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What I really liked about your character is her traits will impact her journey to go to the moon and how she will be able to change as the story progresses. Do you know what kind of character development that you want her to go through that is relatable to the audience? Also, I really liked the drawings you did for her.

Nalani

I love this video. Great character development. I wonder whether she will choose to live among the stars or not.

Braylon

I liked the idea of how she was anxious and cautious about visiting the moon before going, I was wondering about how she overcame her fears and accomplished her goals.

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This Is Blue

Blue is the first alien on the moon.

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