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i like this character,she seems believable and i think she could exist in the real world.
connor
This is a really cool idea! Great job!
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Love this idea! You have a great story coming together. what I found most interesting was this idea of needing to learn how to use resources, something we can all relate to. i'm wondering how this seed superpower will work and how she learns to harness it. I think you also have a great theme here about sharing knowledge across generations.
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Hikianalia
The character's name is Hikianalia. On the outside she looks like a cute, Ehu (light brown) hair, tan Hawaiian girl. On the inside, she is sweet, friendly, and curious. What she wants most is to feed her village. What stops her from getting what she wants is that she doesn't know how to use the resources that is on the island. There is only one Native Hawaiian ansector, but she gotta find him. What she learns along the way is how valuable the Hawaiian knowledge is and she needs to pass it on to the next generation.
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