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i love the drawing of lawry. i also think that you could have went a little more into description of what he is like and what he does in the pixar shorts.
jenelle
What I found most interesting about this character was how put together he seems, it makes me wonder more about what conflict or lesson he will face in your story?
Dylan
Your character is cool but its hard to hear you/
Emma
nice
alex
What I found most interesting was about who the character was. I wonder what will happen in the story with him and what issues does he face.
Xiadani
What I found interesting was how much depth you put into your character. I wonder what the obstacle would be.
Alejandro
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Main Character (By: Hamid, Juan and Rytham)
Lawney the science genius
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