The most interesting thing about this character was her looks because she's like a normal girl until you explain what she is on the inside.
it makes me wonder more about how others are on the inside.

Coraline

The style in which the character is drawn is original, and it's done really well.

Caleb

What I found most interesting was her good-hearted nature in wanting to help her mom. It makes me wonder what is taking up so much of her time.

Cory

What I found most interesting was her good-hearted nature in wanting to help her mom. It makes me wonder what is taking up so much of her time.

Cory

I like the advocate for self love and how she is caring. I like the style and the cat is very cute.

Chelsea

I loveee the drawing especially the cat, it's really cute

kaiyi

I like the style and detailed the drawing is, I want to know more about the cat?

Uri

what I liked most was the drawing

Jocelyn

I love the thing about helping her mom. How will she accomplish that?

Braylon

I think that the plot of story is very nice and you could add lots of details about how your character overcomes her issues. I can see how much empathy and reality you have poured into your character. I would love more details about her personal life and backstory with her mom.

Charles Choo

i like how detailed the drawing is, it really conveys her personality. i wonder about how she’s going to help her mother, if she does.

elliot

Your drawing is so good. like, SO GOOD. (also there's a cat so you're probably epic)

Roden

I love the style you drew Melody in. And the cat, I want to know more about the cat, Ash? I like the conflict you set up for her, it's a problem we all face. I'd like to hear more about why her mom needs help. Not enough money? Needing help with younger siblings? I feel like elaborating on that issue will really help drive the story.

April

I like that her greatest enemy is a lack of time; so many people seem to rush from activity to activity and bite off more than they can chew, and a lot of times their mental health suffers because of this. I really like the message that you are conveying with this character, and I can't wait to see where you go from here!

Katie