I like the character and there idea that they are almost 2 different people and that they have a compliantly diffident personality. I feel like adding some conflict would help him find his path

Tate

What I found most interesting is the name of your character, which is really unique & the struggles they are going through. It makes me wonder if something happens to them in the past that is making them feel this way or will something happen in your story to help this character?

Elijah

I think that this story is super cool and you are really giving depth to the character maybe explain a little bit more as to why they are depressed and why she looks so happy and really is not the drawing is really cool and i think you could give more emphasis to the character but other than that solid idea.

hadarya

i like the elevator drawing. i also think you could have went a little more in depth of the drawing about your character. lastly, i like how she is different on the outside than the inside. looks good

jenelle

"What I found most interesting about this character was his name
"It makes me wonder more about why did u choos that name

natalie h

I like that the girl has a different personality on the inside because I think a lot of us can relate to this hiding of our emotions. I'm really interested in how you will express her inner feelings to the audience. Also, will she find herself help, or would she help herself to be happier?

Chloe

What I found most interesting was that Yellow Rose is a happy girl on the outside but is depressed on the inside, and also that she is not fully developed and wants to belong somewhere. She doesn't have a "home" is what is stopping her from belonging as well as not being fully developed, and it makes me wonder if she actually doesn't have a home to live in or a home where she is accepted, a community where she belongs to. I would also like to see what makes her not fully developed if I may ask, apart from everybody else who I assume, is fully developed.

Paris