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excellent details and story.
bailey
This is a cool idea! Teaching people kindness is a good idea, Great job!
lexi
I think its absolutely perfect.
seamus
Cool character idea and drawing! I haven't heard of a moral of kindness being delivered like that before, i'm really curious how the story will turn out!
raphael
I like the character ideas and think it has a lot of potential.
tristan
What I found most interesting about this character was He Was 6'1 like dang why that tall
"It makes me wonder more about what if he just listens to the people and never fulfilled his dream
rayden
Great job :) I like how you included both the internal and external features in a fast-paced video. I would have liked to see more drawing to really bring it to life, though.
Katelyn
I like how he has really great attributes. It makes me wonder about his flaws like What makes him not so perfect?
Emily
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