What I found most interesting about this character was that he'll seem to be following the common trope of thinking he can do everything himself and will end up learning that he can't and has to accept help. I like that a lot. It makes me wonder more about how his friend got in trouble with the government. He would've had to had done something really bad, right? If so, then why is this character trying to save his friend, is what I'm wondering.

Zinedine

what interest me the most is that you said hes a leader which makes me wonder what he plays a role is in the story

Michael

It was the best I saw

Madeline

cool, i like it :)

Addison

it was good

jesse