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Nice character! It makes me wonder how does bob come out of his little "hole".
Jack
You did a very good job describing your character cant wait to see your final product :)
Armando
I found it interesting that he wants peace and quiet. I wonder if in the plot he finally gets peace and quiet but his journey to quiet was so fun that he doesn't want it anymore. Rather he changes his mindset and wants socialization because he found out that quiet with nobody there is really boring or lonely.
Emily
Bob Stump is a really good name for this character. He seems like he is going to be really passive in the story, so it will be interesting to see how you pull him into the events of your story. Will he be a reluctant hero, or a passive witness to events? It will be interesting to see how far out of his comfort zone the events of the story take him, and how they transform him.
Katie
I like how well thought out this character is. He seems very complex. It makes me wonder what he will find that motivates him enough to be courageous.
Adrianne
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