How is the character going to grow? What lessons will he learn? Why is he so cold? does he live in Antarctica?

Elle

I like the art, but the character could use some more internal conflicts, but the idea is nice.

Ziyad

What I found most interesting about this character is that his goal is to become warm. It shows him eating ice cream, probably meaning that he's always cold, which is why he wants a heater, I'm assuming. It makes me wonder more about his personality. Why is he this way? Does he just eat cold food all the time and now he wants/needs a heater?

Zinedine

good job.

Rowin

I like the main storyline but I also wonder what other internal features there are in him

Lily

i feel that the character could use more detail on the outside

jackson

What I found most interesting was that his only reason why he will get a job is because he wants to be warm. It makes me wonder more about how he will get that job because he is pessimistic, like he sees the worst outcomes. Like will there be someone who helps him get the job.

Sadie

I love the idea (and your accent)! More people nowadays need to get a job. I wonder what kind of job he'll get.

Braylon

It could be improved

Cam

What I found most interesting was Fred’s pessimistic perspective of the world. It makes me wonder more about what impact this would have on the story? Is their pessimistic attitude the reason why they don’t have a job? How will it impact their interactions with other characters?

Parker