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I will like to see something like this, This sounds really interesting. I like how the chatterer wants to overcome her fear to do want she
Crystal
What I found most interesting was the idea of the character. The answer to the question “what that they want to do most” is a question many kids ask these days, if their are aliens? Will they ever come to earth? I am excited to see how the story goes! A question I have is, did Quam every try to go to earth?
Rytham
Your character description is so rich that I cannot wait to see what Quam and her world looks like! Does Quam have special powers? What does everyday life look like on her planet? Do her features make her unique and one of many within her alien people? What is her motivation for wanting to go to earth? Your profile makes me curious to know more. Keep going!
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Moon the Quam
Moon is a quam, which is what we would call an alien.
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