I really like your drawing; it's really clear and detailed. Is there a reason that Puff is named after a bird? Is there a conflict in his story/is it going to be that Puff can't fly?

Sam

i think the details are super clear and interesting. what i found most interesting is how he likes the outside learn. how might they learn how to fly would there be any conflict. what make me wonder is if he wants to explore outside his take. the art is super cute and has a lot of detail.

kailah

Looks very interesting, looks like you took your time on this drawing.

Rosy

Awww puffs adorable! I wasn’t exactly sure what the conflict that puff faces is (not being able to fly?) but I am very invested in puffs story anyway!!

Clara

What I found most interesting about this character was how they look. The character design is cute. It makes me wonder more about the character expresses their feelings
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Mariana

I wonder if Puff will meet like people from the outside land like humans or the birds

Emma

what i found interesting is that in your picture puff has no wings but you say he/she can fly this makes me wonder how he/she flys

Michael

I find the eyes of the pufferfish is very interesting. I wonder what they like more being in water or flying.

Kila

I don't know if I didn't catch it but do you have a conflict and does puff have any needs

Kaelyn

What I found most interesting was that you created a whole new creature. It makes me wonder more about how he will achieve his goals.

cole

Very nice idea! I like the story. But I wonder where this tank is?

Brogen