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I love how you made it clear on your topic. Some room for improvement is i would make his hair more obviously fluffy.
overall i really love how you made it
Julieanne
What I found most interesting about this character was that he struggles with overcoming paranoia. It makes me wonder more about what causes this paranoia and how he overcomes it. Since he is an athlete, does the paranoia stem from athletics and sports?
Will
its great!!
alex p
1. the idea I found most interesting that joe's paranoia stops him from getting what he wants
2. this makes me wonder about what he wants
Bella
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