Wow! I really love your character. I also really love the idea of a childish assassin. Great Job!

Travion

I like the draw

Isis

The drawing was very cool, I liked the jacket and the gun in his hand. good job

TJ

I like the character

Kiernan

I really like the concept it makes me wonder if him being childish interferes with his job

jillian

the things I found most interesting was how you described him "easy to blend in".

cooper

Very cool. What I found most interesting was the attention to detail that you guys had with the coat and the hair. It makes me wonder more about if this character is a person from real life.

Asher

I love the design of the character

Taison

very good idea and has potential to be good

Cam

it’s interesting that the character is an assassin when he is apparently “childish”, it makes me wonder how he entered that type of work. i think you set up a very interesting story.

elliot

I think that the most interesting part was that he only wanted to live a peaceful life but had that job that contradicted what his values were. It made me think about what might have gotten him into that job in the first place.

David

The concept of your character is really cool, What I found most interesting is the idea of a childish assassin. How Is he childish while doing such a harrowing and adult job? This is good stuff, man.

Roden

You've set up some really nice internal conflict for this character, and are well on your way towards some sort of action movie blockbuster. But I am confused by one aspect, if your character wants a more peaceful life, how did they get into the assassin business in the first place? And why can't they just quit and go buy a cabin in Montana or something? And are we talking black hat or white hat assassinations? Or something more mercenary? Well, I guess if you've left me with this many questions, you've done a good job of capturing my attention.

April