed animal that can be a knight? and what stood out to me was how detailed your DRAFT is i cant wait to see the finished product.

michayla

What I found most interesting was that you decided to go with a non-human main charcter. It makes me wonder if you could add more depth to teddy and his personality.

Alejandro

The design and coloring is great. I love the main character.

Fernando

Really liked the story idea! Teddy also has a nice design, both in passive and hero form. Although he is a hero, he might become bland if his only desire is to protect his owner and is always successful in doing so. Hero's are often interesting because they go through a hero's journey or have some flaws. These imperfect qualities will make Teddy a more human or relatable character. Overall, the story looks great just remember when developing the story that teddy needs some emotional conflict in addition to the mom preventing him from protecting his owner.

Audrey

Wow really well done. This character is definitely unique and adorable. It makes me wonder how he's going to get out of that drawer! I also wonder why the mother doesn't want her playing with bears, i think that could be an interesting part of your story when you flesh it out. bravo!

Brit

AMAZING!!!! At first I was thinking Teddy was so adorable and cute and then the music changed and he became so much more awesome! I love the music in this video and the art style is so nice and pretty as well! The story is fantastic and I love that Teddy just wants to protect his owner. I really want to see more!!

Natalie