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2) What you think about this submission:
Skye sounds like a very eventful character! I enjoy how they have a unique passion/occupation. I wonder how they got to another planet? What made them want to pursue what they pursue? How did they leave Earth originally?
Cayden
What I found most interesting about this character was. that she is in outor space
"It makes me wonder more about what if she lands people think shes a alien
Rayden
It got cut off but I think its a cool idea. The one question I have is why is her mom on Earth and shes not. Nice Job!
Mira
It looks really good so far but you should develop the character more like try color or thinking about how she will go to earth again
Maya
that is me
alex
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Return to Earth
A girl trying to go to Earth to find her mom.
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