I really like your drawing; she is really pretty. Does the conflict make her change her attitude? What is her main motivation to change for the better? I like that she'll have companions to help her out.

Sam

You can draw, that drawing is very good. I would recommend that you tell us what the conflict will be. I would recommend that you tell us just the main points. I am excited to see how your character changes over time.

Ashley

Very good!

Isis

I love your design and how well planned out you made it. It makes me wonder what surprises you will add. The story you gave kind of took the surprise away from what will happen because you gave a little too much info and detail. So yeah the design and your plan are amazing but the video was too long and told basically the whole story so my feedback is to keep the suspense and wonder what will happen to go.

Micaela

I think its a good story but the one thing is your telling me the whole story technically so it would of been nice for you not to do it to long so that way you could tell the rest of the story when your finished making your short film

Armando

Very good! I like it because the character sounds very good

Estrella

Very nice! The details on the story are very good! I wonder if you could give more detail on the other elves?

Brogen

I think the illustration gives a good visual for how your character will look in one of their forms. I wonder more about the stranger that they interact with and it makes me curious if this stranger is another being similar to what she is.

Lucas