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I like bella’s outline design and all the different personality traits she has. Next time though, you should draw both her regular look of the character and the look you put with the personality traits, as we could match the two and see the overall design of your character. From the outline though, she looks pretty cool.

Solomon

ti found intresting is about her personality"s that she has it makes me wonder what bella would do in the next short

antonio

I love the way you described her personality, and looks. The concept is really good too.

Ziyad

I thought that the character was very well thought out. I think that you should add more to the setting and explain that more. I would want to hear more about the struggles that the character faces. I thought the drawing was very descriptive and in-depth.

Graham

Good character!

Isis

Good character!

Isis

Good character!

Isis

Very creative concept. Great drawing and will probably lead to a good story

Brandon

Awesome concept, and i love the design with the words on the outside and inside, Love it.

Corbin

Really good character I enjoyed this.

Remy

10/10. keep up the good work brodiee.

David

will she overcome her issues? it makes me wonder...

Dhani

what i found interesting. Is how brave and diligent she sounds like, it makes me wonder is she will do what she loves, i believe she will do it with her intelligence.

Cristal

it makes me wonder that will she ever become a better person

delilah

love your story and what she wants but does she overcome the thing that is holding her back/issues

Izzy

I think its cool that she likes to design costumes and shes smart and a trickster.

Kira

What I found most interesting was what she wants. I can already tell that she is very powerful and strong little girl. It makes me wonder what will happen in the story. Will she overcome her issues? Will she end up doing what she loves?

Xiadani

What i found most interesting about this character was that she isn't the best person in the world. It makes me wonder more about how she will grow as a person

Robert

I really like your story one thing I have advice or like is a question is why does she feel that way or who is making her feel that way?

Isa lozada

i love the idea i would like to know more about what she likes to make like dresses or pants.

alyssa

I love Bella already! I really like that her external appearance contrasts with her personality, and it makes me wonder how easily she gets away with mischief. The introduction makes me wonder how, exactly, she will learn her lesson.

Dylan

What I liked about your idea was how they to do what they wanted to do they appeared to be sweet and innocent but she knew what she was doing and was more intelligent with it. It made me think more about what might make her learn that she should not be doing things like that or what she might be like if she is always able to be accomplishing her trickery without consequences

David

I like really like the contrast you made between the outside and the inside of the character, especially the trickster part. It would be fun if you could develop a lot of costumes for her since she likes to design them!

Chloe

I love your character design! What I love most is that she is 8 years old and already seems to have a huge personality. It would be interesting to see if at what point in her life did she switch from adorable to mischievous, or what moment pushed her to seek success through evil means.

Isabella

What I found to be most interesting was her diverse set of traits. It seems like a really unique and deep character that has a lot of interesting story opportunities. Your character makes me wonder more about what kind of evil things Bella will do to try and get the recognition she deserves? Its a great idea and has me wanting more!

Jack

ahhhhhhhhhh! I love this so much! the voice over is amazing and it goes so well with the silhouette. It would be cool if you could have another character that knows what she's actually like and thinks it's time people know. What if people get mad at her and make her goals even more unachievable, so she shuts herself off?

Kiwi

I like her silhouette, I am not sure if she is actually a witch or if that is just a costume, but either way its cute and seems to suit her. If she is actually a witch, I think it will be really interesting to find out why or how she became a witch and how she interacts with the world around her. I think its a really great that she has a mean side and I can't wait to see what you do with her, and also to see what she looks like when she's finished!!

Katie

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Bella

The rough draft of my spunky little costume designs

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