I like how you brought in the idea of an old TV character as the inspiration for your character. What does the character do? Does he get in a lot of trouble enough to almost go to jail? What lessons does he learn? Does he find other ways to gain attention?

Gabriel

nice drawing i really like your concept it seems very intresting and i would definetly want to know more about the 2nd bart simpsons something i would change is ading a backrounds and adding color

antonio

Very cool, I think this character concept is very realistic and relatable. I would like to get more visuals for external side of things.

Dillon

I like this story. Because it sounds like many people can relate to this. I hope to see what he achieves.

Crystal

this is nice your going pro

ahmaree

What I found most interesting about this character was that he's an athlete on the outside but not the inside.
It makes me wonder more about how it is we see ourselves so differently than how others see us.

Bentley

next time speak up a little more and just relax and be calm but good job.

Rowin