I like your character and his traits. I recommend you turn the music off because it was hard to hear what you said. I was confused on some of the characters because they all looked different. I am excited to see how your character changes over time.

Ashley

I really like how you included each of your own drawing interpretations of what Daniel would look like. Daniel's wants, needs and obstacles are very universally appealing, and it makes me wonder what low point Daniel will reach and how it will transform his outlook on life.

PD

Fantastic, the choice between work and family...a classic tale. great drawings! I wonder what will happen in the story that helps him learn that family is more important than work and he should not neglect his kids? What I found most interesting is that he's middle aged, you are the first submission like that. Also next time check your submissions before you upload as the end got cut off, and the music is louder than your voice so it was slightly hard to hear.

Brit