I really like how relatable your character is, especially with the parents vs child aspect. this makes we wonder if the 2 sides well resolve this disagreement or will someone else intervene? Really strong start to you character.

Elijah

I really like how relatable your character is, especially with the parents vs child aspect. this makes we wonder if the 2 sides well resolve this disagreement or will someone else intervene? Really strong start to you character.

Elijah

I Like how relatable your character Johnny is, with all the emotions going on inside. Something you can work on is how the whole moving thing could affect the story & relationship between his parents & him. Otherwise, really nice character & nice idea.

Elijah

The character looks like its struggling or going through a hard time.

Rosy

What I found most interesting is how universal the theme or struggle your character is going through and how it is outside of their control. I wonder what your character needs to learn and how they grow because of the obstacle they face.

PD

Interesting premise! There are lots of different places you could go with this character. Good job describing them as well!

Lexi