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Nice drawings.
Kareem
Great Character! There is so much potential in it! Why does he want to convince his Father that mushrooms aren't a threat? Does he love to study mushrooms? Loves to eat them? Do they talk to him? Will his Father exterminate them soon? Why does his dad think that mushrooms are a threat? Good job!
Ethan
It's interesting that he is bratty. It makes me wonder why his dad is stubborn
Fin
Super creative video! I love that you spent a lot of time creating your external features but I think you should build a little on internal features and characteristics. It makes me wonder about your character development. :)
Katelyn
the drawing is very good but there needs to be a little more character development
jackson
Glad to see the mushroom story again! Interesting to see how this guy is trying to prove how the mushrooms aren't dangerous. Why is he doing this?
Duane
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