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I like your drawing; he's really cute. I really think you should give them a name so the story doesn't get confusing. I like how they have to learn to have a better sense of self worth.

Sam

wow i love this. so cool. great art too.

Maddie

Your idea for both this character and his story is really cool. I wonder if you will expand on this character and approach him more like a bot or just like and enigma or ego. because no one will really meet or see wifi I wonder how he overcome this challenge himself

cindy

Nice story.
Seems like a good character.
Good drawings.

Kareem

1. I love the design of your character. His personality reminds me of Baymax from Big Hero 6. As for a name suggestion, the name Wifi seems to fit him.
2. I wonder how he works. Does he work like the internet going to people's houses, or does he control the internet from a headquarters of some kind?

Kiana

What exactly is he? And i would name him Alien X

Brandon

I really like the idea of your character and the way you draw him is very interesting. I wonder if your character will eventually become appreciated.

Kila

It is an interesting character and I like how you didn't make it a human main character.

Alejandro

i love the character and the message is good.

jackson

What I found most interesting was the personification of WiFi. It makes me wonder more about whether people would know about them as a living being, and if they did, would they respect them more?

Parker

I liked this idea! It’s an interesting twist on taking a new perspective on a frustrating situation and bringing awareness of how our words can unintentionally affect those around us.

Adrianne

Recommendations for name: WEFE instead of WIFI. Idk sounds funny.

Bryce

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