Kyra and her story is so unique! I like how she still wants to pursue what she enjoys rather than giving into her mother. I wonder, how will her doppelganger help her to develop in the story?

Cayden

i like your art style, how could she hide it from her? i love the idea of a twin and i like how you structured her character

jack

Ooo I wasn’t expecting the Doppelgänger part!! That’s a super great idea!

Clara

I love your drawing and idea, what I found interesting is how krya's mom is not supporting her in her dreams but to be like her. what makes me wonder is that if she is going to let her mom about and change her mom's mind to believe in her.

Jocelyn

Really awesome job on the drawing! :) I found it interesting that you were able to have a fully developed character already. That it so awesome. I wonder how such an average girl will make an interesting story.

Katelyn

Amazing drawing. I loved how detailed you are with the face parts. I would love to see this become a real story. There are so many twist and turns. just like the doppelganger and her mom. What i found most interesting is that she wants to become a tennis player. Tennis is an amazing sport and I hope she can overcome her fear and tell her mom. It makes my wonder about where her doppelganger came from because you cant just meet your doppelganger out of nowhere right? overall amazing job i cant wait to see how this becomes into greatness.

Ivy

Wow! The doppelgänger really threw me for a loop. Where does the lookalike come from? Is she a version of Kyra from another dimension, a shapeshifter, or just another normal human girl? Why is Kyra afraid of her mother’s reaction? Why does she hold herself to such a high standard? Is it just because she doesn’t want to disappoint her mom, or is there another underlying reason (for example, her mom might be abusive or narcissistic)? This has the potential to be a very engaging short. It makes me wonder how her mom will react if/when the truth is discovered. I’m really excited to see how you develop Kyra’s story!

Dylan