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I love the idea that DMV just wants to find their happiness with their glasses. But it makes me wonder why exactly their glasses is stopping them, why they need to be more responsible.
Harlee
Nicely done, clear vocals....i want to know how they learn to be responsible, I wonder what will happen to him? I look forward to this as it develops. why will the audience root for him?
Tim
I love this characters name! What I found most interesting was his interest in this glasses, why does he care so much about them? do these glasses give him powers? I wonder why he's not responsible and how he will learn to change?
Brit
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