It's a cool idea of a dog wanting to go to the park but no one is there to take him, but the idea is very basic, you might need to add some interesting about blue, for example, blue can turn into a different dog breed, one day he changes to a golden retriever but forgets how to change back to his original self and gets lost... and just continue the story. Some details and twist into the story and bam its a 10/10.

Rytham

This is something really simple but also unique to where I haven't seen it before. I wonder if the name signifies a meaning like how he looks bright on the outside, but feels blue and sad on the inside. How would the conflict be resolved? Does he find another dog to bond with? Will his owner come back? Overall an animation could portray a nice short story.

Tristan

This is a very good concept! i'd like to see more of his struggle and the solutions he comes up with to his owner being gone. Keep it up, Blue sounds cool!

Sabina

Nice idea! How are you going to show the dogs thoughts? Will Bluey talk or will there be a narrator?

Elle

I like the dog's name, but maybe the art could convey the theme a little more, but the theme is nice

Ziyad

This is a wonderful way to convey human life experiences/obstacles through the eyes of a character that all viewers will relate to. with empathy. Your story has so much potential to have a useful outcome through the learning experience your character will have as your story progresses.

Mary

i like this idea. It sounds really entertaining

Crystal

The dogs name is very cool and the story would be nice.

Jazmyn

Honestly I can relate I almost have no time to pla with my dogs besides the weekends

Brandon

I love this character mainly because their name is Blue and they're a friendly looking dog. I am curious about whether or not the dog can talk though, as implied in the art. (I might just be reading a bit too much into this though-) I am also curious on how this dog will adapt to their situation.

Sara

I like how you chose an animal instead of person and made it work really well.

Tristan

what i liked is that it was a dog. but why is it named blue?

Aurelija

love your story but what is the back story to this what is happening ?

Izzy

What I liked is that blue learns that he can be a independent dog without the owner home.

Kira

I found it interesting that he is annoyed. It makes me wonder why he is

Fin

"What I found most interesting about this character was his name
"It makes me wonder more about why is he named blue?

Natalie

What I found most interesting about this character is the fact that it's a dog that has to learn something. It makes me wonder more about the transformation and how he is going to transform.

Taylor

what i found most interesting about this character is their character mood. it makes me wonder if the owner would return

pedro

I really like the concept of your story I would like to learn a little but more about them on the inside and also a little more about the story.

Isa Lozada

firstly this was very good and descriptive but the only thing that I thought you could do better was to make drawing that had a little bit more details on it but other then that I thought that it was awesome.

max

firstly this was very good and descriptive but the only thing that I thought you could do better was to make drawing that had a little bit more details on it but other then that I thought that it was awesome.

max

if your story is short next time try not to mix up your words next time. but other then that it was good.

Rowin

every thing is great i would just improve in animating the dog a bit but overall its great

javier

i like the idea of a dog having all these problems .

alyssa