I Like the character drawings, I think that they could be detailed a little bit more but this is our first draft. I was wondering what the hands/paws(?) were at the bottom of the second image. I like your idea for what he needs to learn, i think it has alot of potential.

parker

I really like the duality of your character. I'm not really sure what the old world is or why it would be a motive/struggle to build on.

cindy

He seems like a good character! Is shy his only trait? I'd love to learn more about him

Sabina

I really like the deep parts of the character you created and how he can be a relatable character for different people. I was wondering if his shyness or his wish to learn will impact his journey in the story in positive or negative ways.

Nalani

Interesting idea! I am wondering what the old world is, and how he arrived in the new world. Good job!

Lexi

What I found most interesting about this character was how friendly he seems. It makes me wonder more about if he is going to learn what he has to.

Taylor