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I really like the plot and the space knight is something I've never heard of it I really like the art its funny and it seems very interesting.

Adrian

I really like his external features (metal bucket, big jacket, etc). I think if you could've added some more color to your character then it would look a lot better. You could've added some internal features as well for example he's kind, hes selfish, he's arrogant, he's lonely.

Yusuf

What I found most interesting about this character was that their eyes change color
It makes me wonder more about if they will go on any adventures in the story

Kayla

I like your art work and your character looks funny

Ryan

Cool idea

Dhani

What I found most interesting was how he wants to leave his planet.

Noah

main character is an alien and wants to be two things. cool idea!

Sagrario

i like how the character is designed, i wonder what are some challenges he is going to face during the story

Arella

What I found most interesting about this character was that he is a little kid wanting to become a knight but he has a long way to go before becoming one.

Kira

I like the visionary type of character you created. The way that you clearly showed how in film, the outfit/clothes that a character wears can impact what our view of what we think their personality is.

Sierra

What I found most interesting about this character is that his armor reflects that he's only a little kid with limited skill sets and tools. Will his outfit change by the end of the story?

Denia

I like the idea of being a space knight! How would it be different from knight on land? What are some special challenges? Is your character someone strong to face them or fragile inside?

Chloe

What i found most interesting is this that this character is an alien, and I've never seen an alien like this! It makes me wonder why they want be a space knight....where did they get that idea? where is their home? can't wait for more

brit

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A Knight to be

A boy wants to be a knight but still has a long way to go

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