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I liked the drawings but its interesting the differences between internal and external features.
Dilan
what i found interesting was hes love for money but it makes me wonder if he is greedy
Michael
What I found most interesting about this character is the difference between the internal and external features. It makes me wonder more about the transformation and what his transformation is going to be.
Taylor
what I found most interesting about this character was that he is a jerk. It makes me wonder more about how he is going to get along with people.
Robbie
Fantastic ideas, love the drawings - your character already has lots of personality which is impressive....what I found most interesting was his desire for money, I wonder how he will learn to interact with other people? Why will he learn this? (feedback for next time, try to record in a quiet room if you can find it)
Brit
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