Sybil sounds like such an in-depth character! I enjoy how she has such a built back story. I wonder how she got the job she works at? How does that job play a role in her recovery from her trauma?

Cayden

What I found most interesting about this character was her design. It makes me wonder more about how it represents her as a person.

Sean

i really like her desing , i wonder why she has trust issues.?? she has a good backstory wich i think people can realate too and away a love her desing ( especially the hair :D)

natalia

I like this character, she seems fleshed out and doesn't feel 2 dimensional. Her writing seems simple. but realistic, which I as a person in the audience appreciate. I suppose it may help to expand her character in other ways, though. Is there anything else she's passionate about, like hobbies? Maybe those could be based off activities she did with her dad when he was still alive?

Rhoslyn

I can see that this character was made with a lot of thought and hard work! However i'd like to know why she has trust issues. love the drawing!

Frida

I really like the art in this one, but you just kinda left the plot line of the monster nursery home. I also like the in depth backstory.

Noah

1. What I found most interesting was your character's journey and arc throughout the story. It's very well thought-out and it connects to Sybil's own backstory and personality.
2. This makes me wonder if working at the senior center, where the residents become magical creatures at night, helps her on her journey, as since the residents are older they probably have a different view on death as they've already experienced loss in their lives.

Kiana

What I found most interesting about this character was the character design! I love the purple-brown hair and the glasses.
It makes me wonder more about what her parents look like.

Sam

Sybil is a very good character but it's sweet that she wanted more time with her dad. I also love the drawing

Estrella

First of all, the Character looks absolutely stunning with so much personality. This story really reminds me of omori's story. Where sunny's sister died at a young age and he suffered depression, grief and anxiety all at once (or persona 3 for how to talk about death) I am curious to know how do you plan to expand on depression. This submissions was really good overall.

Bryce