I like the drawing. Also how you took your time. The bird looks so good! WOW! Very interesting how the character is a ghost pirate.

Rosy

I like the drawing. Also how you took your time. The bird looks so good! WOW! Very interesting how the character is a ghost pirate.

Rosy

What I found most interesting about this character was she is a ghost pirate
"It makes me wonder more about what if she had found more of her crew on the way to become a pirate

Rayden

I love the character design! The human connection idea is awesome, I can't wait to watch this when it's finished! <3

Sam

What I found most interesting about this character was she is a ghost pirate
"It makes me wonder more about what if she had found more of her crew on the way to become a pirate

Rayden

you're character is very cool. I like that you added that there see throw.

Lukka

you're character is very cool. I like that you added that there see throw.

Lukka

Your videos was very cool its sound very interesting because I think your charter has very nice features

Trinity

i really like the character and the story line

Kordelia

I really like the concept and the character. A question I have is does she find out humans can see her? If she does find out how does she find out?

Brenda

I really like your character. It makes me wonder more about how long it is going to take her to become human again. How long has she been a ghost?

Alana

very good character because she has a very good dream

Estrella

What is her main goal in the short film and also I really like the features

Lily

i really don't understand what the store is about so i would like more about the store it self

alyssa

Very interesting. Choosing a ghost as your main character. So why exactly did you choose to make yours about a ghost? (no offense) And also why does your character want to die again?just some thing to think about.

Jeffrey

Your character is really interesting--I like how you chose to focus on a ghost who is a pirate, because that is really unique and has a lot of potential. I wonder about what the mora of your story is/how an audience can relate to your character's emotions, actions, thoughts, etc.

Isabella

What I found most interesting was Connie's outfit and the fact that she is a pirate ghost. I love that idea! With her personality, it makes me wonder how she can overcome her personal beliefs and values to succeed in her dream of becoming a pirate through living again.

Paris