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I really like the sketches in this one, I think that you could speak a little louder cause I cant hear, But overall I like the story and the character
Noah
I love the concept of the character's world being in black and white in the beginning when they can not find or "see" happiness. This is great visual language. If they find joy or comfort from the bleakness- the addition of color in their environment will speak for itself!
Mary
I like your character character and there characteristics
Emma
What I find most interesting is that your character is described as closed off, and yet they want to bring happiness to others. It makes me wonder the backstory of your character and what they went through to be so shy and closed off, and I'm also curious to know what challenge or low point your character will experience and what transformation they will go through because of it. Great drawings!
PD
You did a really good job with the drawings, and explaining the characters. This is a great idea!
Lexi
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