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Dot being of afraid of asking for help is his weakness and i hope he overcomes it. I like the drawing :)

Crystal

I found it interesting that Dot is conflicted -- they want help but don't want to ask for it. It reminds me of a dad not wanting to stop and ask for directions. Having Dot play off that stereotype could be really funny. Keep going!

Tony

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this is my character design, as the story goes on and the character learns more about herself, she will start to resemble a real platypus

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