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I love the way Evan looks and that even in the character profile, the character is telling himself to be better as a person and with his personality. The only thing I would change is that maybe when describing how he wants to be more confident, maybe you should look a little more worried, but this was still good!

Solomon

The art is really good and it seems like it will be a fun story! It does feel like Curious George a little too much though...

Galen

What I found most interesting about this character was that he treats everyone like bananas so that it helps with his anxiety. It makes me wonder if he could face his anxiety with treating everyone like bananas.

Noah

This is such a unique and cool character. I love that he is a monkey because it adds a lot to his character.

Emma

The way you presented this character is great ! I could already start to see how Evan lives in his community.

HiuLam

The way you presented this character is great ! I could already start to see how Evan lives in his community.

HiuLam

I really like your idea I think that you can go really far with this charactar

Kingston

I LOVE THIS! You did the video so well done with the different scenes and the voice-over as the orangutan. It makes me wonder more about how far you will take this. GOOD JOB!

Micaela

I think this is a very interesting character and I love that it is a monkey.

Alejandro

not bad.

yosias

This idea is amazing! I found it super interesting that you were able to fit so many unique and compelling traits into this character. It makes me wonder who some of the other orangutans are who are the antagonists? The story you have already developed is fantastic and I cannot wait to see where this goes!

Jack

Liked the voice acting! I found seeing everyone as bananas a bit pretty funny. The story sounds like it’s going in a good direction, but I feel the character designs can become even better with some varied shape language. Your side character buff orangutan would look a bit more appealing with a more confident stance and prominent chest. I feel like looking at some of the character designs in Tarzan would be a good reference to see how to mess with volume, hair, and other monkey features (even though the monkeys in the movie are gorillas, not orangutans). Overall, looking great just make sure to improve character designs with a more prevalent shape language.

Audrey

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Evan

Evan is an orangutan who is filled with various interesting ideas but fails to implement them correctly. He wants to be appreciated in his community, thus he needs to execute his plans flawlessly by overcoming the obstacles of Fear & Anxiety.

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