Seems like a good character! Lots of thought into traits and a nice moral to go along with it! Your video is rotated and seems kind of blurry, making it hard to see your drawing, but that's just technical issues, nice job! It could use more drawings demonstrating the characters traits, but that's no necessary.

Raphael

Good idea, that is a valuable lesson to learn. It will be interesting to see how the character learns this lesson, and to see if they make it into the Olympics. Good job!

Lexi

Nice work. Great vocal delivery as well. What I found most interesting is her desire to play softball. I hope in the story you can help us understand where she got that passion. I think we can all relate to that theme as well (good things don't come easy), lots of potential to make this something everyone can relate to. My main note is your image was blurry so in the next weeks can you try to find a way to take a picture and then talk over it in a video app? if you need help you can contact help@storyxperiential.com

Brit