I love that people can relate to this and that is really cool. I like how much development you are talking about giving him and i think it is cool that the story involves him fixing himself.

Hadarya

I find this character interesting, it seems like he could have an interesting character arc, along with a good moral if done right

Tristan

I think it is interesting that you created a character who doesn't really seem to have any positive attributes, because that leaves a lot of room for growth throughout your story. I think it would be really interesting how this book will transform your character and his outlook on what's most important in life.

Isabella

Good job. What I found most interesting was the lesson you had behind the story. "He needs to learn how to put his needs over his wants." It makes me wonder more about what would happen if he did put his needs over his wants?

Kahiau