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I think your character has a really good personality. I wonder if he is the only chicken in his community or if everyone is chickens or other animals. Also. I was a bit confused why he seems like he's still in his egg. Is it because he uses it to hide and it helps him feel safe or is it another reason?

Kaitlyn

This looks so cute, very interesting.

Rosy

I love the personality its very lovely.

Jazmyn

I really like your character. A question I have is he going to find friends? If he does what kind of people does he become friends with?

Brenda

Cool idea. But is the chicken still in its egg? :0

Brandon

This is a really good character and people could probably relate. something that I am wondering is how will he deal with the bullies to get over that obstacle.

Leah

What I found interesting was your character design
I think that you could speak a little clearer

Cory

Wow great character just wondering how would he find people like himself in his community

Brian

I like how this character looks and it seems like a great idea. I'm just wondering what he will do about the bullies.

Kyle

What I found most interesting was the arms and the effect it has on the whole drawing. It makes me wonder more about what the drawing would look like if the end of the arts had fingers.

Asher

I like the creativity in this and how well it's drawn

Justin

I like the chicken with the shell and the design overall.

Jared

What I found most interesting was that they really want friendship. It makes me wonder if they will ever make friends,

Finnley

i like the fact that chris was drawn in their egg, it seems like a good way to show their personality. it makes me wonder if their shell will eventually fall off.

elliot

Chris sounds very relatable to a lot of kids. I'm curious why you drew him still in his egg. Is he hiding in there because he lacks the confidence to come out? Or did you just draw him at a particular moment in time before he's fully hatched. Is he bullied because he won't come out of his shell? Is his school only other chickens or other barnyard animals? Is he bullied by the fox, because the fox thinks he's food?

April

Yes. Just yes. He sounds really interesting and y'know...chicken thing is awesome, and pretty relatable as well!

Kiwi

Good job. What I found most interesting was the character you did. It is cool looking. Your story makes me wonder more about why Chris feels that way.

Kahiau

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Chris

This is our character, he is a chicken that goes to school and gets bullied.

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